UNIT 1 课时作业3 读后续写专项（Word练习）-【状元桥·优质课堂】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第四册（人教版2024）

课时作业(三)　读后续写专项 (建议用时：50分钟) 情感细节描写之“后悔”“内疚”和“自责” 形容词/副词 guilty, guiltily, regretful 名词/动词 guilt, regret 短语 ①much to one's regret 令某人深感遗憾的是……　 ②with deep/great regret 很遗憾地 ③full of guilt 满是愧疚 1．按要求利用“后悔、内疚和自责”的表达或其他烘托人物“后悔、内疚和自责”的描述补全以下各句 (1)看着安妮泪流满面的脸，我开始感到后悔和内疚。 Looking at Anne's face wet with tears, I began to feel regretful and guilty .(形容词) (2)安妮发出后悔的喊声：“我真傻。” Anne let out a cry of regret , “I'm so silly.”(名词) (3)我还没来得及说话，她就冲了出去，留下我后悔不迭。 She dashed out before I could say a word, and left me dumb with deep regret .(介词短语) She dashed out before I could say a word, leaving me dumb with deep regret .(分词作状语) (4)我僵在那里，眼里含着后悔的泪水。要是我没和安妮吵架那多好啊！ I froze there, with regretful tears in my eyes . If only I had not quarreled with Anne ! (5)我满怀内疚，冲出去向安妮道歉。 With guilt and regret flowing in my mind, I rushed out to apologize to Anne. (with复合结构) 2．将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文，注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 One possible version： Looking at Anne's face wet with tears, I began to feel regretful and guilty.Suddenly, Anne let out a cry of regret, “I'm so silly.” Then she dashed out before I could say a word, leaving me dumb with deep regret.I froze there, with regretful tears in my eyes.If only I had not quarreled with Anne! Finally, with guilt and regret flowing in my mind, I rushed out to apologize to Anne. ★即使时间再紧，也要挤时间把范文抄写在这里，体会如何衔接语篇的同时练习书写。 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 [1]Once upon a time the colors of the world started to quarrel.All claimed that they were the best.The most important.The most useful.The favorite. [2]Green said, “Clearly I am the most important.I am the sign of life and of hope.I was chosen for grass, trees and leaves.Without me, all animals would die.” [3]Blue interrupted, “You only think about the earth but consider the sky and the sea.It is the water that is the basis of life.The sky gives space and peace.Without my peace, you would all be nothing.” [4]Yellow chuckled, “You are all so serious.I bring laughter and warmth into the world.The sun is yellow, the moon is yellow, and the stars are yellow.Every time you look at a sunflower, the whole world starts to smile.Without me there would be no fun.” [5]Orange started next, “I am the color of health and strength.I am precious for I serve the needs of human life.I carry the most important vitamins.When I fill the sky at sunrise or sunset, my beauty is so striking that no one gives another thought to any of you.” [6]Then Red shouted out, “I am the ruler of all of you.I bring fire into the blood.I am the color of passion and of love.Without me, the earth would be as empty as the moon.” [7]Purple rose up to his full height, “I am the color of royalty and power.Kings, chiefs, and bishops have always chosen me for I am the sign of authority and wisdom.People do not question me! They listen and obey.” [8]Finally, Indigo spoke, “Think of me.I am the color of silence.You hardly notice me, but without me you all become superficial.I represent thought and reflection, twilight and deep water.” [9]And so the colors went on boasting, each convinced of his or her own superiority.Their quarreling became louder and louder. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Suddenly there was a flash of bright lightening, thunder rolling and booming.____ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Doing as they were told, the colors united and joined hands. _________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．文本分析 主要人物 the colors of the world： Green ， Blue ， Yellow ， Orange ， Red ， Purple ， Indigo 事件主线 世界上的各种颜色进行过一次争吵。所有颜色都声称自己是最好的。 情感表达(原文依据) [Para.9] convinced 2．线索推测：两段首句定发展，始终不忘“3衔接1呼应” 标出两段首句关键词 续写第一段：Suddenly there was a flash of bright lightening， thunder rolling and booming. 续写第二段：Doing as they were told, the colors united and joined hands. 3衔接1呼应 第一段内容和第一段首句密切衔接；第一段结尾和第二段首句密切衔接 ❶根据第一段首句可知，空中划过闪电，雷声滚滚。第一段应描写： 下雨 的场景及颜色们的 反应 。 ❷根据第二段首句可知，颜色们被告知应手拉手， 团结 起来。第二段应描写：颜色们 团结 起来之后发生的事情。颜色们组成了 彩虹 ，并驱散了 雷雨 。雨过天晴，各种颜色照亮了整个世界。 ❸由此可推测：第一段的结局：有一个声音向颜色们 发出指令 。第二段的结局：各种颜色明白了 团结 的重要性。 第二段内容和第二段首句密切衔接；第二段结尾和文章主旨相呼应 3．细节构思：每段三个微情节原则 第一段 情节 ①描写　下雨　的场景；②停止继续争吵；③颜色们被告知应手拉手，　团结　起来 动作描写 pour down (倾盆而下)→ break the silence (打破沉默)→ dominate (支配；控制) 心理描写 害怕n. fear ；安慰n. comfort ；独特的adj. unique 第二段 情节 ①颜色们 团结 起来之后，组成了 彩虹 ；②驱散了 雷雨 ；③各种颜色明白了 团结 的重要性 动作描写 form (形成)→ combine (结合；联合) → drive away (驱赶)→ brighten (照亮)→ do wonders (创造奇迹) 心理描写 惊人的；引人注目的adj. striking ；充满活力的adj. energetic 4．遣词造句：连词成句，连句成篇 高级词汇、词块&熟词生义 ① overcast adj.阴暗的　② violently adv.剧烈地；激烈地 ③ sudden/abrupt adj.突然的 ④ panic n．惊恐 ⑤ envelop v．笼罩 ⑥ comfort n．安慰 ⑦ dominate v．支配；控制 ⑧ unique adj.独特的 ⑨ miracle/wonder n．奇迹 ⑩ brighten v．照亮 ⑪ pour down 倾盆而下 ⑫ come to a stop 停止 ⑬ draw close 靠拢 ⑭ break the silence 打破沉默 ⑮ drive away 驱赶 ⑯ do wonders 创造奇迹 高分句型 (1)独立主格结构 争吵突然停止，恐慌笼罩着这些颜色。 The quarrel came to an abrupt stop, panic enveloping these colors . (2)v.-ing 形式作状语 它们显然很害怕，互相靠近寻求安慰。 They were in obvious fear, drawing close to one another for comfort . (3)so…that…如此……以至于…… 它是如此惊人，赶走了雷雨。 It was so striking that it drove away the thunder and the rain. (4)with复合结构 天空变得晴朗，所有的颜色照亮了整个世界——充满希望的绿色、平静的蓝色、欢快的黄色、活力的橙色、激情的红色、强烈的紫色和沉稳的靛青。 The sky became clear, with all the colors brightening the whole world —hopeful green, peaceful blue, cheerful yellow, energetic orange, passionate red, powerful purple and thoughtful indigo. (5)令人印象深刻的结尾：whenever引导时间状语从句& v．-ing形式作状语 从那时起，每当有一场雨洗刷这个世界，天空就会出现一道彩虹，提醒人们团结可以创造奇迹。 From then on, whenever a rain washes the world , a rainbow will appear in the sky, reminding people the unity can do wonders . 5．成文誊写 One possible version： Suddenly there was a flash of bright lightening, thunder rolling and booming.The sky was overcast and rain started to pour down violently.The quarrel came to an abrupt stop, panic enveloping these colors.They were in obvious fear, drawing close to one another for comfort.Right then, a voice full of power broke the silence, “Why are you colors, fighting amongst yourselves, each trying to dominate the rest？” The words put the colors to deep thought.It continued, “Each of you is made for a special purpose, unique and different.But you are also made for better.Now, unite and join hands with one another！” Doing as they were told, the colors united and joined hands.That was when the miracle happened.Together they formed a rainbow across the sky.The light of different colors gradually combined with each other, creating such a ray of golden light.It was so striking that it drove away the thunder and the rain.The sky became clear, with all the colors brightening the whole world—hopeful green, peaceful blue, cheerful yellow, energetic orange, passionate red, powerful purple and thoughtful indigo.From then on, whenever a rain washes the world, a rainbow will appear in the sky, reminding people the unity can do wonders. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$