内容正文:
Unit2 I'll help to clean up the city parks
Section B (3a-3c) Writing
work in an old people's home
cheer up sick children
Volunteer work
clean up the city parks
help kids with homework
give out some old books
What do you volunteer to do ,if you are a volunteer?
I would like to
sing and dance.
tell stories.
I'd like to cheer up sick kids in the hospital.
What other volunteer work can you do ?
写作案例
某儿童之家正在招募一批志愿者,你想成为其中的一员,请你给该服务机构写一封自荐信和你的志愿计划。80词左右
1. 周日去儿童福利院做一些义务工作:帮助打扫房间、给孩子们捐赠故事书、给他们讲故事等。
2. 你可以教孩子们唱歌、跳舞,也可以教他们学英语。
3. 你对志愿者活动的感受。
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美
连
列
审
审题:体裁、主题、人称、时态
列提纲: 开头、中间、结尾、重点词句
连词成句、连句成篇
运用连词、过渡语句美化、丰富篇章
检查:单词拼写、句法连贯、逻辑明确
用5步写作法分析
应用文
体裁
一般现在&将来时
时态
第一人称
人称
审题
1. Which volunteer job does the writer want to do?
2.When is he free to do the job?
3.What are the writer's interests and hobbies?
4. How can he help to do the job?
5. Why does he want to do the volunteer job?
Volunteering at a children's home.
On Sundays.
He loves children.
Clean the rooms, give away some storybooks to them , tell stories, teach children to sing and dance and teach children English
Because he'll get pleasure and improve himself.
问题法丰满写作内容
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you about volunteering at a children's home on Sundays. I love children and I want to volunteer to look after children.
I'll help them clean their rooms. l'll not only give away some storybooks to them but also tell them stories. I'm good at singing and dancing and I can teach children to sing and dance. I speak English well and I can teach them English as well. So I think I'd be good at this job.
From the activities, I'll get pleasure and improve myself. I am sure I will be a good volunteer.
Yours truly,
xxxx
beginning
body
ending
Summary
点明主题
描述活动
说明感受
volunteering in a children's home
I'll help to clean their rooms.
I'll give away storybooks to them and tell them stories.
I can teach children sing and dance .
I'm sure I will be a good volunteer...
Which volunteer job
How to do it
Feeling
小试身手
某养老院正在招募一批志愿者,你想成为其中的一员,请你给该服务机构写一封自荐信和你的志愿计划。80词左右。
参考词汇: sing to the old, cheer them up, play games with the old, tell stories to them
Dear...
I am writing to you about volunteering in Old People's home on the evenings from Monday to Wednesday. I am interested in talking with the old.
First, I read many story books and I can tell them stories. Second, I'm good at singing and dancing and I can teach them to sing and dance. Last, I love playing games, so I can play games with the old. I think I'd be good at this job.
From the activities, I'll get pleasure and improve myself. I am sure I will be a good volunteer.
Yours truly
xxx
One example
Assessment (评价标准)
language(语言) 6分
structure(结构) 3分
content(内容) 9分
handwriting(书写) 2分
all the details(细节)
three parts
spelling or grammar mistakes
good sentences
link words(连接词)
clean and tidy
how to do it
summary
and opinion
Summary
volunteer
what volunteer work to do
Blackboard Design
Homework
Level B:1. Revise your own mistakes and add some good sentences to your writing. Finish your final draft.
Level A:Finish the writing job or copy the example article and memorize the key expressions.
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