Unit2 SectionB Writing 课件 2024-2025学年人教版英语八年级下册

I’ll help to clean up the city parks. Section B Writing Unit 2 Who are they？ What do you think of volunteers? Volunteers can make a difference to both others and ourselves. And everyone can be a volunteer! Would you like to be volunteers? Welcome to join us and be a volunteer! If you want to come, please write a letter about the place you want to volunteer at and the job you can do to us. Here comes the chance! Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a Grade 8 student from XX middle school. I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a Grade 8 student from XX middle school. I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua write a letter How can we write this letter？ Step 1 Learn the form （学习格式） Pre-writing Dear Sir or Madam, I’m a Grade 8 student from XX middle school. I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua Step 2 Learn the structure （学习结构） Pre-writing How many parts are there in the main part of the letter? three I’m a Grade 8 student from XX middle school.I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Beginning Body Ending Step 3 Analyze the content（分析内容） Pre-writing Why do you want to do the volunteer job? express your hope How can these help you to do the job? What are your interests and hobbies? Which volunteer job do you want to do? When are you free to do the job? I’m a Grade 8 student from XX middle school.I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Review the whole structure. Which volunteer job do you want to do? Beginning Body Ending About the sentences express your hope About the sentences How can these help you to do the job? Why do you want to do the volunteer job? What are your interests and hobbies? When are you free to do the job? A letter for a volunteer job Where do you want to volunteer in/at? volunteer in an old people’s home volunteer in an after-school program volunteer at a museum volunteer in a park I’d like to ... I want to... I hope to... I'm interested in... What can you do if you volunteer in these places? Please work in a group and have a disscusion! park after-school program old people's home museum Choose one and open it！ Discuss what you can do in . What can we do as volunteers? introduce the exhibits /ɪɡˈzɪbɪt/ clean up the museum help to keep the order a museum be a guide take photos for visitors When we volunteer in ____________________, we can… What can we do as volunteers? an old people’s home do some cleaning for the old talk with the old cook for the old play chess with the old When we volunteer in ____________________, we can… What can we do as volunteers? do sports with the kids play games with kids teach English songs to kids an after-school program help kids to read When we volunteer in ____________________, we can… What can we do as volunteers? a park pick up the rubbish plant trees clean the chairs give directions When we volunteer in ____________________, we can… wwwww What are your interests and hobbies? I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. be good at... be interested in... be strong in... 在空闲时间我喜欢和我爷爷一起下棋。 In my free time，I like playing chess with my grandfather. 我在历史方面特别有天赋。 I am talented in history. be talented in... In my free time,I like... Useful sentence patterns wwwww How can these help you to do the job? I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I am good at cleaning the house,so I can... I am also interested in cooking,so I could... I am strong in communicating with others,so I am able to... wwwww Why do you want to do the job? make ____________ change _________ have ________ _______ new people ________new skills challenge yourself ... a difference lives fun meet learn enrich/gain(丰富/增长) my knowledge and experience broaden/widen horizons(开拓视野) I want to help out as a volunteer in ...because... Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to volunteer in an old people’s home. I am good at cleaning the house and I am also interested in cooking. What’s more, I am strong in communicating with others. Therefore, I can do a lot for the old people. Firstly, I can help the old people to do some cleaning. Secondly, I can cook delicious food for them. Finally, I can talk with them when they feel lonely and unhappy. I believe I am good at this job. I want to help out as a volunteer in an old people’s home because it makes me do what I love to do and help others at the same time As for the working time, I am free to help on Saturdays. From the bottom of my heart, I want to get this job. I hope you can offer me the chance. Yours truly, Li Hua Step 4 Learn the language Pre-writing Writing tip: make the writing more logical. allow the readers to follow our thoughts. More linking words: next, after that, in addition, additionally, also, then... Linking words（连接词） Transitional sentences （过渡句） Helping others is Chinese traditional virtue. 帮助他人是中华民族的传统美德。 The roses in her hand, the flavor in mine. 赠人玫瑰，手有余香。 add one to your passage Nothing is so popular as goodness. 最受欢迎的是善行。 Sayings Dear Sir or Madam, Yours truly, ____ While-writing Write a letter for a volunteer job. Step 1 Finish your outline.（提纲） While-writing Writing tip: Writing an outline helps you to organize（组织）your ideas. Step 2 Draft your letter according to your outline.（起草） While-writing Dear Sir or Madam, I’d like to / I'm interested in / I want to volunteer in__________.I'm good at / I’m strong in / In my free time, I like to_____________, so I think I’d be good at this job.I can__________.I want to help out as a volunteer in_____________because______________.As for the working time, I’m free to help in / on __________________. From the bottom of my heart,_____________. Yours truly, __________ ASSESSMENT（评价标准） Structure （结构）2分 Is the article divided into three parts? Content （内容）5分 Are all the details stated(细节陈述)? If not, add the missing details. Language （语言）6分 Any mistakes (spelling or grammar)? If yes, correct them. Any linking words（衔接词）? If yes, circle them. Any good vocabulary or sentences（美言美句）? If yes, underline them. Handwriting 2分 Is it clean and tidy? $$