内容正文:
学练优
八年级英语下
(RJ)
单元主题写作
人与社会·志愿服务与公共服务
主题分析
本单元主题为“志愿者活动和慈善事业”,该
主题主要描述志愿服务和慈善活动的经历。设
题形式一般为记叙文或者夹叙夹议型文章。
写作典范
【写作任务】
付出即收获。请你以“Giving
( Is Receiving"
为题,结合自己平时的爱心行动和感受用英语写
一篇短文。
要求:不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。词
数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Giving
Is Receiving
The saying goes that help others and be happy
with
yourself.
In a word,helping
others is helping
ourselves.
Giving is receiving.
【审题立意】
1.审主题:叙述自己的爱心行动及感受。
2.审体裁:记叙文。
3.审人称:第一人称。
4.审时态:一般现在时。
【写作提纲】
谚语开头,介绍现状(The saying;mor
引出话题
and more...)
1.在学业上帮助同学(help...with...
2.帮助打扫公园(cleanup
3.去养老院帮忙做卫生(dosome
介绍活动
cleaning)
4.去儿童医院使生病的孩子们振作
起来(cheer up)
5.捐款给有困难的人(give...to...)
1.帮助别人就是帮助自己(helpin
简述感受
others is helping ourselves)
2.付出即收获(givingisreceiving)
【范文欣赏】
Giving
Is Receiving
①The saying goes that help others and be
happy with
n yourself. More and more teenagers are
taking part in voluntary activities after school.
②I also like helping others. It gives me a
strong
feeling of satisfaction. ③At school, I often
help my classmates with their schoolwork.
I help.
Sometimes
clean up the city parks. My
friends and I go to the old people's home and do
some cleaning for the old people once a month.
They're always filled with joy because of our
visits. I often visit Children's Hospital to cheer up
the sick kids. I also give money to charities to
helppeople in trouble.
④In a word, helping others is helping ourselves.
Giving is receiving
【名师点评】
①引出话题,讲述青少年参与志愿服务的现状。
②介绍自己为什么喜欢帮助别人。
③介绍自己的爱心行动。
④总结并谈论自己的感受。