陕西省安康市2025届第二次调研考试英语写作部分建议信读后续写个人成长亲情友情电子产品课件

安康市2025届二调作文 2025年3月 原题再现： 应用文写作（建议信） 开头明确表达对增设艺术栏目的支持态度 分点提出具体建议（内容多样性、互动形式、学生参与等） 总结建议并表达期待 写作思路 1.艺术形式多样性（绘画/音乐/戏剧/数字艺术） 2.增加互动环节（线上展览/读者投票） 3.学生作品展示专栏 4.艺术知识普及（艺术史/名作赏析） 5.跨学科内容（艺术与科技/环保主题创作） Diversity of art forms (painting, music, drama, digital art) Adding interactive elements (online exhibitions, reader voting) Student work showcase column Popularization of art knowledge (history, appreciation of masterpieces) Interdisciplinary content (art and technology, environmental protection-themed creations) 写作素材 Dear Editor, I'm thrilled to learn about the planned art section. To make it truly engaging, I suggest focusing on these key elements. Firstly, we could blend different art types like paintings, music, and theater, including not only classic works but also digital and performance art. Secondly, adding fun interactive features would be effective – for example, creating monthly student artwork showcases and online voting for favorite pieces. These activities would provide a platform where students can gain recognition and confidence, making the section more lively. Lastly, it would be valuable to show how art connects to real life, such as exploring its use in science or environmental projects. Additionally, sharing stories about famous artists could inspire readers. By adopting these suggestions, I believe the section will become both interesting and educational for everyone. Yours sincerely, Lihua 5 原题再现 读后续写 个人成长、 友情、亲情类 人物：family members、boys、virtual friends 事件发展线：渴望→得到→沉迷→父亲计划→无网失望→找回快乐→感受真情 情感线：激动→沉浸/自恰 →沮丧 →无感→快乐 →反思 草线伏灰 思前想后 第一段：What makes the author forget the laptop? beautiful scenery funny activity friendly friends delicious food Plot: hesitate---go---enjoy Emotion line: with no interest ---happy---meaningful 思前想后 第二段：Why did I forget my laptop(virtual world)? Thinking and reflection Keep company of families Experiencing natural is better than wondering Concerns from father Get away from virtual world and step into the real world Use digital product properly A wise father’s wisdom Gratitude to family，friends and nature. 1.Those firelit nights taught me: Time with family is the only Wi-Fi that never disconnects. 2.I finally understood—no brush could ever paint the gold of sunlight going through maple leaves. 3. His love, silent as roots beneath the soil, had always been holding me steady. 4. Stepping out of the glowing screen, I found a world where laughter didn’t need a ‘send’ button. 5.Technology, I realized, should be a bridge—not a cage locking us away from life’s true colors. 6. He didn’t lecture about screens; he simply showed me how stars outshine any LED light. 7. Looking at Mom’s smile and the dancing fireflies, I whispered thanks for gifts no app could deliver. 续写设计 短期时间线（按天推进） Day 1：抗拒农场生活（如原文到达农场时发现无网络）。 Day 2-6：逐步参与农场活动（喂鸡、摘菜、追山羊等），逐渐减少对电子设备的依赖。 Final Day：离别前的反思与顿悟（如父亲点醒主角）。 单日时间线（以第二天为例） 清晨：被男孩们叫醒吃早餐（不情愿 → 被动参与）。 上午：喂鸡、奔跑（开始放松，笑声增多）。 下午：摘菜、玩闹（完全投入，忘记手机）。 夜晚：围炉聊天（情感升华，理解父亲用心）。 身临其境 Paragraph 1: Early next morning, the boys came to invite me to breakfast. I hid under the blanket, saying, Five more minutes! But they stood by my bed, laughing like noisy little birds. Then I followed them downstairs with little interest. The smell of hot eggs made me relax a bit. After eating, they pulled me to feed chickens. I laughed when the hens flappong （煽动着） their wings as I threw grains. We ran after goats in the grass, not caring about the mud on our pants. In the afternoon, while picking vegetables with Grandma, the youngest boy put a cucumber on his head, pretending to be a monster. I reached for my phone to take a photo but found it covered in dirt—I hadn’t touched it all day. 参考范文 Paragraph 2: Surprisingly, I never thought of my laptop that week. At night, my family gathered around the crackling fire, brewing tea and sharing stories（围炉煮茶）. Sparks dancing in the air. During the day, Dad and I picked wild strawberries by the river until my fingers turned red. On our last night, Dad suddenly said, "See? Real animals are more interesting than game monsters, right?" Tears well up in my eyes.He’d known all along how lonely I felt online. On the drive home, I pressed my forehead against the window, watching golden rice fields flow like sunlight. My laptop felt heavy in my bag, but this time, I couldn’t wait to tell my friends: The real world is sweet, even the mud. 安康市2025届二调作文 2025年3月 THANK YOU $$