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Section Ⅲ Integrated skills——写一篇关于体育精神的文章
[文体感知]
本单元的写作话题是写一篇关于体育精神的文章,属于说明文。写此类说明文时,应该注意说明的方法, 对运动员所具备的精神加以说明,也可以穿插一些记叙和议论。
首先,对人物进行简要的介绍,比如生平、事件、职业等。
其次,挑选出人物一生中比较重要的事迹进行描写,要尽可能地详细,因为这影响人们对他的整体评价。
最后,对人物进行客观的评价,包括其人格、贡献以及闪光点的评价。
[写作素材]
1.He overcame the pressure as well as the pain of his injury.
他克服了压力和受伤的痛苦。
2.During her career life,she obtained 132 championships,including 4 Olympic championships.
在她的职业生涯中,她获得了132个冠军,其中包括4个奥运会冠军。
3.When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in sport.
当他还是个孩子的时候,他对体育表现出极大的兴趣。
4.Her story tells us that we should value what we have,and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life.
她的故事告诉我们,我们应该珍惜我们所拥有的,并尽最大努力克服生活中的任何困难。
5.He became famous for his newly achievements.
他因新取得的成绩而出名。
6.Not only is he interested in sport,but also he has a gift for music.
他不仅对体育感兴趣,而且对音乐也很有天赋。
7.He set us a good example, so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.
他给我们树立了一个好榜样,所以所有的人都高度评价他、尊敬他。
[典题示例]
假定你们正在网上进行一场辩论赛,辩题是:体育比赛更注重成绩还是更注重精神? 假定你是正方一辩手,请你根据以下提示用英语写一段80词左右的立论阐述己方立场。
1.阐明己方观点——体育精神更重要;
2.举例证明己方观点;
3.总结己方观点。
第一步 学会审题谋篇
写作类型
议论文
人称时态
一般现在时为主;第三人称为主。
写作要点
1.阐述观点:体育精神更重要 ;
2.对体育精神的理解和例证;
3.总结个人观点。
第二步 保基础分——会写基本句
1.我们坚持体育精神更重要。
We insist sportsmanship_is_more_important.
2.伊斯梅尔·埃斯特班的自行车在接近终点的时候爆了胎,他扛着车继续比赛。
Ismael Esteban's bicycle suffered a flat tire near the finish line,and he continued_with_it_on_his_shoulder.
3.他的对手,37岁的纳瓦罗减速拒绝超越他。
His opponent,37yearold Navarro,slowed_down_and_refused_to_pass_him.
4.纳瓦罗说在终点线之前超过埃斯特班是不道德的行为。
Navarro said it_was_immoral to pass Esteban just before the finish line.
5.成绩只是体育运动的一个方面,获胜不是一切。
Achievement is only one aspect of sports and thus winning_isn't_everything.
6.记录会被打破,个人可以被超越。
Records can_be_broken and individuals can be surpassed.
7.友谊、团结和公平竞争的精神将永远伴随着我们。
The spirit of friendship,solidarity and fair play will_live_with_us_forever.
第三步 创设亮点——试写高级句
8.用while引导的并列句合并句2和句3。
Ismael_Esteban's_bicycle_suffered_a_flat_tire_near_the_finish_line,and_he_continued_with_it_on_his_shoulder_while_his_opponent,37yearold_Navarro,slowed_down_and_refused_to_pass_him.
9.用虚拟语气改写句4。
Navarro_said_it_would_have_been_immoral_to_pass_Esteban_just_before_the_finish_line.
10.用省略句改写句6。
Records_can_be_broken_and_individuals_surpassed.
第四步 衔接成篇得高分
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[参考范文]
We insist sportsmanship is more important.
Let's take a cycling race in Spain in 2015 as an example.Ismael Esteban's bicycle suffered a flat tire near the finish line,and he continued with it on his shoulder while his opponent,37yearold Navarro,slowed down and refused to pass him.Navarro said it would have been immoral to pass Esteban just before the finish line.
So we insist achievement is only one aspect of sports and thus winning isn't everything.Records can be broken and individuals surpassed.The spirit of friendship,solidarity and fair play will live with us forever.
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