内容正文:
Unit 5
A delicate world
主题语境:人与自然——保护我们脆弱的星球
Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇介绍自然遗产的发言稿
目录/CONTENTS
教考衔接——教材词汇练续写
表达——即境活用 双写培优
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表达——即境活用 双写培优
The Great Wall is located in the northern part of China,the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers.
to defend against the attack of the enemies
created by the ancient Chinese working people
one of the greatest projects
The Great Wall is a wonder created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.
教考衔接——教材词汇练续写
本单元的写作任务要求写一篇发言稿,介绍一处世界自然遗产。发言稿一般包含开场问候、开篇点题、内容阐述、结尾总结等。其中,“内容阐述”为写作的重点。时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第一、第三人称为主。
【写作指导】
Ⅰ.谨记写作范式
Ⅱ.积累话题素材
[常用词汇]
①places of interest
名胜古迹
②at home and abroad
国内外
③be famous/wellknown for
因……而闻名
④admire the architecture/scenery
欣赏建筑/风景
⑤leave a deep impression on sb.
给某人留下深刻印象
⑥enjoy a great reputation
享有盛誉
⑦expand one's horizons
开拓视野
⑧play an important part in...
在……方面起重要作用
⑨in conclusion
总之
⑩account for the reason
解释原因
⑪cover an area of ...square metres
占地……平方米
⑫be open to the public
对公众开放
⑬be located in
坐落于
⑭with a height of...
高度……
⑮be crazy about adventure
热衷于冒险
[出彩佳句]
(1)第一部分:引入主题(一处世界自然遗产)
①It's my great pleasure to introduce to you a magnificent natural heritage in Jinan.
我很高兴向大家介绍济南一处壮丽的自然遗产。
②As we know,in 2016,Shennongjia made it onto the UNESCO World Heritage List.
众所周知,神农架在2016年成功入选联合国教科文组织的《世界遗产名录》。
(2)第二部分:具体介绍该世界自然遗产
③Located in the southeast of China as one of the bestknown nature reserves, Mount Wuyi is a fascinating natural wonder that boasts breathtaking scenery.
武夷山位于中国东南部,是中国最著名的自然保护区之一,是一个迷人的自然奇观,拥有令人叹为观止的景色。
④With both natural and cultural values, it has been a popular tourist attraction for ages and listed as a UNESCO World Heritage Site since 1999.
它兼具自然和文化价值,多年来一直是一个受欢迎的旅游景点,自1999年以来被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产。
(3)第三部分:总结升华
⑤As a student from Yunnan, I feel proud of this natural heritage and consider it my responsibility to promote it worldwide.
作为一名来自云南的学生,我为这一自然遗产感到骄傲,并把在世界范围内推广这一遗产当作我的责任。
⑥I regard it as a significant act to preserve this great wonder for the wellbeing of future generations.
为了我们子孙后代的福祉,我把保护这一伟大奇迹看作是一项重大行动。
【实战演练】
假定你是星光中学的李华,将参加主题为“Why was the Great Wall selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List?”的英语演讲比赛。请你撰写一份发言稿向大家介绍长城,内容包括:
1.长城在1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产;
2.长城位于中国北部,全长约6,700公里;
3.长城最初修建于秦朝,目的是抵御外来敌人进攻;
4.长城是古代劳动人民创造的奇迹,是人类历史上最伟大的工程之一。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning,everyone!I am Li Hua from Xingguang High School.The topic of my speech is“Why was the Great Wall selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List?”
Thank you for listening.
Step 1 审题谋篇·定框架
定人称
以第三人称为主
定时态
以一般现在时和一般过去时为主
定框架
第二段:长城被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产及长城的具体信息;
第三段:总结发言;表达感谢。
Step 2 要点翻译·用佳句
1.长城在1987年被联合国教科文组织列为世界遗产。
The Great Wall by UNESCO in 1987.
2.长城位于中国北部,大约有6,700公里长。
The Great Wall , and is about 6,700 kilometers long.
[升级]把句2改写成“名词+of which”引导的非限制性定语从句
3.长城最初修建于秦朝,目的是抵御外来敌人的进攻。
The Great Wall was originally built in the Qin Dynasty
.
was listed as a World Heritage
is located in the northern part of China
4.长城是中国古代劳动人民创造的奇迹。
The Great Wall is a wonder .
5.它是人类历史上最伟大的工程之一。
It is in the history of human beings.
[升级]把句4和5合并成一个并列句
6.总之,所有这些都解释了为什么长城理应获得联合国教科文组织世界遗产名录的位置。
In a word,all of these explain why the Great Wall on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
deserves its place
Step 3 连句成篇·达美文
Good morning,everyone!I am Li Hua from Xingguang High School.The topic of my speech is“Why was the Great Wall selected for inclusion in the UNESCO World Heritage List?”
The Great Wall was listed as a World Heritage by UNESCO in 1987.It is located in the northern part of China, the length of which is about 6,700 kilometers.The Great Wall was originally built in the Qin Dynasty to defend against the attack of the enemies.The Great Wall is a wonder created by the ancient Chinese working people and it is one of the greatest projects in the history of human beings.
In a word, all of this explains why the Great Wall deserves its place on the UNESCO World Heritage List.
Thank you for listening.
动作
描写
①owe
v.应该做;对……负有……的义务
②trap
n.夹子,陷阱 v.使陷入困境;卡住
③depart
v.离开
④departure
n.离开
⑤decrease
v.(使)变小;(使)减少
⑥come up with
提出
⑦on behalf of
代表
场景
描写
①substantial
adj.大量的,多的
②chaos
n.大混乱;紊乱
③elsewhere
adv.在别处
④secure
adj.稳固的;安全的
⑤vast
adj.巨大的;广大的
⑥habitat
n.栖息地
[语段情景用] “每进1个球,就种11棵树。”19岁足球爱好者用他的热情和行动改变着世界……
When 19yearold Kenyan nonprofessional footballer Lesein Mutunkei scores a goal, he plants 11 trees—one 1. (代表) each player on his team.By doing so, he's tackling the nation's daily loss of a large (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇:2. ) forest area about the size of 50 football fields.
“Football is a universal game and climate change is a universal problem,”Mutunkei said.“My point of 3. (depart) was to connect, engage, educate and inspire my generation to create a safer and greener future.”
on behalf of
vast
departure
Deforestation, referring to the clearing of forests for human use, contributes to global warming and 4. (破坏野生动物栖息地).In 2018, Kenya's forest cover dropped (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇:5. ) to just 6%, according to the Kenya Forest Service.
That same year, Mutunkei started Trees4Goals to call on young athletes in his region to plant trees every time they score.Now, he expects FIFA(国际足联) to use its audience of billions to take his impact global.
damages wildlife habitats
decreased
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