Unit4 Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇介绍名人的演讲稿-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 4 Breaking boundaries 主题语境：人与社会——打破边界 Section Ⅳ　Writing——写一篇介绍名人的演讲稿 目录/CONTENTS 教考衔接——教材词汇练续写 表达——即境活用 双写培优 02 01 表达——即境活用 双写培优 I'd like to share something about Ma Haide, an outstanding doctor, who was born in America in 1910 and passed away in 1988. During the Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression, he voluntarily participated in organising medical services at the front alongside other foreign doctors, putting his life at risk. Ma dedicated his life to promoting China's medical development, which makes him live on in Chinese people's hearts forever. 教考衔接——教材词汇练续写 本单元写作任务要求写一篇演讲稿，介绍一位有影响力的人物。演讲稿是在较为隆重的仪式上或某些公众场所发表的讲话文稿。介绍有影响力的人物的关键之处在于突出其主要经历及贡献。 【写作指导】 Ⅰ．谨记写作范式 Ⅱ．积累话题素材 [常用词汇] ①concentrate on 把重点集中在…… ②help each other 互相帮助 ③for example 例如 ④have problems with．．． ……有问题 ⑤be bound to do sth． 一定会做某事 ⑥in a word 总之，一句话 ⑦be known as 作为……而出名 ⑧pass away 去世 ⑨remarkable devotion 非凡的献身精神 ⑩dedicate one's life to 献身于 [出彩佳句] 1．引出主题 ①Good morning, everyone! I'm Li Hua．I'm honored to have the opportunity to make a speech on．．． 大家上午好！我是李华。很荣幸有机会做有关……的演讲。 ②It's my great honor to be here/to have the opportunity to say something about．．． 我很荣幸能在这里/能有机会谈论……。 2．陈述内容 ③Many people believe/hold the view/think that．．． 许多人认为…… ④What I want to stress is that．．．For one thing，．．．For another．．．，Besides，．．．In a word，．．． 我想强调的是……。一方面，……；另一方面，……。此外，……。总之，…… 3．提出希望并表示感谢或进行总结 ⑤He/She was highly thought of by many people and will live on in our hearts forever． 他/她受到很多人的高度赞扬，永远活在我们心中。 ⑥I'd like to wish．．．a success and I hope．．．can perform at your best! 我祝愿……获得成功，希望……能表现出自己最好的状态！ ⑦I sincerely hope what's mentioned above might be helpful to you．Thanks for your listening/attention! 我真诚地希望以上所说的对你有帮助。感谢您的倾听/关注！ 【实战演练】 你校英语角近日将举办一场演讲比赛，要求写一篇介绍国际名人的演讲稿。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍著名医生马海德(Ma Haide)。 生卒年份 1910－1988 主要经历 及贡献 1．出生于美国，1933年获得医学博士学位后，赴上海进行疾病研究； 2．抗日战争(Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression)期间为前线士兵组织医疗服务； 3．一生致力于推动中国医疗事业的发展。 你的评价 …… 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Good morning, everyone! 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 This is the end of my speech．Thank you for your attention! Step 1　审题谋篇·定框架 定人称 以第三人称为主 定时态 以一般过去时为主 定框架 第一部分：引入话题(简要介绍一位国际友人)； 第二部分：介绍该名人的主要经历及贡献； 第三部分：你的评价。 Step 2　要点翻译·用佳句 1．我想和大家分享一下关于马海德的有关事迹，他是一位杰出的医生。 I'd like to share something about Ma Haide, ． 2．他1910年生于美国，1988年逝世。 He was born in America in 1910 and in 1988． [升级]请用主从复合句连接句1和句2。 3．1933年获得医学博士学位后，马海德赴上海进行疾病研究。 After completing his Doctor of Medicine in 1933, Ma set off for Shanghai ． an outstanding doctor passed away to conduct research into some diseases 4．在中国人民抗日战争期间，他冒着生命危险主动和其他外国医生一起上前线组织医疗服务。 During the Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression, he put his life at risk and voluntarily at the front alongside other foreign doctors． [升级]用现在分词短语作状语改写句4。 participated in organising medical services 5．马海德一生致力于推动中国医疗事业的发展，这使他在中国人民心中永垂不朽。 Ma China's medical development．It makes him live on in Chinese people's hearts forever． [升级]用非限制性定语从句改写句5。 dedicated his life to promoting Step 3　连句成篇·达美文 Good morning, everyone! I'd like to share something about Ma Haide, an outstanding doctor, who was born in America in 1910 and passed away in 1988． After completing his Doctor of Medicine in 1933, Ma set off for Shanghai to conduct research into some diseases．During the Chinese People's War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression, he voluntarily participated in organising medical services at the front alongside other foreign doctors, putting his life at risk． Ma dedicated his life to promoting China's medical development, which makes him live on in Chinese people's hearts forever． This is the end of my speech．Thank you for your attention! 动作 描写 ①assist v．协助，帮助 ②tackle v．处理，对付(难题) ③relieve v．给(某人)换班；缓解 ④disinfect v．为……消毒，给……杀菌 ⑤dedicate v．致力于，献身于 ⑥bring forth 使产生，使出现 人物 描写 ①nobly 　 adv．高尚地 noble adj．高尚的 ②devotion n．奉献 devoted adj．忠诚的；挚爱的；全心全意的 描写 词汇 ①infectious adj．传染性的 ②miracle n．意外的幸运事；奇迹 ③ward n．病房 ④harmonious adj．和睦的，融洽的 ⑤joint adj．联合的，共同的 ⑥rewarding adj．值得做的，有意义的 dedicated harmonious rewarding devotion brings forth the miracle [语段情景用]　在埃博拉疫情暴发期间，许多医学专家自愿前往疫区救死扶伤…… During the outbreak of Ebola，a large number of medical 1． (special) volunteered to go to the affected area to help (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：2． ) the doctors and nurses in relieving pains of the patients．3． (穿过病房)，they devoted (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇： 4． ) themselves to the work there．As for them，it is vital to do their part when disasters occur．To make people live in a 5． (harmony) and peaceful environment，it is useful(用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇： 6． ) for them to sacrifice their own benefits． Because of their joint efforts，the disease was controlled．It is the 7． (devote) of these influential figures that 8． (创造了奇迹)． specialists assist Walking through the wards $$