Unit1 Section Ⅳ Writing——写一篇书评-【正禾一本通】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第二册同步课堂高效讲义配套课件（外研版2019）

Unit 1 Growing up 主题语境：人与自我——认识自我、丰富自我、完善自我 Section Ⅳ　 Writing—写一篇书评 目录/CONTENTS 教考衔接——教材词汇练续写 表达——即境活用 双写培优 02 01 表达——即境活用 双写培优 The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending. The Secret Garden portrays the growth of an isolated girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden. brings the garden back to life With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings it back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile. Armed with a positive outlook, we can face life challenges with a smile. 教考衔接——教材词汇练续写 pressed my face against her back a memorable experience 本单元写作任务是写一篇书评。书评，即评论或介绍书籍的文章，是以“书”为对象，实事求是地、有见解地分析书籍的形式和内容，探求创作的思想性、学术性、知识性和艺术性，从而在作者、读者和出版商之间构建信息交流的渠道。书评是应用文写作的一种重要文体。 【写作指导】 Ⅰ．谨记写作范式 Ⅱ．积累话题素材 [常用词汇] ①the literary masterpiece 文学杰作 ②be well worth recommending 非常值得推荐 ③a heart­warming read 温暖人心的读物 ④ convey an inspiring truth 传达鼓舞人心的真理 ⑤be good for us teenagers 对我们青少年有好处 ⑥be full of 充满着 ⑦learn a lot from the book 从书中学到很多 ⑧be touched by the plot 被情节感动 ⑨be regarded as 被视作 ⑩cause a heated discussion 引起热烈的讨论 [出彩佳句] ①He thinks to read the original works is better than to see the films based on them． 他认为读原著比看基于原著的电影好。 ②Published in 2010, the book is popular among teenagers． 这本书出版于2010年，很受青少年欢迎。 ③Robinson Crusoe is the work of the famous novelist Daniel Defoe, which is worth reading． 《鲁滨孙漂流记》是著名小说家丹尼尔·笛福的作品，这本书值得阅读。 ④In fact, the fiction story is so meaningful that I can learn a lot from it． 事实上，这本小说的故事描述很有意义，我可以从中学到很多东西。 ⑤This book tells about a person who regards money as important as his own life． 这本书讲述了一个视钱如命的人。 ⑥It is a collection of fable works，most of which give an account of some enlightening stories． 它是一本寓言故事的合集，其中大部分讲述了一些有启发性的故事。 【实战演练】 假定你在校英文论坛上看到大家在讨论自己最喜欢的课外书。请你根据所给提示，向同学们推荐文学读物《秘密花园》(The Secret Garden)。 作者 美国作家弗朗西丝·霍奇森·伯内特(Frances Hodgson Burnett) 故事梗概 性格孤僻的玛丽无意中发现一个废弃的花园。在新结识的朋友们的帮助下，玛丽使花园恢复了生机，同时，她也变得开朗起来。 感悟 面对挫折时，要敞开心扉，微笑面对人生。 注意：1．词数80左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　 　 Step 1　审题谋篇·定框架 定人称 以第三人称为主 定时态 以一般现在时为主 定框架 第一部分：书本简介； 第二部分：故事梗概； 第三部分：感悟。 Step 2　要点翻译·用佳句 1．文学名著《秘密花园》这本书值得推荐。 The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden ． 2．这部文学名著是由美国作家弗朗西斯·霍奇森·伯内特写的。 The literary masterpiece American author Frances Hodgson Burnett． [升级]请用过去分词短语作定语连接句1和句2。 3．《秘密花园》描绘了一个名叫玛丽的与世隔绝的女孩的成长过程。 The Secret Garden portrays named Mary． is well worth recommending was written by the growth of an isolated girl 4．她偶然发现了一个被废弃的花园。 She a deserted garden． [升级]用定语从句连接句3和句4。 5．在新朋友的帮助下，玛丽最终使花园恢复了生机。 With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately ． 6．同时花园改变了她，成为一个快乐的女孩。 The garden transforms her into a cheerful girl ． comes across in the meanwhile [升级]用定语从句连接句5和句6。 7．这本书不仅是一本温暖人心的读物，而且传达了一个鼓舞人心的真理。 The book is not only a heart­warming read ． 8．我们明智的做法是敞开心扉，接受周围人的帮助。 It is wise of us to and embrace the support of those around us． 9．拥有积极的心态，我们可以微笑面对生活的挑战。 If we are armed with a positive outlook, we can ． [升级]用过去分词短语作状语改写句9。 but also conveys an inspiring truth unlock the secrets of our hearts face life challenges with a smile Step 3　连句成篇·达美文 The literary masterpiece The Secret Garden, written by American author Frances Hodgson Burnett, is well worth recommending． The Secret Garden portrays the growth of an isolated girl named Mary, who comes across a deserted garden．With the assistance of her new friends, Mary ultimately brings it back to life, which transforms her into a cheerful girl in the meanwhile． The book is not only a heart­warming read but also conveys an inspiring truth: It is wise of us to unlock the secrets of our hearts and embrace the support of those around us．Armed with a positive outlook, we can face life challenges with a smile． 情感描写 ①subtle adj．难以察觉的；微妙的 ②bittersweet adj．苦乐参半的 ③memorable adj．难忘的 ④disheartened adj．沮丧的，灰心的 ⑤tiresome adj．烦人的，令人厌烦的 动作描写 ①obey v．服从；遵守 ②swallow v．吞下，咽下 n．咽；吞；一口 ③chew v．咀嚼 ④tempt v．诱惑，引诱 ⑤cherish v．重视，珍视 人物描写 ①mature adj．成熟的，明白事理的 ②selfish adj．自私的 ③commitment n．投入，花费 ④integrity n．正直诚实 ⑤virtue n．美德 [语段情景用]　不知从什么时候起，“我”和妈妈之间有了隔阂。放学的时候，天空下起了雨，这时妈妈穿着雨衣出现了…… Mom tried to cover me with the back of the raincoat again as a storm set in．This time, I accepted (用本单元词汇替换黑体词汇：1． ) silently．With the wind roaring angrily and the raincoat dancing, I felt warm and secure inside．Mom rode with all her strength, her waist moving with tension．I started to feel guilty about my 2． (selfish), tears welling up in my eyes．Quietly, I slipped my hands around Mom's waist and gently 3． (把我的脸贴在她的背上) in the strong wind and pouring obeyed selfishness rain．I found myself hugging Mom tighter than ever．It was 4． (一次难忘的经历) for me．I realized that one of the most beautiful things in life is mothers' love．What impresses me most is that she does what she can to help others with all the family 5． (commit) she has．Among her many 6． (virtue) are 7． (正直和善良) and she has set a good example to me． commitments virtues integrity and kindness $$