Unit2 Travelling around the world 单元话题（环游世界）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（沪教版2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit2 Travelling around the world 单元话题（环游世界）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．“读万卷书，行万里路。”某报正在以“An Unforgettable Trip”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文来投稿。 要求： 1. 写一次自己难忘的旅行经历 (去了哪，做了什么，有什么感受)； 2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、班级和校名。 An Unforgettable Trip ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你暑假期间要去英国伦敦度假，请根据以下提示用英语介绍你的旅行计划。 提示： 1. When and how do you plan to visit London? 2. Where do you plan to visit in London? 3. … 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可以适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，书写规范，正确使用标点符号； 3. 60词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．在一节分享个人旅游计划的英语课堂上，Mr. Li 让同学们就自己最喜欢的城市及喜欢的原因做一个书面报告。 请根据以下表格要点提示，完成作文。 学生 Lucy Sam 你 最喜欢的城市 广州 巴黎 ？ 城市简介 位于中国南部作为花城而闻名 法国的首都；有很多名胜古迹，例如埃菲尔铁塔和卢浮宫 至少写一点 喜欢的原因 可以吃不同种类的点心 最浪漫的城市之一 至少写一点 要求： 1. 作文必须包括表格所有信息； 2. 词数：80 词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。否则不予评分。 参考词汇： 点心：dim sum                 浪漫的：romantic 埃菲尔铁塔：the Eiffel Tower       卢浮宫：the Louvre Museum Our Favourite Cities We talked about our holiday plan in our English class yesterday. Mr. Li asked us to introduce our favourite cities. Following are some of our reports. Lucy’s favourite city is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假如本周你校英语公众号将做一个以“A special trip”为题的系列推送，现就这个话题在校内征集材料。请你根据所给提示信息，写一篇英语短文并给公众号材投稿。 内容提示： （1）Where did you go? （2）What did you do? （3）Why was the trip special? 要求： （1）词数不少于80词； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 A special trip ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．同学，请分享一下你的旅游经历吧！你去过哪里？什么时候去的？和谁一起去的？怎么去的？都做了什么有趣的事情？玩得开心吗？请以“My Travel”为题，写一篇60词左右的作文。 要求：1．不要出现真实姓名和学校名称；2．包含所给要点。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假设你将有一次去月球旅游的机会，请写一篇短文介绍一下你对即将到来的月球之旅的心情和计划。 提示：   1.介绍基本情况及你获得这次机会的心情；   2.谈谈你对月球旅行的了解；   3.最后谈谈你在月球上的生活计划。   要求：条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．亲爱的同学们，你和你的家人或朋友一定在某个节假日去某个地方旅游过。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，给你的好朋友Peter写一封邮件，分享你的某次旅行经历。 要点提示： 1. When and where did you go?      2. Who did you go with? 3. What happened on your trip?      4. What did you learn? 注意：（1）邮件必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥； （2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； （3）词数80词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 8．假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Jack想到中国来旅行，请你根据下面的提示给他写一封80词左右的电子邮件。 提示： 1.北京是中国的首都，秋季是来北京旅游的最佳时候。 2.那里有很多名胜古迹。故宫博物院非常著名，天安门非 常漂亮，长城历史悠久。 3.还可以去爬山、购物、吃小吃。 参考词汇：the Palace Museum故宫博物院；Tian’anmen天安门；snack小吃 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 9．假如你是Kelly，你正在伦敦参加文化交流活动，今天是你到达伦敦的第5天，请你根据下面的提示，给好朋友Mary写一封信，告诉她你在伦敦的情况，并谈谈你的感受，80词左右。 写作要点：1.参观了伦敦的著名景点：泰晤士河( River Thames)、大本钟( Big Ben)、伦敦眼 (London Eye)和塔桥(Tower Bridge)等； 2.为了解英国历史，参观许多博物馆和教堂(church)； 3.伦敦的天气不好，经常下雨，外出一定要带伞； 4.我的感受。 Dear Mary, I’ve been in London for five days. I visited________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kelly 10．暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 参考词汇：长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park，省Province Guangzhou, my hometown Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践5篇 11．假定你是李华，你的美国网友Lucas打算今年暑假来中国游玩，但还没有确定目的地。他写信征求你的建议。请你写一封回信，向他推荐你的家乡。内容包括： 1. 家乡基本情况 (①地理位置；②……)； 2. 家乡特色 (①食品；②……)； 3. 其他……。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：介绍 introduce    家乡 hometown   风景 scenery    地标 landmark Dear Lucas, I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit China this summer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours Li Hua 12．假定你是阳光中学“文旅社团”的社长李华，你校新来的外教Sam向你咨询在工作之余他应如何游览深圳，深入体验本地生活。请你根据以下提示写一封邮件，给他合理的建议。 内容包括： 1. 深圳总体介绍 地理位置；花园城市；……（自行补充1点） 2. 旅游推荐 旅游景点；饮食体验；……（自行补充1点） 3. 美好祝愿 …… 要求： 1. 词数：至少60词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名： 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：garden city花园城市；Window of the World世界之窗；morning tea早茶 Dear Sam, I’m so glad to get your email and it’s my pleasure to tell you how to enjoy yourself in Shenzhen when you are free. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the advice will help you. And please don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any! Yours, Li Hua 13．读万卷书，行万里路。作为一名中学生，你一定有过一些旅行的经历，如春游、秋游、假期旅行等。 假定你是李华，最近正和英国笔友Chris通过邮件谈论各自的旅行经历。请你根据他的问题回复邮件，介绍你的一次旅行经历，内容包括：旅行的时间、地点，旅行中做了什么，以及你的感受。 提示词语：go sightseeing, visit, eat, present, happy 提示问题： ●When and where did you take the trip? ●What did you do during the trip? ●How did you feel? Dear Chris, I’m very glad to tell you about one of my trips. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please write to me and tell me about your trip too. Yours, Li Hua 14．2024年在巴黎举办的奥运会，再次使巴黎成为世界瞩目的城市。巴黎一直都是旅游胜地。请你搜集资料，介绍一下巴黎和巴黎的地标。 提示词语: the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre Museum, popular, famous, visit 提示问题: ●Do you want to visit Paris? ●Which landmarks do you know? ●What’s your favorite landmark? Introduce it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．如果你喜欢动物，动物园一定是你经常光顾的地方吧。假设你上周去了深圳野生动物园 (Shenzhen Safari Park)， 请你写一篇文章描述你在动物园里的见闻。 提示词语: excited, trip, photo, meaningful 提示问题: ●Who did you go there with? ●What did you do there? ●What animals did you see in the zoo? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit2 Travelling around the world 单元话题（环游世界）写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．“读万卷书，行万里路。”某报正在以“An Unforgettable Trip”为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇不少于80词的英语短文来投稿。 要求： 1. 写一次自己难忘的旅行经历 (去了哪，做了什么，有什么感受)； 2. 适当增加细节，行文连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、班级和校名。 An Unforgettable Trip ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： An Unforgettable Trip I had a wonderful trip in Beijing last summer holiday. I arrived there by train with my parents. The weather was sunny and fine. We stayed in Beijing for seven days. We visited some places of interest. We went to Tian’anmen Square to watch the national flag go up in the early morning. We also went to the Great Wall. It was exciting. We also took many photos and ate Beijing Roast Duck. It was very nice. It was really a fantastic trip, which I’ll never forget. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要求”中自己难忘的旅行经历的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出自己有一次难忘经历的旅行的话题； 第二步，具体阐述这次旅行去了哪，做了什么； 第三步，书写结语，表达旅行后的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest景点 ②take photos拍照 ③go up上升 [高分句型] ①It was really a fantastic trip, which I’ll never forget. (which 引导非限制定语从句) 2．假如你暑假期间要去英国伦敦度假，请根据以下提示用英语介绍你的旅行计划。 提示： 1. When and how do you plan to visit London? 2. Where do you plan to visit in London? 3. … 要求： 1. 包含所有提示内容，可以适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，书写规范，正确使用标点符号； 3. 60词左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I will go to London for my summer holiday. I will take a plane to London on July 16. The weather in London is changeable, so I will take an umbrella during my tour. I plan to visit the Elizabeth Tower and I will take photos there. I also plan to go shopping and buy some gifts for my family. I think I will have great fun there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出暑假期间要去英国伦敦度假的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。包括这次旅行的时间，交通方式，游玩地点等安排； 第三步，书写结语。希望这次旅行很开心。 [亮点词汇] ①take a plane to...乘坐飞机去…… ②plan to do sth.计划做某事 ③buy sth. for sb.为某人买某物 ④have great fun玩得开心 [高分句型] ①The weather in London is changeable, so I will take an umbrella during my tour. (so引导结果状语从句) ②I think I will have great fun there. (省略that的宾语从句) 3．在一节分享个人旅游计划的英语课堂上，Mr. Li 让同学们就自己最喜欢的城市及喜欢的原因做一个书面报告。 请根据以下表格要点提示，完成作文。 学生 Lucy Sam 你 最喜欢的城市 广州 巴黎 ？ 城市简介 位于中国南部作为花城而闻名 法国的首都；有很多名胜古迹，例如埃菲尔铁塔和卢浮宫 至少写一点 喜欢的原因 可以吃不同种类的点心 最浪漫的城市之一 至少写一点 要求： 1. 作文必须包括表格所有信息； 2. 词数：80 词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。否则不予评分。 参考词汇： 点心：dim sum                 浪漫的：romantic 埃菲尔铁塔：the Eiffel Tower       卢浮宫：the Louvre Museum Our Favourite Cities We talked about our holiday plan in our English class yesterday. Mr. Li asked us to introduce our favourite cities. Following are some of our reports. Lucy’s favourite city is _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Our Favourite Cities We talked about our holiday plan in our English class yesterday. Mr. Li asked us to introduce our favourite cities. Following are some of our reports. Lucy’s favourite city is Guangzhou. It is located in the south of China. It is famous as a flower city. At the same time, she can also eat different kinds of dim sums. Sam likes Paris best. It is the capital of France. It is a city with many places of interest, such as the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. Paris is one of the most romantic cities, so that’s why Sam likes it so much. My favourite city is Beijing. It is the capital of China. There are many places of interest here, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. The reason I like this city is that I can taste delicious food from all the world here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题； 第二步，根据表格介绍同学们和自己最喜欢的城市及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①locate位于 ②be famous as…作为……而著名 ③capital首都 ④places of interest名胜古迹 ⑤taste品尝 [高分句型] Paris is one of the most romantic cities, so that’s why Sam likes it so much.(why引导表语从句) 4．假如本周你校英语公众号将做一个以“A special trip”为题的系列推送，现就这个话题在校内征集材料。请你根据所给提示信息，写一篇英语短文并给公众号材投稿。 内容提示： （1）Where did you go? （2）What did you do? （3）Why was the trip special? 要求： （1）词数不少于80词； （2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 A special trip ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A special trip I’ve been to many interesting places, and no one impressed me more than Universal Studies Hollywood. I visited Universal Studies Hollywood last summer. It was so popular that each corner was filled with people from all over the world. I was excited to enter “Fans Favorite”, and took part in the famous film city tour, visiting some hot movie locations and even got the chances to experience the shooting process! Everybody could be the hero in the movie there! It was cool! Thanks to the trip in the studios, I got to understand in person how the movies were shot especially some amazing pictures. Sometimes, seeing is not believing! So try to think and experience yourself! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己的一次旅行”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己难忘的一次旅行是在哪里； 第二步，介绍自己做了什么； 第三步，介绍这次旅行为什么特别。 [亮点词汇] ①all over the world全世界 ②take part in参加 ③thanks to幸亏 [高分句型] ①It was so popular that each corner was filled with people from all over the world. (so...that引导的结果状语从句) ②I got to understand in person how the movies were shot especially some amazing pictures.（宾语从句） 5．同学，请分享一下你的旅游经历吧！你去过哪里？什么时候去的？和谁一起去的？怎么去的？都做了什么有趣的事情？玩得开心吗？请以“My Travel”为题，写一篇60词左右的作文。 要求：1．不要出现真实姓名和学校名称；2．包含所给要点。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Travel Last summer, I went to Beijing with my family. We traveled by train. In Beijing, we visited the Great Wall, which was very impressive. We also explored the Forbidden City and ate delicious local food. In the evenings, we enjoyed the city lights and took many photos. I had a wonderful time during this trip. It was truly memorable and exciting. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文为一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：作文需要描述旅游经历，涉及去过的地点、时间、同行者、交通方式、有趣的活动及感受。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍旅游的时间、地点及同行者； 第二步，说明交通方式； 第三步，描述旅游中的活动及感受。 [亮点词汇] ① by train 坐火车 ② have a wonderful time 玩得开心 [高分句型] We visited the Great Wall, which was very impressive. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假设你将有一次去月球旅游的机会，请写一篇短文介绍一下你对即将到来的月球之旅的心情和计划。 提示：   1.介绍基本情况及你获得这次机会的心情；   2.谈谈你对月球旅行的了解；   3.最后谈谈你在月球上的生活计划。   要求：条理清晰，语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于80词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream is to travel to space. I have always been fascinated by the stars and planets, and I am very interested to see them up close. I am so excited that I’ll be one of the first students to travel into space next week. I can’t wait. The Moon is around 380,000 kilometres from the Earth. We’ll go there by spaceship. There is less gravity on the Moon. So everyone will have to own a sleeping bag. I will sleep in the bag to stop me floating away. There is no air either. So I will have to wear a spacesuit to help me breathe. During my trip, I will travel in a spaceship and visit the International Space Station. I will experience zero gravity. It will be fun because I will float in space. I want to do experiments, such as growing food in space garden. I will look out of the windows and enjoy the view of the Earth. I expect to feel excited and amazed when seeing Earth from space. I will also communicate with people on Earth and share my experiences. Last, I will take as many photos as I can. I think my dream trip to space will be a wonderful journey. It will inspire me to learn more about the universe. I am sure I will have a good time there. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般将来时”为主； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍月球旅行及获得月球旅行机会的心情； 第二步，详细介绍月球上的生活计划； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受与期待。 [亮点词汇] ①stop sb. doing sth.阻止某人做某事 ②communicate with sb.与某人交流 ③inspire sb. to do sth.鼓舞某人做某事 [高分句型] ①It will be fun because I will float in space. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I am sure I will have a good time there. (省略that的宾语从句) 7．亲爱的同学们，你和你的家人或朋友一定在某个节假日去某个地方旅游过。假如你是李华，请你根据下面的要点提示，给你的好朋友Peter写一封邮件，分享你的某次旅行经历。 要点提示： 1. When and where did you go?      2. Who did you go with? 3. What happened on your trip?      4. What did you learn? 注意：（1）邮件必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥； （2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息； （3）词数80词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Peter, How’s it going? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, How’s it going? Last year I went to Beijing with my family on summer vacation. It was such a nice trip that it was likely to influence my life. Beijing is a city with many attractions. First we visited the Great Wall, which is famous and shows the wisdom of ancient people. I took many photos there. Then I visited the Palace Museum with my parents. It was crowded with visitors. So we didn’t stay there for a long time. What I want to mention most is that we took a walk in Tsinghua University, which is my dream college. Walking in it, I couldn’t help imagining my wonderful college life. Thanks to this trip, I have set my goal and I must work hard to make my dream come true. Looking forward to your reply. Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。根据文章已给出的开头，引出“我”的旅行经历； 第二步，具体阐述旅行经历的时间、地点、人物和过程； 第三步，书写结语。谈谈从旅行经历中的学到了什么。 [亮点词汇] ①take photos照相 ②take a walk散步 ③work hard努力学习 ④come true……会实现 ⑤Look forward to期待 [高分句型] ①It was such a nice trip that it was likely to influence my life. (such…that引导的结果状语从句) ②First we visited the Great Wall, which is famous and shows the wisdom of ancient people. (which引导的定语从句) 8．假如你是李明，你的美国笔友Jack想到中国来旅行，请你根据下面的提示给他写一封80词左右的电子邮件。 提示： 1.北京是中国的首都，秋季是来北京旅游的最佳时候。 2.那里有很多名胜古迹。故宫博物院非常著名，天安门非 常漂亮，长城历史悠久。 3.还可以去爬山、购物、吃小吃。 参考词汇：the Palace Museum故宫博物院；Tian’anmen天安门；snack小吃 Dear Jack, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Ming 【答案】One possible version: Dear Jack, Thanks for your letter. I know you want to visit China. That’s a good idea. I’m looking forward to meeting you. If you come, I’ll show you around. As you know, Beijing is the capital of China. You’d better come to Beijing in autumn, because it’s the best time to visit it. There are many places of interest. We can walk up to the Great Wall. It has a long history. We can visit the Palace Museum. It is famous all over the world. We can go to Tian’anmen. It’s very beautiful. We can also do other things go mountain climbing, go shopping and eat snacks. I’m sure you will have a lot of fun. I hope you can come soon. Yours, Li Ming 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ② 时态：时态为一般现在时； ③ 提示：写作主题已给出，写邮件时注意包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥增加细节，使行文更连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达寒暄，引出主题； 第二步，具体介绍北京的名胜古迹及美食等； 第三步，书写结语，表达“希望Jack来”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ① look forward to期望 ② show sb. around带某人参观 ③ had better最好 [高分句型] ① You’d better come to Beijing in autumn, because it’s the best time to visit it.（原因状语从句） ② I’m sure you will have a lot of fun.（宾语从句） 9．假如你是Kelly，你正在伦敦参加文化交流活动，今天是你到达伦敦的第5天，请你根据下面的提示，给好朋友Mary写一封信，告诉她你在伦敦的情况，并谈谈你的感受，80词左右。 写作要点：1.参观了伦敦的著名景点：泰晤士河( River Thames)、大本钟( Big Ben)、伦敦眼 (London Eye)和塔桥(Tower Bridge)等； 2.为了解英国历史，参观许多博物馆和教堂(church)； 3.伦敦的天气不好，经常下雨，外出一定要带伞； 4.我的感受。 Dear Mary, I’ve been in London for five days. I visited________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Kelly 【答案】例文： Dear Mary,     I’ve been in London for five days. I visited many places of interest here, such as the River Thames, Big Ben, the London Eye, Tower Bridge and so on. I like Tower Bridge best because it is very great. In order to learn more about the history, I went to lots of museums and churches. The weather here was not good. It often rained. So I had to remember to take an umbrella when going out. The people here were very friendly and polite. I think London is a beautiful place. There are so many things to see here. I like it very much. Yours, Kelly 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，包括参观了哪些伦敦著名景点、为了解历史参观了哪些场所、伦敦的天气情况以及Kelly的感受。考生需要确保包含所有要点，并围绕这些要点展开描述，使文章逻辑连贯、结构清晰。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简要介绍自己在伦敦的时长，列举所参观的著名景点，表达最喜欢的地方及原因； 第二步，说明为了解更多英国历史所做的活动，描述伦敦的天气情况； 第三步，分享个人的感受，总结伦敦之行的美好印象。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②in order to为了…… ③friendly and polite友好且礼貌 [高分句型] ①I like Tower Bridge best because it is very great.(because引导原因状语从句) ②So I had to remember to take an umbrella when going out.(when引导的省略的时间状语从句) 10．暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家庭的15岁小孩Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 参考词汇：长隆野生动物园Chimelong Safari Park，省Province Guangzhou, my hometown Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Guangzhou, my hometown Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from Guangzhou, Guangdong Province, China. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province and has a long history. It is famous for its flowers and delicious food. There are many famous scenic spots here. For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are lush and the air is fresh. There is also Chimelong Safari Park. It is one of the biggest nature parks in China and is home to about 20,000 animals, including giant pandas and Chinese white tigers. The people here are also very friendly and kind. If you come here, you will definitely like it. Welcome to my hometown as a guest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，根据提示介绍自己的家乡——广州； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①capital省会 ②be famous for…因……而出名 ③scenic spots风景区 ④lush茂盛的 ⑤fresh清新的 ⑥definitely肯定 [高分句型] For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are lush and the air is fresh.(where引导非限制性定语从句) 能力综合实践5篇 11．假定你是李华，你的美国网友Lucas打算今年暑假来中国游玩，但还没有确定目的地。他写信征求你的建议。请你写一封回信，向他推荐你的家乡。内容包括： 1. 家乡基本情况 (①地理位置；②……)； 2. 家乡特色 (①食品；②……)； 3. 其他……。 注意： 1. 词数为80左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：介绍 introduce    家乡 hometown   风景 scenery    地标 landmark Dear Lucas, I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit China this summer. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Lucas, I am glad to hear that you are planning to visit China this summer. I am writing to introduce my hometown Shanghai to you. Shanghai is in the east of China. It is one of the largest cities in the world. If you like sightseeing and good food, you will love it. There are many famous attractions in Shanghai, such as Yu Garden. The beautiful buildings, bridges and ponds in it will help you have a better understanding of Chinese traditional gardens. Shanghai is also a place to go if you want to try delicious Chinese cuisine. My favorite snacks are green onion pancakes and pan-fried buns. They are so delicious that my mouth is watering whenever I think of them. Actually, there is a more exciting Shanghai for you to explore, so why not visit Shanghai this year? I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“推荐你的家乡”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表示欢迎对方来自己的家乡玩，并介绍写信意图； 第二步，根据题干提示，具体描述家乡的基本情况以及特色等信息； 第三步，再次表达期待对方的到来，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②so…that如此……以至于 [高分句型] ①If you like sightseeing and good food, you will love it.（if引导条件状语从句） ②There are many famous attractions in Shanghai, such as Yu Garden.（there be句型） 12．假定你是阳光中学“文旅社团”的社长李华，你校新来的外教Sam向你咨询在工作之余他应如何游览深圳，深入体验本地生活。请你根据以下提示写一封邮件，给他合理的建议。 内容包括： 1. 深圳总体介绍 地理位置；花园城市；……（自行补充1点） 2. 旅游推荐 旅游景点；饮食体验；……（自行补充1点） 3. 美好祝愿 …… 要求： 1. 词数：至少60词（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名： 4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 参考词汇：garden city花园城市；Window of the World世界之窗；morning tea早茶 Dear Sam, I’m so glad to get your email and it’s my pleasure to tell you how to enjoy yourself in Shenzhen when you are free. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope the advice will help you. And please don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sam, I’m so glad to get your email and it’s my pleasure to tell you how to enjoy yourself in Shenzhen when you’re free. Shenzhen lies in the south of China. It is known as a garden city because of its beautiful scenery. It’s also a modern city with tall buildings everywhere. Shenzhen is known as a garden city, with beautiful scenery everywhere. Firstly, you can visit the Window of the World, where you can see many famous attractions from all over the world in miniature. It’s a great place to take pictures and learn about different cultures. Secondly, don’t miss the local food in Shenzhen. You can try the morning tea, which is very famous. There are various kinds of delicious dim sum, such as shrimp dumplings, barbecued pork buns, and egg tarts. You can enjoy a relaxing morning while tasting the delicious food. I hope the advice will help you. And please don’t hesitate to contact me if you need any! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文。 ②时态：一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中关于深圳的介绍要点, 适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总体介绍深圳的概况，地理位置，花园城市，现代化城市等。 第二步，详细介绍深圳的旅游景点，如世界之窗，品尝当地美食，早茶等。 第三步，书写结语，表达美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①be known as被称为…… ②a great place to do sth.做……的好地方 ③learn about了解 [高分句型] ①Firstly, you can visit the Window of the World, where you can see many famous attractions from all over the world in miniature. (where引导的定语从句) ②You can try the morning tea, which is very famous. (which引导的定语从句) ③There are various kinds of delicious dim sum, such as shrimp dumplings, barbecued pork buns, and egg tarts. (there be句型) 13．读万卷书，行万里路。作为一名中学生，你一定有过一些旅行的经历，如春游、秋游、假期旅行等。 假定你是李华，最近正和英国笔友Chris通过邮件谈论各自的旅行经历。请你根据他的问题回复邮件，介绍你的一次旅行经历，内容包括：旅行的时间、地点，旅行中做了什么，以及你的感受。 提示词语：go sightseeing, visit, eat, present, happy 提示问题： ●When and where did you take the trip? ●What did you do during the trip? ●How did you feel? Dear Chris, I’m very glad to tell you about one of my trips. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please write to me and tell me about your trip too. Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Chris, I’m very glad to tell you about one of my trips. Two years ago, during the summer holiday, I went to Sanya with my parents. It was a great trip. On the first day, early in the morning, we went to the beach to watch the sunrise. After that, I swam in the sea with my dad and made some sandcastles on the beach. My mom took lots of photos for us. In the evening, we enjoyed delicious local food. In the following days, we traveled around the city and bought some presents for my grandparents. I really enjoyed the trip because I not only got close to nature but also spent more time with my parents. Please write to me and tell me about your trip too. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：以一般过去时为主； ③提示：讲述自己和父母去三亚的旅行。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头表明写信目的是向朋友讲述旅行经历； 第二步，中间按时间顺序详细描述旅行中的活动； 第三步，结尾表达自己对此次旅行的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①glad高兴的 ②local当地的 ③delicious美味的 ④enjoy享受 [高分句型] ①I really enjoyed the trip because I not only got close to nature but also spent more time with my parents.（此句使用“because”引导原因状语从句，“not only...but also...”结构，增强了句子的逻辑性和丰富性。） 14．2024年在巴黎举办的奥运会，再次使巴黎成为世界瞩目的城市。巴黎一直都是旅游胜地。请你搜集资料，介绍一下巴黎和巴黎的地标。 提示词语: the Eiffel Tower, the Louvre Museum, popular, famous, visit 提示问题: ●Do you want to visit Paris? ●Which landmarks do you know? ●What’s your favorite landmark? Introduce it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 If I am free, I’d like to visit Paris. Paris is the capital of France. It is famous all over the world. It has many landmarks such as the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. My favorite landmark is the Eiffel Tower. The Eiffel Tower is about 330 meters high. It took lots of workers more than two years to finish building it. When it was completed, it was the tallest building in the world at that time. Every year, about seven million people go to Paris and visit the Eiffel Tower. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示中的问题进行写作，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述完整。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直入主题，点明想去巴黎； 第二步，介绍巴黎的地标有哪些以及最喜欢的是哪个。 [亮点词汇] ①would like to想要 ②all over the world全世界 ③such as比如 ④more than超过 [高分句型] ①If I am free, I’d like to visit Paris. (条件状语从句) ②When it was completed, it was the tallest building in the world at that time. (when引导时间状语从句) 15．如果你喜欢动物，动物园一定是你经常光顾的地方吧。假设你上周去了深圳野生动物园 (Shenzhen Safari Park)， 请你写一篇文章描述你在动物园里的见闻。 提示词语: excited, trip, photo, meaningful 提示问题: ●Who did you go there with? ●What did you do there? ●What animals did you see in the zoo? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Last week, I went to Shenzhen Safari Park with my parents. I was excited about this trip because I love animals very much. There were many kinds of animals in the zoo. I saw some interesting animals such as lions, tigers and elephants. I did a lot of things when I walked around the zoo. I took some photos of the elephants and tigers. I watched the monkeys climbing the trees up and down. I think it’s a meaningful trip because I learned a lot about animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明上周去了动物园； 第二步，具体介绍去动物园的情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①was excited about兴奋于 ②many kinds of许多种类的 ③such as例如 ④up and down上上下下 [高分句型] ①I was excited about this trip because I love animals very much. (because引导原因状语从句) ②I did a lot of things when I walked around the zoo. (when引导时间状语从句) 16 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 21 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$