2025届高三英语应用文写作技巧指导课件

高考应用文の指导 在此输入标题 Suppose you are a teacher, how many marks will you give? 在此输入标题 12.5分 年份 话题 体裁 命题形式 词数 分值 2024 假设你是李华，你的美术老师带你去公园上了一节美术课，请你写一封信给Chris，要帮他介绍给外国朋友去公园上了美术课之后完成的作品和感想。 应用文 邮件 提纲式 80 15 2023 假定你是李华，外教准备将学生随机分为两组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。给他写份邮件 应用文 邮件 提纲式 80 15 2022 假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”负责人李华，请你给外教Caroline写封邮件邀请她做一次访谈 应用文 邮件 提纲式 80 15 2021 你校英语报Youth正在庆祝创刊10周年，请你根据所给要点提示写一篇短文投稿 应用文 短文 提纲式 80 15 2020 你校正在组织英语作文比赛，请你根据所给的要点提示，以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛 记叙文 短文 提纲式 100 25 4 HOW to upgade your composition 在此输入标题 体裁 以应用文为主 内容 联系生活 贴近实际 形式 提纲式： 要点明确 灵活发挥 热点 弘扬中国传统文化 书面表达命题规律 6 高考英语作文评分细则 档次 规定任务 覆盖内容要点 语法结构、词汇 复杂结构、 高级词汇 连接成分与结构 写作目的 完成情况 第五档 14- 15 完全完成 覆盖所有 应用较多 尽力使用（语法结构或词汇） 有效使用连接全文结构紧凑 完全达到 第四档 11 - 13 完成 覆盖所有，漏掉一两个次要点 满足要求 语法结构或词汇方面基本准确, 因为复杂结构的使用，可能会犯有错误。 简单使用连接全文结构紧凑 达到 漂漂亮亮 （应用高级表达：单词，短语，句型） 清清楚楚 7 档次 规定任务 覆盖内容要点 语法结构、词汇 复杂结构、 高级词汇 连接成分与结构 写作目的 完成情况 第三档 8-10 基本完成 覆盖所有，但漏掉一些内容 满足要求 语法结构或词汇方面的错误有一些,但不影响理解 简单使用连接全文内容连贯 基本达到 第二档 5-7 未恰当 完成 漏掉一些主要内容，写了无关内容 语法单调，词汇有限 语法结构或词汇方面的错误有一些，影响对写作内容的理解 较少使用连接成分，内容缺少连贯 信息未能清楚地传达给读者 第一档 1—4 未完成 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容 语法单调，词汇有限 语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，影响对写作内容的理解 缺乏连接成分，内容不连贯 信息未能传达给读者 马马虎虎 糊里糊涂 一塌糊涂 8 真题再现 假如你是李华，你校将举办第二届“多彩中国”英语短视频大赛。请给你校来自英国的留学生John写封邮件，邀请他参赛。内容包括： 1.比赛作品 2.作品要求 3.投稿地址和截止日期 1.审体裁 如何审题 2.审人称 3.审时态 4.审要点 All the key points should be included! 9 比赛作品 作品要求 投稿地址和截止日期 期待参与 Structure 1 2 3 告知比赛，邀请参赛 期待回复/期待参与/表达祝愿等 三段式作文法： 开门见山。写作目的/原因/背景等 具体内容，要点齐全 在此输入标题 What are the problems in writing？ 语法类错误 This is the second short video contest, which is hold in our school. Our school will held an English short video competition. You’d better to show how beautiful the scenery is. The contest stimulate students’ interest on colorful places . held hold 时态语态错 had better interest in 固定搭配错 I’m writting to invent you to particicate in the competion . I’m pleasure to invite you to join us and I’m sure that the activity is excited. It shows the beautiful of China 单词类错误 writing invite participate competition 单词拼写错 pleased exciting 词类使用错 beauty 语法类错误 The competition aim to enrich our knowledge. The video need to show the beautiful scenery. Our school decide to hold a contest. aims needs decides 主谓不一致 语法类错误 The aim of the contest is show the beautiful scenery of China。 Aim to make people know more places of China, our school will hold an English video contest. to show Aiming to 非谓语动词错 结构类错误 I think you can find some pictures on the Internet where have a lot resources I’m gald to tell you here has a piece of good news about the contest. You need to do is to make a short video where there are What you need to do 汉式英语 增分秘籍之一 首句亮点化 17 Well begun, half done 良好的开始是成功的一半 Brainstorm Can you think of any good beginning sentences pair work 申请信 邀请信 建议信 致歉信 感谢信 推荐信 通知 在此输入标题 18 申请信 邀请信 建议信 Well begun, half done 良好的开始是成功的一半 Knowing that..., I am so interested in it that I’m writing to apply for..., which is very appealing to me. On behalf of xxx, I’m writing to invite you to... It’s a great honor for me to invite you to I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to... Informed that..., I’m more than willing to offer my suggestions to you. 在此输入标题 19 致歉/感谢信 推荐信 通知 Well begun, half done 良好的开始是成功的一半 I’m writing to express/convey/show my sincere/heartfelt apolopy/thanks to you for... Delighted to know that...., I’m writing to strongly recommend ...to you. May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.（口头通知） In order to..., the activity whose theme is... is to be held in（地点）...on（具体日期）... 在此输入标题 20 增分秘籍之二 词汇高级化 21 词汇高级化 Common Words Advanced Words chance solve decide consider should help opportunity deal with cope with determine make up one’s take...into consideration/account be supposed to do sb a favor/do a favor for sb Tips：单词升级；短语优先(group work) 词汇高级化 Common Words Advanced Words be busy in try to do I think important like be occupied in make efforts to do spare on effort to do in my opinion as far as I’m concerned vital significant be fond of/be crazy about/have a passion for/ be passionate about/ be enthusiastic about/ Tips：单词升级；短语优先 词汇高级化 Common Words Advanced Words cry/laugh thank sb actually think of be helpful burst into tears/ laughter burst out crying/laughing express one’s thanks/gratitude to sb be grateful to sb in fact as a matter of fact come up with be of great help Tips：单词升级；短语优先 Dear John, I’m writing to to tell you my school will hold the second English short video contest, and I want to invite you to take part in it. The theme of the contest is“colorful China”. It aims to show the beauty of China and help students gain more knowledge. There are the rules. The video must be your own, and it means you can’t copy other works. Your work is no longer than 3 minutes. You should send your work to ColorfulChina@school.cn before next Sunday. I know you like taking short videos, so let’s take part in it. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua present broaden students’ horizons There are the requirements original are not allowed to copy other works must be limited to submit and the deadline is next Sunday I know you have a passion for taking short videos 在此输入标题 增分秘籍之三 句式多样化 26 主从复合句 01 倒装句 02 强调句 03 非谓语动词 04 with复合结构 05 虚拟语气 06 句式多样化 I’m writing to to tell you my school will hold the second English short video contest, and I want to invite you to take part in it. 非谓语动词/形容词作状语 The theme of the contest is“colorful China”. It aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. 定语从句/with 复合结构 There are the requirements. The video must be original, and it means you are not allowed to copy other works. 定语从句/非谓语动词 Your work must be limited to 3 minutes. You should submit your work to ColorfulChina@school.cn and the deadline is next Sunday. I know you have a passion for taking short videos, so let’s take part in it. Looking forward to your early reply. 在此输入标题 I’m writing to to tell you my school will hold the second English short video contest, and I want to invite you to take part in it. 非谓语动词 Knowing my school will hold ..., I’m writing to invite you to... 形容词作状语 Eager to tell you my school will hold..., I’m writing to invite you to... 在此输入标题 The theme of the contest is“colorful China”. It aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. 定语从句 The contest whose theme is “colorful China” aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. with 复合结构 With the theme of “colorful China” , the contest aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. 在此输入标题 The video must be original, and it means you are not allowed to copy other works. 定语从句 The video must be original, which means you are not allowed to copy other works. 非谓语动词 The video must be original, meaning you are not allowed to copy other works. 在此输入标题 Knowing my school will hold the second English short video contest, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. The contest whose theme is “colorful China” aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. There are the requirements. The video must be original, which means you are not allowed to copy other works. Your work must be limited to 3 minutes. You should submit your work to ColorfulChina@school.cn and the deadline is next Sunday. I know you have a passion for taking short videos, so let’s take part in it. Looking forward to your early reply. 在此输入标题 There are the requirements. 你的作品需要满足要求 Your work needs to meet the requirements. I know you have a passion for taking short videos, so let’s take part in it. 既然你对拍视频感兴趣，为什么不参加这个比赛呢？ Since you have a passion for taking short videos, why not participate in it? More flexible sentence structures 在此输入标题 Knowing my school will hold the second English short video contest, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. The contest whose theme is “colorful China” aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. Your work needs to meet the requirements. The video must be original, which means you are not allowed to copy other works. Your work must be limited to 3 minutes. You should submit your work to ColorfulChina@school.cn and the deadline is next Sunday. Since you have a passion for taking short videos, why not take part in it. Looking forward to your early reply. 在此输入标题 增分秘籍之四 衔接巧妙化 35 1 2 3 衔接巧妙化 “起”——创造良好开端 “承”——顺势承上启下 “转”——巧妙转折过渡 4 “合”——完美结束全文 在此输入标题 36 Knowing my school will hold the second English short video contest, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. The contest whose theme is “colorful China” aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. Your work needs to meet the requirements. , the video must be original, which means you are not allowed to copy other works. , your work must be limited to 3 minutes. , you should submit your work to ColorfulChina@school.cn and the deadline is next Sunday. Since you have a passion for taking short videos, why not take part in it. Looking forward to your early reply. First and foremost In addition Last but not least 在此输入标题 增分秘籍之五 结尾点睛化 38 1.如果您会考虑我的申请/邀请，我会非常感激。（申请信/邀请信） I would appreciate it you could take my application into consideration/accept my invitation. 2. 希望我的建议会对你有用。(建议信) Hopefully, these suggestions will be of great use to you. 3. 请接受我发自心底的感谢/歉意。（感谢信） Please accept my sincere thanks/ apology from the bottom of my heart. 4. 万能结束语 Please reply to me at your earliest convenience. Looking forward to your early reply / arrival / participation. 结尾点睛化 39 Knowing my school will hold the second English short video contest, I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. The contest whose theme is “colorful China” aims to present the beauty of China and broaden students’ horizons. Your work needs to meet the requirements. First and foremost，the video must be original, which means you are not allowed to copy other works. In addition，your work must be limited to 3 minutes. Last but not least, you should submit your work to ColorfulChina@school.cn and the deadline is next Sunday. Since you have a passion for taking short videos, why not take part in it. Please reply to me at your earliest convenience. 在此输入标题 假如你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华，请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括： 1. 节目介绍 2. 访谈的时间和话题 实战演练(2022年全国新高考I卷) 审 列 造 连 改 抄 41 THANKS 42 $$