河南省新高中创新联盟TOP二十名校2024-2025学年高一上学期12月调研考试英语试题故事续写Cooper与Coble故事的续写讲义

故事续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a normal day in August, Raheem Cooper, a truck driver, was making his deliveries (运送) in Valdosta, Georgia. As he drove along the countryside road, he noticed something unusual — a package of food dropped all over a driveway. Curiously, he slowed down his truck and saw an elderly woman lying on the ground, clearly in pain and her bike was not far from her. Without much thinking, Cooper parked his truck and rushed to the woman’s side. He found her lying on her stomach, bleeding (流血). Her eyes were open, but she couldn’t speak or move. At once Cooper called 911 and then got a bottle of cold water from his truck to help cool her off in the heat. As he waited for the doctors to arrive, Cooper noticed a carton (纸盒) of milk that had fallen out of the woman’s bag. It was warm, showing that she had been there for a while. The woman, later identified as Marie Coble, was taken to the hospital where she was diagnosed (诊断) with a brain injury. Her granddaughter, Kayla Cochran, was informed by a medical officer and rushed to the hospital. The doctors told her if nobody had helped her grandmother, she would have died. Luckily, she found out that her grandmother was being watched closely in the ICU and was gradually recovering. During her visit, Cochran noticed a note in her grandmother’s wallet. It was from Cooper, who had written down his name and phone number in case anyone in the family needed to contact him. Cochran was thankful for Cooper’s quick actions and called him to thank him and tell him the latest news on her grandmother’s condition. Cooper decided to pay a visit to Coble in the hospital. 注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Coble was very happy when she saw Cooper. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cooper’s friendship with Coble grew stronger during Cooper’s regular visits. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Cooper与Coble故事的续写 续写要点 第一段续写要点：着重刻画 Coble 见到 Cooper 时的神情与动作，除了微笑和伸手，可补充她眼中闪烁的泪光，凸显其激动心情。详细描述两人握手时的力度和时长，展现情感传递。在对话中，增加 Coble 对事发当天细节的回忆，以及她对 Cooper 当时行为的具体感受。深入描写 Cooper 倾听时的专注状态，如微微前倾的身体、认真的眼神，以及适时给出的回应，让交流更具画面感。 第二段续写要点：具体列举 Cooper 每次探望时所带礼物的种类，如第一次带了一本 Coble 喜欢的书籍，第二次带了亲手制作的点心，体现他的用心。详细描述两人聊天的场景，如坐在医院花园长椅上，阳光洒在身上，分享生活中的趣事和烦恼。描写 Cooper 在 Coble 出院后帮忙的具体行为，如帮忙打扫房间、修理家具。刻画 Coble 做饭时的温馨场景，以及 Cooper 品尝美食时的满足表情。补充邻里得知他们故事后的反应，如邻居们的夸赞、受影响后主动帮助他人的举动。 情感线 第一段中，Coble 从对 Cooper 的救命之恩满怀感激，到在交流中感受到温暖与亲切，情感逐渐加深。Cooper 则从最初救人时的责任感，转变为对 Coble 的关心与尊重，在倾听中与她建立起情感连接。第二段中，随着定期探望，Cooper 的关心愈发深厚，Coble 也将他视为亲人，两人的情感发展为真挚的祖孙般情谊。这种情谊感染了邻里，引发他人对善良与关爱的向往，使情感在社区中得到传递与升华。 故事线 事故发生：Cooper 在送货途中发现受伤的 Coble，停车救助并拨打 911。 医院救治：Coble 被送往医院，诊断为脑损伤，其孙女 Cochran 得知情况后赶到医院。 感恩联系：Cochran 发现 Cooper 留下的联系方式，致电感谢并告知病情，Cooper 决定探望。 初次探望交流：Cooper 探望 Coble，Coble 表达感激，两人愉快聊天，彼此产生情感连接。 友谊深化：Cooper 定期探望，带礼物、聊天、帮忙，Coble 视他如孙辈，情谊加深。 影响社区：他们的友谊成为社区佳话，激励邻里间相互关爱，传递善良。 主旨升华句 This heart - warming story of Cooper and Coble vividly demonstrates that a simple act of kindness can not only save a life but also blossom into a profound and lasting friendship, spreading warmth and love in the community.（这个关于 Cooper 和 Coble 的暖心故事生动地表明，一个简单的善举不仅可以拯救生命，还能绽放为深厚而持久的友谊，在社区中传播温暖与爱。） Through Cooper's selfless act of helping Coble and the subsequent development of their relationship, we learn that kindness has the power to bridge the gap between strangers, creating a sense of community and belonging that enriches our lives.（通过 Cooper 无私帮助 Coble 以及他们关系的后续发展，我们了解到善良有跨越陌生人之间鸿沟的力量，营造出一种丰富我们生活的社区感和归属感。） The bond formed between Cooper and Coble serves as a powerful reminder that in a world often filled with chaos and indifference, acts of compassion can ignite a spark of hope, inspiring others to follow suit and build a more caring society.（Cooper 和 Coble 之间形成的纽带有力地提醒我们，在一个常常充满混乱和冷漠的世界里，同情之举可以点燃希望之火，激励他人效仿，构建一个更有爱心的社会。） This tale of Cooper and Coble shows that true friendship can emerge from unexpected circumstances, and when we reach out to help others, we not only make a difference in their lives but also find meaning and purpose in our own.（这个关于 Cooper 和 Coble 的故事表明，真正的友谊可以在意外情况下产生，当我们伸出援手帮助他人时，我们不仅改变了他们的生活，也在自己的生活中找到了意义和目标。） In the end, the story of Cooper and Coble teaches us that kindness is a universal language that transcends age, background, and social status, and it has the potential to transform lives and create a more harmonious world.（最终，Cooper 和 Coble 的故事告诉我们，善良是一种超越年龄、背景和社会地位的通用语言，它有改变生活、创造更和谐世界的潜力。） 写作示范一（细腻情感风） 第一段续写 Coble was very happy when she saw Cooper. Her eyes, which had been clouded with pain and fear in the aftermath of the accident, now sparkled with gratitude and joy. A weak but radiant smile spread across her face as she slowly reached out her hand, her fingers trembling slightly. “Thank you so much, young man. You saved my life,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper, yet filled with a depth of emotion that words could hardly convey. Cooper gently took her hand, his touch warm and reassuring. He gave it a gentle squeeze, his eyes softening as he looked at her. “It's nothing. I'm just glad you're getting better,” he replied sincerely. Coble then began to share her life stories, her voice growing a bit stronger as she spoke. She told him about her childhood on a small farm, the love she had for her family, and the simple joys that had filled her life. Cooper listened intently, his body slightly 前倾，his eyes fixed on Coble. He nodded occasionally, asking gentle questions that encouraged her to continue. In that moment, a deep and special connection was forged between them, transcending the boundaries of their age difference. 第二段续写 Cooper’s friendship with Coble grew stronger during Cooper’s regular visits. Each time he came, he brought something different, a token of his care. One day, he arrived with a bouquet of fresh, colorful daisies, their bright petals mirroring the warmth in his heart. Another time, he presented her with a hand - knitted scarf, carefully crafted by his own hands. As they sat in the hospital room or, later, in Coble's cozy living room, they engaged in long, heartfelt conversations. They talked about the challenges of daily life, the dreams they had once held, and the new hopes that had emerged. When Coble was discharged from the hospital, Cooper was there to help. He rolled up his sleeves and cleaned her house from top to bottom, making sure everything was in order. He fixed a wobbly chair in the corner and mended a leaky faucet in the kitchen. In return, Coble would spend hours in the kitchen, preparing delicious meals that filled the house with mouth - watering aromas. Cooper would sit at the table, savoring every bite, his face lit up with pleasure. Their friendship soon became the talk of the neighborhood. Neighbors would stop by, offering their help and sharing stories of their own acts of kindness. The once - quiet street now buzzed with a sense of community, all inspired by the beautiful bond between Cooper and Coble. 写作示范二（简洁明快风） 第一段续写 Coble was very happy when she saw Cooper. A big smile appeared on her face, and she reached out to hold Cooper's hand. "Thank you, you saved me," she said thankfully. Cooper smiled back, "It's okay, I'm glad you're better." Then Coble told him some stories about her life. Cooper listened carefully, and they chatted happily. From that moment, they felt a connection. 第二段续写 Cooper’s friendship with Coble grew stronger during Cooper’s regular visits. Every time he came, he brought small gifts like flowers or books. They talked about daily things and their dreams. After Coble left the hospital, Cooper helped her with chores. Coble cooked great meals for him. Their friendship became well - known in the neighborhood. People were inspired by them and started to help each other more. Their story made the community a warmer place. 【答案】 Coble was very happy when she saw Cooper. She remembered him and tried to speak, but she couldn’t speak clearly due to the injury. She gave him a hug, expressing her heartfelt thanks for saving her life. From that day on, Cooper made it a point to visit Coble weekly during her hospital stay. He brought her favorite snacks, and chatted with her about their favorite topics and families. He tried to keep her spirit positive and a friendship formed between them unconsciously. Cooper’s friendship with Coble grew stronger during Cooper’s regular visits. He felt like she was his own grandmother, visiting her once or twice a week. Marie Coble’s family were also deeply touched by what Cooper had done. Cooper’s kindness and company had not only saved Coble’s life but also brought joy and hope to her and her family during the recovery time. His story was a reminder that even the smallest action can have a huge effect on someone’s life. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$