故事续写成为超级英雄的故事续写 讲义-广东省中山部分学校2024-2025学年高三上学期9月联考英语试题

故事续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 It was a cold, snowy evening. Tommy was running as fast as he could, focused on nothing but his destination—the shop on the street corner. Two weeks ago, he saw figurines of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one. He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to realize his little dream. He was so excited and hardly noticing the world around him. Maybe that's why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman, who was sitting on the sidewalk, her back against the wall. He murmured “sorry” and moved on to his destination. Once he entered the shop, he went straight to the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more—all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy, he reached for Spiderman. “You like these, true believer? ” Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face. “Y- yes… Yes, they' re awesome ” answered Tommy. “They' re strong and fast and help other people a lot… ” the boy looked at figurines in admiration. “I wish I could be a superhero too. ” “Then become one! ” said the old man. “How? ” Tommy asked in surprise. “I don't have any superpowers. ” “And why would you need them?” the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy's face, he squatted（蹲下） and put his hands on Tommy's arms. “Did you know, that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband? She's been working hard and taking care of him for years. I've never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person—” he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. “He's a firefighter; he's saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be. ” The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. “You don't need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart ” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para 1: Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.____________  ____________________________________________________________________     Para 2: The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.___________  ____________________________________________________________________ 成为超级英雄的故事续写 续写要点 第一段续写要点：深入刻画 Tommy 听到老人话语后的内心活动，详细描述他对过往行为的反思，不仅是忽视了身边的英雄，还可思考自己追逐超级英雄玩偶的狭隘。在决定改变行动时，补充他的具体想法，比如意识到帮助他人比拥有玩偶更重要，且要立刻付诸实践。对于放回玩偶的动作，可增加一些细节，如他轻轻抚摸玩偶，眼神中透露出不舍但又坚定的神情。 第二段续写要点：着重描写 Tommy 走向 homeless woman 时的步伐，是坚定且带着一丝紧张的。描述女人的外貌细节，如她凌乱的头发、干裂的嘴唇，以突出她的困境。在 Tommy 给她衣服和钱时，补充女人的细微反应，如身体微微颤抖，双手接过钱时的小心翼翼。最后，进一步深化 Tommy 的内心感受，除了成就感，还可思考他对未来成为 “英雄” 的展望，以及这件事对他价值观的深远影响。 情感线 在第一段中，Tommy 起初因追逐玩偶而兴奋，听到老人话语后，内心从震惊、愧疚逐渐转变为坚定，决心改变自己的行为。第二段中，他走向 homeless woman 时带着紧张与期待，给予帮助后，从女人的反应中获得强烈的成就感与满足感，这种情感的转变让他深刻领悟到成为英雄的真正意义，对自己的认知也发生了巨大变化，从单纯渴望超级力量转变为理解平凡善举的伟大。 故事线 渴望玩偶：Tommy 看到超级英雄玩偶后，一心想通过遛狗赚钱购买，满心期待拥有它。 偶遇老人：在商店里，Tommy 与老人交流，老人关于英雄的观点让他开始反思自己对英雄的认知。 决定改变：Tommy 意识到自己的狭隘，决定放下对玩偶的执着，去做更有意义的事，他将玩偶放回货架。 寻找目标：Tommy 想起之前遇到的 homeless woman，决定去帮助她，朝着她所在的地方走去。 实施帮助：Tommy 找到 homeless woman，看到她的困境，毫不犹豫地给她衣服和钱，女人十分感激。 感悟升华：Tommy 通过这次帮助他人的经历，真正理解了英雄的含义，完成了自我成长，对未来也有了新的思考。 主旨升华句 Tommy's transformation from a boy chasing a fantasy superhero to a real - life hero shows that true heroism lies not in possessing extraordinary powers but in the courage to act on one's empathy and kindness.（Tommy 从一个追逐幻想超级英雄的男孩转变为现实生活中的英雄，这表明真正的英雄主义不在于拥有非凡的力量，而在于有勇气基于同理心和善良采取行动。） This heart - warming tale serves as a powerful reminder that the path to heroism is paved with small acts of compassion, and each of us has the potential to be a hero in someone else's life.（这个暖心的故事有力地提醒我们，英雄主义之路是由微小的同情之举铺就的，我们每个人都有潜力在他人的生活中成为英雄。） Through Tommy's experience, we learn that the greatest superpower one can have is the willingness to step out of our comfort zones and make a positive difference in the world around us.（通过 Tommy 的经历，我们了解到一个人能拥有的最强大的超能力是愿意走出舒适区，在我们周围的世界中产生积极的影响。） The story highlights that heroism is not a distant concept reserved for fictional characters but a present - day reality that can be achieved by anyone who listens to the call of their heart and reaches out to those in need.（这个故事强调英雄主义不是只为虚构角色保留的遥远概念，而是当今任何人都可以实现的现实，只要他们倾听内心的呼唤并向有需要的人伸出援手。） In the end, Tommy's journey teaches us that the true measure of a hero is not in the magnitude of their deeds but in the depth of their love and the impact they have on the lives of others.（最终，Tommy 的历程告诉我们，衡量英雄的真正标准不在于其行为的规模大小，而在于其爱的深度以及对他人生活产生的影响。） 写作示范一（细腻情感风） 第一段续写 Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. The old man's words reverberated in his mind like a thunderclap. He felt a pang of guilt as he realized how self - centered he had been. All those weeks, he had been so fixated on the glittering Spiderman figurine, dreaming of having superpowers, while real heroes were all around him, sacrificing and helping others without a second thought. His excitement for the toy now seemed shallow and childish. He remembered the homeless woman's forlorn figure on the cold sidewalk. How could he have been so thoughtless? His face flushed with shame. With a new - found sense of purpose, he slowly walked back to the shelf where the Spiderman figurine sat. He picked it up one last time, running his fingers over its smooth surface, a bittersweet smile on his face. Then, with a firm resolve, he placed it back, his heart pounding with anticipation of what he was about to do. 第二段续写 The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy took a deep, steadying breath and walked up to her. Her clothes were tattered, and her face was gaunt, her eyes sunken and filled with despair. He noticed that she was shivering uncontrollably, her thin frame huddled against the cold. Without a moment's hesitation, he unzipped his thick, warm coat and gently draped it over her shoulders. She looked up at him, her eyes wide with surprise and disbelief. “Thank you,” she managed to whisper, her voice hoarse. Tommy then reached into his pocket, his fingers closing around the money he had saved so diligently. He took it out and placed it in her trembling hands. “Here, you can use this to get something warm to eat and a place to sleep,” he said softly. The woman's eyes filled with tears, and she tried to speak, but her emotions got the better of her. Tommy smiled at her, a sense of profound fulfillment washing over him. In that moment, he felt a connection to her, a connection that he knew would change him forever. He realized that being a hero wasn't about having superpowers; it was about seeing someone in need and doing something about it. 写作示范二（简洁有力风） 第一段续写 Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. The old man's words hit him hard. He'd been so focused on the superhero figurine. Now, he saw how wrong he was. He thought of the homeless woman he'd ignored. Determined to change, he walked back to the shelf. He put the Spiderman figurine back, his mind set on helping someone. 第二段续写 The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy took a deep breath and walked up to her. She was shivering. He quickly took off his coat and gave it to her. Then, he handed her the money he'd saved. “Get something warm,” he said. The woman looked at him, her eyes full of gratitude. Tommy smiled, feeling a new sense of himself. He knew he'd done the right thing. He was a hero, not with powers, but with kindness. 参考答案 One Possible Version Para 1: Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely. Finally, he raised his head. “So I am supposed to …” he stopped mid- sentence when he realized that he was alone. He turned his head left and right, but the old man was nowhere to be seen. Tommy sighed heavily—he already had an idea of what he should do. He looked at figurines for the last time and moved towards the counter. “Two sandwiches and a cup of tea please,” he said. Para 2: The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time. Tommy came closer and carefully gave the woman his buys. Her eyes opened wide in surprise, then filled with tears. “Thank you,” she whispered. Tommy bowed his head, turned around and went back home. He was moving faster and faster and finally he started to run. Strange energy filling his body made him feel like he could fly. When he finally stopped, he was breathing heavily, but he didn't feel tired. He smiled happily—it was a wonderful feeling. And nothing could stop it. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$