Unit 7 Being a Smart Shopper 单元话题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材）-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（仁爱科普版2024）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit7 Being a Smart Shopper 单元话题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．为倡导理性消费，增强学生理财意识，学校开展“零用钱管理能手”评选活动。请结合以下图表，写一篇英语短文参与评选，谈谈你每月零用钱的使用情况及理由。 要求： 1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。 2.词数90左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’d like to share how I manage my pocket money every month. I usually make a budget for my pocket money at the beginning of every month. I spend 50% of the money on books, pens and other daily things. They are necessary for my study and hobbies. Besides, I plan to travel to Xi’an this summer holiday, so I save about 30% every month for future use. Finally, I spend about 20% helping children in need. I believe every little bit of love counts. Managing money is important for me. It’s not just about spending or saving. It’s about how I can use money to create a better life for myself and others. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的每一项提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍文章的主旨是分享如何管理零花钱； 第二步，结合图表详细介绍如何做； 第三步，表达自己的观点，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①at the beginning of在……的开始 ②plan to do sth.计划做某事 [高分句型] Managing money is important for me. (动名词短语作主语) 2．假如你是李华，学校要举行一次关于“购物方式”的辩论赛，你选择的辩题是“中学生不宜进行网络购物”，请根据下面的要求完成你的辩论词。 1.对自己的个人信息和能力进行简单介绍； 2.你认为中学生不宜参与网购，为什么？ 写作要求： （1）短文必须包括所给的提示要点，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥。 （2）词数在70左右。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My name is Li Hua. I study at Zhongxiao Middle School. I am good at sports. I like playing basketball best. I also like shopping and travelling. Now shopping online become more and more convenient. Many students think it can save time and money. But in my opinion, I don’t think middle school students should shop online. First, we can’t see these products, they may be different from the ones in the store. Second, shopping online can cause many problems like giving away our personal information. Third, students spend too much time playing electronic products, it’s bad for our health. All in all, I think we should choose a correct and safe way to shop. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“中学生不宜进行网络购物”写一篇辩论词。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。分为三段式：第一段引出自己的辩论观点；第二段从三个方面来阐述自己认为中学生不宜进行网络购物的理由；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 3．随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。网购已然成为人们的日常购物方式之一。你是否经常网购呢？请以网购为主题，展开谈谈你平时的网购习惯。 写作要点：1. 商品网购的流程； 2. 你平时喜欢网上购买哪些商品以及购买的理由（至少写出2种商品）； 3. 你选择网购的原因（至少两点）。 写作要求：1. 内容必须包括写作要点中的所有信息，根据实际情况进行书写； 2. 结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯； 3. 文中不能透露个人信息； 4. 词数80个词左右。 参考词汇： choose选择；pay付款；receive收到；compare对比；product产品 Online Shopping With the development of the Internet, online shopping is changing our way of life. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：                                                                                 Online Shopping      With the development of the Internet, online shopping is changing our way of life. It’s very easy to buy things online. First, you can select the suitable products and then pay for it online. After a few days, you will receive the product you bought.      I always buy books and food online. I love reading books and having delicious food. With the help of online shopping, I can save a lot of time. There are kinds of products online so that I can compare them.      All in all, I think it’s very convenient to buy things online. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对“网购流程，网购商品及购买理由，网购原因”的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“网购改变生活”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“网购流程，网购商品及购买理由，网购原因”几个方面重点介绍网购以及网购原因的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达“网上购物便利”的感慨。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of... 随着……发展 ②save a lot of time 节约很多时间 ③kinds of 各种 ④all in all 总的来说 [高分句型] ① It’s very easy to buy things online.（It作形式主语） ②There are kinds of products online so that I can compare them.（There be句式） 4．Write a passage of at least 50 words about the topic “A shopping experience (经历)”. (以“我的一次购物经历”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文。标点符号不计入总词数。) Use the following points as a reference. (以下内容仅供参考) 1. When did you go? 2. Whom did you go with? 3. Where did you go and what did you buy? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： A shopping experience Last Sunday afternoon, my mother and I went shopping together. We went to a big shopping center. I saw two beautiful pictures and decided to buy them. It’s 200 yuan each. I tried to make a bargain with the shopkeeper. He refused at first. But when we were going to leave, he stopped us and said, “OK, you can have both of them at 300 yuan.” I bought both of them happily and we went home at last. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：考生可根据参考内容所给的三个要点进行写作，然后结合自身购物经历适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，简单介绍时间和人物。比如：什么时间、和谁一起去购物； 第二步，介绍地点并描写具体经过。从“地点、商品、价格、购物过程”等几个方面详细描写购物的经过。 [亮点词汇] ①go shopping 购物 ②make a bargain with ... 和……讨价还价 ③at last 最后 [高分句型] ① But when we were going to leave, he stopped us and said, “OK, you can have both of them at 300 yuan.” （when引导的时间状语从句） ② I bought both of them happily and we went home at last. （and连接两个并列句） 5．假设你叫Li Hua。你发现学校附近有一家商店，店里的很多商品都在打折促销，你和你的同学们都喜欢到那里买东西。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，给你的美国好友Kim发一封电子邮件，向他们描述你喜欢的这家商店。不少于50词，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 促销 钢笔 8元/支 尺子 2元/把 铅笔 1.5元/2支 书包 30元/个 笔记本 2元/本 球鞋 100元/双 Dear Kim, My classmates and I like buying things at the store near my school. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Kim, My classmates and I like buying things at the store near my school. It sells things at very good prices. Many things there are on sale. Pens are 8 yuan. Pencils are 1.5 yuan for two. Notebooks are 2 yuan. It also sells rulers for 2 yuan and schoolbags for 30 yuan. It sells sports shoes, too. How much are they? They are 100 yuan for a pair. I like the store. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出对促销商品的介绍； 第二步，具体介绍各种商品的价格； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①near my school在我学校附近 ②on sale特价销售 [高分句型] It also sells rulers for 2 yuan and schoolbags for 30 yuan.（并列结构） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．假如你是烙饼店(House of Pancakes)的经理，请根据下面的提示，写一则广告，介绍一下你的烙饼店。60词左右。 烙饼店 种类 价格 特色 价格 小号 4 yuan 卷心菜胡萝卜烙饼(小号) 3 yuan 中号 6 yuan 西红柿鸡蛋烙饼(中号) 4 yuan 大号 8 yuan 洋葱牛肉烙饼(大号) 6 yuan House of Pancakes ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 House of Pancakes Would you like some pancakes? Please come to House of Pancakes. There are all kinds of pancakes here, small ones, medium ones and large ones. The small one is 4 yuan, the medium one is 6 yuan and the large one is 8 yuan. We have some great specials. The small pancake with cabbage and carrot is just 3 yuan. The medium pancake with tomatoes and eggs is just 4 yuan. You can also try our large pancake with onions and beef for just 6 yuan. Welcome to House of Pancakes. You will like the food here. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。根据提示内容介绍下自己的烙饼店。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。根据提示内容，分别介绍饼的品种以及对应的价格。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 7．下面是春天服装店的商品展销价格。请根据表格内容，以“Spring Clothes Store’s Sale”为题写一则广告。 Clothes Colors Price T—shirt all colors ﹩9 sweaters yellow, red and blue ﹩12 socks black ﹩3 bags for sports black and green ﹩20 shorts(for girls) all colors ﹩25 要求：（1）把表格中的内容体现在广告中； （2）不少于50词。 Spring Clothes Store’s Sale ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Spring Clothes Store’s Sale Come and buy your clothes at Spring Clothes Store. Spring Clothes Store is at a great sale. Look! We have many different kinds of T-shirts. The price of T-shirts in all colors is 9 dollars each. There are many beautiful yellow, red and blue sweaters in our store. The price of sweaters is 12 dollars each. Do you like socks? We have socks in black for only 3 dollars. Do you like bags for sports? We have bags for sports in black and green for only 20 dollars. Do you need shorts? We have many different kinds of shorts for girls. The price of T-shirts in all colors for girls is 25 dollars each. Come to Spring Clothes Store now! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，也是一则广告； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中各种衣服的颜色以及价格的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山用祈使句吸引顾客到春天服装店里来买衣服，并且说明服装店在促销； 第二步，具体阐述各种促销衣服的颜色以及价格； 第三步，书写结束语。用祈使句和开头呼应，招呼顾客来服装店。 [亮点词汇] ① at a great sale在大甩卖 ② many different kinds of许多不同种类的 ③ the price of……的价格 ④ bags for sports运动包 ⑤ in all colors各种颜色的 [高分句型] ① There are many beautiful yellow, red and blue sweaters in our store.（there be句型，There be+名词+地点，表示某地有……） ② We have bags for sports in black and green for only 20 dollars.（介词短语in black and green作后置定语，for +价钱） ③ Come and buy your clothes at Spring Clothes Store.（把祈使句用于广告词） 8．假如你是Li Hua，你叔叔的新餐厅House of Dumplings这周日即将开业，饺子馆有12种不同的水饺，六种汤菜，还有各种蔬菜沙拉。请再结合下面表格中的优惠活动帮他在网上发布一则广告，以吸引更多的顾客。要点如下： 种类 价格 (12个) 特色菜 大白菜水饺 ¥12 胡萝卜羊肉水饺 ¥18 洋葱牛肉水饺 ¥22 其他优惠 1. 周日蔬菜沙拉免费。 2. 买24个水饺可以免费获得一碗西红柿鸡蛋汤。 营业时间 从上午10:00到晚上10:00 写作要求：1. 包括以上全部要点，可以进行适当补充。 2. 表达准确、条理清楚、书写规范，不少于60词。 3. 文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 House of Dumplings will open this Sunday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 House of Dumplings will open this Sunday. We offer 12 kinds of dumplings and six types of soups, along with various vegetable salads. Our special dumplings include cabbage dumplings for 12 yuan, carrot and mutton dumplings for 18 yuan, and onion and beef dumplings for 22 yuan. Besides, you can enjoy free vegetable salads on Sunday! If you buy 24 dumplings, you can get a free bowl of tomato and egg soup. We are open from 10:00 a.m. to 10:00 p.m. Come and enjoy our delicious dumplings! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据表格提示内容进行写作，可适当补充，注意要点齐全，表述清晰，无单词拼写及语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍餐馆的经营种类； 第二步，介绍餐馆的特色菜、价格及优惠活动； 第三步，介绍营业时间并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①along with以及 ②various各种各样的 ③besides此外 [高分句型] If you buy 24 dumplings, you can get a free bowl of tomato and egg soup. (if引导的条件状语从句) 9．龙年新年快到了，Millie制定了一份购物清单，准备去采购商品。假如你是Millie，请根据表格内容用英语介绍购物清单并说明购买的原因。 Shops Things to buy Reasons 服装店（三楼） 一件紫色羽绒服； …… 一条蓝色棉质牛仔裤； …… 一双灰色运动鞋； …… 礼品店（二楼） 新年礼物； 送给好朋友Sandy; 超市（一楼） 一些纸杯、零食、饮料、水果； 家庭成员相聚一起庆祝春节； Word: down coat (羽绒服) 要求： 1. 所写内容必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文章不少于80词，已给出部分不计入总词数； 3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Spring Festival is coming soon. I want to do some shopping at the shopping mall. Here’s my shopping list. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Spring Festival is coming soon. I want to do some shopping at the shopping mall. Here’s my shopping list. In the clothing store on the third floor, I plan to buy a purple down coat. It can keep me warm during the cold winter. The blue cotton jeans are comfortable and stylish for daily wear. A pair of grey sports shoes is necessary for me to do sports easily. In the gift shop on the second floor, I’ll choose a special New Year gift for my good friend Sandy to express my love and best wishes. In the supermarket on the first floor, I’ll get some paper cups, snacks, drinks and fruits. Because my family members will get together to celebrate the Spring Festival. We can enjoy delicious food and drinks while we are chatting and having a great time. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，表明写作意图。开头点明春节将至，要去商场购物并列出清单，引出下文介绍。 第二步，具体阐述。分别说明在不同店铺的购物选择及原因。 ［亮点词汇］ ①keep warm保暖 ②get together相聚 ③have a great time玩得开心 ［高分句型］ We can enjoy delicious food and drinks while we are chatting and having a great time.（while引导的时间状语从句） 10．随着人们生活水平的提高，中学生的零花钱也越来越多了。你的零花钱来自哪里？你是怎样支配它们的？你认为怎样规划使用零花钱更有意义？ 请结合以上内容以“My pocket money”为题写一篇文章，词数不少于80。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My pocket money My pocket money mainly comes from my parents. I often help them do some housework, then I can get some money. I often use it to buy some school things. Once or twice a week, I buy some snacks. Sometimes I spend money on things I don’t really need, so I decide to make a budget to manage my pocket money better. First, I need to pay for my daily needs. Second, I want to buy some gifts for my friends on the festivals. Then I save the rest in the bank for a rainy day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据题干介绍自己零花钱，可适当发挥，注意要点齐全，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍零花钱来自哪里； 第二步，介绍平时是怎么经营零花钱的； 第三步，表达自己将怎样更加有意义地花零花钱。 [亮点词汇] ①come from来自 ②decide to do sth.决定做某事 ③pay for支付 [高分句型] ①Sometimes I spend money on things I don’t really need, so I decide to make a budget to manage my pocket money better. (定语从句；so连接的并列句) 能力综合实践5篇 11．近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付（mobile payment）深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以“Mobile Payment Changes Our Life”为题的征文活动，请根据下列表格中的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。 移动支付 扫码支付 日益流行；改变生活 方便快捷（至少举1个生活实例） 消费观念 理智消费；按需购买；…… 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 卷面整洁，书写美观； 4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：扫码：scan QR codes   支付：pay   理智地：wisely Mobile Payment Changes Our Life More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: Mobile Payment Changes Our Life More recently, mobile payment is liked by many people. It is becoming more and more popular in China. It has made people’s daily life very convenient. Most of us are used to paying by scanning QR codes. By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go. We can have dinner in a restaurant and pay by scanning QR codes with our smart phones. In a cinema, we can buy our tickets in the same way. Mobile payment is changing our life. However, we should spend money wisely. First of all, think twice about what we want to buy. Next, learn to save and buy what we can afford. Last but not least, spend on what we really need. Don’t buy everything we want. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章标题和开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题，说明移动支付的受欢迎程度和它带来的影响； 第二步，至少举一个实例说明移动支付在日常生活中的便捷使用； 第三步，提倡理性消费，分享消费理念。 [亮点词汇] ①more and more popular越来越受欢迎 ②be used to doing sth习惯做某事 ③think twice再三考虑 [高分句型] ①By mobile payment, we can pay easily and quickly wherever we go.（wherever引导的让步状语从句） ②First of all, think twice about what we want to buy.（what引导的宾语从句） ③Don’t buy everything we want.（省略引导词that的定语从句） 12．一天，妈妈和小红到儿童商场购物，小红被眼前色彩鲜艳的衣服吸引住了，拉着妈妈的手不放，于是妈妈决定为小红买件漂亮的衣服。请根据图画编写一段购物的对话，不得少于6句。首句已给出。 Salesgirl (女销售员): What can I do for you, madam? Mother:____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Salesgirl: What can I do for you, madam? Mother: I want a dress for my daughter. Do you have a red dress? Salesgirl: Yes, here it is. Mother: Thanks. Daughter: Mom, I like it very much. Can I try it on? Salesgirl: Sure. Mother: You look very nice in the dress. How much is it? Salesgirl: It’s just 48 yuan, madam. Mother: That’s fine. We’ll take it. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是看图作文，为对话； ② 时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③ 提示：表明小红与妈妈购物的图画已给出，图画显示了“小红以及妈妈与销售员的对话、小红试穿衣服、妈妈付钱买衣服给小红”的三个场景，考生应注意不要遗漏图画内容，可适当添加细节，完善对话。 [写作步骤] ① 第一步，表明妈妈想为小红买衣服的意图。以销售员的询问“有什么能帮到您”开头，引出妈妈买衣服的购物目的； ② 第二步，写明小红想试穿衣服的想法。以“小红对衣服的喜欢”来衔接“小红想试穿衣服”； ③ 第三步，妈妈询问衣服的价格，最终决定购买它。妈妈觉得该衣服适合小红，想要购买它，于是询问了销售员该衣服的价格。 [亮点词汇] ① want sth. 想要某物 ② try on 试穿 [高分句型] You look very nice in the dress.（“look+形容词+in+服装” 句型） 13．假设某英文报社正在以“网购”为话题进行征稿，请你根据表格提示，写一篇60词左右的英语短文，谈谈人们对网购的不同看法，同时表达出自己的观点。（首句已给出，不计入总词数） 网上购物 赞同 反对 可随时购物；大多数商品很便宜 实物与图片不符；付款不安全 提示词：convenient 方便的 People have different ideas on online shopping. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 People have different ideas on online shopping. Some people think it is good. First, they don’t need to go to the shops and they can buy almost everything at any time. Second, most of the products are very cheap. But some people don’t think so. First, sometimes the pictures look very nice, but when people get the products, they are not so good. Second, paying over the Internet is not always safe. I think online shopping is very convenient. But we must be careful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先通过介绍人们对网购有不同看法来引出话题； 第二步，具体讲述人们赞同与反对的观点； 第三步，谈谈自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①need to do sth需要做某事 ②have different ideas on…对……有不同看法 ③at any time [高分句型] ①I think online shopping is very convenient.（宾语从句） 14．假如你是李华，上周末你在网上某服装店购买了一件毛衣。收到货后你发现衣服有问题，与客服（the customer service agent）理论，其服务态度（attitude）不好，而且不同意退换毛衣。因此你决定给经理写一封投诉信。 内容包括： 1.服装问题（颜色、尺寸……）。 2.服务问题。 3.提出解决方案。 要求： 1.80~120词，已给出部分不计入总词数。 2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to tell you about my experience in your clothing store. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m writing to tell you about my experience in your clothing store. I bought a sweater there last weekend. When I received the sweater, I found that there was something wrong with it. First, its colour isn’t right. I bought a purple one, but the one I received is black. Second, I ordered a medium-size sweater but received a large-size one instead. Third, the sweater is even broken in some places. I talked to the customer service agent about the problems. But to my surprise, she was impolite and she refused to exchange it. I was deeply hurt by her attitude. So, I’d like to give you some advice. First of all, you’d better improve your service. Then, you should change my sweater. At the same time, I hope you can say sorry to me. I’m looking forward to receiving your reply soon. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，先说明服装的问题，例如颜色和尺码都不对、破损等问题； 第二步，然后说明售后服务的问题，例如客服不礼貌、不同意退换货等； 第三步，最后提建议，给出解决方案。 [亮点词汇] ①talke to与某人交谈 ②to my surprise 令我惊讶的是 ③refuse to do sth. 拒绝做某事 [高分句型] When I received the sweater, I found that there was something wrong with it.（when引导的时间状语从句） 15．学校开展“小手拉大手，科技进生活”的交流活动，请你帮Grandpa Green在网上购买一款智能手表，体验网上购物的便利。请你发挥想象写一篇70词左右的短文。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 This afternoon I taught Grandpa Green to buy a smart watch online. We had a happy shopping experience. First, we typed “smart watch” on the shopping website and lots of goods appeared. Then we chose a perfect one after checking the details of the watches. It has such a big screen with big numbers that Grandpa Green can know the time easily. More conveniently, if Grandpa wears it, it can not only show where he is, but also lead him to where he wants to go. Grandpa can also make some phone calls when needed. Besides, it only costs 899 yuan. It is very popular and has been bought by 6899 people with a five-star good review. We thought it a good choice and paid it online.     Finally, we were looking forward to receiving the watch. Shopping online saves our time and makes our life more convenient and comfortable. And I feel happy to teach Grandpa to shop online successfully. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题。 第二步，详细介绍网上体验。 第三步，介绍购物感受。 [亮点词汇] ①lots of 许多、大量的 ②the details of……的详细信息 ③with a five-star good review获得五星好评 ④look forward to盼望 [高分句型] ①It has such a big screen with big numbers that Grandpa Green can know the time easily.（such…that…引导的结果状语从句） ②More conveniently, if Grandpa wears it, it can not only show where he is, but also lead him to where he wants to go.（not only…but also…不但……而且……） ③Shopping online saves our time and makes our life more convenient and comfortable.（Shopping online动名词作主语） 2 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校： 姓名： 班级： 考号： Unit7 Being a Smart Shopper 单元话题写作满分范文15篇（紧贴新教材） 说明：此专题分三个难镀层次，基础入门训练进阶拓展练<能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进 行针对性难镀训练。 考点剖析 ⊙基础入门训练5篇 1.为倡导理性消费，增强学生理财意识，学校开展“零用钱管理能手”评选活动。请结合以下图表， 写一篇英语短文参与评选，谈谈你每月零用钱的使用情况及理由。 Pocket Money Management Helping Spending on children in need 20% pens,books 50% 30% Saving for future use 要求： 1表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。 2词数90左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 I'd like to share how I manage my pocket money every mon山h 2,假如你是李华，学校要举行一次关于“购物方式”的辩论赛，你选择的辩题是“中学生不宜进行网络 购物”，请根据下面的要求完成你的辩论词。 1对自己的个人信息和能力进行简单介绍： 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 20242025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 2你认为中学生不宜参与网购，为什么？ 写作要求： (1)短文必须包括所给的提示要点，语句通顺、意思连贯，可适当发挥。 (2)词数在70左右。 3.随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。网购已然成为人们的日常 购物方式之一。你是否经常网购呢？请以网购为主题，展开谈谈你平时的网购习惯。 写作要点：1.商品网购的流程： 2.你平时喜欢网上购买哪些商品以及购买的理由（至少写出2种商品）： 3.你选择网购的原因（至少两点）。 写作要求：1.内容必须包括写作要点中的所有信息，根据实际情况进行书写： 2.结构完整，语句流畅，意思清楚、连贯： 3.文中不能透露个人信息； 4.词数80个词左右。 参考词汇：choose选择；pay付款；receive收到；compare对比；product产品 Online Shopping With the development of the Intemet,online shopping is changing our way of life. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 2 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 4.Write a passage of at least50 words about the topic“A shopping experience(经历)”.（以“我的一次购物 经历”为题写一篇不少于50个词的短文。标点符号不计入总词数。) Use the following points as a reference..(以下内容仅供参考) 1.When did you go? 2.Whom did you go with? 3.Where did you go and what did you buy? 5,假设你叫LiHu。你发现学校附近有一家商店，店里的很多商品都在打折促销，你和你的同学们 都喜欢到那里买东西。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示，给你的美国好友K发一封电子邮件，向他们描 述你喜欢的这家商店。不少于50词，可适当发挥。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 促销 钢笔 8元/支 尺子 2元/把 铅笔 1.5元2支 书包 30元/个 笔记木 2元/本 球鞋 100元/双 Dear Kim, My classmates and I like buying things at the store near my school. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 20242025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ Yours, Li Hua 进阶拓展训练5篇 6.假如你是烙饼店House of Pancakes)的经理，请根据下面的提示，写一则广告，介绍一下你的烙 饼店。60词左右。 烙饼店 种类 价格 特色 价格 小号 4yuan 卷心菜胡萝卜烙饼（小号） 3 yuan 中号 6 yuan 西红柿鸡蛋烙饼（中号） 4 yuan 大号 8 yuan 洋葱牛肉烙饼（大号） 6 yuan House of Pancakes 7.下面是春天服装店的商品展销价格。请根据表格内容，以“Spring Clothes Store's Sale“为题写一则广告。 Clothes Colors Price T一shirt all colors $9 sweaters yellow,red and blue 多12 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 4 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ socks black $3 bags for sports black and green $20 shorts(for girls) all colors $25 要求：(1)把表格中的内容体现在广告中： (2)不少于50词。 Spring Clothes Store's Sale 8.假如你是Li Hua,你叔叔的新餐厅House of Dumplings这周日即将开业，饺子馆有l2种不同的 水饺，六种汤菜，还有各种蔬菜沙拉。请再结合下面表格中的优惠活动帮他在网上发布一则广告，以吸引 更多的顾客。要点如下： 种类 价格(12个) 大白菜水饺 12 特色菜 胡萝卜羊肉水饺 ￥18 洋葱牛肉水饺 ￥22 1.周日蔬菜沙拉免费。 其他优惠 2.买24个水饺可以免费获得一碗西红柿鸡蛋汤。 营业时间 从上午10：00到晚上1000 写作要求：1.包括以上全部要点，可以进行适当补充。 2.表达准确、条理清楚、书写规范，不少于60词。 3.文中不得出现个人姓名、校名等真实信息。 House of Dumplings will open this Sunday. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 9.龙年新年快到了，Miie制定了一份购物清单，准备去采购商品。假如你是Mie,请根据表格 内容用英语介绍购物清单并说明购买的原因。 Shops Things to buy Reasons 件紫色羽绒服： 服装店（三楼） 条蓝色棉质牛仔裤： … 双灰色运动鞋； 礼品店（二楼） 新年礼物： 送给好朋友Sandy, 超市（一楼） 些纸杯、零食、饮料、水果： 家庭成员相聚一起庆祝春节： Word:down coat(羽绒服) 要求： 1.所写内容必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥： 2.文章不少于80词，己给出部分不计入总词数： 3.语句通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范： 4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。 Spring Festival is coming soon.I want to do some shopping at the shopping mall Here's my shopping list. 10.随着人们生活水平的提高，中学生的零花钱也越来越多了。你的零花钱来自哪里？你是怎样支 配它们的？你认为怎样规划使用零花钱更有意义？ 请结合以上内容以“My pocket money”为题写一篇文章，词数不少于80 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 6 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 能力综合实践5篇 11.近年来，越来越多的人在超市、影院、餐馆等地方消费时，经常使用手机扫码支付。移动支付(mobile payment)深受人们喜爱。假如你是李华，学校即将开展以“Mobile Payment Changes Our Life"为题的征文活 动，请根据下列表格中的提示，介绍一下移动支付并呼吁人们理性消费。 移动支付 日益流行；改变生活 扫码支付 方便快捷（至少举1个生活实例） 消费观念 理智消费；按需购买；… 要求： 1.要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现真实姓名与校名： 3.卷面整洁，书写美观： 480词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：扫码：scan QR codes支付：pay理智地：wisely Mobile Payment Changes Our Life More recently, mobile payment liked by many people. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 7 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 12,一天，妈妈和小红到儿童商场购物，小红被眼前色彩鲜艳的衣服吸引住了，拉着妈妈的手不放， 于是妈妈决定为小红买件漂亮的衣服。请根据图画编写一段购物的对话，不得少于6句。首句已给出。 Salesgirl(女销售员)：What can I do for you,madam? Mother 13,假设某英文报社正在以“网购”为话题进行征稿，请你根据表格提示，写一篇60词左右的英语短文， 谈谈人们对网购的不同看法，同时表达出自己的观点。（首句已给出，不计入总词数） 网上购物 赞同 反对 可随时购物：大多数商品很便宜 实物与图片不符；付款不安全 提示词：convenient方使的 People have different ideas on online shopping. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 8 20242025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，已编校！ 14.假如你是李华，上周末你在网上某服装店购买了一件毛衣。收到货后你发现衣服有问题，与客 服(the customer service agent)理论，其服务态度(attitude)不好，而且不同意退换毛衣。因此你决定给 经理写一封投诉信。 内容包括： 1服装问题（颜色、尺寸.…）。 2.服务问题。 3提出解决方案。 要求： 1.80-120词，已给出部分不计入总词数。 2文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 Dear Sir/Madam, I'm writing to tell you about my experience in your clothing store. 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 9 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步新教材精品系列资料，己编校！ Yours. Li Hua 15.学校开展“小手拉大手，科技进生活”的交流活动，请你帮Grandpa Green在网上购买一款智能手 表，体验网上购物的便利。请你发挥想象写一篇70词左右的短文。 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 10