Unit 1 Past and present 单元主题（时代变迁）写作满分范文16篇-2024-2025学年八年级英语下册重难点讲练全攻略（牛津译林版）

2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit1 Past and present 单元主题（时代变迁）写作满分范文16篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．（23-24八年级下·江苏淮安·期中）假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。 提示： 生活中变化 （1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。 （2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。 （3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。 自己的变化 （1）去了许多名胜古迹，例如…… （2）比以前更加喜爱阅读，阅读的益处：…… （3）……，……（变化及感受） 要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2）词数80个左右； 3）展开的内容需合理想象，用自己的话补充完整。 The Changes _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes There are many changes in my life. For example, the factory used to dump waste into the river, but now the government has taken action to improve the environment. Besides, I lived in a low and shabby house before, but now I have moved into a tall and modern apartment instead. I notice that many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago. On the other hand, I have changed a lot, too. I went to many places of interest, like the Great Wall. I tend to like reading more than before. Reading helps me relax myself after class. To conclude, many good changes have taken place both in my life and upon myself. I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“现在完成时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图； 第二步，介绍生活中的变化以及自己的变化； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①dump倾倒 ②take action采取行动 ③shabby破旧的 ④on the other hand另一方面 ⑤places of interest名胜古迹 ⑥take place发生 [高分句型] I notice that many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago.(that引导宾语从句) 2．（23-24八年级下·江苏苏州·期中）我们日常的课本学习不仅能学到知识，而且也会改善着我们的生活习惯。只要我们有一颗上进心，就一定会带来很大的变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息，以“My Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文，向同学介绍你的变化并简要说明理由。 过去 1.花很多时间打游戏；2.讨厌看书 现在 1.喜欢旅行；2.爱好看书；3.…… 原因 1.旅游帮助你了解世界，享受自然之美 2.读书帮助你…… 要求：1、注意语句通顺，条理清晰； 2、词数 90 左右，必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，省略号部分适当发挥； 3、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Changes __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Changes In the past, I used to spend much time playing computer games. I didn’t like reading books at all. I always behaved very politely, especially in public. But now I have changed a lot. I like travelling. I have been to many places of interest, such as Hong Kong Disneyland and the Sydney Opera House. I like reading as well. I spend over seven hours a week reading different types of books. Usually, I stand in a long line to borrow books from the library. I have learnt more about good manners. I find travelling can help me learn about the world and enjoy the beauty of nature. I have fun reading books and get a lot of knowledge from books. They open up a whole new world to me. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My Changes”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文要分别介绍自己过去和现在的爱好的变化，并说明原因。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 3．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期末）在八年级即将结束之际, 八（1）班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请根据下表信息提示，为David准备一份演讲稿，具体内容如下： 过去 现在 学习 很少阅读…… 勤读书放松自己…… 环保 浪费水电…… 意识到环保的重要性…… 礼仪 大声喧哗…… 举止礼貌…… 爱心 不会关心他人…… 为贫困地区…… 展望未来      注意： 1、词数90词左右。（文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。） 2、省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and have made great progress in many ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and I have made great progress in many ways. First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computers games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me. Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I washed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins. Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. But now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus. Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope. I’m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9. Thanks for listening! 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求为David准备一份演讲稿，介绍其一年来的收获与变化，需从学习、环保、礼仪、爱心以及展望未来六方面介绍过去与现在的表现。 2.写作指导：写作时注意演讲稿的基本形式，按照要点分段叙述，可使用First、Second等词汇增加文章的条理性；介绍过去事情，采用一般过去时，介绍现在的事情，主要用一般现在时，注意人称和数的变化，保持主谓一致性。 4．（23-24八年级下·江苏扬州·期末）八（9）班将举行一次主题班会，畅谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Tom 准备一份演讲稿，具体内容如下表： 过去 现在 学习 读书少，花时间在…… 喜欢读书，原因…… 礼仪 插队、喧哗 举止文明…… 爱心 不知道关心他人 参加慈善活动     展望未来      要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯 2）必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Hello, everyone. I’m Tom from Class 9, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. I’m Tom from Class 9, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. First, in the past, I seldom read books. I used to spend most of time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to read because good books help me relax after a busy day. Second, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others. Now I behave politely in public. I always queue and keep my voice down. Finally, I used to care little about others. But now I take part in charity activities and help more people in need. I often work as a volunteer and donate money to the children in poor areas. I am sure I will do much better in the future. Thanks for listening! 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。针对一年来自己的变化进行写作，包括自己过去和现在的对比，从学习、礼仪、爱心三方面进行叙述。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。 2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍自己过去和现在的变化情况；第三段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 5．（23-24八年级下·江苏淮安·期中）假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。字数80左右。 提示： 生活中变化 1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。 2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。 3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。 自己的变化 1）去了许多名胜古迹，忍不住拍了很多照片。 2）比以前更加喜爱阅读。 3）阅读的益处…… 要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2）词数80个左右； 3）展开的内容需合理想象，用1句话补充完整。 The Changes ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Changes There are many changes in my life. For example, the factory used to dump waste into the river, but now the government has taken action to improve the environment. Besides, I lived in a low and shabby house before, but now I have moved into a tall and modern apartment instead. I notice that many families have cars now but we only had bicycles some years ago. On the other hand, I have changed a lot, too. I went to many places of interest and took many photos. I tend to like reading more than before. Reading helps me relax myself after class. To conclude, many good changes have taken place both in my life and upon myself. I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏“提示信息”中的“阅读的益处”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍文章主题是生活的改变； 第二步，具体阐述改变的细节，对过去和现在的进行对比； 第三步，书写结语。表达对未来的美好期望。 [亮点词汇] ① used to do过去成常常做…… ② take action采取行动 ③ on the other hand另一方面 ④ places of interest名胜古迹 ⑤ take place发生 [高分句型] ① There are many changes in my life.（there be句型） ② I believe the coming future will be brighter and brighter!（省略that的宾语从句） 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）上周五，你们班就“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了一次热烈的讨论．请根据讨论内容，以Past and present为题写一篇短文． 注意事项： 1. 作文必须表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥；语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2. 词数80个左右，作文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Past and present Last Friday, we had a discussion about life’s changes in the past and at present. Here are some of the changes. In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in our city. But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides. Now the government has built many shops and tall buildings in some large open spaces. Years ago, people lived in small old houses. Now most of them have moved into new flats. In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground. Most families have their own cars. Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：题干中给出了写作方向，考生应从交通、环境、生活等方面对比过去与现在的变化，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍上周五针对“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了讨论； 第二步，具体从交通、生活及交通等方面介绍变化； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ① have a discussion 进行讨论 ② in the past 在过去 ③ on foot 步行 ④ by bicycle 骑自行车 [高分句型] ① But now the roads are wide and clean, with many green trees on both sides.（with的复合结构） ② In the past, people travelled around the city on foot or by bicycle, but now they can go around by bus or by underground.（but连接的并列句） 7．（22-23八年级下·江苏泰州·阶段练习）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护，无论城市还是农村，环境条件、人的意识都发生了很大的变化。请你根据提示材料，对你所居住的小镇的变化做一些描述。 past 1. roads…  2. living conditions…  3. environment…   4. transport…    present 1. life: (自拟1-2点) 2. transport: (自拟1-2点) 3. travelling: the best time to visit my hometown… future (自拟1-2点) 要求： 1.字迹工整、规范； 2.字数：100词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. I have seen the changes myself. In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 【答案】例文 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. I have seen the changes myself. In the past, there were no flowers and grass here. There were only narrow and dirty roads. People travelled around the town on foot or by bike. Local people lived in old and small houses. The water was dirty and smelt terrible. What’s worse, some factories put the waste water into the river. But now everything has changed a lot. There are many beautiful flowers and grass everywhere. The streets are wide and clean. The water is also clean and the air is fresh. And you can see bees and butterflies dancing among the flowers. And people go travelling by bus, taxi or train. Most people have moved into new flats. They have a happy life now. The best time to visit my hometown is in spring because the weather is always sunny then, but not too hot. Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文为说明文，是材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据提示材料，对所居住的小镇的变化做一些描述，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总述小镇发生了许多变化； 第二步，从道路、环境条件、交通方面描述小镇的过去； 第三步，从生活、交通、旅行方面描述小镇的现在； 第四步，表达人们对小镇的喜爱。 [亮点词汇] ① take place发生 ② what’s worse更糟糕的是 ③ move into搬到 [高分句型] ① There were only narrow and dirty roads.（there be句型） ② The best time to visit my hometown is in spring because the weather is always sunny then, but not too hot.（because引导的原因状语从句） 8．（22-23八年级下·江苏宿迁·阶段练习）根据所给内容，以“The changes to my hometown”为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 字迹工整； 2. 要点全面；   3. 分段写作；    4. 注意时态；   5. 字数80词左右。 要点： 过去： 1. 空气清新，环境很好； 2. 房屋小、旧，人们走路或骑车上班； 3. 曾经是个宁静的地方。 现在： 1. 住房宽敞明亮，很多人有了自己的小汽车； 2. 人们可以坐公交车或火车去城里； 3. 生活条件好了，空闲的时候可以出去旅游。 4. 这些变化给人们带来了现代化的生活，他们感到很高兴。 将来：请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句) The changes to my hometown 【答案】例文 The changes to my hometown My hometown is Shuyang, Suqian. In the past, the air here was very clean. The environment was very good. The houses were small and old. People went to work on foot or by bike. It used to be a very quiet place. Now things have changed a lot. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. A new railway station has been in use. People can go to the town by bus or by train. With the improvement of the living condition, people can travel in their spare time. But there are fewer trees than before. The environment is not as good as before. The changes have brought young people a modern life. They all feel very happy. I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful. The environment is better than before. We can live a happier life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文要用一般过去时、一般现在时、一般将来时和现在完成时。 ③提示：要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明自己的故乡是哪里，并说明过去的故乡是什么样； ②第二步，讲述自己的故乡现在的样子； ③第三步，展望未来的故乡是什么样子。 [亮点词汇] ①on foot 步行 ②one’s own 某人自己的 ③with the improvement of the living condition 随着生活条件的提高 ④in one’s spare time 在某人空闲时间 [高分句型] ①It used to be a very quiet place. (used to do 过去常常) ②With the improvement of the living condition, people can travel in their spare time. (with结构作伴随状语) ③I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful. (省略that的宾语从句) 9．（23-24八年级下·江苏连云港·期中）我们国家正在迅速发展，生活正变得越来越美好。请根据下表提示，以“Changes Around Us”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 我们周围的变化 旅行 网上旅行；出国旅游； 学习 阅读上更感兴趣；课堂上需要更多的小组合作等； 交通 自驾；乘坐高铁，舒适快捷等； 环境、生活 ……(自拟两点)。 要求： (1)不得使用真实的校名和姓名； (2)短文需包括所有要点，省略号部分适当发挥； (3)词数80词左右。 参考词汇：高铁high-speed trains Changes Around Us Great changes have taken place in our life around us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future. 【答案】例文 Changes Around Us Great changes have taken place in our life around us. As for travel, many people enjoy travelling in their spare time. Some people like travelling online and more and more people can afford to travel abroad. Our studies are also changing. For example, more and more students show an interest in reading and more group work and discussions are done in class, which help us learn more. More and more people have their own cars. At the same time, more and more people prefer to walk to school instead of driving. And high-speed trains make people travel faster and easier. Our environment changes a lot, too. The air is fresher and the water is cleaner. We often take a walk happily in the park. In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文以一般现在时为主。 ③提示：写作要点已以表格形式给出，考生要根据下表提示，以“Changes Around Us”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，点明主旨：我们周围的生活发生了巨大的变化； ②第二步，结合表格给的要点，从旅行、学习、交通和环境、生活方面来介绍发生的改变； ③第三步，总结全文，生活越来越好，要对更好的未来保持期待。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s spare time在某人业余时间 ②show an interest in对……表现出兴趣 ③travel abroad出国旅游 ④prefer to do更喜欢做…… [高分句型] ①For example, more and more students show an interest in reading and more group work and discussions are done in class, which help us learn more. (which引导非限制性定语从句) ②In a word, our life is becoming better and better.(“比较级+比较级”表示“越来越……”) 10．（22-23八年级下·江苏镇江·阶段练习）春天是个适合出游的季节，一群来自澳大利亚的交流学生即将来我校参观。作为东道主，你打算带他们游览句容。请先根据提示给他们写一篇短文介绍句容的情况。 注意： 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 字数100词左右。 1）位于中国东部，中国最美丽的城市之一，历史悠久； 2）自然美景，名胜多，茅山、宝华山是人们放松的好去处； 3）在过去的几年里，句容发生了很大的变化，道路……住房……，通信……；现在环境和生活条件都变得越来越好； 4）春天是游览句容的最好时间，…… 5）句容还有……我希望…… _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Welcome to our school. It’s my great honor to show you around Jurong. Jurong is a very beautiful city, so I believe you will have a good time here. First, Jurong is in the East of China. It is one of the most beautiful cities with a long history. There are many places of interest here. The Maoshan Mountain and the Baohua Mountain are good places for us to relax. In the past few years, there have been great changes in Jurong, such as the roads, the buildings, the environment and the living conditions. Jurong  is becoming better and better, spring is the best time to visit it. I’m very excited about your coming and I hope you will enjoy staying here. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍句容的位置与历史； 第二步，介绍句容的美景； 第三步，介绍句容市的变化； 第四步，介绍游览句容的时间，希望交流生玩得开心。 [亮点词汇] ①places of interest名胜古迹 ②such as例如 [高分句型] ①It is one of the most beautiful cities with a long history.（one of the+形容词最高级） ②In the past few years, there have been great changes in Jurong.（there be及现在完成时的运用） 能力综合实践6篇 11．（22-23八年级下·江苏连云港·期中）你校英语专刊组织了“Changes in people’s life”的征文比赛，假如你是杨玲，请根据以下图片信息用英语写一篇文章，描写人们生活的变化。 要求：1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 30 years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, the life of the people is getting better than before. 【答案】例文： Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 30 years. In the past, people kept in touch with relatives and friends by sending letters. They listened to the radio for news. Besides, students used to ride to school. They had to live in old and small houses. However, now people’s life has changed. They can talk on the telephone or chat online. When they are free, they can watch TV to relax. What’s more, a lot of families are rich enough to drive their children to school. More and more people have lived in tall buildings with many floors. In a word, the life of the people is getting better than before. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文，为记叙文； ②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据图片信息，描写过去和现在人们的生活，突出“变化”；可适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，描写过去人们的生活； 第二步，描写现在人们的生活。 [亮点词汇] ①keep in touch with 保持联系 ②listen to the radio for news 听广播获取新闻 ③used to 过去常常 ④chat online 网上聊天 [高分句型] ①When they are free, they can watch TV to relax.（when引导时间状语从句、不定式表目的） ②What’s more, a lot of families are rich enough to drive their children to school.（“adj enough to do sth”结构） 12．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）近年来，徐州市一直在推广“全民阅读”活动，市民的生活发生了很大的变化。假如你是李华，请根据以下信息用英文向你的英国笔友Simon介绍近年来徐州市开展全民阅读活动的变化与影响。 变化 过去：借书地方少； 书籍种类少； 现在：社区有阅览室； 徐州市图书馆有多种书籍； 影响 越来越多的人认识到阅读的重要性，……（至少一点） 你的感受 ……（至少两点） 注意事项： 1.词数在90个左右，开头和结尾已给出 2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息 Dear Simon, I’d like to tell you something about the activity of Civil Reading in Xuzhou. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Simon, I’d like to tell you something about the activity of Civil Reading in Xuzhou. In the past, People couldn’t find any places to borrow books. They didn’t know where to borrow the books they wanted to read. Besides, there weren’t enough types of books. Over the years, things have changed a lot. There are reading rooms in each community. People can borrow or read books nearby. What’s more, Xuzhou library has become big and modern. We can find all kinds of books. It’s fantastic to enjoy reading there. From this activity, More people have realized the importance of reading. Many of them have developed the habits of reading. Reading makes a full man. They will feel happy and relaxed when reading. For me, I think reading can make me feel confident. It can bring me a lot of knowledge. It’s really helpful to my study, and the most important is that it opens up a whole new world to me. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时” ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生适当完善内容，表达通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作目的。 第二步，讲述阅读的变化和影响。 第三步，表达对于阅读变化和影响的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①What’s more另外 ②fantastic极好的 [高分句型] ①Reading makes a full man.（动名词作主语） ②It’s fantastic to enjoy reading there.（it的句型） 13．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 要求： 1. 内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. Now people can go travelling abroad in their spare time. If they don’t have enough time, they can travel online. Our studies are also changing. For example, more students are interested in reading and group work. They like working together. More and more people have their own cars. And high-speed trains make people travel faster and easier. Also, our environment has changed a lot. The air is fresher and the water is cleaner. We often take a walk happily in the park. In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：本文以一般现在时为主。 ③提示：根据题干中的提示要点介绍我们周围的变化，可适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，点明主旨：我们周围的生活发生了巨大的变化； ②第二步，结合题干中所给的要点，从旅行、学习、交通和环境、生活方面来介绍发生的改变； ③第三步，总结全文，生活越来越好，要对更好的未来保持期待。 [亮点词汇] ①in one’s spare time 在某人业余时间 ②be interested in 对……感兴趣 ③travel abroad 出国旅游 ④look forward to 期待 [高分句型] In a word, our life is becoming better and better. (“比较级+比较级”表示“越来越……”) 14．（23-24八年级下·江苏常州·期中）为鼓励青少年好读书、读好书，中国日报（China Daily）教育版拟举办英语征文竞赛，主题是介绍一本关于中国百年变化的书籍。假设你是李华，请你写一篇英文征文推荐《这里是中国》（Hi I’m China）一书，并写出推荐理由。以下是本书主要内容: Hi I’m China Living conditions: small and old houses→flats/buildings… Travelling: traditional (传统的) travel→online travel Transport: bike and bus→train/plane... Reading: paper books→e-books 注意: 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2. 词数100左右。文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear China Daily, I am writing to recommend (推荐) the book called Hi I’m China. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear China Daily, I am writing to recommend the book called Hi I’m China. It shows us how great changes have taken place in China in the past hundred years. From this book, we can see that Chinese are enjoying a much more comfortable life than before. For example, many people have already moved into flats or tall buildings from small and old houses. As for travelling, we do not need a tour guide any more because an easy click can take us on an online tour quickly at present. Besides, people used to travel around by bike and bus, but we are used to taking the train and plane at present. Moreover, we can notice people reading e-books instead of paper books in daily life in this book. Reading can open up a whole new world to us. I bet Hi I’m China is a good read for everybody to know more about China, a stronger and stronger China. Yours sincerely Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封书信； ②时态：时态以一般现在时为主； ③提示：根据表格内容推荐《这里是中国》这本书，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，详细介绍这本书的内容； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②at present目前 ③instead of而不是 [高分句型] As for travelling, we do not need a tour guide any more because an easy click can take us on an online tour quickly at present. (because引导的原因状语从句) 15．（22-23八年级下·江苏南京·期末）随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。进入初二，我们自己也在发生着改变。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 Changes around us 1. going abroad 2. traveling online 3. using computers and mobile phones …… Changes of me 1. doing more reading 2. giving a helping hand 3. protecting the environment …… 注意： 1. 必须包括所有要点 ，可以适当发挥，使短文语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 不少于 80词，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 Great changes have taken place around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great changes have taken place around us. With the development of the society, people like going abroad. A lot of people enjoy traveling in their spare time. Some people like traveling online. Also, people are fond of using computers and mobile phones. As for me, I like doing more reading, which can increase my knowledge and expand my horizons. I also like giving a helping hand and protecting the environment. Because they make the world a better place. In a word, our life is changing and becoming more and more beautiful and colorful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，介绍我们身边的变化和自己的变化； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“旅游、电子设备”等方面介绍我们身边的变化，从“兴趣爱好、行为习惯”等方面介绍自己的变化； 第三步，书写结语，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①a lot of许多 ②be fond of喜欢 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] As for me, I like doing more reading, which can increase my knowledge and expand my horizons.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） 16．（22-23八年级下·江苏扬州·阶段练习）汽车作为人类的伟大发明之一，给人们的生活带来了很大的便利。 随着经济的快速发展，越来越多的人买得起汽车了。然而，越来越多的汽车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“汽车的利与弊”为主题，写一篇作文。 要点： 优点：1. 人们可以节省时间，不必花费长时间等公交车； 2. ……。 缺点：1. 汽车的数量变多，浪费能源； 2. ……。 3.说说你自己的看法。 要求：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.短文须包括所有内容要点，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.词数 100 左右，文章开头已写好，不计入总词数。 With the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy cars. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy cars. On one hand, private cars have many advantages. As we know, people can save time. They don’t need to spend much time waiting for the bus. Moreover, private cars make it easier for people to travel. They can enjoy the beautiful view along the road. Every coin has two sides. On the other hand, private cars also have a lot of disadvantages. First, the number of private cars is becoming larger. They waste too much energy, at the same time, they pollute the environment. Second, more accidents have happened. Because of the drivers’ carelessness, many people lost their lives. In my opinion, we should use private cars properly. When we drive, we must be more careful. If we go somewhere not far, we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving. They can enjoy the beautiful view along the road. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍汽车的普遍以及受欢迎； 第二步，介绍它的优点和缺点； 第三步，介绍自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①spend time doing sth花费时间做某事 ②the number of……的数量 ③at the same time同时 ④because of因为 [高分句型] ①Moreover, private cars make it easier for people to travel.（动词不定式作宾语） ②If we go somewhere not far, we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.（if引导条件状语从句） 2 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 1 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit1 Past and present 单元主题（时代变迁）写作满分范文16篇 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练5篇 1．（23-24八年级下·江苏淮安·期中）假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。 提示： 生活中变化 （1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。 （2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。 （3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。 自己的变化 （1）去了许多名胜古迹，例如…… （2）比以前更加喜爱阅读，阅读的益处：…… （3）……，……（变化及感受） 要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2）词数80个左右； 3）展开的内容需合理想象，用自己的话补充完整。 The Changes _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（23-24八年级下·江苏苏州·期中）我们日常的课本学习不仅能学到知识，而且也会改善着我们的生活习惯。只要我们有一颗上进心，就一定会带来很大的变化。请根据下面表格提供的信息，以“My Changes”为题用英语写一篇短文，向同学介绍你的变化并简要说明理由。 过去 1.花很多时间打游戏；2.讨厌看书 现在 1.喜欢旅行；2.爱好看书；3.…… 原因 1.旅游帮助你了解世界，享受自然之美 2.读书帮助你…… 要求：1、注意语句通顺，条理清晰； 2、词数 90 左右，必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，省略号部分适当发挥； 3、文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名等。 My Changes __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（23-24八年级下·江苏南通·期末）在八年级即将结束之际, 八（1）班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请根据下表信息提示，为David准备一份演讲稿，具体内容如下： 过去 现在 学习 很少阅读…… 勤读书放松自己…… 环保 浪费水电…… 意识到环保的重要性…… 礼仪 大声喧哗…… 举止礼貌…… 爱心 不会关心他人…… 为贫困地区…… 展望未来      注意： 1、词数90词左右。（文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。） 2、省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and have made great progress in many ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 4．（23-24八年级下·江苏扬州·期末）八（9）班将举行一次主题班会，畅谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Tom 准备一份演讲稿，具体内容如下表： 过去 现在 学习 读书少，花时间在…… 喜欢读书，原因…… 礼仪 插队、喧哗 举止文明…… 爱心 不知道关心他人 参加慈善活动     展望未来      要求： 1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯 2）必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 Hello, everyone. I’m Tom from Class 9, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for listening! 5．（23-24八年级下·江苏淮安·期中）假设你叫李华，近期你的学校举行了一次名为“The Changes”的征文活动，你打算参加并列出写作提纲如下。字数80左右。 提示： 生活中变化 1）以前工厂向河里倾倒垃圾，现在政府已经采取措施改善环境。 2）以前住在低矮破旧的房子，现在已经搬进高大现代的公寓。 3）以前家里只有自行车，现在很多家庭有轿车。 自己的变化 1）去了许多名胜古迹，忍不住拍了很多照片。 2）比以前更加喜爱阅读。 3）阅读的益处…… 要求：1）内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯； 2）词数80个左右； 3）展开的内容需合理想象，用1句话补充完整。 The Changes ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练5篇 6．（23-24八年级下·江苏无锡·期中）上周五，你们班就“过去和现在”生活各方面的变化进行了一次热烈的讨论．请根据讨论内容，以Past and present为题写一篇短文． 注意事项： 1. 作文必须表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥；语句通顺，上下文连贯； 2. 词数80个左右，作文开头已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得提及真实人名、校名等相关信息。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（22-23八年级下·江苏泰州·阶段练习）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护，无论城市还是农村，环境条件、人的意识都发生了很大的变化。请你根据提示材料，对你所居住的小镇的变化做一些描述。 past 1. roads…  2. living conditions…  3. environment…   4. transport…    present 1. life: (自拟1-2点) 2. transport: (自拟1-2点) 3. travelling: the best time to visit my hometown… future (自拟1-2点) 要求： 1.字迹工整、规范； 2.字数：100词左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。 Great Changes in My Hometown In recent years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. I have seen the changes myself. In the past, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Now people are enjoying a comfortable life. 8．（22-23八年级下·江苏宿迁·阶段练习）根据所给内容，以“The changes to my hometown”为题，写一篇短文。 要求： 1. 字迹工整； 2. 要点全面；   3. 分段写作；    4. 注意时态；   5. 字数80词左右。 要点： 过去： 1. 空气清新，环境很好； 2. 房屋小、旧，人们走路或骑车上班； 3. 曾经是个宁静的地方。 现在： 1. 住房宽敞明亮，很多人有了自己的小汽车； 2. 人们可以坐公交车或火车去城里； 3. 生活条件好了，空闲的时候可以出去旅游。 4. 这些变化给人们带来了现代化的生活，他们感到很高兴。 将来：请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句) The changes to my hometown 9．（23-24八年级下·江苏连云港·期中）我们国家正在迅速发展，生活正变得越来越美好。请根据下表提示，以“Changes Around Us”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 我们周围的变化 旅行 网上旅行；出国旅游； 学习 阅读上更感兴趣；课堂上需要更多的小组合作等； 交通 自驾；乘坐高铁，舒适快捷等； 环境、生活 ……(自拟两点)。 要求： (1)不得使用真实的校名和姓名； (2)短文需包括所有要点，省略号部分适当发挥； (3)词数80词左右。 参考词汇：高铁high-speed trains Changes Around Us Great changes have taken place in our life around us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, our life is becoming better and better. We look forward to a better future. 10．（22-23八年级下·江苏镇江·阶段练习）春天是个适合出游的季节，一群来自澳大利亚的交流学生即将来我校参观。作为东道主，你打算带他们游览句容。请先根据提示给他们写一篇短文介绍句容的情况。 注意： 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯； 展开合理想象，作适当发挥； 字数100词左右。 1）位于中国东部，中国最美丽的城市之一，历史悠久； 2）自然美景，名胜多，茅山、宝华山是人们放松的好去处； 3）在过去的几年里，句容发生了很大的变化，道路……住房……，通信……；现在环境和生活条件都变得越来越好； 4）春天是游览句容的最好时间，…… 5）句容还有……我希望…… _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 能力综合实践6篇 11．（22-23八年级下·江苏连云港·期中）你校英语专刊组织了“Changes in people’s life”的征文比赛，假如你是杨玲，请根据以下图片信息用英语写一篇文章，描写人们生活的变化。 要求：1. 词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文章应包括所给内容要点，可适当增加细节，使文章连贯； 3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。 Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the past 30 years. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In a word, the life of the people is getting better than before. 12．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）近年来，徐州市一直在推广“全民阅读”活动，市民的生活发生了很大的变化。假如你是李华，请根据以下信息用英文向你的英国笔友Simon介绍近年来徐州市开展全民阅读活动的变化与影响。 变化 过去：借书地方少； 书籍种类少； 现在：社区有阅览室； 徐州市图书馆有多种书籍； 影响 越来越多的人认识到阅读的重要性，……（至少一点） 你的感受 ……（至少两点） 注意事项： 1.词数在90个左右，开头和结尾已给出 2.不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息 Dear Simon, I’d like to tell you something about the activity of Civil Reading in Xuzhou. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 13．（23-24八年级下·江苏徐州·期中）随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。学校英语角本周的主题是“Changes around us”。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 要求： 1. 内容完整，语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 词数80左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 In the past few years, great changes have taken place around us. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（23-24八年级下·江苏常州·期中）为鼓励青少年好读书、读好书，中国日报（China Daily）教育版拟举办英语征文竞赛，主题是介绍一本关于中国百年变化的书籍。假设你是李华，请你写一篇英文征文推荐《这里是中国》（Hi I’m China）一书，并写出推荐理由。以下是本书主要内容: Hi I’m China Living conditions: small and old houses→flats/buildings… Travelling: traditional (传统的) travel→online travel Transport: bike and bus→train/plane... Reading: paper books→e-books 注意: 1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称; 2. 词数100左右。文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear China Daily, I am writing to recommend (推荐) the book called Hi I’m China. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely Li Hua 15．（22-23八年级下·江苏南京·期末）随着社会的发展，我们的生活变得越来越好。进入初二，我们自己也在发生着改变。请你根据下表中的提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。 Changes around us 1. going abroad 2. traveling online 3. using computers and mobile phones …… Changes of me 1. doing more reading 2. giving a helping hand 3. protecting the environment …… 注意： 1. 必须包括所有要点 ，可以适当发挥，使短文语言通顺，意思连贯； 2. 不少于 80词，文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 Great changes have taken place around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．（22-23八年级下·江苏扬州·阶段练习）汽车作为人类的伟大发明之一，给人们的生活带来了很大的便利。 随着经济的快速发展，越来越多的人买得起汽车了。然而，越来越多的汽车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢？请以“汽车的利与弊”为主题，写一篇作文。 要点： 优点：1. 人们可以节省时间，不必花费长时间等公交车； 2. ……。 缺点：1. 汽车的数量变多，浪费能源； 2. ……。 3.说说你自己的看法。 要求：1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称； 2.短文须包括所有内容要点，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范； 3.词数 100 左右，文章开头已写好，不计入总词数。 With the development of economy, more and more people can afford to buy cars. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新课程，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$