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2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit1 Home 单元话题（家）写作满分范文18篇（紧贴新教材主题） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练6篇 1．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于你梦想中的家的短文。 1. 描述你梦想中的家的位置和外观； 2. 介绍家里的房间和设施； 3. 说说你为什么喜欢这样的家。 要求：不少于 60 个单词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设现在是晚上七点，你的家人都在做不同的事情。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文描述他们正在做的事情。 提示： 1. 爸爸正在看报纸。 2. 妈妈正在厨房做饭。 3. 姐姐正在房间里听音乐。 4. 弟弟正在客厅玩玩具。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，语法正确。 2. 不少于 50 个单词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．漫漫人生路，只要有父母陪伴，不管走到哪里，都是一场温暖的旅程。父母是我们最熟悉的亲人，请根据以下思维导图的提示，并以“Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题写一篇英文短文。 Be Thankful to Our Parents ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．根据以下提示，写一篇关于你梦想家园的短文。 1. 你梦想的家园在一个小镇上。 2. 它是一座有花园的大房子。 3. 房子里有一个大客厅、一个厨房、三个卧室和两个卫生间。 4. 花园里有许多花和树，还有一个游泳池。 5. 你可以在花园里散步、赏花，还可以在游泳池里游泳。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．每年的5月15日为国际家庭日 (International Day of Families)。假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办家庭教育周，现面向全体同学发起征文。请你以“I Love My Family”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，介绍一下你的家庭和家庭成员。 内容包括： (1) 你的基本信息(姓名、年龄……)； (2) 家庭成员的基本信息(长相、职业、爱好……)； I Love My Family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．下周，学校将举行“和谐家庭”主题演讲活动。假如你是李佳乐，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你自己和你的家人。 My Family My name, age (12岁)... My family members and their jobs Our likes or activities ... 参考词汇：farmer 农民；office worker办公室职员 写作要求： 1）文中须包含所给的所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2）短文通顺连贯，语言表达准确，书写规范整洁； 3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4）词数70左右。 My Family _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 进阶拓展训练6篇 7．假设你是李明，你正在为学校的校报写一篇关于你梦想家园的文章。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。 1. 你想住在海边的一个小镇上； 2. 房子是一座两层的小楼，有一个大花园； 3. 房子里有一个书房和三个卧室； 4. 你想和父母一起住在那里，周末可以一起在海滩上散步。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．某英语报社就“青少年与父母关系”这一话题展开调查和征文活动，希望帮助缓解青少年与父母的关系。假设你是花都中学的一名学生，请你根据以下调查结果并结合实际写一篇英文短文投稿，谈一谈当代青少年的焦虑和希望，并表达你的看法。 Teenagers’ worries Teenagers’ wishes ✹too many rules ✹pay much attention to the scores ✹little communication ✹more personal space ✹better understanding ✹... 注意事项： （1）适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法； （2）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 As we grow older day by day, we find there are more problems between our parents and us.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．假如你是王平，英语课上，你班开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论。请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一下你们的讨论结果以及你自己的观点。 *Spend more time with family *Share happiness and worries *Remember family’s birthdays *Your idea… 参考词汇：cheer…up, support each other, prepare gifts 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Hello, everyone. Recently, our class have a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class. Here are some of our ideas. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．你校英文网站正在举行“与家人共度的欢乐时光（Family Fun Time）”分享活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈一谈什么时候是你和家人相处的欢乐时光，通常你和家人一起做什么以及你的感受。 提示词语: activities, share, cook, warm, love 提示问题： ·When is your family fun time? ·What do you often do together? ·How do you feel about having family fun time with your family? My name is Li Hua. I’m from Class 1, Grade 7. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．学校举办了一期以“介绍我的家庭”为主题的国际生交流活动。请你从下方表格左栏中选取至少两个要点，写一篇英语文章，描述你的家庭和家庭生活，在交流活动中作介绍。 写作要点 参考内容 Family members Who are they? What are their jobs? … Family activities What do you like to do together? … A family moment Who is there? What are you doing? How do you feel? … Useful expressions: ◆There are four people ...    They are... ... years old.    ... is a doctor. ◆We like to …    We often … ◆This photo shows ...     You can see ...    I feel ... 要求：（1）文章内容需要包括表格左边栏的至少两个要点，表格右边栏的内容供你参考，表格下方的Useful expressions供你选择使用。 （2）自己可适当发挥，词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 （3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 Hello, every one. I’m very happy to introduce my family to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．假如你是李华（Li Hua），请给你在美国的网友David写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的家庭生活（重点围绕 a family moment这个主题）。 要求如下： 1. 邮件内容健康。 2. 内容至少包括： 1）表达关心问候； 2）你的家庭成员； 3）你的家庭生活片段（family moment）； 4）你的家庭生活感受； 3. 不能出现你的学校名称和你的真实姓名。 4. 词数不少于80。 Dear David, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 能力综合实践6篇 13．某英文杂志正在举办一期主题为“我理想的家”的征文比赛。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，描述一下你心目中理想的家的样子以及你在这里能做的事情。 提示词语：big, comfortable, play, enjoy 提示问题：· What is your dream home like? Please describe it. · What can you do in your dream home? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．随着淮安成功创建全国文明城市，我们的家园越来越美，越来越宜居。适逢学校举办英语征文竞赛，其主题为My dream home。请以此为题并根据以下要点写一篇短文，介绍你理想中的家园。 Environment (环境) 1. near a park 2. many flowers, trees, birds 3. fresh air, clean street House 1. large, with 4 rooms, comfortable to live 2. like the balcony best because… Neighbours 1. kind and friendly, many volunteers 2. help with all kinds of problems 3. … Activities … 注意： (1)词数：80左右。短文的开头已写好，不计入总词数； (2)短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 My dream home Hello, I’m happy to tell you something about my dream home. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．1. 比较一下城市公寓、乡村农舍和城镇房屋的优缺点。 2. 如果你可以选择，你愿意住在哪个国家的哪种类型的房子里，为什么？ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16．假设你是李华，你所在的阳光校区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。 注意事项： 1.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥。 Dear Sir, Dear Sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 17．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Home为题写一篇小短文。 要求： 1、词数不少于80个； 2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。 4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 18．假设你是一位设计师，设计一座你心目中理想的家园。请从家园的位置、外观、内部结构、设施等方面进行描述，不少于80个单词。                                                                      My Ideal Home _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 11 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 2024-2025学年一线教师制作新教材同步精品系列资料，已编校！ 学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________ Unit1 Home 单元话题（家）写作满分范文18篇（紧贴新教材主题） 说明：此专题分三个难度层次，基础入门训练<进阶拓展训练< 能力综合实践，老师根据学生实际情况进行针对性难度训练。 基础入门训练6篇 1．请根据以下提示，写一篇关于你梦想中的家的短文。 1. 描述你梦想中的家的位置和外观； 2. 介绍家里的房间和设施； 3. 说说你为什么喜欢这样的家。 要求：不少于 60 个单词。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Dream Home My dream home is by the sea. It is a big white house with blue windows. There is a big garden around the house. There are many beautiful flowers and tall trees in the garden. Inside the house, there is a big living room, a kitchen, five bedrooms and three bathrooms. The living room has a big sofa and a big TV. We can watch movies and have parties in it. The kitchen is very modern and has all kinds of appliances. My bedroom is on the second floor. It is very big and has a big bed and a balcony. I can enjoy the beautiful sea view from the balcony. I like this home because I love the sea and the fresh air. I can play on the beach and enjoy the sunshine every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己梦想中家的位置和外观； 第二步，介绍家里的房间和设施； 第三步，说明你为什么喜欢这样的家。 [亮点词汇] ①all kinds of ...各种各样的…… ②on the second floor 在二楼 [高分句型] I like this home because I love the sea and the fresh air. (because引导原因状语从句) 2．假设现在是晚上七点，你的家人都在做不同的事情。请根据以下提示，写一篇短文描述他们正在做的事情。 提示： 1. 爸爸正在看报纸。 2. 妈妈正在厨房做饭。 3. 姐姐正在房间里听音乐。 4. 弟弟正在客厅玩玩具。 要求： 1. 语句通顺，语法正确。 2. 不少于 50 个单词。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 It’s seven o’clock in the evening. My family are all at home. My father is reading a newspaper. My mother is cooking in the kitchen. My sister is listening to music in her room. My brother is playing with toys in the living room. We are all having a good time. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；   ②时态：时态为“现在进行时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，引出本文主题；   第二步，介绍家人正在做的事情。   [亮点词汇]   ①at home在家   ②read a newspaper看报纸   ③listen to music听音乐 [高分句型]   ①My father is reading a newspaper.（现在进行时） 3．漫漫人生路，只要有父母陪伴，不管走到哪里，都是一场温暖的旅程。父母是我们最熟悉的亲人，请根据以下思维导图的提示，并以“Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题写一篇英文短文。 Be Thankful to Our Parents ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Be Thankful to Our Parents Our parents love us more than anybody else in the world. They try to take good care of us in our daily life and help us with our lessons. They communicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset. They encourage us when we fail in the exam. When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems. Thanks to them, we grow up healthily and happily. Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we are supposed to study hard and try not to make them worry about us. All in all, we should always be grateful to our parents and do what we can to thank them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇议论文，是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。文章开篇直接点明父母对我们的爱超过他人，引出下文对父母付出的阐述及感恩父母的讨论。 第二步，具体阐述。先详细描述父母在生活、学习、心理等方面对我们的付出；后从家务、态度、学业三方面提出感恩父母的措施，分析各措施对让父母开心及感恩的意义。 第三步，书写结语。总结呼吁要感恩父母并付诸行动，升华主题，强化感恩父母的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of 照顾 ②communicate with 与……交流 ③cheer up 使高兴 ④upset 沮丧的 ⑤encourage 鼓励 ⑥solve the problems ⑦be supposed to 应该 ⑧ be grateful to 感激 [高分句型] When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems.（时间状语从句） 4．根据以下提示，写一篇关于你梦想家园的短文。 1. 你梦想的家园在一个小镇上。 2. 它是一座有花园的大房子。 3. 房子里有一个大客厅、一个厨房、三个卧室和两个卫生间。 4. 花园里有许多花和树，还有一个游泳池。 5. 你可以在花园里散步、赏花，还可以在游泳池里游泳。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Home My dream home is in a small town. It is a big house with a beautiful garden. The house has a large living room, a kitchen, three bedrooms and two bathrooms. The living room is very spacious and bright. There is a comfortable sofa and a big TV. The kitchen is modern and well-equipped. The garden is full of various flowers and trees. There is also a swimming pool. I can take a walk and enjoy the flowers in the garden. And I can swim in the pool to relax myself. I love my dream home very much and I hope it can come true one day. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍梦想家园在哪； 第二步，具体描述房子的情况； 第三步，最后介绍你可以在花园里做的事情。 [亮点词汇] ①spacious and bright 宽敞明亮 ②be full of 充满 ③come true 实现 [高分句型] I love my dream home very much and I hope it can come true one day.（and并列句） 5．每年的5月15日为国际家庭日 (International Day of Families)。假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办家庭教育周，现面向全体同学发起征文。请你以“I Love My Family”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，介绍一下你的家庭和家庭成员。 内容包括： (1) 你的基本信息(姓名、年龄……)； (2) 家庭成员的基本信息(长相、职业、爱好……)； I Love My Family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I Love My Family My name is Li Hua. I am a student in Grade Seven. I have a big family. My father is very handsome. He is an English teacher and he works in a middle school. He likes reading every day. My mother is beautiful and kind. She is a doctor. She can play ping-pong very well! I have a seven-year-old sister. She has big eyes and she is not tall or short. She loves reading too. We have a lot of fun together. My grandparents live with us. We spend a lot of time playing Chinese chess. I love my family. What is fun about your family? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的基本信息； 第二步，介绍家庭成员的信息，包括长相，职业和爱好； 第三步，点题，表达爱自己的家。 [亮点词汇] ①seven-year-old七岁的 ②spend some time doing sth.花费时间做某事 [高分句型] She has big eyes and she is not tall or short.（and并列复合句） 6．下周，学校将举行“和谐家庭”主题演讲活动。假如你是李佳乐，请你根据下面的提示和要求，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍你自己和你的家人。 My Family My name, age (12岁)... My family members and their jobs Our likes or activities ... 参考词汇：farmer 农民；office worker办公室职员 写作要求： 1）文中须包含所给的所有要点提示，可适当发挥； 2）短文通顺连贯，语言表达准确，书写规范整洁； 3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 4）词数70左右。 My Family _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Family Hello, my name is Li Jiale, I’m twelve years old. I’m a student in Grade Seven. Let me tell you about my family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my sister and I. My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor. My sister is a student in Grade Eight. We’re in the same school. My family like sports. We often do sports at night, such as running and walking. Sometimes we play games at home. I love my family. That’s all. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的个人信息并引出主题； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，介绍家庭成员的相关信息； 第三步，表达热爱自己的家人，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②at home在家 [高分句型] ①There are four people in my family.（there be句型） ②My father is a worker, and my mother is a doctor.（and连接并列句） 进阶拓展训练6篇 7．假设你是李明，你正在为学校的校报写一篇关于你梦想家园的文章。请根据以下提示，写一篇不少于 80 词的短文。 1. 你想住在海边的一个小镇上； 2. 房子是一座两层的小楼，有一个大花园； 3. 房子里有一个书房和三个卧室； 4. 你想和父母一起住在那里，周末可以一起在海滩上散步。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Dream Home I’d like to live in a small town by the seaside. There is a two-floor building as my home. It has a big garden. There is a study and three bedrooms in the house. I want to live there with my parents. On weekends, we can take a walk on the beach together. I think it will be very wonderful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中给出的关键信息，写短文介绍自己梦想中的家园。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己梦想住在什么地方； 第二步，介绍梦想中的家的样子； 第三步，收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①live in 住在 ②by the seaside 在海边 ③want to do sth. 想要做某事 [高分句型] ①There is a two-floor building as my home.（There be句型） ②I think it will be very wonderful.（省略that的宾语从句） 8．某英语报社就“青少年与父母关系”这一话题展开调查和征文活动，希望帮助缓解青少年与父母的关系。假设你是花都中学的一名学生，请你根据以下调查结果并结合实际写一篇英文短文投稿，谈一谈当代青少年的焦虑和希望，并表达你的看法。 Teenagers’ worries Teenagers’ wishes ✹too many rules ✹pay much attention to the scores ✹little communication ✹more personal space ✹better understanding ✹... 注意事项： （1）适当发挥，并谈谈自己的想法； （2）词数80左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）； （3）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 As we grow older day by day, we find there are more problems between our parents and us.   ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： As we grow older day by day, we find there are more problems between our parents and us. The first problem is that there are too many rules at home. Our parents don’t allow us to go out with our friends at night and they don’t allow us to choose our own clothes. What’s more, they pay much attention to the scores. If we have bad grades, they will get mad. Besides, we have little communication and I think parents don’t understand us. Most of our teenagers hope that we can have more personal space so that we can do what we like. We also hope that there will be better understanding between us and our parents. What’s important, we are desired to have the chance to make decisions by ourselves. As far as I am concerned, both we and our parents should work together to have a good relationship. It’s no good requiring everything to go our way. Remember to be a little more patient when meeting problems. Try spend more time talking with each other, and we all can learn how to get on well with each other. Part of growing up is to learn to live with trouble and try to deal with it. I believe we can overcome all the difficulties and live a happy life. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的内容，结合实际写短文谈谈当代青少年的焦虑和希望，并发表自己的看法。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点明与父母之间有很多问题； 第二步，介绍青少年的焦虑； 第三步，介绍青少年的愿望； 第四步，发表自己的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①day by day 一天天，逐日 ②between ... and ... 在……和……之间 ③allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事 ④what’s more 更重要的是 ⑤as far as I am concerned 就我个人而言 [高分句型] ①The first problem is that there are too many rules at home.（that引导表语从句；there be句型） ②If we have bad grades, they will get mad.（if引导条件状语从从句） ③Most of our teenagers hope that we can have more personal space so that we can do what we like.（that引导的宾语从句；so that引导目的状语从句） 9．假如你是王平，英语课上，你班开展了一次以“What can we do to make home a happier place?”为主题的讨论。请你根据以下提示内容，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享一下你们的讨论结果以及你自己的观点。 *Spend more time with family *Share happiness and worries *Remember family’s birthdays *Your idea… 参考词汇：cheer…up, support each other, prepare gifts 要求： 1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于60词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Hello, everyone. Recently, our class have a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class. Here are some of our ideas. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone. Recently, our class have a discussion about what we can do to make home a happier place in our English class. Here are some of our ideas. Some say it’s a good idea to spend more time with family. They believe family members should share happiness and worries. When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up. Home is always the first place for us to get help and support. Others think that it’s necessary to remember family’s birthdays and prepare small presents. The feeling of being loved can bring us more pleasure. In my opinion, showing love for family is really important. Sometimes, even the smallest thing like walking with family makes them happier. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的提示，并适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“如何使家庭充满快乐”来引出下文中的讨论结果； ②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“和家人待在一起、分享快乐和忧伤以及记得家人的生日”三方面入手，重点介绍如何使家庭充满快乐； ③第三步，书写结语。表达自己的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①cheer sb up 使某人振奋 ②in one’s opinion 在某人看来 [高分句型] ①They believe family members should share happiness and worries.（宾语从句） ②When they meet problems, we can do something to cheer them up.（when引导的时间状语从句） 10．你校英文网站正在举行“与家人共度的欢乐时光（Family Fun Time）”分享活动。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈一谈什么时候是你和家人相处的欢乐时光，通常你和家人一起做什么以及你的感受。 提示词语: activities, share, cook, warm, love 提示问题： ·When is your family fun time? ·What do you often do together? ·How do you feel about having family fun time with your family? My name is Li Hua. I’m from Class 1, Grade 7. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My name is Li Hua. I’m from Class 1, Grade 7. I am happy to share my family fun time with you. Now, let me talk about my family fun time! It is on Friday night, It is a wonderful time for us to enjoy family activities. They can make us love each other deeply. We often cook together and share our delicious meals. We always talk to one another while having a big dinner. Watching movies together is also one of my favorite family activities, Sharing different ideas about a movie is exciting. I can know what my parents and my grandparents think. Family fun time is important to me because some of my wonderful memories can make a difference to my life. My family is filled with so much love! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：根据所给的提示问题介绍家庭的欢乐时刻，可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯，注意不要遗漏要点 [写作步骤] 第一步，你家庭的欢乐时刻是什么时候。 第二步，介绍期间的家庭活动(比如聚餐，一起看电影之类)。 第三步，介绍你对家庭欢乐时刻的看法。 [亮点词汇] ①each other相互 ②one of...……之一 ③make a difference to对……产生影响 [高分句型] ①We always talk to one another while having a big dinner. (while引导时间状语从句) ②I can know what my parents and my grandparents think. (what引导宾语从句) 11．学校举办了一期以“介绍我的家庭”为主题的国际生交流活动。请你从下方表格左栏中选取至少两个要点，写一篇英语文章，描述你的家庭和家庭生活，在交流活动中作介绍。 写作要点 参考内容 Family members Who are they? What are their jobs? … Family activities What do you like to do together? … A family moment Who is there? What are you doing? How do you feel? … Useful expressions: ◆There are four people ...    They are... ... years old.    ... is a doctor. ◆We like to …    We often … ◆This photo shows ...     You can see ...    I feel ... 要求：（1）文章内容需要包括表格左边栏的至少两个要点，表格右边栏的内容供你参考，表格下方的Useful expressions供你选择使用。 （2）自己可适当发挥，词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 （3）文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 Hello, every one. I’m very happy to introduce my family to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Possible version 1. Hello, every one. I’m very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family. They are my father and mother, my sister and me. My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. They are very busy. But on weekends, they often take my sister and me out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. There is so much fun. We are so happy. I love my family! Thank you!Possible version 2. Hello, every one. I’m very happy to introduce my family to you. There are four people in my family, my father and mother, my sister and me. My parents are very busy. But they try their best to company my sister and me. On weekends, they often take us out. We like to play games in the park. And we often watch movies together. Look at this photo. My parents are getting ready for a big dinner. We children are learning to cook. We are so happy. I love my family! Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是材料作文。 ②时态：一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，寒暄并引出写作目的，介绍家庭成员。 第二步，详细介绍家庭成员的职业及家庭活动。 第三步，书写结语，对大家的聆听表达感谢。 [亮点词汇] ①take sb. out带某人外出 ②play games玩游戏 ③watch movies看电影 [高分句型] ①There are four people in my family. (there be句型) ②My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher. (and表并列) 12．假如你是李华（Li Hua），请给你在美国的网友David写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你的家庭生活（重点围绕 a family moment这个主题）。 要求如下： 1. 邮件内容健康。 2. 内容至少包括： 1）表达关心问候； 2）你的家庭成员； 3）你的家庭生活片段（family moment）； 4）你的家庭生活感受； 3. 不能出现你的学校名称和你的真实姓名。 4. 词数不少于80。 Dear David, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear David, How is it going? I am so happy to talk with you again. Let me tell something about my family life. There are 4 people in my family. They are my father, mother, sister and I. We all love sports. My father likes playing table tennis. I love playing football. My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer. Every weekend we go out to do sports in the morning. We often talk about something interesting about sports at lunch time or dinner time. From Monday to Friday, we often share something fun in study or work. We enjoy every family moment every day. I love my family and the nice family moment. I am very happy to be with my family. David, can you tell me something about your family moment? Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问候对方； 第二步，介绍自己的家庭成员以及家庭生活片段； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①like doing sth.喜欢做某事 ②be good at擅长 ③talk about谈论 [高分句型] ①There are 4 people in my family.（there be句型） ②My mother is good at playing tennis and my sister is a good swimmer.（and连接并列成分） 能力综合实践6篇 13．某英文杂志正在举办一期主题为“我理想的家”的征文比赛。假设你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，描述一下你心目中理想的家的样子以及你在这里能做的事情。 提示词语：big, comfortable, play, enjoy 提示问题：· What is your dream home like? Please describe it. · What can you do in your dream home? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My dream home My dream home is near the sea. It has three floors and there are twenty rooms in it. It has a big living room and five nice bedrooms. I have a big study of my own. Behind the house, there is a big football field. I can enjoy playing football with my friends there. And I also like walking on the beach with my parents after supper every day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己理想的家的位置，及具体样子； 第二步，介绍在家里可以做什么。 [亮点词汇] like doing sth喜欢做某事 there be有 play football踢足球 [高分句型] ①And I also like walking on the beach with my parents after supper every day. (动名词作宾语) 14．随着淮安成功创建全国文明城市，我们的家园越来越美，越来越宜居。适逢学校举办英语征文竞赛，其主题为My dream home。请以此为题并根据以下要点写一篇短文，介绍你理想中的家园。 Environment (环境) 1. near a park 2. many flowers, trees, birds 3. fresh air, clean street House 1. large, with 4 rooms, comfortable to live 2. like the balcony best because… Neighbours 1. kind and friendly, many volunteers 2. help with all kinds of problems 3. … Activities … 注意： (1)词数：80左右。短文的开头已写好，不计入总词数； (2)短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 My dream home Hello, I’m happy to tell you something about my dream home. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My dream home Hello, I’m happy to tell you something about my dream home. My home is near a park. There are many flowers and trees around my community. People can hear birds singing in the trees. We can enjoy fresh air and clean street. I have a large house with 4 rooms. It is comfortable to live in it. I like the balcony best because I can enjoy the sunshine there. People in this community are kind and friendly. There are many volunteers. We not only get along well, but also help each other with all kinds of problems. People do different activities. Some people jog in the park to keep healthy. Some old people sing operas. Others do square dancing. It is a good place. I hope my dream home can become a real one. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，特别是表格中需要补充的内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，从环境、住所和社区三方面描述你理想中的家园； 第二步，总结收尾，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①like sth best最喜欢某物 ②help sb with sth帮助某人某事 ③each other彼此，互相 ④all kinds of各种各样的 ⑤keep healthy保持健康 [高分句型] ①I like the balcony best because I can enjoy the sunshine there.（because引导的原因状语从句） ②We not only get along well, but also help each other with all kinds of problems.（not only…but also连接的并列成分） 15．1. 比较一下城市公寓、乡村农舍和城镇房屋的优缺点。 2. 如果你可以选择，你愿意住在哪个国家的哪种类型的房子里，为什么？ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Urban apartments are in the city. They are small but have many things nearby, like shops and schools. But they can be noisy. Rural farmhouses are in the countryside. They are big and quiet. You can have a garden. But they are far from shops and schools. Town houses are in towns. They are not too big or too small. They have some space and are close to town centers. They are a good mix of city and countryside. I’d like to choose a farmhouse in China’s countryside. Because I love its quiet and open space. It’s peaceful and beautiful. In addition, I can grow my own food and enjoy nature. It’s a perfect place for me. 【解析】【小题1】城市公寓位于城市，虽然面积不大，但附近有很多设施，比如商店和学校，但可能会很吵。乡村农舍位于乡村，又大又安静，可以拥有一个花园，但离商店和学校很远。城镇房屋，不太大也不太小，有一定的空间，靠近城镇中心，是城市和乡村的良好结合。urban apartments“城市公寓”，rural farmhouses“乡村农舍”，town houses“城镇房屋”，nearby“在附近”，noisy“吵闹的”，far from“离……远”，close to“接近”，a good mix of“……的良好结合”。故填Urban apartments are in the city. They are small but have many things nearby, like shops and schools. But they can be noisy. Rural farmhouses are in the countryside. They are big and quiet. You can have a garden. But they are far from shops and schools. Town houses are in towns. They are not too big or too small. They have some space and are close to town centers. They are a good mix of city and countryside. 【小题2】如果我可以选择，我愿意住在中国的乡村农舍。因为我喜欢安静和开放的空间。乡村农舍宁静而美丽。此外，我可以自己种植食物，享受大自然。这对我来说是个完美的地方。open space“开放的空间”，peaceful“宁静的”，perfect place“完美的地方”。故填I’d like to choose a farmhouse in China’s countryside. Because I love its quiet and open space. It’s peaceful and beautiful. In addition, I can grow my own food and enjoy nature. It’s a perfect place for me. 16．假设你是李华，你所在的阳光校区正在进行“模范家庭”的评选活动，请根据所给图表的内容，给社区中心写一封英文推荐信，向他们推荐你的家庭。 注意事项： 1.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥。 Dear Sir, Dear Sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family...________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Sir, I would like to recommend my family for “Model Family” in our neighbourhood this year. There are five people in my happy family. They are my grandparents, my parents and me. In my family, we respect each other and take care of each other. We all work hard to make progress. In my neighbourhood, we get along well with our neighbours. When we have problems, we are always ready to help. People here are like a big family. What’s more, we think it is important to live a green life, so we try our best to make people know the importance of protecting the environment. Now there are lots of trees and flowers around our neighbourhood. It’s really beautiful. Last but not least, my family members like to work for charity. We often volunteer to help people in need. We have sent them lots of donations. I hope we can get the award. I am looking forward to your answer. Yours Faithfully Jack 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文，根据所给图表的内容写一封推荐信，推荐自己的家庭参加“模范家庭”的评选，要适当发挥。 2. 写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时，用第一人称进行写作。第一段紧接开头，从家庭成员、邻里关系、绿色生活和慈善活动等方面详细说明了参加评选的理由；第二段表达殷切的希望。检查时注意是否遗漏要点，语言表达是否符英文习惯。 17．家是温暖的港湾，是我们成长的摇篮，你的家是什么样子的呢？请以My Home为题写一篇小短文。 要求： 1、词数不少于80个； 2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名，否则以零分计。 4、短文必须写在答卷相应位置上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     I have a tidy and beautiful home. Although it is not very big, it is cozy and warm. In my home, there are two bedrooms, a living room, a study, a bathroom and a kitchen. The living room is where my family spends most of our time together. My father often watches TV there. My mother often stays in the kitchen. She cooks delicious meals for us. I love the smell of her cooking. And I often study in the study. There are many books in my study. I like reading them very much. My bedroom is my favorite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own. This is my home, a safe and comfortable home. I love my home very much. 【详解】【总体分析】 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； 提示：考生应根据提示要点进行书面表达, 不要遗漏要点。应能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等, 清楚连贯地表达自己的思想, 进而完成写作任务。 【写作步骤】 第一步，表明写作意图。引出“My Home”这一话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍家的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语。表达对家的爱。 【亮点词汇】 ① cozy and warm舒适温暖 ② delicious美味的 ③ escape from逃离…… 【高分句型】 ① Although it is not very big, it is cozy and warm.（although引导让步状语从句） ② My bedroom is my favorite place where I can escape from the world and have some peace and quiet of my own.（where引导定语从句） 18．假设你是一位设计师，设计一座你心目中理想的家园。请从家园的位置、外观、内部结构、设施等方面进行描述，不少于80个单词。                                                                      My Ideal Home _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文：                                                                         My Ideal Home I have designed an ideal home that I dream of. It is located by a peaceful lake in the countryside, surrounded by green mountains and beautiful scenery. The appearance of the house is modern and unique. It is a two-story building with large floor-to-ceiling windows that allow plenty of natural light to enter. The roof is covered with solar panels to provide clean energy. The first floor has a spacious living room, a dining room and a kitchen. The living room is decorated with comfortable sofas and a large TV. The kitchen is equipped with advanced appliances and a central island. There is also a guest bedroom and a bathroom on this floor. The second floor has the master bedroom with a balcony overlooking the lake. There are two other bedrooms and a bathroom. Each bedroom has its own closet and study area. The house has a large basement that can be used as a gym or entertainment room. There is also a garage for parking cars. In the backyard, there is a beautiful garden with a swimming pool and a barbecue area. I can enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views here. This is my ideal home, a perfect combination of comfort and functionality. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已经给出，注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，整体介绍心目中理想的家园； 第二步，具体介绍家园的位置、外观、内部结构、设施等方面； 第三步，总结全文。 [亮点词汇] ①plenty of许多，大量的 ②dream of 梦想 ③be equipped with配备 [高分句型] There is also a guest bedroom and a bathroom on this floor. (there is句型) 24 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 25 同步新教材，周周有练习，月月有重点！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$