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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Undoubtedly Mother Nature is always attractive to kids. In our childhood, how often did we turn a deaf ear to our parents’ advice? Very often! Thus, we landed ourselves in a situation where we greatly regretted our act of not having listened to the advice of the wise. Such an unforgettable experience I had at the age of 7 gave me an invaluable lesson, after which I deeply understood why my gentle mother was repeating the boring suggestions and I would try to take her suggestions seriously. In my childhood, I was so crazy about nature that even playing among the colorful flowers in our garden could make my day. Our house was next to the woods which had always stirred up(激起) great curiosity in me in wanting to find out what was within. Every time I saw fascinating butterflies dancing from the woods, my curiosity grew. But my mother didn’t like me wandering off on my own and always ensured that I was within her sight. Even if she allowed me to explore the surrounding area on my own, it was only to be somewhere near the house. Being as curious as the cat, I always desired to explore the woods. It seemed as if my mother had understood my desire, so she had warmed me on lots of occasions never to enter the woods alone. “Mom, can I go out and play in the garden?” I asked. “Sure,” she would reply each time. “Kate, you can play in the garden but you must promise me one thing—only when I’m with you can you go into the woods. There are no cases of animal attacks on humans, but it’s still dangerous for a little kid like you. It’s too easy to get lost in the woods.” “Sure, you’ve said that many times!” I answered without patience at her repeated reminders. 注意：1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “Kate?” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 文章大意 文章讲述了作者小时候对大自然充满热爱，尤其对家旁边的树林充满好奇。母亲担心孩子安全，多次告诫孩子不能独自进入树林，尽管孩子每次都不耐烦地回应，但母亲仍不断提醒。 故事山分析 目标：“我” 渴望探索树林。 阻碍：母亲不允许 “我” 独自进入树林，多次提醒树林危险。 努力：“我” 试图说服母亲让 “我” 进树林，无果后决定独自前往。 结果：“我” 在树林中迷路，陷入恐慌。 意外：母亲及时出现，找到了 “我”。 转折：“我” 从这次经历中认识到母亲的话是正确的，不再对母亲的提醒不耐烦。 结局：“我” 理解了母亲的苦心，以后会认真听母亲的建议。 伏笔以及在续写中的回应 伏笔：母亲多次提醒不能独自进入树林，有危险且容易迷路。回应：“我” 独自进入树林后迷路，验证了母亲的话。 伏笔：“我” 对树林充满好奇，每次看到蝴蝶从树林飞出，好奇心就增长。回应：好奇心驱使 “我” 在一个早晨独自走进树林。 伏笔：母亲不喜欢 “我” 独自乱逛，总是确保 “我” 在她的视线范围内。回应：母亲发现 “我” 不在视线范围内，开始寻找 “我”，最终在树林里找到。 伏笔：“我” 对母亲的反复提醒没有耐心。回应：迷路后 “我” 后悔没有听母亲的话，意识到母亲的提醒是重要的。 伏笔：母亲说虽然没有动物攻击人类的案例，但对小孩仍危险。回应：“我” 在树林里不仅因迷路感到恐惧，还担心可能遇到危险。 续写要点（两段） 第一段：着重描写 “我” 独自进入树林后的情景，如看到的景色、内心的想法和感受，以及发现自己迷路后的惊慌失措。 第二段：描写母亲找到 “我” 时的场景，“我” 的反应，以及母亲的安慰和教导，最后表达 “我” 的感悟和改变。 情感线 起初，“我” 对母亲的提醒不耐烦，充满好奇想要探索树林。进入树林后，“我” 兴奋又好奇，随着迷路，恐惧和后悔逐渐占据内心。母亲出现时，“我” 感到惊喜和安心，最后对母亲充满感激，理解了母亲的苦心，决定以后认真听母亲的建议。 故事线 “我” 因好奇独自进入树林。 “我” 在树林里欣赏景色，沉浸在探索的快乐中。 “我” 发现自己迷路，开始惊慌失措。 母亲在树林中寻找 “我”。 母亲找到 “我”，对 “我” 进行安慰和教导。 “我” 理解了母亲的苦心，有了深刻的感悟。 主旨升华句 From this experience, I truly realized that parents' advice is always full of love and care, and we should cherish and follow it. This unforgettable incident taught me that behind parents' repeated reminders lies their deep - seated concern for our well - being. I came to understand that the seemingly boring words from our parents are actually precious treasures that guide us away from potential dangers. Through this adventure, I learned that listening to our parents is not only a sign of respect but also a way to protect ourselves. This event made me aware that parents' wisdom is like a lighthouse in the dark, leading us to the right path of life. 写作示范一 However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. When my mother was busy with housework, I quietly slipped out of the house and made my way towards the woods. As I stepped into the woods, I was immediately attracted by the beautiful scenery. The tall trees, the colorful wildflowers, and the singing birds made me feel like I had entered a fairy - tale world. I walked deeper and deeper, forgetting all about my mother's warnings. But soon, I realized with horror that I couldn't find the way back. Panic seized me as I ran around, trying to find a familiar path, but all in vain. “Kate?” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. I burst into tears and rushed towards her. “Mom, I'm so sorry. I should have listened to you.” My mother hugged me tightly and said softly, “It's okay, honey. I'm just glad I found you. Remember, I always want to keep you safe.” I nodded, promising myself that I would never ignore her advice again. From that day on, I truly understood the love and care hidden in my mother's words. 写作示范二 However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. Taking advantage of the moment when my mother was occupied, I sneaked into the woods. The fresh air and the mysterious atmosphere made me extremely excited. I chased the butterflies, picked up the fallen leaves, and enjoyed myself to the fullest. But as time passed, I found myself surrounded by strange trees and couldn't figure out the direction. Fear crept into my heart as I realized I was lost. I shouted for help, but only the echo of my own voice replied. “Kate?” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. I was overjoyed and ran towards her as fast as I could. “Mom, I'm so scared. I won't do this again.” My mother stroked my hair gently and said, “Dear, I was so worried about you. You see, it's really dangerous to be here alone.” I looked at my mother with tears in my eyes, knowing that her warnings were for my own good. Since then, I have always listened attentively to my mother's words, understanding that they are filled with her deep love. 参考范文 However, curiosity got the better of me one morning. I summoned up my courage and decided to take a chance. Hardly had I entered the woods when I was totally attracted by the sight. The wandering clouds, the blooming flowers and the vigorous trees all kept me spellbound. At the sight of a beautiful butterfly, I tiptoed along the path, bent over, cupped my hands gently and danced with it down the track. Time flew and before I knew it, I was deep in the woods, unable to find the way out. With a feeling of horror totally holding me in its power, I squatted down under a tree, tears rolling down my cheeks. “Kate?” Behind the trees covered by the rays of the setting sun came my mother’s voice. Hearing my mom’s voice, I yelled in a quivering tone, rushed towards her direction and threw my arms around her. Noticing my misty eyes, she patted me on the shoulders and checked whether I got hurt. Choked with emotion, I whispered, “I am OK, Mom. I will never go into the woods without your company and permission.” Shooting me an approving look, she added, “Next time you want to come, keep me informed!” In the setting sun, we headed back and this time, I held my mom’s hand tightly. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$