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应用文写作万能模板图表作文
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命题立意
问题
应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思;有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。
命题依据
题型分析
从《普通高中英语课程标准》(2017年版2020年修订)中看书面表达要求:
1.审题不清
2.时态混乱
5.结构失衡
6.语法错误
3.拼写错误
7.汉式思维
4.句型单一
8.书写不整洁
学情分析
高阶模板
As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table /picture,____ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/ decreasing from ____ in _____ to _____ in _____. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _____.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for _____.
In one hand, ____.In the other hand_____ is due to the fact
that ______. In addition,______ is responsible for _____. Maybe
there are some other reasons to show ______.But it is generally
believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that _______.
I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
As is shown by the percentage in the picture,the findings reveal that only 4% of the students engage in more than 30 minutes of daily exercise, and an additional 30% manage to maintain a workout duration of 20-30 minutes. However, it is concerning that as many as 60% students exercise for less than 20 minutes. Even more regrettable is that 6% do not participate in any form of physical activity.
There are at least two good reasons accounting for the result. In one hand,the heavy academic workload is
undoubtedly a significant factor contributing to this issue. In the other hand, lack of physical exercise is due to the busy study schedules.Maybe there are some other reasons
to show the consequence,But it is generally believed that
the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.
As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view
that regular physical activity not only improves fitness and boosts learning efficiency, but also alleviates stress and promotes mental health. Therefore, it is preferable for us to keep a balance between study and exercise. I am sure
my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.
(哈三中2024-2025学年度上学期高三学年十月月考)
学校英文报就高三学生体育锻炼情况开展调查。请你根据图表内容,以Sports and Health为题写一篇短文。内容包括:
1.调查结果;2.概述原因;3.你的看法。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
模板套用
通用模板
As the bar chart shows, .(说明图表反映的问题)
Several factors contribute to . And, . Furthermore, . All these result in .(分析问题产生的原因)
However, is faced with some problems. With , the effect of is not only discouraging, but also challenging. So my principle is to pay your attention to , but not just to .(提出解决措施)
As the bar chart shows,half of the students skip meals once a day, and 8 percent several times a week. By contrast, the number of those who never or seldom skip meals accounts for 37% and 5% respectively.
Several factors contribute to the result. And,Some believe that there is not enough time for them to eat. Furthermore, some argue that they take no interest in the food in the cafeteria, which will do great harm to our health. All these result in skipped meals.
My principle is to pay your attention to strengthen the awareness of regular meals through education and activities.It is also preferable for the school to listen to the students’ demands to enrich the variety of dishes and improve the taste of food.
(2024届12月浙江省三校(缙云中学、长兴中学、余杭高级中学)联考)
学校英文报正在开展以“How Often Meals Are Skipped”为题的调查,结果显示绝大多数学生都存在“翘饭”现象,请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿,
内容包括:1.调查结果和评论;2.你的建议。
模板套用
第一部分:描述图表变化趋势的表达
① 描述上升到多少:The mobile-phone subscriptions soared to 4 billion in 2008.
② 描述从多少上升到多少:Conversely, the urban population saw a rising trend, growing from only 300 million to 680 million by 2010.
③ 描述A的上升和B的下降:Domestic cars had a dramatic increase in the market share, as high as 9.8%, while/whereas(然而)Japanese cars declined by nearly 10%.
(by+数据,就是上升/下降了多少,例如declined by nearly 10%就是下降了将近10%,to+数据,是指上升/下降到多少)
④ 描述xx数据排第几:The amount of underground water ranks the second ,the percentage being 30.2%.
⑤ 描述最大占比:We cannot fail to see that the biggest share is acquiring knowledge, accounting for 59.5%.
⑥ 分别描述比例:Meanwhile, it is also not difficult to find that service, environment, price and other factors occupy 26.8%, 23.8%, 8.4% and 4.7% respectively(分别地).
⑦描述两者之间的比较:In comparison with A, B is …
第二部分:分条描述原因
(主要原因)The main reason is that due to (the progress in economy / the improvement of living standards), a growing number of people ……
(第二个原因)What is more, there is no doubt in saying that , with (the pace of modern society speeding up / the advance of technology) , a majority of people (try their best to catch up with the times and improve themselves) by (pursuing further education).
(第三个原因)Thirdly , (under the background of modernization / with the rapid development of economy and society) , xx may have gradually become an unstoppable trend(趋势)in recent years.
形容大环境常用的表达方式
with the progress in economy
with the improvement of living standards
with the pace of modern society speeding up
with the advance of technology
with the rapid development of economy and society
under the background of modernization / urbanization / industrialization
第三部分:意义、影响
积极的:Considering all these, I believe that we should take a reasonable attitude toward xx. In conclusion, from my point of view, such a phenomenon is (positive) and (acceptable).
积极的:Taking into account what has been argued so far, it is not surprising to see the results in the above diagram. Thus, such phenomenon proves to be quite normal and acceptable. And I believe the trend will not change in the near future.
消极的:In view of the description and analysis above, I’m convinced that actions have to be taken to cope with the problems arising from ……
趋势预测:From what has been discussed above, a trend can be predicted from the chart that ……
趋势预测:XX will be a growing trend in today's (busy) society.
评价修改
Self-assessment Peer-assessment self-correction
备考策略-学生篇
重视复盘
针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训
重视阅读
精读与泛读相结合
读书破万卷,下笔如有神
重视细节
规范拼写,坚持练字;
正确运用时态,标点等
重视运用
有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中
重视积累
积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等
备考策略
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重视评改
品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平
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愉
Thank you for your listening !
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