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应用文写作万能模板告知信
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命题立意
问题
应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思;有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。
命题依据
题型分析
从《普通高中英语课程标准》(2017年版2020年修订)中看书面表达要求:
1.审题不清
2.时态混乱
5.结构失衡
6.语法错误
3.拼写错误
7.汉式思维
4.句型单一
8.书写不整洁
学情分析
高阶模板
Dear____________(对方称呼)
How is everything going? (问候语)I am more than delighted to receive your letter in which you asked me about the __________________________(背景) Now,I am writing to tell you some relevant details about it.(写信目的)
The details are as follows. First of all, ____________________. Secondly, ____________________. Additionally, ____________________.
If you have any questions, I would be more than glad to help. Looking forward to your reply.(愿望与结束语)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear John,
How is everything going? I am more than delighted to inform you of the an upcoming community volunteer event that I will be participating in. Now,I am writing to tell you some relevant details about it.
The details are as follows. First of all, we are scheduled to gather at the school entrance at 7:00 a.m. next Sunday, after which we will head to the community from across the school for our voluntary work. Secondly, participants will be divided into several groups, each tasked with the responsibility of cleaning and greening different areas. Additionally, there will also be opportunities for rest and talk, allowing us to deepen our understanding of one another while working together.
If you have any questions, I would be more than glad to help. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(长沙市雅礼中学2025届高三上入学考试)
假定你是李华,你打算下周日参加学校对面的社区组织的义务劳动。请你用英语给你校交换生John写一封邮件,告知他此事,内容包括:
1.时间和地点;2.具体安排;3.发出邀请。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear John,
I am excited to inform you of an upcoming community volunteer event that I will be participating in.
模板套用
通用模板
Dear____________(对方称呼)
Learning that you are interested in________________(活动/组织等),I'm writing to tell you________________(告知的内容).
The detailed information is as follows. Firstly and importantly,____________(具体内容1).Secondly,____________(具体内容2).By the way, you'd better____________(具体内容3).
If you have any other questions, I would be more than glad to help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Tony,
Learning that you are interested in farming, I'm writing to tell you that a farming practice is scheduled to be carried out in Sunshine Farm and you are also invited to get involved.
The detailed information is as follows. Firstly and importantly,the event will start at 9 am this Saturday and is expected to end at 4 pm.Secondly,we will visit the farm and expose ourselves to the farming work. Casual clothes are recommended and sunscreen as well as a drinking cup is also preferable.By the way, you'd better meet us at the school gate at 8:45 on Saturday morning and we will set off by bus.
If you have any other questions, I would be more than glad to help you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(广东佛山2023~2024学年普通高中教学质量检测二)
假定你是校学生会主席李华。你校外教Tony将与学生一起到阳光农场参加务农实践活动,请给Tony写一封邮件,告知活动相关安排。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
模板套用
第一部分:简要写明要告知的事情,引人入胜开头句
1.Knowing that you intend to join in the trip on May Day, I’m delighted to share some relevant information with you.得知你想要参加五一的短途旅行,我写信来告知你一些讯息。
2.So excited that we’ll soon meet and join in the coming-of-age ceremony in our school. Here, I’d like to share with you our plan briefly.
很高兴我们很快就会见面,并参加我们学校的成人仪式。在这里,我想向你简要介绍一下我们的计划。
3.Learning that you inquire about my plans for my summer social practice, I can’t wait to share with you right now/away.
得知你询问我暑期社会实践的计划,我迫不及待地想马上与你分享。
4.I feel greatly honored to be asked to contact you, informing you of our arrangements.
我感到很荣幸受委托与你联系,告知你我们的安排。
5.I feel delighted that you are so interested in the speech contest, so I’m writing to give a brief introduction of it.
我很高兴你对这次演讲比赛感兴趣,所以我写信向你简要介绍一下它的情况。
第二部分:写明告知的具体信息和注意事项,画龙点睛篇中句
1.The trip is scheduled to start at 8:00 am this Sunday. And all the students will gather at our school gate.
行程定于本周日上午8点开始,所有的学生将在我们学校门口集合。
2.In the class, you will mainly learn Tang poetry, which reflects traditional Chinese culture and is deeply loved by Chinese.
在这节课中,主要学习唐诗,唐诗是中国传统文化的反映,深受大众喜爱。
3.There will be a total of 1,000 items to be showed at the exhibition and many of them are traditional Chinese festival decorations such as Spring Festival couplets and lanterns.
此次展览共展出1000件物品,其中许多是中国传统节日的装饰品,如春联和灯笼。
4.The ceremony will kick off with a fabulous lecture delivered by our school headmaster who will congratulate students on entering adulthood and offer practical advice to us.
典礼将以校长的精彩演讲拉开序幕,他将祝贺学生们步入成年,并为我们提供实用的建议。
5.Together with other school volunteers, we will participate in serving communities, circulating knowledge about garbage classification and bringing warmth to the elderly in the nursing home.
我们将与其他学校志愿者一起参与社区服务,传播垃圾分类知识,为养老院的老人带来温暖。
第三部分:写明告知的具体信息和注意事项,画龙点睛篇中句
1. Looking forward to seeing you a second time.
期待再一次见到你。
2. If you want to know anything else, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
如果你还想知道什么,请不要犹豫,与我联系。
3. Hopefully, our efforts will pay off in the end.
希望我们的努力最终会有回报。
4.I’m convinced that it will be treasured memory for us all. Anticipating your presence.
我相信这将是我们所有人珍贵的回忆,期待你的到来。
5. How about your plans for the summer vacation? Really anticipating your sharing.
你的暑假计划如何?很期待你的分享。
评价修改
Self-assessment Peer-assessment self-correction
备考策略-学生篇
重视复盘
针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训
重视阅读
精读与泛读相结合
读书破万卷,下笔如有神
重视细节
规范拼写,坚持练字;
正确运用时态,标点等
重视运用
有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中
重视积累
积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等
备考策略
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重视评改
品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平
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愉
Thank you for your listening !
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