读后续写专题之亲情例题讲解 课件-2025届高三下学期英语二轮复习专项

读后续写之亲情 第一第二练 Steps 1. 读快读准（读段首两句子 -带着目的问题去阅读) 2. 立中心 (四部电影) 3. 析情节与情感线(故事山) 4. 构建情节( 矛盾转折式+直线上升式) 5. 句式描写 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 2 ① The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. ② The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. ③ Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out 熄灭the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 3 侦探查找式阅读 step 1:段首句获取80%信息+标注疑问点 step2:带疑问查找答案 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 4 Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared._________________ _____(双胞胎失望的四处看，爸爸来了)_________________________________________________ Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up._______(双胞胎带着早饭上了楼并叫醒妈妈)___________________________________________________________ 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 高中英语写作 新题型 读后续写 试题再现 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 5 Step 1 Para1 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. 双胞胎失望的四处看，爸爸来了。 失望？爸爸来了？ Para2 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 双胞胎带着早餐走上楼，叫醒了妈妈。 做了早餐？爸爸来了？ 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 6 主题分类 关系类：家人之间的和谐 爱 关心 个人成长类：孩子变得体贴 懂事 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 7 情感态度价值观分析【Why】 人与自我 Never give up until the last moment. 人与人 The love between the family members blossoms like a flower that never fades. Step 2 ① The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. ④As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ⑤The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 六何分析法 When Where Who What The twins planned to make breakfast for their mother on Mother’s Day. How Why 语篇分析 on Mother’s Day morning at home kitchen Jenna and Jeff, father, mother conflict-solution模式 give mother a surprise and show her love 9 语篇分析 Conflict 1 Solution 1 ②... Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. ②... Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan.Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. 10 语篇分析 Conflict 2 Solution 2 ③Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. ③Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 11 语篇分析 Conflict 3 Solution 3 ③Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. ③Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 12 事件分析——Story mountain【How】 Build Up Conflict Solution Beginning Ending Para 1: The twins thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. excited Para 3: The twins faced many cooking challenges,making a mess in the kitchen. panicked, calm, disappointed 续写 Their father appeared... delighted Did they make it? A happy ending? Para 2: Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. optimistic and confident Para.2:The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 续写框架：五五拍戏法 Para.1:As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. 承上 启下 Tip 1：确定演员 Tip 2：确定出场顺序 演员： the twins, the father & mother 承上 演员： the twins & the father 父亲看到厨房情况，询问原因。 双胞胎成功做出来早餐了。 双胞胎解释原因，请求父亲帮助。 在父亲的帮助下，双胞胎挽救早餐。 1 2 3 4 5 ① ② ⑥ ⑦ Tip 3：戏份不够，细节/环境来凑。 情感态度价值观升华 孩子祝母亲节日快乐。 爱充满了整个房间。 母亲很开心直到注意到了Jeff的手。 母亲给了孩子们一个拥抱。 1 2 3 4 5 父亲说明了孩子们的情况。 ③ ④ ⑤ ⑧ ⑨ 故事结局 Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. He looked around the kitchen, a mess of burnt bread and spilled porridge, with a twinkle in his eye. “Well, it seems like you both had an adventurous morning,” he chuckled. ①Looking at the gentle father, Jenna burst into tears, “We just want to make a surprise for Mom today. But we failed.” Meanwhile, Jeff nodded. Then, the father walked over to the twins, patted them on the shoulder, and encouraged:“Come on! I will help you.” ② Encouraged by a newfound sense of confidence, the twins decided to make another attempt. With guidance from the father, they eventually made it. Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and gently woke their mother up. The twins expressed their joy with delighted smiles, saying, “Happy Mother’s Day!” in a cheerful tone, conveying love for their mother on this special occasion. ③Hearing this, the mother was joyful. ④However, her happiness faded as she noticed Jeff’s injured hand, and her throat tightened. ⑤ At the same time, the father told the mother that the children had personally prepared her breakfast. “Never have I been more pleasantly surprised,” she exclaimed, giving them a tight, affectionate hug. A mix of gratitude and love filled the room ⑥as the family shared a Mother's Day breakfast that became a heartwarming and unforgettable moment. Pumpkin (南瓜）carving at Halloween is a family tradition. We visit a local farm every October. In the pumpkin field, I compete with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. My dad has a rule that we have to carry our pumpkins back home, and as the eldest child I have an advantage — I carried an 85-pounder back last year. This year, it was hard to tell whether my prize or the one chosen by my 14-year-old brother, Jason, was the winner. Unfortunately we forgot to weigh them before taking out their insides, but I was determined to prove my point. All of us were hard at work at the kitchen table, with my mom filming the annual event. I’m unsure now why I thought forcing my head inside the pumpkin would settle the matter, but it seemed to make perfect sense at the time. With the pumpkin resting on the table, hole uppermost (最上面), I bent over and pressed my head against the opening. At first I got jammed just above my eyes and then, as I went on with my task, unwilling to quit, my nose briefly prevented entry. Finally I managed to put my whole head into it, like a cork (软木塞) forced into a bottle. I was able to straighten up with the huge pumpkin resting on my shoulders. My excitement was short-lived. The pumpkin was heavy. “I’m going to set it down, now,” I said, and with Jason helping to support its weight, I bent back over the table to give it somewhere to rest. It was only when I tried to remove my head that I realized getting out was going to be less straightforward than getting in. When I pulled hard, my nose got in the way. I got into a panic as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. “I can’t get it out!” I shouted, my voice sounding unnaturally loud in the enclosed space. 注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语 Paragraph 1 I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ______________________________________________ Paragraph 2 That video was posted the day before Halloween. _______________________________________________________ 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. *+3 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 17 step1:研读段首句，获取80%信息 step2: 记录疑问，带疑问查找阅读 获取点：万圣节，我被困，视频被发布网上 疑问点：我为啥被困？（我如何被解救？） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do. The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. 高中英语写作 新题型 读后续写 首句精研 康伟旗舰店 kangwei.tmall.com 18 Para. 1: I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. 我被困在里面五六分钟却感觉十分漫长。 Para. 2: That video was posted the day before Halloween. 那个视频在万圣节之前被放到了网上 情感态度价值观分析【Why】 人与社会 This text conveys positive emotional attitudes, values and the importance of family unity. at Halloween at home Mom dad Jason I compete on the biggest pumpkin 故事要素 When Where What Who Why Reread the story and figure out the plot. I competed with my three brothers and sister to seek out the biggest pumpkin. competitive I forced my head inside the pumpkin. excited I was stuck in the pumpkin. panicked 续写部分 续写部分 Para.2: That video was posted the day before Halloween. 续写框架：五五拍戏法 Para.1: I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. 承上 我大哭起来 父亲帮我把头弄出来，母亲记录这一切 父亲走过来帮我 承上 故事结局 启下 情感态度价值观升华 我尝试保持冷静 全家人一起观看妈妈录的视频 我意识到家庭和睦团结的重要性 兄弟姐妹评价这次特殊的万圣节 一家人开心的讨论着明年的万圣节 1 2 3 4 5 1 2 3 4 5 Tip 1：确定演员 演员： I ,Dad and Mon 演员： the whole family and I Tip 2：确定出场顺序 ① ① ② ② ③ ④ ⑤ ⑥ Tip 3：戏份不够，细节/环境来凑。 ⑦ ⑧ 我感觉尴尬 ⑨ Paragraph 1: I was stuck for five or six minutes though it felt much longer. ①Being trapped inside the pumpkin, I felt a deep sense of fear and helplessness. I cried out loudly. ② A few seconds later, I heard my dad’s steady and strong voice, “Don’t worry, son, let me help you.” ③Then ,he began pounding the top of the pumpkin with the claw of the hammer. I tried to keep calm. My dad helped me remove my head from this pumpkin, ④while my mother recorded it all with great concentration. Paragraph 2: That video was posted the day before Halloween.⑤ In a comfortable living room, the sunshine shone on the curtains. The whole family watched the video, ⑥laughing and enjoying the content. Dad marveled at mom’s cleverness and attention to detail. My sister laughed louder and louder.⑦ However, I felt embarrassed. ⑧Suddenly, all my siblings expressed their gratitude, conveying their heartfelt appreciation through sincere and warm words. And the whole family talked about next year’s Halloween in high spirits. It was very brainstorming and enjoyable. Enjoying the scene, I deeply appreciate the significance of family harmony and unity, ⑨which serves as a warm haven for us to grow together. Homework 1. 报纸合集的P16 2. 明天听写U2方框词汇词组+续写前八个句子 3. 18：35-18：55刷CD阅读 $$