2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从自信到失落：演讲比赛的成长教训 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习 从自信到失落：演讲比赛的成长教训 1 王 均艳 (王) - 题目分析 读后续写 题目再现 范文呈现 努力方向 2 2 Part 1 题目呈现 3 3 续写原文 In the classroom of Class 7, Grade 8, students were excited about an upcoming event. The school had organized a speech competition titled “Ways to Become Successful,” and many students were eager to showcase their public speaking skills. Among them was 13-year-old Zora, who, had already won two speech contests and was full of confidence that she could win again. Zora volunteered to represent her class in the competition, and after a round of voting, she was chosen as the class representative. Although there were only seven days left until the big day, Zora felt a sense of ease about the competition. After all, she had been here before and knew what it took to win. 4 4 续写原文 At home, Zora’s father congratulated her on her achievement, while her mother reminded her to take the competition seriously. Despite her parents’ advice, Zora was convinced that her past successes meant this would be a walk in the park. Her teacher also urged her to prepare diligently, but Zora only sought help once to revise her initial draft. As the days went by, Zora did not put in the necessary effort to refine her speech. When the day of the competition arrived, she was hit with a sudden wave of panic. She couldn’t remember the content of her speech, and as she stepped onto the stage, her anxiety only grew. After delivering the opening lines, she froze, unable to continue. The supportive applause from the audience only added to her confusion, leaving no room for her to recall her prepared words. Zora struggled through the rest of her speech, finishing it in a state of embarrassment and shame. As she walked off the stage, she saw the disappointment in her teacher’s eyes and felt the letdown from her classmates. It was a heavy burden to bear. 5 5 段首句 Paragraph 1: Back at home, Zora could no longer hold back her tears. Paragraph 2: The next day, Zora went to school and apologized to her class. 6 6 Part 2 题目分析 7 7 续写原文分析 8 八年级七班的同学们对学校即将举办的 “走向成功的方法” 演讲比赛充满期待，许多同学都跃跃欲试，想要展示自己的演讲才能。13 岁的佐拉已经赢得过两次演讲比赛，她信心满满，主动报名代表班级参赛，经过投票，她成功当选。距离比赛只剩七天，尽管父母提醒她要认真对待，老师也督促她勤奋准备，但佐拉认为凭借自己以往的经验，这次比赛肯定轻而易举就能获胜，所以只修改了一次演讲稿初稿，之后便没有再投入精力完善演讲内容。比赛当天，佐拉突然感到一阵恐慌，上台后她大脑一片空白，只说了开头几句就忘词了，在观众的掌声中，她更加紧张，最终在尴尬和羞愧中完成了演讲。走下舞台，她看到老师眼中的失望和同学们的失落，内心充满了沉重的负担。 8 点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语； 点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句； 点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语； 点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。 情节构建的重点 9 9 续写思路分析 Paragraph 1: Back at home, Zora could no longer hold back her tears. 回到家，佐拉再也忍不住，泪水夺眶而出。她径直冲进自己的房间，扑倒在床上，放声大哭起来。父母听到哭声，急忙走进房间，坐在她的床边，轻声安慰她。佐拉一边哭一边向父母诉说着比赛的经过，她后悔自己没有听从他们的建议，没有认真准备比赛，才导致了今天这样的结果。父亲轻轻地拍着她的背，温柔地说：“孩子，失败并不可怕，可怕的是你不能从失败中吸取教训。这次经历会让你明白，无论做什么事情，都不能骄傲自满，要脚踏实地，认真对待。” 母亲也在一旁说道：“是啊，宝贝，每个人都会有失败的时候，重要的是你要振作起来，重新开始。” 佐拉听着父母的话，渐渐停止了哭泣，她抬起头，看着父母坚定地说：“我知道了，爸爸妈妈，我以后再也不会这样了。我会从这次失败中吸取教训，努力改正自己的缺点。” 10 10 续写思路分析 Paragraph 2: The next day, Zora went to school and apologized to her class. 第二天，佐拉来到学校，向全班同学道歉。她站在讲台上，深深地鞠了一躬，真诚地说：“同学们，我为我在比赛中的表现感到非常抱歉。我没有认真准备，辜负了大家对我的信任。我知道我的失败让班级失去了一个好机会，我真的很后悔。但是请相信我，我以后一定会更加努力，不再让大家失望。” 同学们听了佐拉的话，纷纷鼓起掌来。班长站起来说：“佐拉，没关系的，谁都有失误的时候。我们相信你以后一定会做得更好。” 其他同学也纷纷表示理解和支持。从那以后，佐拉变得更加勤奋努力，她积极参加各种活动，不断锻炼自己的能力。在下次的演讲比赛中，佐拉凭借着扎实的准备和出色的表现，为班级赢得了荣誉。 11 11 Part 3 范文呈现 12 12 范文呈现 Back at home, Zora could no longer hold back her tears. She rushed straight into her room and threw herself onto the bed, bursting into tears. Her parents heard the crying and quickly walked into the room. They sat on the edge of the bed and gently comforted her. Zora cried and told her parents about the competition. She regretted not listening to their advice and not preparing seriously for the competition, which led to such a result today. Her father gently patted her back and said tenderly, "My child, failure is not terrible. What's terrible is that you can't learn from it. This experience will teach you that no matter what you do, you can't be arrogant and complacent. You should be down - to - earth and take things seriously." Her mother also said, "Yes, my dear, everyone will have failures. The important thing is that you should cheer up and start over." Zora listened to her parents' words and gradually stopped crying. She looked up at her parents and said firmly, "I know, Mom and Dad. I won't be like this again. I will learn from this failure and try my best to correct my shortcomings." 13 13 范文呈现 The next day, Zora went to school and apologized to her class. She stood on the platform and bowed deeply, saying sincerely, "Dear classmates, I'm very sorry for my performance in the competition. I didn't prepare seriously and let you down. I know my failure made our class lose a good chance, and I really regret it. But please believe me, I will work harder in the future and won't disappoint you again." The classmates listened to Zora's words and clapped their hands. The monitor stood up and said, "Zora, it doesn't matter. Everyone makes mistakes. We believe you will do better in the future." Other classmates also expressed their understanding and support. From then on, Zora became more diligent and hard - working. She actively participated in various activities and constantly exercised her abilities. In the next speech competition, Zora won honors for the class with her solid preparation and excellent performance. 14 14 升级版范文呈现 Back at home, Zora could no longer hold back her tears. She dashed straight into her room and flung herself onto the bed, bursting into uncontrollable sobs. Her parents, upon hearing the heart - wrenching cries, immediately rushed into the room. They took a seat on the edge of the bed and tenderly tried to soothe her. Through her sobs, Zora recounted the entire ordeal of the competition to her parents. She deeply regretted not heeding their advice and not putting in the necessary effort to prepare for the competition, which ultimately led to the disastrous outcome. Her father gently patted her back and said in a soft, reassuring tone, "My dear child, failure itself is not the end of the world. What truly matters is your ability to learn from it. This experience should serve as a valuable lesson, reminding you that no matter what task you undertake, you must remain humble and approach it with dedication and earnestness." Her mother chimed in, "Yes, darling, everyone encounters setbacks in life. The key is to pick yourself up, dust yourself off, and start anew." Zora listened intently to her parents' words, and gradually, her sobs subsided. She looked up at her parents with determination in her eyes and said, "I understand, Mom and Dad. I promise I won't repeat this mistake. I'll learn from this failure and strive to improve myself." 15 15 升级版范文呈现 The next day, Zora went to school and mustered the courage to apologize to her classmates. Standing on the platform, she bowed deeply and spoke with sincerity, "Dear classmates, I am truly sorry for my dismal performance in the competition. I failed to prepare adequately and let you all down. I am acutely aware that my failure cost our class a great opportunity, and I am filled with regret. But please have faith in me. I will redouble my efforts in the future and will never disappoint you again." As soon as she finished speaking, the classmates erupted into applause. The monitor stood up and said, "Zora, don't be too hard on yourself. Everyone makes mistakes. We have full confidence in your ability to bounce back and achieve great things." The other classmates also voiced their understanding and support. From that day forward, Zora underwent a remarkable transformation. She became more diligent and proactive, actively participating in a wide range of activities to hone her skills. And in the subsequent speech competition, thanks to her meticulous preparation and outstanding performance, Zora brought honor and glory to the class. 16 16 Part 4 努力方向 17 17 高级结构 名词性从句 高级结构 三连动 虚拟语气 形容词做状语 无灵主语 18 定语从句 状语从句 （包含倒装句） 强调句 副词做状语 非谓语 （包括独立主格） 18 19 Thank you! $$