类别2 经历感受类记叙文(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册（陕西专用）

2025陕西 英 语 话题写作培优册 1 第三部分 写作类别点拨与范文记背 类别二 经历感受类记叙文（2024） 2 常见题目表述 ①我们都收到过礼物，每个礼物的背后或多或少都有一些故事。 那么，你最喜爱的礼物是什么呢？对你来说，它有什么特殊的意 义？请以“A/An __________ Gift”为题，写一篇不少于70词的英 语短文。 3 ②互相帮助是一种美德，请结合下列思维导图，以“Helping Others Makes Me __________”为题，写一篇不少于70词的短文， 谈谈自己的一次助人为乐的经历及感受。 4 ③假如你是李辉，你校官网英文 版块最近开设了一个“Moving Moments”的栏目，现面向全校 学生征集稿件。请结合下面的征 稿启事，用英语写一篇短文投稿， 描述一个令你难忘的感人瞬间。 5 ④尝试是一种积极的生活态度，它让我们在面对困难时不退缩， 不逃避，而是积极地去寻找解决问题的方法。只有敢于尝试，我 们才能突破自我，实现更大的成就。请你结合自身体验描述一次 挑战自我的经历。内容包括： 1.你曾经尝试过做什么？ 2.你是如何突破自我的？ 3.这次尝试给你的启示是什么？ 6 ⑤在成长的道路上，我们总会收获很多助力，让我们不断前行。 这些助力可能来自一位家人、一位朋友，也有可能是一次挑战、 一次失败……。请以“__________ Bring（s） Me Power”为题， 结合下图提示，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文，分享你的一次经 历。 7 ⑥生活的长河中，每个人都是一名独特的航行者，追寻着属于自 己的梦想和荣光。在这段旅程中，我们经历了无数的挑战和困难， 也收获了无数的欢笑和泪水。其中，总会有一件事情让我们深感 骄傲与自豪。校报英语编辑部正开展以“One Thing I’m Proud of” 为题的征文活动。请你结合提示中的问题写一篇短文投稿。 8 常见经历角度 9 作文框架 开头：以简短的话语引入自己即将要介绍/分享的经历； 中间：讲述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过及结果，即五 个“W”（what, who, when, where, why）和一个“H” （how）； 结尾：对上述经历进行总结，表明自己在此次经历中学到了什么 或以后会怎么做。 10 高分模板 One __________ Experience I’m glad to share __________（我的经历）. When I first went into junior high school, I __________ （遇到的事情） because __________（原因）. I was __________（感受） and didn’t know what to do. __________ （人物）encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice. 11 First of all, __________（我的行为①）, which helped to__________（这样做的结果①）. Second, __________ （我的行为②）. In this way, I not only __________ but also__________（这样做的结果②）. Day by day, I could __________（可以做的事情）and I __________（现在的行为） now. Through the experience, I have realized that__________ （感悟）. 优秀范文记背 Passage 1（2024陕西真题范文） Hi Tom, How’s it going? I’d like to share the interesting experience of my labor homework with you. 13 This term, my teacher assigned me a project to grow a plant and record its changes. I chose a sunflower and named it Sunny. I put the seed to a nice container and carefully recorded its changes. Each day, I watered and looked after Sunny with care. It was fascinating to see how it slowly grew taller and stronger. When I saw the sunflower grow well, I got a strong feeling of satisfaction. And the funny shape of the sunflower made me deeply interested in it. 14 The interesting experience taught me patience and the beauty of nature. I hope you try this too! Can you share your interesting experience with me? Looking forward to your reply. Li Bin Passage 2 A Valuable Gift I’ve received lots of presents, but the most valuable gift I’ve received is the book The Old Man and the Sea from my mother. It was my 13th birthday. I failed to pass the exam some days ago and felt really upset those days. 16 My mother wanted to cheer me up and encouraged me to be strong, so she gave the book to me. I was so surprised and happy to get it. After I finished reading the book, I have learned that when we meet with difficulties, we should never give up. From then on, I keep trying my best to study hard. I think I’ll grow up with it because it is not only a book but also my mother’s love. So I consider it the most valuable gift. Passage 3 Helping Others Makes Me Happy Helping others is a really happy thing for me. It was on a snowy afternoon when I was walking back home. Just at the street corner, I found an old man sitting on the ground. He was cold and tired. I asked him what was the matter. He told me that he had no money for food and he was 18 very hungry. I used my pocket money to buy a bowl of noodles for him. He ate the noodles quickly and thanked me very much. And I gave him all of my pocket money then. Seeing his thankful smile, I felt happy that I could help a man in need. From then on, I always remembered to spend money on some meaningful things and always tried to help the poor and the old. I believe helping others in need is one of my pleasures. Passage 4 An Unforgettable Moving Moment I’ll never forget the four-second moving moment when I took the P.E. exam for high school. I entered the 800-meter race that day. Unluckily, I fell on the playground. Helpless and worried, I wanted to give up. A few seconds later, a girl gave me a hand and encouraged me to 20 get up. At last, I finished the race and the girl got full marks although she’d lost four seconds because of helping me. I will never forget the four seconds. A four-second moment doesn’t seem to change anything, but it teaches me never to give up. Passage 5 Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try. Last term, there was a speech competition in our school. I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. With the encouragement from my parents, I decided to give it a try. To prepare for the competition, I 22 studied some speech videos carefully. Then I wrote my own speech, and practiced it again and again. Finally, I gave an excellent performance and won the third place. From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. It can help us find and develop our hidden talents and become more confident. Passage 6 One Thing I’m Proud of The thing I am proud of is that I visited some old people to make them happy. It was on a fine autumn afternoon when I was in Grade 7. I noticed an old grandma sitting silently under a tall tree in front of her house, looking rather sad and lonely. 24 I went to have a chat with her. After our short conversation, I got to know that the old woman’s sons and daughters were all far away from her, making a living in big cities and she felt lonely. I felt sympathetic for her, and I realized that there were actually many old people like her. So a good idea occurred to me suddenly. I gathered my friends and organized them to visit these old people one by one. We sang songs, danced and told jokes to them, which made them happy. One of them was so moved that her tears fell down. Caring for those around us and spreading our happiness are what we have learnt that day. I made it, and I felt really proud of myself because I bring joy and happiness to those who needed most. 27 $$