话题10 环境污染及原因，环保意识和行为(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册（陕西专用）

2025陕西 英 语 话题写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频话题三阶写作指导 人与自然 话题10 环境污染及原因，环保意识和行为（2019） 2 ►中考话题角度解读 1.陕西近6年中考：2019陕西考查如何处理书籍和笔记本 2.全国视野：近三年全国考查角度：①垃圾分类；②绿色校园； ③节约用水；④低碳生活；⑤保护动植物 3. 热点角度：垃圾分类；可持续发展 3 ►教材单元链接 人教版 九（全） Unit 13 保护环境 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 角度1 破坏环境的行为及影响 1.cut down 砍伐 2.pour waste water into 向……里排放废水 3.throw litter around/here and there 到处扔垃圾 6 4.waste water resource 浪费水资源 5.be harmful to/be bad for 对……有害 6.become worse and worse 变得越来越糟糕 7 角度2 保护环境的做法 1.turn off 关掉 2.clean up 打扫；清除 3.recycle books and paper 回收利用书和纸 4.stay/keep away from 远离…… 5.prevent/stop…from polluting the environment 阻止……污染环境 8 角度3 保护环境的号召 1.protect…from… 保护……免受…… 2.make a contribution/contributions to 为……做贡献 3.try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人最大努力做某事 4.call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事 9 5.make a difference 起作用；有影响 6.make the world a better place to live in 让世界变成一个更好 的居住地 7.take steps/measures/action to do sth. 采取措施/行动做某事 8.It’s our duty to do sth. 做某事是我们的责任。 10 句型 开头句 1.The earth is our home. However, our earth is facing a lot of serious problems. 2.As we all know, air pollution has become a serious problem. 3.As is known to us, animals are our friends. However, many kinds of animals are in danger now. 11 中间句 角度1 保护环境的做法 1.We should stop factories from pouring waste water into rivers directly. 2.We can use energy-saving lights as much as possible instead of the traditional lights. 3.I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks when I buy takeaway food. I use the ones at home. 【人教版九（全）U13】 12 4.We encourage students to collect waste paper and soft drink cans. Then we sort them so that they can be recycled. 5.We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. 6.Bring your own shopping bag! Bring your own bag when you go shopping. It’s a good way to reduce packaging. 【冀教版八 （下）U8】 13 7.Save electricity! Turn off the lights when you leave a room. Turn off the television and shut down the computer when you are not using them.【冀教版八（下）U8】 14 角度2 保护动植物的行为 1.We should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals. 2.We should protect animals and stop them from disappearing. 【冀教版八（下）U3改编】 3.The number of tigers in the wild is quickly decreasing and we must do something about it.【冀教版八（下）U3】 4.If possible, we can take part in some activities to learn more about wild animals and try to protect them. 15 5.What’s more, we should advise the government to make laws so that they can get enough protection. 6.There are many things we can do to protect the environment. As students, we can plant trees. And we can also organize some activities to ask people to stop cutting down trees. 16 角度3 共建绿色校园 1.Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers every year. 2.Secondly, to avoid waste, we reuse textbooks. 3.Thirdly, each of us students is a cleaner. If we see garbage, we will pick it up and put it into the bin. 4.When we leave the classroom, we turn off the lights. 17 结尾句 角度1 号召大家一起行动 1.So together, our actions can make a difference and lead to a better future! 【人教版九（全）U13】 2.I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the environment. If we work together, we can make the world a better place. 18 3.It’s not too hard to protect the environment. We just need to try. 【冀教版八（下）U8】 4.It’s time for us to take responsibility for the world. 19 角度2 强调保护环境的重要性 1.We should do everything we can to protect the earth, because we have only one earth. 2.Only when we form the good habits of protecting the environment can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow. 20 俗语/谚语 1.Save water, shame of waste. 节约用水，浪费可耻。 2.Don’t let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth. 不要让我们的眼泪成为地球上的最后一滴水。 21 针对训练 1.Firstly, I will take public transportation.（用as much as possible与when引导的时间状语从句扩写句子） ________________________________________________________ ________________ Firstly, I will take public transportation as much as possible when I go out. 2.I save water by watering the flowers with used water. （用It’s necessary for…to do…句型升格句子） ________________________________________________________ _________________ It’s necessary for me to save water by watering the flowers with used water. 22 3.It is better to use china cups and cloth bags. The china cups and cloth bags can be used many times.（用because引导的原因 状语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ _________________________ It is better to use china cups and cloth bags because they can be used many times. 4.I recycle more and the earth will become cleaner.（用“the+比 较级, the+比较级”句型升格句子） ____________________________________________________ The more I recycle, the cleaner the earth will become. 23 5.使用过多的塑料袋对我们的环境有害。（汉译英） ____________________________________________________ ______________________________ Using too many plastic bags is harmful to/does harm to/is bad for our environment. 24 二阶 典例探究明思路 25 中国《政府工作报告》中提出绿色低碳发展理念。作为新时 代的青少年, 我们应积极响应国家号召, 共建绿色低碳家园, 请 以“Let’s Build a Green City Together!”为题,用英语写一篇倡议 书。 26 要求： 1.文章应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） 27 Let’s Build a Green City Together! As we all know, the environment is important to us. So it’s our duty to protect it. A green city is the key to a healthy life. Let’s take action now! ___________________________________ _______________________________________________________ I believe the sky will be bluer, the mountains will be greener and the rivers will be clearer. Our country will be richer and more beautiful. Let’s build a green city together! 28 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体：本文是一篇________，为倡议书； ②人称：介绍我们应该怎么做时用第____人称。 ③时态：讲述具体倡导的做法时，用____________；介绍对未来 的畅想时，用____________； ④写作要点：三项要点，分别是：___________；_____________； ________________。 说明文 一 一般现在时 一般将来时 Green life Green traffic Green homeland 29 二、构思框架 30 三、连句成篇 Let’s Build a Green City Together! As we all know, the environment is important to us. So it’s our duty to protect it. A green city is the key to a healthy life. Let’s take action now! ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ First, it’s important to have a green life. We should save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the lights. We shouldn’t throw rubbish 31 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ I believe the sky will be bluer, the mountains will be greener and the rivers will be clearer. Our country will be richer and more beautiful. Let’s build a green city together! everywhere. Second, the green traffic is good for reducing air pollution. When we go outside, we can take public transport, such as taking the subway and taking a bus. Third, to make our city greener, we should plant more trees. We should also take part in more community activities to make our city clean and beautiful. 四、反思与评价 How well can you do these things? ______________ Very well ______________ OK ______________ Needs work ·I can keep my writing paper clean. ·I can use correct English expressions for writing. □ □ □ □ □ □ 33 How well can you do these things? ______________ Very well ______________ OK ______________ Needs work ·I can write all the points. ·My article is clearly structured, well organized and comprehensive in content（内容全面）. □ □ □ □ □ □ 续表 34 How well can you do these things? ______________ Very well ______________ OK ______________ Needs work Overall comment Self-assessment Peer review Teacher’s assessment Total score: ____________/15 续表 35 三阶 写作实战提能力 36 为提高人们的动物保护意识， 《英语青年报》正在举行英语征文 竞赛。请根据以下内容提示，写一 篇英语短文参加此次征文比赛，简 要分析野生动物减少的原因，提出 保护野生动物的措施。 37 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） 要求： 1.文章应包含导图中所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； As we all know, animals are people’s friends. ___________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ However, the number of wild animals is getting smaller and smaller because wild animals’ living space is becoming less and less. Also, many wild animals now can’t find enough food to eat. At the same time, people are killing animals for their fur, teeth, bones and other parts of the bodies. 39 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ What should we do to protect wild animals? Firstly, we should stop buying fur coats and other products made from wild animals. Secondly, we should attach great importance to protecting wild animals. Lastly, the government can also make some laws to stop people from hurting them. All in all, let’s work together to protect wild animals and keep the balance between humans and nature. 41 $$