话题9 科学技术与工程，人类发明与创新(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册（陕西专用）

2025陕西 英 语 话题写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频话题三阶写作指导 人与社会 话题9 科学技术与工程，人类发明与创新 2 ▶中考命题角度探究 1.陕西近6年中考：暂未考查 2.全国视野：近三年全国考查角度：①新科技的出现与应用；② 新科技/人工智能利弊谈；③个人隐私与网络安全；④对未来生 活的畅想 3. 热点角度：人工智能利弊谈；对ChatGPT的看法；个人隐 私与网络安全 3 ▶教材单元链接 人教版 九（全） Unit 6 发明 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 角度1 信息技术 1.surf the Internet 网上冲浪 2.text message （手机）短信 3.keep in touch with 与……保持联系 4.search for information 查找信息 6 角度2 作用与影响 1.be used to do sth. 被用来做某事 2.take advantage of 利用 3.in the field of 在……领域 4.change one’s life 改变某人的生活 5.with the development of 随着……的发展 6.make a lot of progress 取得很大的进步 7.have a great influence on 对……产生巨大影响 7 角度3 对某科技或发明的看法 1.From my point of view/In my opinion/As for me, … 在我看 来，…… 2.All in all/In short/In a word/In conclusion, I believe… 总之， 我相信…… 8 句型 开头句 1.The Internet is changing the world. 2.The rapid development of science and technology has brought great changes to our life. 3.The invention of ChatGPT has made AI a hot topic among people in our society. 9 中间句 角度1 某发明/科技的功能 1.Online learning also provides me with rich learning resources. 2.Home robots help with housework so that people have more time to do things they enjoy. 10 3.As soon as people throw away some waste on the street, they will be cleaned up by the dustbin at once. 4.The electric car can not only save energy but also protect the environment. 11 角度2 人工智能利弊谈 1.Artificial Intelligence can chat with people, and it can help solve people’s problems. For example, it can help the students do homework correctly and solve the subject problems. Besides, it can design pictures in a short time. 2.However, it also has many disadvantages. If we always depend on it, it will make us lazy in mind. Its appearance will reduce people’s job opportunities. 12 角度3 个人隐私与网络安全 1.First of all, protect our personal information. Don’t give away our personal information like our names or addresses. 2.Second, we mustn’t click on any strange links or e-mails in order to avoid money loss. 3.Third, never meet strangers we chat with online and never believe what the strangers say online. 13 角度4 未来生活 1.No one knows what the future will be like. 【人教版八（上） U7】 2.The public transport in the future is very comfortable and produces no air pollution. 3.With the development of technology, more people would be sent to Mars. 4.I hope that there will be more e-schools so that children can study on the Internet at home. 14 结尾句 角度1 表达自己的观点 1.In my opinion, home robots can make our lives easier. 2.All in all, smart products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use them correctly, they will bring us more convenient life in the future. 15 角度2 表达期望 1.We will live happily and more conveniently with the help of AI. 2.As a student, I will study hard to get into a top university. In this way, I can get more chances to make a great contribution to China’s science and technology industry. 3.Only when we obey the rules above can we build a healthy online world. 16 俗语/谚语 1.Everything has two sides. 凡事都有两面性。 2.The question mark is the key to any science. 问号是开启任何 一门科学的钥匙。 3.Technology is a double-edged sword. 科技是把双刃剑。 17 针对训练 1.I want to invent a special car. The car can swim in the water and run on the land.（用which引导的定语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ ______________________ I want to invent a special car which can swim in the water and run on the land. 2.I start the car and it can fly like a bird.（用as soon as引导的 时间状语从句升格句子） _______________________________________________ As soon as I start the car, it can fly like a bird. 18 3.The car is cheap and environmentally friendly.（用not only…b ut also…升格句子） _________________________________________________________ The car is not only cheap but also environmentally friendly. 4.Change the seats in the car into beds.（用被动语态升格句子） _________________________________________ Seats in the car can be changed into beds. 5.You can create or invent something. You know more about the knowledge first.（用Only when引导的倒装句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ _______________________________ Only when you know more about the know-ledge first can you create or invent something. 19 二阶 典例探究明思路 20 假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题目为“AI in Our Life” 的英语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英语演讲稿，包含以下 内容： 21 要求： 1.文章应包含导图所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） 22 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our lives greatly. _____________ _________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! 23 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体：本文是一篇________； ②人称：介绍AI对我们学习生活的影响时，用第____人称，介绍 “我”对于AI的看法时，用第____人称； ③时态：讲述AI给我们的生活带来的帮助和影响时以 ____________为主，介绍AI的未来发展用____________。 应用文 三 一 一般现在时 一般将来时 24 二、构思框架 Beginning→ 引入话题：从学习及生活等方面介绍AI改变了我们的生活 参考句型：①make sth.+adj.；②have problems in （doing） sth.；③bring… to… 例：We have any problems in our studies. We will ask smartphone for help.（用if引导的条件状语从句升格句子） 25 ____________________________________________________________________________ Body→ 具体介绍对于AI的一些担忧 参考句型：①with AI technology being widely used, …；②lose one’s ability to do sth. 例：Students lose their abilities to do things by themselves. Some students depend on AI too much.（用so that引导的结果状语从句升格句子） If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphone for help. __________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ending→结语：自己对AI的一些看法 参考句型：①just as…；②I believe that… 例：We use AI correctly. AI will bring us more convenient life in the future.（用if引导的条件状语从句升格句子） _________________________________________________________________________ Some students depend on AI too much so that they will lose their abilities to do things by themselves. If we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. 三、连句成篇 AI in Our Life Dear teachers and students, As we all know, AI has become more and more popular in our daily life and has changed our life greatly. ______________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ We can see different kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphone can make work and study more efficient. 28 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ If we have any problems in our studies, we will ask smartphones for help. Cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lose their jobs. Also, some students depend on AI too much so that they lose their abilities to do things by themselves. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for your listening! All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future. 四、反思与评价 How well can you do these things? ______________ Very well ______________ OK ______________ Needs work ·I can keep my writing paper clean. ·I can use correct English expressions for writing. □ □ □ □ □ □ 31 How well can you do these things? ______________ Very well ______________ OK ______________ Needs work ·I can write all the points. ·My article is clearly structured, well organized and comprehensive in content（内容全面）. □ □ □ □ □ □ 续表 32 How well can you do these things? ______________ Very well ______________ OK ______________ Needs work Overall comment Self-assessment Peer review Teacher’s assessment Total score: ____________/15 续表 33 三阶 写作实战提能力 34 假如你是李华，你去参观了有关智能厨房的科技展。请根据 以下内容写一封电子邮件告诉你的英国朋友Tom你的所见所闻及 想法。 35 Smart Kitchen What does it have? ______________________________ （至少写出4点， 可选择以下内容或自由发挥） ·powered by clean energy ·smart fridge （be connected to, shop） 36 Smart Kitchen ·smart screen （by voice, play music, show menus…） ·smart cooker （a balanced diet） ·safety system （keep…safe） ·smart housekeeper （control） Your opinions: …（请至少写2 点） 续表 37 要求： 1.文章应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） 38 Dear Tom, I learned a lot about smart kitchens at a tech exhibition. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ The entire kitchen is powered by clean energy. There are many smart appliances in the kitchen. The smart fridge can be connected to wireless networks and used for shopping. In addition, the smart screen in the refrigerator has many functions, such as playing music and displaying menus by 39 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ voice. There are also lots of smart cookers in the kitchen to make sure we have a balanced diet. The whole kitchen security system is very good, and it can keep us safe. It’s controlled by an intelligent house keeper. I really hope that I can have such a smart kitchen in the future, and I think it is very convenient and cool. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua What do you think of it? Would you like to have a smart kitchen, or do you prefer the traditional ways of cooking? 42 $$