内容正文:
2025陕西
英 语
话题写作培优册
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第二部分 高频话题三阶写作指导
人与社会
话题7 良好的人际关系与人际交往
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▶中考命题角度探究
1.陕西近6年中考:暂未考查
2.全国视野:近三年全国考查角度:①人际交往的经历和感受;
②人际交往的困扰和建议;③团队协作精神
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▶教材单元链接
人教版
七(上) Unit 1 结交新朋友
七(上) Unit 5 与朋友共度时光
七(下) Unit 8 邻里之间 八(上) Unit 9 邀请
八(下) Unit 4 人际
沟通
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一阶 素材积累与训练
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素材积累
短语与搭配
角度1 人际交往的问题
1.break a promise/promises 违背诺言
2.talk back 回嘴,顶嘴
3.be worried/nervous about… 为……担忧/对……感到紧张
4.turn down 拒绝
5.complain about sth. 抱怨某事
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角度2 解决方式
1.ask for help 寻求帮助
2.communicate with 和……交流
3.have conversation(s) with sb. 和某人交谈
4.keep in touch with sb. 和某人保持联系
5.reach an agreement 达成协议
6.face to face 面对面
7.share…with… 和……分享……
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8.give sb. a hand 帮助某人
9.get on/along well with sb. 与某人友好相处
10.keep a promise/promises/keep one’s word 遵守承诺
11.be friendly/kind/nice/good to sb. 对某人友善
12.agree with sb. 同意某人的看法
13.care for 关心,照顾
14.agree to do sth. 同意做某事
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句型
开头句
角度1 与他人相处
1.It’s very important for us to know how to get along well
with other people.
2.Have you heard of the saying, “Many hands make light
work.”? I’d like to share one of my experiences with you. It
makes me understand it better.
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3.Nowadays, many teenagers have difficulty in getting on well
with their parents. Here is my advice.
4.As we all know, good relations among students are quite
important for us.
5.Looking back on the old days of my junior school, I can see
plenty of wonderful moments shared with my teachers and
classmates.
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角度2 邀请朋友参加活动
1.I’m writing this letter to invite you to take part in our
school-leaving party.
2.I would like to invite you to the opening of our new
library.
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中间句
角度1 和家人相处
1.Our parents care too much about our marks and it makes us
stressed.
2.Parents should allow children to have their own choices.
3.Home is always the first place for us to get help and support.
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4.When I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often
communicate with my parents.
5.Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork
and hobbies so that our parents won’t feel worried about us.
6.I think we should first ask parents for help because they
have more experience and are always there to help us.
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角度2 和朋友/同学相处
1.They can make me relaxed and have confidence in myself.
2.If I find my classmates going through a hard time, I will
offer help to them without thinking twice.
3.When my friends and I have different opinions on something,
I will listen to them patiently and respect their points.
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角度3 团队协作
1.Team members should have a common goal they need to
achieve.
2.Everyone should actively take part in the project and do their
part.
3.If you have a good team, you should support each other.
【人教版九(全)U11】
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4.There is no doubt that communication can help us know
more about our teammates.
5.After that, I realized that I should work together with other
teammates.
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结尾句
角度1 表达对人际关系的祝福和希望
1.I hope my advice will be helpful to you. May you be happy
in your new school.
2.Let’s build good student relationships, and then we can study
hard together.
3.Although I will graduate soon, my English teacher will
always be in my heart.
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角度2 感受与启示
1.If we can’t communicate well, we can hardly get along with
our friends. It’s the same with family relationships.【冀教版九
(全)U9】
2.Hopefully, we’ll all learn to get along better with each other!
【冀教版九(全)U9】
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3.From this experience, I realize that the real friendship between
classmates is that whenever you are in difficulty, they are
always ready to help you.
4.This experience made me understand what a team sport was.
It was not just about “me”, it was about “us”.
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俗语/谚语
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
2.Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。【冀教版九
(全)U8】
3.One tree does not make a forest. 独木不成林。
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针对训练
1.Having friends is cool. We can have fun and share secrets
with them.(用because引导的原因状语从句升格句子)
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Having friends is cool because we can have fun and share secrets with them.
2.It is important to treat friends with kindness and respect.
(用there is no doubt that…升格句子)
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_____________________
There is no doubt that it is important to treat friends with kindness and respect.
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3.Your friends are in trouble and you should help them.
(用whenever引导的时间状语从句升格句子,并使用be ready to
do sth.结构)
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Whenever your friends are in trouble, you should be ready to help them.
4.Our math teacher is strict with us in class, but she is very
kind to us after class.(用although引导的让步状语从句升格句子)
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Although our math teacher is strict with us in class, she is very kind to us after class.
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二阶 典例探究明思路
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(2024成都改编)“众人拾柴火焰高”。在学习生活中,大家
一起团结协作,往往能取得更好的成果。你校英语报就“团队合
作”这一话题征稿。请根据以下图示,以“Be a Good Team
Member”为题,写一篇短文投稿。
Be a Good Team Member
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要求:
1.文章应包含导图中所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。
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写作剖析
一、仔细审题
①文体:如何成为一个好的团队成员,是一篇________;
②人称:介绍自己如何成为一名好的团队成员时,用第____人称,
介绍团队的作用和力量时,用第____人称;
说明文
一
三
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③时态:介绍如何成为一名好的团队成员是陈述现在的情况,用
____________;
④写作要点:三项要点,分别是:___________;______;
_______。
一般现在时
importance
ways
ending
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二、构思框架
Beginning→点明团队合作的重要性
参考句型:①There is an old saying…;②discuss with sb.
例:通过与团队成员讨论,我们可以想出更好的主意。(汉译英)
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Body→ 阐述团队协作的方式
By discussing with team members, we can come up with better ideas.
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参考句型:①communicate with sb.;②There is no doubt that…;③help sb. in need
例:Trust our teammates. This helps develop team spirit.(用which引导的非限定性定语从句 升格句子)
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Ending→结语:再次强调团队作用,并发出号召
Trust our teammates, which helps develop team spirit.
参考句型:①play an important role in;②Let’s do sth.
例:团队合作在我们的日常生活中起着重要作用。(汉译英)
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Teamwork plays an important role in our daily life.
三、连句成篇
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Be a Good Team Member
There is an old saying in China, “Unity is strength.” It
tells people the importance of teamwork. By discussing with
team members, we can come up with better ideas. But how
can we be a good team member? Here are some suggestions
for you.
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________________________________________________________
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________________________________________________________
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First, communicate more with each other. There is no
doubt that communication can help us understand our
teammates better. We should listen to others actively and
express our thoughts bravely. Second, we should support and
help others in need. Finally, trust our teammates, which
helps develop team spirit.
All in all, teamwork plays an important role in our
daily life. Let’s be good team members and work well
together.
四、反思与评价
How well can you do these things? ______________
Very
well ______________
OK ______________
Needs
work
·I can keep my writing paper clean.
·I can use correct English expressions
for writing. □
□ □
□ □
□
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How well can you do these things? ______________
Very
well ______________
OK ______________
Needs
work
·I can write all the points.
·My article is clearly structured, well
organized and comprehensive in
content(内容全面). □
□ □
□ □
□
续表
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How well can you do these things? ______________
Very
well ______________
OK ______________
Needs
work
Overall
comment Self-assessment
Peer review
Teacher’s assessment
Total score: ____________/15
续表
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三阶 写作实战提能力
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初中三年,你一定有过许多次与他人沟通的经历。你校英文
报正在以“A(n) ________ Talk”为题征稿,结合下面的图示及
写作要求,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
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要求:
1.文章应包含导图中所给的关键信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70。
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A(n) Unforgettable Talk
I have quite a few unforgettable talks and the most unforgettable one is between my grandfather and me.
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One evening, my grandfather started a conversation to share
his life lessons as he was moving to another city. We
discussed different kinds of topics, from the importance of
education to the value of family. He recalled his younger
days, the challenges he faced, and the achievements he made.
His words were full of wisdom, encouraging me to face life
with courage.
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For me, this talk was more than just an exchange of
words. It was a valuable moment that taught me a lot about
being smart and making good choices. It made me respect
and love him even more. His words always stay with me and
help me decide what to do. I keep thinking about our talk
and how to be wise like him.
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