话题5 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册（陕西专用）

2025陕西 英 语 话题写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频话题三阶写作指导 人与自我 话题5 促进中学生“五育并举”的发展（2024） 2 ▶中考命题角度探究 1.陕西近6年中考：2024陕西书面表达要求叙述栽培植物的经历 和感受 2.全国视野：近三年全国考查角度：①德育：乐于助人，如何做 一名新时代的好少年；②美育：美育知识，艺术课程，引导审美 情趣；③劳育：劳动实践的经历与感受,劳动精神，倡导参加劳 动实践活动 3 ▶教材单元链接 人教版 八（上） Unit 8 烹饪 八（下） Unit 3 家务和许 可 八（下） Unit 8 文学和音乐 九（全） Unit 9 音乐和电影 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 1.care for 照顾 2.clean up 打扫干净 3.fix up 修理 4.sweep the floor 扫地 5.take out the rubbish 倒垃圾 6 6.make the/one’s bed 铺床 7.wash/do the dishes 清洗餐具 8.fold the clothes 叠衣服 9.set cooking courses 开设烹饪课程 10.clean the blackboard 擦黑板 11.water flowers 浇花 12.enjoy pop music 喜欢流行音乐 7 13.collect stamps 集邮 14.basic life skills 基本生活技能 15.keep healthy/fit 保持健康 16.develop an interest in 培养在……方面的兴趣 17.be able to do sth. 能够做某事 18.make a big difference 起很大作用 19.look after oneself 照顾某人自己 8 20.develop one’s independence 培养某人的独立性 21.get a strong feeling of satisfaction 获得强烈的满足感 22.open up one’s eyes and mind 开阔某人的眼界和思维 23.enrich our knowledge 丰富我们的知识 9 句型 开头句 1.To be a better person, I think I should do the following things. 2.I suppose tree planting is very important work. It’s also a great way to learn about nature.【冀教版八（下）U2】 10 3.There are all kinds of music in the world. Music makes people happy. Good music brings people comfort and peace of mind. Everyone loves music but different people have different tastes. 4.Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. 11 中间句 角度1 劳动实践 1.I think doing chores is not so difficult. I do not mind doing them.【人教版八（下）U3】 2.We can do housework in our spare time to show care for our parents. 12 3.Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.【人教版八（下） U3】 4.I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and share housework.【人教版八（下）U3改编】 5.It seems that doing some housework such as cooking and cleaning is good for us. 13 6.Since students live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy.【人教版八（下）U3】 7.Some students are interested in taking part in social practice activities while others plan to share housework. 8.It’s important to learn some basic life skills, like cooking, washing clothes and tidying up our rooms. 14 角度2 美育知识 1.I enjoy reading stories and listening to music. It’s great fun. 2.I like smooth music that helps me relax after a long week at work.【人教版九（全）U9】 3.It’s our duty to value and spread Chinese culture. 4.What’s more, Beijing Opera is also an important part of Chinese culture. 5.The reason why we plan a visit to a tea house is that we can learn a lot about tea culture there. 15 结尾句（呼吁、感受或收获） 1.Carrying out labor education makes school life more colorful and meaningful. 2.By learning to cook, we can learn some cooking skills. At the same time, we can share housework and become more independent. 3.Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what we depend on is what we learn. 16 4.I’m sure the earlier we learn to be independent, the better our future will be. 5.Instead of being afraid of challenges, we should try our best to solve the problems in our study and life. 17 针对训练 1.It’s important to learn how to clean our rooms.（用such as扩 写具体例子） ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ _________ It’s important to learn how to clean our rooms, such as sweeping the floor, making our beds and putting away our clothes. 2.Exercise can rest our brains and eyes.（用that引导的定语从句 扩写句子） _______________________________________________________ Exercise is a good way that can rest our brains and eyes. 18 3.We hold the traditional Chinese opera activity to learn more about traditional Chinese culture.（用the reason why…is that… 升格句子） ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ _________ The reason why we hold the traditional Chinese opera activity is that we can learn more about traditional Chinese culture. 4.Running can reduce our pressure.（用a good way to升格句子） _____________________________________________ Running is a good way to reduce our pressure. 19 5.We can make a cake for our parents by ourselves.（用动词不 定式扩写目的） ________________________________________________________ ___________________ We can make a cake for our parents by ourselves to show our care for them. 20 二阶 典例探究明思路 21 （2024长沙改编）音乐，一种听觉艺术，是直通心灵的艺术。 你校英文刊正在开展以“What Does Music Bring to Me?”为题的 征文活动,请你根据下面图片用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿， 谈谈音乐带来的好处。 22 要求： 1.文章应包含图片中所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。 ________________________________________________________ 23 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体：本文是一篇________； ②人称：介绍音乐的时候用第____人称，介绍自己的经历，音乐 给自己带来的好处及自己怎么做时用第____人称； ③时态：介绍英语带来的好处，以____________为主；若要讲述 自己的经历，则要用____________。 说明文 三 一 一般现在时 一般过去时 24 二、构思框架 Beginning→引出下文 参考句型：①be like sth.；②It’s important for sb. to do sth. 例：Music is like a key. Music opens a door to the world for me.（用which引导的定语从句升格句子） ______________________________________________________ ____ Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. 25 Body→阐述音乐伴“我”成长的经历 参考句型：①have a better understanding of sth.； ②take up doing sth.；③bring sb. sth.； ④remind sb. of sth.；⑤It makes sb. do sth. 例：Music brings me hope and strength. It offers words of wisdom. These words guide me through life’s challenges.（用现在分词作状语和that引导的定语从句升格句子） ______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ Ending→ 总结全文,表达自己的感受,发出号召 参考句型：hope+that从句 Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s challenges. 例：All of us will value music and make it a part of our life.（用I hope that引导的宾语从句升格句子） _______________________________________________________ ___________ I hope that all of us will value music and make it a part of our life. 三、分阶范文 初阶范文 高阶范文 What Does Music Bring to Me? Music is very important for me. It is a gateway to the world. What Does Music Bring to Me? Music is like a key, which opens a door to the world for me. 29 初阶范文 高阶范文 Music brings me hope and strength during hard times. When I was young, I was shy. Later, I made lots of friends because I started playing the guitar. Besides, music opens my eyes. Music brings me hope and strength during hard times, offering words of wisdom that guide me through life’s challenges. When I was young, I was shy. As I took up playing the guitar to deal with my shyness, 续表 30 初阶范文 高阶范文 Through music, I can have a better understanding of myself and the world. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. I made lots of friends. Besides, music opens my eyes. Through music, I can broaden my horizons, open my mind, and deepen my understanding of the world. Also, music reminds me of some happy memories. 续表 31 初阶范文 高阶范文 It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given to me. Overall, music makes my life more meaningful and colorful. It makes me remember the love and care my teachers and friends have given to me. Overall, music makes my life more meaningful and colorful. I hope that all of us will value music and make it a part of our life. 续表 32 初阶范文 高阶范文 _______________我来点评： 1.Content：_____________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ __________________________ 2.Structure：___________________________________________ _____________________________________________________ ①高阶范文将音乐比喻为“a key， which opens a door to the world”，增强了读者的理解；②高阶范文除了总结外，还增加了希望所有人都能重视音乐并将其融入生活的愿望，提升了文章的感染力； 初阶范文结构简单清晰，高阶范文结构丰富，每个观点都有更详细的解释和拓展，使得文章内容更加丰富； 续表 33 初阶范文 高阶范文 3.Logic：_______________________________________________ _____________________________________ 4.Highlight expression：__________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ ___________ 高阶范文逻辑更为紧密，每个观点都有进一步的解释和深化，使得整个文章的逻辑更加清晰； ①使用现在分词作伴随状语和that引导的定语从句升格句子［高阶范文第二段第一句］；②使用It makes sb. do sth.句型使文章表达更多样［高阶范文第二段最后一句］。 续表 34 三阶 写作实战提能力 35 “双减”之下，有减有增，不变的是培养德智体美劳全面发展 的社会主义事业的建设者和接班人的目标。为此，学校开展了系 列主题活动。假如你是李明，是学生会的一名成员，请你根据下 面的思维导图，围绕“How to be a good student”这个话题，写 一篇演讲稿参加比赛。 36 37 要求： 1.文章应包含导图中所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。） 38 Dear schoolmates, I am Li Ming from the Students’ Union. We are having an activity with the theme of being a good student. Here are my opinions. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ First of all, we must love our country and home. We should be honest and keep our promises. And we should also be friendly to the people around us. 39 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Thank you for your listening. Secondly, it’s our duty to study hard, and we should try our best to realize our dreams. Next, taking exercise can make us keep healthy. Besides, we are supposed to show our love for nature and protect the environment. Animals are our friends, so we should get on well with them. What’s more, we should get into the habit of loving labor, such as tidying up the classroom and sharing housework at home. Come on! I believe we can make it. 41 $$