话题4 身心健康与体育运动(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册（陕西专用）

2025陕西 英 语 话题写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频话题三阶写作指导 人与自我 话题4 身心健康与体育运动 2 ▶中考命题角度探究 1.陕西近6年中考：暂未考查 2.全国视野：近三年全国考查角度：①健康的生活习惯；②青少 年心理健康；③最喜欢的运动；④健康正确的运动方法 3. 热点角度：抵制校园暴力、校园霸凌，加强青少年心理健 康教育 3 ▶教材单元链接 人教版 七（上） Unit 6 食物 八（下） Unit 1 健康与急救 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 健康生活 1.look after/take care of 照顾 2.take a break/breaks 休息 3.keep sb. in good health 使某人保持身体健康 4.be good for 对……有好处 5.keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食 6 6.do more exercise 多做锻炼 7.physical and mental health 身心健康 8.in danger 处于危险中 9.save one’s life 挽救某人的生命 10.follow the traffic rules 遵守交通规则 11.stay away from 远离…… 12.keep calm 保持冷静 7 句型 开头句 1.There is an old saying,“A healthy body is a healthy mind.” 【冀教版七（下）U7】 2.Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy. 8 3.Sports are of great importance to us. They can help us build up our bodies and become healthy. 4.In order to make us grow up safely, our school has made many safety rules for us to follow. 9 中间句 角度1 健康生活 1.You’d better eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food. 2.Finally, a wonderful football game often makes me feel relaxed, especially when I feel stressed. 10 3.We should not only eat good and healthy food but also eat it regularly. 4.It’s good to relax by watching game shows or surfing the Internet, but I think the best way is through exercise. 11 角度2 心理健康（校园暴力与校园霸凌） 1.First, we should be strict with ourselves. It’s good for us to obey the school rules. We shouldn’t abuse（辱骂） or laugh at others. 2.Then, we should be friendly to our classmates and not fight with them. If we are bullied by others, we should ask our teachers and parents for help. When we meet school bullies, we should be brave to stop them. 12 角度3 解决烦恼的建议 1.I suggest that you should talk more about your problems with your friends. 2.I think you should join some clubs and make more friends. 3.We must get on well with others. It can keep us in a good mood. 13 角度4 体育运动 1.My favourite sport is table tennis, which has brought more than pleasure for me. 2.Sports give us so many benefits. I hope all of us take an active part in sports. Let’s enjoy the real fun that sports bring! 14 结尾句（呼吁、表达期望） 1.Follow doctor’s advice, and you’ll get well soon. 2.All in all, playing football is a good way to build up my body and relax myself. 3.These are some good ways to keep healthy. Everyone should try his/her best to care about personal health for a better life. 15 俗语/谚语 1.Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. 早睡早起使人健康、富有且聪明。【冀教版九（全） U8】 2.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果，医生远 离我。【冀教版九（全）U8】 16 针对训练 1.We should protect ourselves and value our lives.（用try one’s best to do sth.升格句子） ________________________________________________________ ______ We should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives. 2.Eating some fruit every day is necessary.（用It is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.升格句子） _______________________________________________ It’s necessary for us to eat some fruit every day. 17 3.There are many ways to keep healthy.（用such as扩写句子） ________________________________________________________ _____________________________________ There are many ways to keep healthy, such as developing good eating habits and taking exercise. 18 二阶 典例探究明思路 19 假如你是李华，近日你的英国笔友Amy发来邮件，向你诉说 她最近的困扰：自己体型微胖，想通过节食减肥，以更美的面貌 进入新的学校学习。请你根据邮件内容用英语给她回封邮件，谈 一谈你对该问题的见解。 20 Dear Li Hua, I have been a bit larger than other girls since I was little. For a long time, this has really troubled me. I feel more worried because I will start my senior high school life soon! I am afraid that the students in the new school will laugh at me because I am “big”. I decide to become more beautiful, 21 so I want to lose weight by dieting. What do you think of my plan? Can you give me some advice? Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Amy 续表 22 要求： 1.文章应包含题目要求所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。 Dear Amy, ______ Yours, Li Hua 23 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体：本文要求给朋友回一封邮件，是一篇________； ②人称：给对方提出建议用第____人称，表达自己对对方的期望 和祝愿时用第____人称； ③时态：表达看法和建议应用____________；表达对未来的期待 时用____________。 应用文 二 一 一般现在时 一般将来时 24 二、构思框架 25 三、分阶范文 初阶 范文 Dear Amy, I have received and read your e-mail. As you mentioned in the e-mail, I have some advice for you. Firstly, you don’t need to care about others’ ideas. The most important thing is to be confident and positive. Secondly, keep a healthy diet. 26 初阶 范文 Stay away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. Thirdly, doing some proper exercise is necessary. You can get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. You will be healthier in several months. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 续表 27 高阶 范文 Dear Amy, I have received and read your e-mail. As you mentioned in the e-mail, I will give you some personal advice on your trouble. 续表 28 高阶 范文 Firstly, there is no need to care about others’ ideas. The most important thing is to be confident and positive because it will help you have the courage to face and overcome your trouble. Secondly, keep a healthy diet. Stay away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. Thirdly, it’s necessary for you to do some proper exercise. 续表 29 高阶 范文 You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. You will be healthier in several months. I hope my advice will be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua 续表 30 我来点评： 1.Content：______________________________________________ ____________________________ 2.Structure：____________________________________________ 3.Logic：________________________________________________ ______________________________________ 高阶范文在给出建议的同时，增加了解释和原因，使建议更加具体和具有说服力； 初阶范文结构简单清晰，高阶范文结构更为丰富； 初高阶范文在提建议时都使用衔接词，如：Firstly， Secondly， Thirdly，使得文章结构清晰； 31 4.Highlight expression：__________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ①使用there is no need to do sth.， The most important thing is to…because…等高级句型升格句 子［高阶范文第二段第一、二句］；②用It is+adj.+for sb. to do sth.句型使文章表达更多样［高阶范文第二段第四句］。 32 三阶 写作实战提能力 33 劳逸结合能让我们的身心更加健康，也能提高学习效率。请 结合图片，并以“________ Can Make Me Relaxed”为题，写一 篇短文介绍你的放松方式。 34 35 要求： 1.请补全标题，文章应包含图片中所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。 36 ____________ Can Make Me Relaxed ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 37 In the busy daily studies, I find that doing sports is a great way to relax. I often go to the sports field or the gym to do my favorite sport—basketball. I like doing sports after school or on weekends. It’s a time when I can forget all my worries and pay attention to the game. There are two reasons why sports can make me relaxed. Firstly, they are interesting. Secondly, they allow Doing Sports Can Make Me Relaxed 38 me to improve myself, both physically and mentally. In a word, doing sports plays an important role in my life. It makes me healthy, happy, and ready for the challenges of the world. 40 $$