话题1 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活(课件PPT)-【众相原创·赋能中考】2025年中考英语话题写作培优册（陕西专用）

2025陕西 英 语 话题写作培优册 1 第二部分 高频话题三阶写作指导 人与自我 话题1 丰富、充实、积极向上的生活（2023,2021） 2 ►中考命题角度探究 1.陕西近6年中考：2023陕西书面表达要求介绍父亲节当天的计划； 2021陕西书面表达要求介绍自己暑假去社区做志愿活动的计划 2.全国视野：近三年全国考查角度：①假期旅行计划与感受； ②让周末生活或者暑期生活过得更充实且有意义的建议 3 ►教材单元链接 人教版 七（上） Unit 2 家庭 七（下） Unit 2 日常活动 七（下） Unit 12 周末活动 八（上） Unit 1 假期 八（上） Unit 2 闲暇活动 八（上） Unit 6 生活目标 4 一阶 素材积累与训练 5 素材积累 短语与搭配 角度1 日常生活 1.in the morning/evening 在早上/晚上 2.play computer games 玩电脑游戏 3.play/do sports 做运动 6 4.make/cook breakfast 做早餐 5.eat out 出去吃饭 6.keep a diary/keep diaries 记日记 7 角度2 假日活动 1.on vacation 度假 2.go boating 去划船 3.shopping center 购物中心 4.summer camp 夏令营 5.go to the beach 去沙滩 6.buy sth. for sb.=buy sb.sth. 为某人买某物 7.so+adj./adv.+that从句 如此……以至于…… 8.enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事 8 句型 开头句 1.The summer/winter vacation is coming soon, and we’ve had a great plan for it. 2.I am going to travel to some places of interest which can widen my horizons in the holiday. 9 3.It’s necessary for you to plan the trip carefully so that you can make good use of your time and see all the places you want to visit. 4.I love spending time exploring new cities, trying local food and learning about local culture during my travels. 10 中间句 角度1 日常活动 1.I worked as a guide at the Natural History Museum. 【人教版七（下）U12】 2.You can visit some places of interest and take beautiful photos. 【人教版七（下）U12】 11 3.Acting is fun and useful. You can meet lots of new people and improve your social skills. 【冀教版七（下）U4】 4.Swimming isn’t just fun—it’s also good exercise! You can stay in shape and have a good time. 【冀教版七（下）U4】 12 角度2 假日活动 1.It was wonderful！We took quite a few photos there. 【人教版八（上）U1】 2.I’m going to the countryside with my dad. We are going to plant trees. 【冀教版七（下）U4】 3.I plan to go to Xi’an which is famous for its long history. 4.I’m planning to travel to China next year so that I can taste the Chinese food. 13 结尾句 1.My holiday was so colourful that I enjoyed it very much. 2.In a word, free-time activities can not only enrich our life, but also help us learn something new. 3.Although all of us felt very tired, we got the happiest memory. 4.The tour not only deepens our love for our country but also enriches our understanding of traditional Chinese art! 14 俗语/谚语 1.Life is what you make it. 你的生活由你创造。 2.Big dreams are the key to everything. 远大的理想是开启万物 的钥匙。 3.Time flies when you’re having fun. 快乐的时光总是飞逝。 15 针对训练 1.I enjoy some free time after working hard in class. （用It’s necessary for sb. to do sth. 句型升格句子） ________________________________________________________ ______________ It’s necessary for me to enjoy some free time after working hard in class. 2.We got to Beijing. We went to see the Palace Museum. （用as soon as引导的时间状语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ _________ We went to see the Palace Museum as soon as we got to Beijing. 16 3.I plan to have a picnic in the park with my family. （用spend扩写句子） ________________________________________________________ ___________________ I plan to spend a wonderful time with my family having a picnic in the park. 4.I want to travel around. I can know more about the culture in our country.（用so that引导的目的状语从句升格句子） ________________________________________________________ _______________________ I want to travel around so that I can know more about the culture in our country. 17 5.We had a wonderful time during the trip.（用although引导的 让步状语从句扩写句子） ________________________________________________________ _____________________ Although the weather was terrible, we still had a wonderful time during the trip. 6.Running keeps us healthy. Running makes us more energetic. （用not only…but also…升格句子） ________________________________________________________ __________ Running not only keeps us healthy but also makes us more energetic. 18 二阶 典例探究明思路 19 （2024齐齐哈尔改编）时光飞逝，难忘的初中生活即将结束， 你们将迎来一个轻松、愉快的假期。假如你是李斌，你的朋友向 你询问你是如何将这个假期过得有意义的。请根据下面的思维导 图，给你的朋友Tom回一封邮件，介绍你假期生活的规划。 20 21 要求： 1.文章应包含导图所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） 22 Dear Tom, I will graduate from junior high school. During the vacation, I’ll do something meaningful and prepare well for the future. I am willing to tell you about it. _______________________________________________________ Yours, Li Bin 23 写作剖析 一、仔细审题 ①文体：本文是一篇________； ②人称：介绍自己的暑假计划以第____人称为主； ③时态：介绍假期计划以____________为主； ④写作要点：三项要点，分别是：_______________； _________________；____________________。 应用文 一 一般将来时 Relax yourself Improve yourself Plan your new term 24 二、构思框架 25 三、分阶范文 初阶 范文 ___________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ Firstly, I plan to go on a picnic in the park with my family. I also want to show my care for my parents. Dear Tom, I will graduate from junior high school. During the vacation, I’ll do something meaningful and prepare well for the future. I am willing to tell you about it. 26 初阶 范文 Next, I want to do much reading and learning. Besides, I want to help out around the community. For the coming new term, I’ll make a perfect plan to live a happy life. I hope you can also spend a meaningful vacation. Also, I hope to receive your reply as soon as possible. _______ ________ Yours, Li Bin 续表 27 高阶 范文 ___________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ __________________________________________________ First of all, I plan to spend wonderful time with my family by having a picnic in the park and cooking meals for my parents. Dear Tom, I will graduate from junior high school. During the vacation, I’ll do something meaningful and prepare well for the future. I am willing to tell you about it. 续表 28 高阶 范文 I also want to show my care for my parents by sharing some chores. Besides, in order to improve myself, I’ll read some books that I like and learn some new knowledge, because reading makes a full man. What’s more, I want to help out around the community. For the coming new term, I’ll make a perfect plan to live a happy life. 续表 29 高阶 范文 I hope you can also spend a wonderful and meaningful vacation. Also, I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. _______ ________ Yours, Li Bin 续表 30 我来点评： 1.Content：______________________________________________ ________________ 2.Structure：____________________________________________ _______________________ 3.Logic：________________________________________________ ____________________________ 高阶范文内容更为充实，主要体现在每个要点及其要点的支撑句上； 结构完整，包含题目中要求的要点及相应要点支撑，同时也包含结束语； 巧用衔接词，如：First of all， Besides， What’s more，使得文章逻辑更加清晰； 31 4.Highlight expression：__________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ①使用介词短语做状语，充实句子语 境，且使用了plan to do sth., spend…with等亮点短语和搭配 ［高阶范文第二段第一句］；②用in order to…作目的状语，使 得后面的行动更有说服力［高阶范文第二段第三句］；③使用谚 语“reading makes a full man”使得叙述更加深刻且有说服力。 32 三阶 写作实战提能力 33 假如你叫Lin Hui，你的笔友Sam对你 在西安的生活非常感兴趣，请你根据下面 的思维导图，给Sam写一封回信。 34 要求： 1.文章应包含导图中所给的关键信息，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3.文章中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4.词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） 35 Dear Sam, I’m glad you’re so interested in my life in Xi’an. Now let me introduce it to you. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ First of all, since living in Xi’an for so many years, I have a best friend named Li Lei. We have a lot in common and a lot of differences. We like to play sports and we often play basketball together after school. He is taller than me. 36 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ He is outgoing while I am quiet. Secondly, I usually play computer games in my free time. And for my health, I also play basketball for half an hour every day. Thirdly, my favorite place is the library, because it is a good place to study. Besides, there are too many books which I am interested in. Finally, as for my dream, I want to be a teacher when I grow up. Because I like to stay with children and get along well with them. ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ Yours, Lin Hui This is my life in Xi’an. Can you tell me about your life and dream? Looking forward to your reply. 39 $$