专题14 投诉信 - 2025年冲刺高考英语万能黄金作文模板

应用文写作万能模板投诉信 1 命题立意 问题 应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。 命题依据 题型分析 从《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版2020年修订）中看书面表达要求： 1.审题不清 2.时态混乱 5.结构失衡 6.语法错误 3.拼写错误 7.汉式思维 4.句型单一 8.书写不整洁 学情分析 高阶模板 Dear____________(对方称呼) My name is____________ I am writing this letter to complain _____________(投诉对象/事件). The reason for my dissatisfaction is____________(投诉的主要问题(原因)、For one thing,____________(投诉原因一) For another ,____________(投诉原因二)、Under these circumstances, I find it____________(投诉对象带来的影响) Frankly speaking. if effective measures are not taken. it will _____________(导致更严重后果)、I do hope that you could____________(预期的改进)as soon as possible. Sincerely yours, ____________ Dear John, My name is Li Hua, one of your students. I am writing this letter to complain the dishonesty in the exam. The reason for my dissatisfaction is that I noticed that some students secretly exchanged answers with each other, or took cheat sheets with them during the exam, which definitely ruined the fairness of the exam as well as the promising future for those who had cheated.Under these circumstances, I find the dishonest behavior should be investigated and that the cheaters should pay for their dishonesty. I do hope that you could take my request into consideration as soon as possible. Sincerely yours, Li Hua （八省八校2024届高三第一次学业质量评价（T8联考）） 假定你是李华，在外教课期末考试中发现有人作弊，你认为这会影响考试公平。请你给外教John写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.情况描述； 2.你的看法； 3.你的请求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 模板套用 通用模板 Dear____________(对方称呼) I am writing to make a complaint about _________ What annoyed me most is that____________(抱怨的内容)/ It is a great pity that I was disappointed with ____________(抱怨的内容)/ I will be glad if you could replace it with a new one at your earliest convenience./ I wonder if I could demand a refund. I'd appreciate it if you have this problem settled as soon as possible. Yours sincerely， Li Hua Dear Customer Service, I am writing to make a complaint about an electronic dictionary in your online shopping mall last week. What annoyed me most is that the electronic dictionary often went into automatic shutdown for no reason, which brought great inconvenience to my use of the product. It is a great pity that I was disappointed with the service of the store, refusing my exchange request and even ignoring my complaint. I will be glad if you could replace it with a new one at your earliest convenience. I'd appreciate it if you have this problem settled as soon as possible. Yours sincerely， Li Hua （湖南天壹名校联盟：五市十校教研教改共同体·2024届高三12月大联考） 假定你是李华，上周你在国外某购物网站买了一台电子词典，发现质量有问题，跟店家沟通无果后，决定给商城的官方客服写一封邮件，内容包括： 1.写信目的；2.质量问题；3.你的诉求。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 模板套用 第一部分：说明投诉原因 1. I’m writingto make a complaint about your standard service. 我写信是为了投诉你们的服务质量。 2. I’m .., a customer whobought...from your website several days ago. I am writing to you to complainabout…. 我是…., 你们的一位顾客，几天前从你们的网站上购买了……，我写信向你投诉…… 3. I’m writingto express my dissatisfaction with your unfriendly attitude to customers. 我写信表达我对你们对顾客不友好的态度表示不满。 第二部分：说明投诉问题，并说明问题带来的后果 1. During my stay at your hotel, the service in yourhotel leftmuch to be desired 我在住宿期间发现你家宾馆有许多要改进的地方. 2. I’m completely disappointed to find…. 当我发现….，我彻底失望了。 3. Can youarrange a new one for me as soon as possible ? 你们能尽快给我换新的吗？ 4. I do hopethat someone will take effective measures to deal with this matter. 我希望有人能采取有效的措施解决这个问题。 第三部分：提出合理的建议或期待回复 1.I do hope you will give attention to thematter. 2.I would appreciate it if you could give me asatisfactory reply as soon as possible. 3.I’m really disappointed with your service, and I hope you will betteryour service in case the same matter arises again in the future. 评价修改 Self-assessment Peer-assessment  self-correction 备考策略-学生篇 重视复盘 针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训 重视阅读 精读与泛读相结合 读书破万卷,下笔如有神 重视细节 规范拼写,坚持练字; 正确运用时态,标点等 重视运用 有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中 重视积累 积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等 备考策略 1 2 3 4 5 6 重视评改 品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平 13 愉 Thank you for your listening ! 14 $$