专题13 祝贺信 - 2025年冲刺高考英语万能黄金作文模板

应用文写作万能模板祝贺信 1 命题立意 问题 应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。 命题依据 题型分析 从《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版2020年修订）中看书面表达要求： 1.审题不清 2.时态混乱 5.结构失衡 6.语法错误 3.拼写错误 7.汉式思维 4.句型单一 8.书写不整洁 学情分析 高阶模板 Dear Mrs Wang , This highlight moment in your life prompts me to write at once, and in my peculiar way, to attempt to offer my warmest congratulations. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ... . I’m amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it is difficult to ... It is your untiring diligence, perseverance and immense devotion that stand you out in the crowd. What deserves being emphasized is that it is your consistent efforts that push you to this level. If possible, ... I have confidence that you will gain more shinning achievement in your future life. I shall,one more time, offer you my sincerest congratulations.All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Mrs Wang , This highlight moment in your life prompts me to write at once, and in my peculiar way, to attempt to offer my warmest congratulations. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the "Chinese Idioms" contest held by your school's Chinese Learning Club, which came as no surprise. I’m amazed at your extraordinary achievement since it is difficult to study Chinese idioms. It is your untiring diligence, perseverance and immense devotion that stand you out in the crowd. What deserves being emphasized is that it is your consistent efforts that push you to this level. If possible,wish you new and greater progress in the journey of your Chinese study! I have confidence that you will gain more shinning achievement in your future life. I shall,one more time, offer you my sincerest congratulations.All my best wishes for an even more prosperous future. Yours sincerely, Li Hua （湖南省长沙市长郡中学2023-2024学年高三下学期） 假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Chris来邮件与你分享了他参加了他们学校中文学习俱乐部开展的“中国成语(Chinese Idioms)”比赛，并获得了冠军的消息。请你给他写一封回信。要求如下： 1.表达祝贺；2.肯定努力；3.表达祝愿。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。 模板套用 通用模板 Dear_______, (首段祝贺) Congratulations on your _______ . It was delightful for me to hear that ______________ . I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your ___________. (评论事件) I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work / your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Now you prove to me a mature and well-rounded（全面的）________in every respect. (展望未来，再次祝愿) Judging from your current success / achievement, I am confident that in the future ___________ . Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on ______. May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams! Yours， ___________ Dear Chris, Congratulations on your winning the championship in the interschool basketball game last week, which came as no surprise.It was delightful for me to hear that you win the championship. I know how hard you have been working and I am very proud of you for your achievement. Please accept my sincere congratulations on your winning the championship in the interschool basketball game. I have been watching your progress with admiration all the years, and I understand for sure that it is your hard work and your excellent ability that leads you to the current success. Again, I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your winning the championship in the interschool basketball game. May all the years ahead fulfill your dreams! Yours， ___________ （英语周报2023年度春季学期高一课标第59期高一英语下学期总复习三） 假定你是李华，收到外国朋友Chris的邮件，告诉你他所在的球队上周在校际篮球赛（interschool basketball game）中获得冠军。请给他回一封邮件，祝贺他取得的好成绩，并赞赏他付出的努力。 注意：写作词数应为80左右。 模板套用 第一部分：表达写信目的“祝贺对方事由” 1 am very happy to hear that＋句子 (you have won the first prize in...) 1 am much delighted to learn that＋句子 I have learned with delight that＋句子 It is really exciting to know/ to be informed that I am writing to offer you my sincerest congratulations on sth. (your winning the prize.) Hearing the news that you..., I was unable to contain my excitement Congratulations on your exam results/ Congratulate you on... Congratulations! We are all proud of your remarkable achievements. 第二部分：表达对其成功进行积极的评价 1．兴趣与天赋 There is no doubt that/Undoubtedly, you are particularly interested in Playing tennis. There is nodenying that your success partly lies in your talent for tennis. 2．自身的努力 No one can deny your effort in the past days, which made it possible for you to... Despite a great challenge, you spared no effort to train yourself hard. 3．比赛的表现及总结 You showed persistence in the competition, which contributed to your final success. Your excellent performances proved your power and strength. You deserved the prize/to win the competition due to the faith, effort and courage you showed. 第三部分：再次表达祝贺以及对未来的祝福 Again, I’d like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt congratulations and best wishes to you. I wish you greater success in the future. My best wishes for your future success. Best wishes for your even greater /betterprogress in the future. 评价修改 Self-assessment Peer-assessment  self-correction 备考策略-学生篇 重视复盘 针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训 重视阅读 精读与泛读相结合 读书破万卷,下笔如有神 重视细节 规范拼写,坚持练字; 正确运用时态,标点等 重视运用 有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中 重视积累 积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等 备考策略 1 2 3 4 5 6 重视评改 品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平 13 愉 Thank you for your listening ! 14 $$