专题07 求助信 - 2025年冲刺高考英语万能黄金作文模板

应用文写作万能模板求助信 1 命题立意 问题 应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。 命题依据 题型分析 从《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版2020年修订）中看书面表达要求： 1.审题不清 2.时态混乱 5.结构失衡 6.语法错误 3.拼写错误 7.汉式思维 4.句型单一 8.书写不整洁 学情分析 高阶模板 Dear Mrs Wang , How are you doing these days? As .... is approaching, I find it still  challenging to .... . Thus, I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. First, I have trouble in .... . What’s more, .... is also very difficult for me to do. Furthermore,what troubles me most is that .... Would you please take the trouble to .... ? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. Should you be kind enough to reply to me promptly, I would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Miss Evans , How are you doing these days? As New Year's Day is approaching, I find it still  challenging to preparing for the Charming English Night. Thus, I am writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. First, I have trouble in crafting a wide range of captivating activities, featuring speech contests, singing performances, short dramas, and the like. What’s more, creating a platform where students can not only learn through fun and challenge themselves to use English in practice, but also deepen their friendship and mutual understanding is also very difficult for me to do. Furthermore,what troubles me most is that our club is bustling with preparations for the Charming English Night. Would you please take the trouble to review our plan and give your opinions and advice? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. Should you be kind enough to reply to me promptly, I would be highly appreciated. Yours sincerely, Li Hua· （邕衡教育·名校联盟2024年~2025年度上学期高三年级12月联考试题卷） 假定你是红星中学英语俱乐部的主席李华，负责策划学校元旦将举办的“魅力英语”之夜。为了活动的成功举办，请你代表俱乐部给外教Black写一封邮件， 内容包括：1.介绍方案；2.征求建议。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.词汇：“Charming English”“魅力英语” 模板套用 通用模板 How are you doing these days? (求助熟悉的人需要寒暄问候一下) I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. (说明写信目的) Faced with so many problems, I have to turn to you for help. First, I have trouble in ________遇到的困难1_________. What’s more, _____遇到的困难2______ is also very difficult for me to do. (中间段具体说明困难) Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to_________so that I can ________more easily? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply.（表达谢意，期待来信） How are you doing these days? I’m writing to you in the hope of seeking for help. Faced with so many problems, I have to turn to you for help. First, I have trouble in academic pressure，especially when it comes to science subjects.I find it so difficult to move forward in my learning as to doubt my ability. What’s more,despite my strong emphasis on getting along with my friends, at times I'm bothered by misunderstandings and disputes, leaving me at a loss how to better address and solve them.Would you like to introduce to me some good ways to how to strike a balance between study and life, and manage interpersonal connections? I do believe you can help me solve these puzzles. I would be greatly grateful to you if you could lend me a helping hand. I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply. （华中师范大学新高考联盟2025届高三第二次教学质量测评） 假定你是高中生李华，你看到外教Catherine在个人博客开设了“Growing Pains”栏目，请你给该栏目写一篇帖子，内容包括：1.你成长中的烦恼； 2.你希望获得的帮助。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卷的相应位置作答。 模板套用 第一部分：自我介绍，开门见山表明写作意图 ①As final exam is approaching, I find it still challenging to devote myself to my study. Thus, I am writing to you for some instructive guidance. 随着期末考试的临近，我发现自己仍然很难投入学习。因此，我写信给你，希望得到一些有益的指导。 ②Burdened with quantities of academic and personal affairs, I'm feeling exhausted everyday and always get sleepy in class. Therefore, with full expectation, I want to ask you for some way out. 由于学业和个人事务的繁重，我每天都感到精疲力尽，上课时总是昏昏欲睡。因此，带着满满的期待，我想向你询问一些建议。 ③These days I have been struggling with my English learning. Therefore, your help is badly needed. 这些天我一直在努力学习英语。因此，我非常需要你的帮助。 ④Faced with the challenge of learning English well, I'm writing for your generous help and assistance. 面对学好英语的困难，我写信来希望得到你的慷慨帮助。 ⑤I’m writing this letter, hoping that you could do me a favor with improving my pronunciation. 我在写这封信，希望你能帮我改善发音。 第二部分：详述描述遇到的问题，具体问题1，具体问题2 1.In pursuing the improvement of my vocabulary, I have spent countless spare time on it. Nonetheless, it remains impossible for me to reach 60 percent accuracy, which troubles me a lot. 为了提高我的词汇量，我花了不少的闲余时间去背记他们。可尽管如此，我仍然不能达到60%的准确率，这让我头疼得很。 2.Steady progress was made in my pronunciation, but I find that communicating with native speakers in English remains a big headache to me. 我的发音持续进步，但我发现用英语与以英语为母语的人交流仍然是我的一大难题。 3.Though reading a good many of books and being taught by teachers with high quality, it remains hard for me to put what I learned into effect and make huge change. 虽然我已经读过不少书，而且也听过很多名师的教诲，但是我仍然很难把我学到的东西付诸实践，做出巨大的改变。 4.Furthermore/Plus, what troubles me most is that the more I learn, the less scores I get. 此外，最让我烦恼的是，我学的越多，得到的分数反而更少。 第三部分：表达感谢/期待 1.Hopefully, you could spare some time to offer me some guidance on it, which surely could benefit me a lot. 希望你能抽出一些时间给我一些指导，那一定会对我大有裨益。 2.Should you be kind to reply to me promptly I would be highly appreciated. 如果你能及时答复我，我将非常感谢。 3.I would be very appreciative/grateful/thankful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience. Thank you in advance. 如果您能在方便的时候尽早给我答复，我将不胜感激。提前感谢啦。 评价修改 Self-assessment Peer-assessment  self-correction 备考策略-学生篇 重视复盘 针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训 重视阅读 精读与泛读相结合 读书破万卷,下笔如有神 重视细节 规范拼写,坚持练字; 正确运用时态,标点等 重视运用 有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中 重视积累 积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等 备考策略 1 2 3 4 5 6 重视评改 品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平 13 愉 Thank you for your listening ! 14 $$