内容正文:
应用文写作万能模板感谢信
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命题立意
问题
应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思;有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。
命题依据
题型分析
从《普通高中英语课程标准》(2017年版2020年修订)中看书面表达要求:
1.审题不清
2.时态混乱
5.结构失衡
6.语法错误
3.拼写错误
7.汉式思维
4.句型单一
8.书写不整洁
学情分析
高阶模板
Dear Mrs Wang ,
With deepest gratitude, I am writing to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for ..., without which I wouldn’t have ...
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me .... Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in ...Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for ... and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence.
No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Tom ,
With deepest gratitude, I am writing to convey my heartfelt thanks to you for your warm hospitality during the vacation, which impressed me with the great beauty and charm of your hometown.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me those cherished moments when I enjoyed the captivating stories about your hometown as we strolled along the shore. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out.Upon returning home, I found myself still immersed in the pleasant moments we shared together.
No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am. I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(全国九省联考2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考)
假定你是李华,假期你去留学生Tom的家乡游玩时受到了他的热情款待。请你给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:1.表示谢意;2.回忆难忘的瞬间。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Thanks again and I’m looking forward to seeing you in China soon!
模板套用
通用模板
Dear××,
How about your life? I'm writing to thank you for 感谢的原因.
During得到帮助的时间,you对方的帮助之一.Besides,you对方的帮助之二.What's more,you对方的帮助之三.Without your assistance, I fear I would have been没有对方帮助的结果.
Thank you for your kindness again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Dear Judy,
How about your life? I'm writing to thank you for the warm hospitality you have given me during my vacation.
During my visit,you showed me around the attractions of your hometown, gave me a deep insight into local customs, and prepared the authentic hometown cuisine by yourself, the flavor of which still lingers in my mind with an endless aftertaste.Besides, devoted your time to keeping me company and helping me learn more about the local culture and history, which strengthened my emotional bond with your hometown.What's more,your warmth and thoughtfulness brought me a remarkable journey.
Thank you for your kindness again.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(浙江省A9协作体2024学年第一学期高二年级暑假返校考)
假设你是李华,假期去留学生Judy的家乡游玩时收到了她的热情款待。请你给她写一封邮件表达谢意,
内容包括:1.写邮件目的;
2.得到好友的哪些款待;
3.表达谢意。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
模板套用
第一部分:表达感谢之情并说明原因
I am writing this letter to thank you for …
I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt (adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for…
With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express…
I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for …
I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...…
I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...
第二部分:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助
It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..
Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit…
It was your kind he lp that … (强调句型)
If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assis tance), I wouldn’t have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)
=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done…
第三部分:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望
Thanks again for your generous help.
I appreciate it more than I can say.
My true gratitude is beyond the word’s description.
I feel deeply indebt ed to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.
Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.
Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.
评价修改
Self-assessment Peer-assessment self-correction
备考策略-学生篇
重视复盘
针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训
重视阅读
精读与泛读相结合
读书破万卷,下笔如有神
重视细节
规范拼写,坚持练字;
正确运用时态,标点等
重视运用
有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中
重视积累
积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等
备考策略
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重视评改
品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平
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愉
Thank you for your listening !
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