专题04 报道 - 2025年冲刺高考英语万能黄金作文模板

应用文写作万能模板报道 1 命题立意 问题 应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。 命题依据 题型分析 从《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版2020年修订）中看书面表达要求： 1.审题不清 2.时态混乱 5.结构失衡 6.语法错误 3.拼写错误 7.汉式思维 4.句型单一 8.书写不整洁 学情分析 高阶模板 With the purpose of ..., our school launched ...in ...on ..., which turned out to be a huge success. In the beginning, a wonderful performance warmed up all the participants. After that, students from each class .... At noon, the host announced that ...Most of the students think highly of this ...，which provides a platform for them to ... The ... is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded. Not only .... but also .... We all hope more activities will be held in the future.　 A Virtual Tour Around China With the purpose of adding variety to students' extracurricular activities and ignite their interest in science and technology, our school launched a virtual tour around China in our school's Science Club last week, which turned out to be a huge success. In the beginning, a wonderful performance warmed up all the participants. After that, students from each class wearing VR headsets. At noon, the host announced that students found themselves immersed in a journey through renowned landmarks of our motherland, including the zigzagging Great Wall, the picturesque West Lake, the magnificent Terracotta Warriors, to name just a few. Most of the students think highly of this event，which provides a platform for them to explore science and technology. The event is so meaningful that we all feel rewarded. Not only did the advanced VR technology bring the students a visual feast of China’s scenic wonders, but also it gained them the extensive and profound wisdom of Chinese culture. We all hope more activities will be held in the future.　 （浙江省五校联盟2025年1月选考） 假如你是校英文报编辑李华，你校科技社团在上周举行了一个“用VR 游中国”（A Virtual Tour around China）体验活动，让同学们能够通过VR眼镜游览祖国著名景点。请你在校英文报上撰写一则新闻稿，内容包括：1.活动介绍；2.活动反响。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 A Virtual Tour Around China 模板套用 通用模板 ______ (标题) ______(时间或地点) saw/witnessed ______(活动). Aimed at ______(活动目的), this activity was well received in the whole school. ______(参与者) took an active part in the activity. The ______(活动) provided a platform for all the students to ______(活动内容一). Most impressively, ______(活动内容二). With the students' active participation and teachers' enthusiastic support, the ______(活动) was undoubtedly a success.（This activity was highly spoken of by students, for it motivated them to______(影响).） The 80"Anniversary Celebration These days saw/witnessed the 80"Anniversary Celebration of our school in the stadium. Aimed at sharing the remarkable accomplishments of our school, this activity was well received in the whole school. Many students took an active part in the activity. The celebration provided a platform for all the students to enjoy a dynamic showcase of the talent of both teachers and students. Most impressively, the alumni forum served as a platform featuring shared triumphs, boosting both the pride and recognition of our school. With the students' active participation and teachers' enthusiastic support, the celebration was undoubtedly a success.（This activity was highly spoken of by students, for it motivated them to continue to boom, building on its past achievements and creating new glories! （重庆市2025届高三第四次质量检测） 假设你是李华，是校报英语专栏的记者。你的学校刚刚举行了建校八十周年的系列庆典活动。请你根据以下要点用英语写一篇报道。 内容包括：1.活动时间及地点； 2.活动内容和影响； 3.简短评论。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The 80"Anniversary Celebration 模板套用 第一部分：介绍活动举办的目的、时间、地点、原因等信息 1.in memory of...为了纪念…… 2.relieve/release great pressure from...缓解来自……的巨大压力 3.enrich our school life 丰富我们的校园生活 4.strengthen our friendship 增进我们的友谊 5.raise awareness of...增强……的意识 6.enhance physical fitness 提升身体素质 7.broaden our horizons 开阔我们的眼界 8.enrich our knowledge about the environmint 丰富我们的环境知识 【相关句式】 1.In order to/ With the purpose of.../ With the aim of... 为了…… 2.To make more students learn more about... 为了让学生学习更多的…… 3.To provide a chance for students to do... 为了给学生提供一个……的机会。 4.In order to let students have a better understanding of... 为了让学生对……有更好的了解。 第二部分：介绍活动过程 1.initially/ first and foremost/ first of all/in the first place/ to begin with/ in the beginning 首先 2.besides/ additionally/ in addition/ what’s more/ furthermore 另外 3.more importantly 更为重要的是 4.last but not least 最后但同样重要的 5.most importantly 最重要的是 1.Tired as we were， we found it interesting to take part in... 尽管很累，我们发现参加……还是很有趣的。 2.We had a better understanding of...through the activity. 通过这项活动，我们对……有了更好的了解。 3.Looking back， I really appreciate the activity， for it not only...but also... 回想起来，我真的特别喜欢这项活动，因为它不但……而且…… 4.This activity turned out to be a success. 这项活动很成功。 5.The activity is of great importance， which provides us with a chance to... 这项活动意义非凡，它给我们提供了一个……的机会。 6.This is really an unforgettable and rewarding activity， which made a deep impressions on everyone. 这真的是一项令人难忘且有益的活动，它给每个人都留下了深刻的印象。 第三部分：活动评价与感受 1.感受类：exhausted but excited, delighted, relaxed,competitive 2.活动类：interesting, meaningful, rewarding, successful, beneficial, unforgettable 3.收获类：friendship, teamwork, relaxation, fun 1.It was this activity that further deepened the relationship between the teacher and us students. 正是这一活动，进一步加深了教师和我们学生之间的关系。 2.Only through this experience did I realize that it’s our responsibility to protect and inherit our cultural treasure. 直到通过这次经历，我才意识到保护和继承我们的文化瑰宝是我们的责任。 3.Not only does the activity broaden my horizons but it also inspires me to work harder. 这项活动不仅开阔了我的视野，而且还激励着我更加努力地工作。 评价修改 Self-assessment Peer-assessment  self-correction 备考策略-学生篇 重视复盘 针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训 重视阅读 精读与泛读相结合 读书破万卷,下笔如有神 重视细节 规范拼写,坚持练字; 正确运用时态,标点等 重视运用 有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中 重视积累 积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等 备考策略 1 2 3 4 5 6 重视评改 品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平 13 愉 Thank you for your listening ! 14 $$