内容正文:
Period 3
Unit 1
Managing yourself
Integrated skills
本单元的写作话题是“提升自信”。要求学生阅读一篇关于自信的文章,并让学生结合自身的经历和理解写一篇关于自信的文章。文章应主要分析缺乏自信的原因,阐述提升自信的方法。
篇章结构
Para.1:Introduction to self-confidence
Para.2:Causes and effects of low self-confidence
Para.3:Ways to improve self-confidence
Para.4:Conclusion
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一、三人称为主
语言特征:客观描述;简明扼要
Self-confidence
注意事项
常用表达
1.Low self-confidence makes you feel unsuccessful,unmotivated and inferior to others.
缺乏自信会让你觉得自己不成功,没有动力,不如别人。
2.Sometimes a lack of self-confidence stems merely from a lack of experience.
有时缺乏自信仅仅因为缺乏经验。
3.In building self-confidence,your first goal is to develop a realistic understanding of your strengths and weaknesses.
建立自信的过程中,你的第一个目标是对自己的优点和缺点有一个实际的了解。
4.Once you have a full understanding of your problem,you will find that your fear decreases.
一旦你对问题有了一个全面了解,你会发现恐惧越来越少。
5.Change your behavior.改变你的行为。
6.Picture yourself as a stranger who is on a path toward positive change.
将自己想象为一个正在向积极方面改变的陌生人。
实践演练
近段时间以来,随着学习压力的增大,你发现身边的很多同学越来越没有自信了。为帮助他们提高自信心,请以Self-confidence Builds a Better Self为题写一篇文章。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步 审题谋篇
[审题]
写作要求是写关于如何提升自信的文章,写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇说明文。写作时注意说明文的写作特点。
2.主体时态:文章应以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称:由于是写如何提升自信,所以人称应该以第一、三人称为主。
[谋篇]
第一段:开门见山说明同学们缺乏自信的现状,并对自信作简要的描述。
第二段:简要介绍缺乏自信的原因及随之带来的后果。
第三段:介绍一些适当的、切实可行的提高自信的方法。
第二步 遣词造句
[核心词汇]
1.源于,产生于 __________
2.承认 ______
3.发生 ______
4.家庭环境 _________________
5.消极经历 ___________________
negative experiences
home environment
occur
admit
arise from
6.欺凌 _________
7.影响 ______
8.积极的自我形象 ___________________
9.设定切实可行的目标 ________________
10.建立一个更好的自我 ________________
bullying
affect
a positive self-image
set realistic goals
build a better self
[连词成句]
1.众所周知,自信源于各种行为和态度的结合。它还包括在承认自己错了之后,不要害怕改变自己的想法。
As we all know,self-confidence _________________________________
_______________________.
It is also about not being afraid to change our minds about something ___________________________.
2.缺乏自信往往是由于各种原因造成的。
Low self-confidence often .
arises from a combination of various
behaviours and attitudes
after admitting we are wrong
occurs due to various reasons
3.然后我们可能让自信不足伴随着我们,这会在许多方面影响我们的生活。
We may then carry our low self-confidence with us,which will ______
_____________________.
4.设定切实可行的目标,想象自己实现这些目标。
achieving these goals.
5.我们只有通过控制自信才能建立一个更好的自我。
We controlling self-confidence.
our lives in many ways
affect
Set realistic goals and visualize yourself
can build a better self only by
第三步 句式升级
1.用not only...but also...改写句1。
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2.用现在分词结构改写句3。
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As we all know,self-confidence not only arises from a combination of various behaviours and attitudes,but also is about not being afraid to change our minds about something after admitting we are wrong.
We may then carry our low self-confidence with us,affecting our lives in many ways.
3.用倒装句改写句5。
_____________________________________________________________
Only by controlling self-confidence can we build a better self.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。
参考范文
Self-confidence Builds a Better Self
With the pressure of study increasing,more and more students lack self-confidence.As we all know,self-confidence not only arises from a combination of various behaviours and attitudes,but also is about not being afraid to change our minds about something after admitting we are wrong.
Low self-confidence often occurs due to various reasons.One is the home environment in which we grow and develop. Another reason is negative experiences like bullying.We may then carry our low self-confidence with us,affecting our lives in many ways.
Low self-confidence cannot always be avoided;however,it can be improved.A good place to start is by changing the way we think about ourselves.Having a positive self-image can reduce negative thinking. Next,set realistic goals and visualize yourself achieving these goals.Finally,permit yourself to make mistakes. In conclusion,only by controlling self-confidence can we build a better self.
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