内容正文:
Unit 1
Beware and take care
Period 3
Integrated skills
本单元的写作目标是写一篇号召大家警惕网络犯罪的说理性文章,属于说明文的范畴。注意说明文的写作特点。
篇章结构
可以分为四段:
第一段:简单介绍话题;
第二段:分述话题类型;
第三段:详细讲解措施;
第四段:结论。
注意事项
时态:一般现在时为主;
人称:第三人称为主。
常用表达
1.It is not surprising that...
……并不奇怪。
2.Consequently...has become a huge problem in recent years.
因此……在最近几年已经成为一个严重的问题。
3.We can take preventive measures to...
我们可以采取预防措施来……
4.First of all,don’t...so as to...
首先,不要……以便……
5.Last but not least,it is also a good idea to...
最后但同样重要的是,……也是一个好主意。
6.In conclusion,through these measures,we can...
总之,通过这些措施,我们可以……
实践演练
随着网络的普及,网络犯罪问题成为大家关注的一个焦点。李华所在的班级围绕网络犯罪问题召开了主题班会,假定你是李华,请以“Cybercrime:Don’t Let It Hack Your Life!”为标题写一篇短文,号召大家在日常生活中警惕网络犯罪。主要需包括以下内容:
1.网络使用和网络犯罪的现状;
2.提出建议(如警惕虚假广告、不打开来源不明的链接、安装最新的安全补丁等)。
参考词汇:钓鱼网站phishing;恶意软件 malware
第一步 审题谋篇
[审题]
写作要求是写一篇关于网络犯罪问题的说理性文章,写作时应注意下面几点:
1.确定文体:这是一篇说理性文章,属于说明文的范畴。
2.主体时态:以一般现在时为主。
3.主体人称:以第三人称为主。
[谋篇]
第一段:简单介绍网络使用和网络犯罪的现状。
第二段:介绍网络犯罪的类型和危害。
第三段:提出预防网络犯罪的建议。
第四段:结论。
第二步 遣词造句
[核心词汇]
1.有……的风险 _______________________
2.采取预防措施 _______________________
3.成为……的受害者 _______________________
4.谨慎对待 _______________________
5.折扣商品 _______________________
6.链接 _______________________
7.安装 _______________________
8.补丁 _______________________
run the risk of
take preventive measures
fall victims to
be cautious about
bargain
attachment
install
patch
[连词成句]
1.我们都有经历网络犯罪的风险,这并不奇怪。
Not surprisingly,we all .
2.网络犯罪的常见类型包括钓鱼网站和恶意软件。
Common types of cybercrime .
3.通过钓鱼网站和恶意软件,犯罪分子获取我们的个人信息并破坏我们的电脑。
Through phishing and malware,__________________________________
.
include phishing and malware
and damage our computers
criminals gain our personal information
run the risk of experiencing cybercrime
4.首先,要警惕那些提供看起来好却不真实的折扣商品的广告。
First of all,be cautious about advertisements that ___________________
.
5.最后但同样重要的是,通过安装最新的安全补丁来保持您的软件和操作系统最新也是一个好主意。
Last but not least,______________________________________________
by installing the latest security patches.
offer bargains that
seem too good to be true
it is also a good idea to keep your software and
operating system up to date
第三步 句式升级
1.用it作形式主语改写句1。
______________________________________________________________
2.用非限制性定语从句将句2和句3合并。
______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________
3.用分词作定语改写句4。
______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________
It is not surprising that we all run the risk of experiencing cybercrime.
Common types of cybercrime include phishing and malware,through which criminals gain our personal information and damage our computers.
First of all,be cautious about advertisements offering bargains that seem too good to be true.
第四步 组句成篇
用适当的过渡词语,把以上词汇和句式,再加上联想内容,组成一篇英语短文。
参考范文
Cybercrime:Don’t Let It Hack Your Life!
So far,there have been billions of Internet users globally.It is not surprising that we all run the risk of experiencing cybercrime.
Common types of cybercrime include phishing and malware,through which criminals gain our personal information and damage our computers.
Fortunately,we can take preventive measures to reduce our chances of falling victims to such cybercrimes.First of all,be cautious about advertisements offering bargains that seem too good to be true.Secondly,do not open email attachments or click on links from unknown sources.Last but not least,it is also a good idea to keep your software and operating system up to date by installing the latest security patches.
In conclusion,through preventive behaviour,we can stop cybercrime in its tracks!
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