内容正文:
2025贵州
英 语
话题写作指导册
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第一部分 话题写作三阶指导
人与自然
话题十 环境保护
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【话题分析】
1.贵州近7年中考:暂未考查过。
2.近3年全国中考写作角度:①介绍某地环境污染问题以及现在
的变化;②介绍中学生保护环境的行为;③号召共建绿色校园。
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【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
七(下)Unit 5 介绍动物
九(全)Unit 13
环境保护 八(上)Unit 4 Topic 1
动物与植物
九(上)Unit 2 Topics 1-2
环境问题
九(上)Unit 2 Topic 3 环保措施
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一阶 素材积累
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短语与搭配
破坏环境的行为及影响
1.cut down 砍伐
2.pour waste water into 向……里排放废水
3.throw litter around/here and there 到处扔垃圾
4.waste water resource 浪费水资源
5.do harm to/be harmful to/be bad for 对……有害
6.become worse and worse 变得越来越糟糕
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保护环境的做法
1.turn off 关掉
2.clean up 打扫;清除
3.recycle books and paper 回收利用书和纸
4.stay/keep away from 远离……
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5.prevent… from polluting the environment
阻止……污染环境
6.protect… from… 保护……免受……
7.make a contribution/contributions to 为……做贡献
8.try one’s best to do sth. 尽某人的最大努力做某事
9.call on sb. to do sth. 号召某人做某事
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10.make a difference 起作用;有影响
11.make the earth a better place to live 让地球成为更美好的居
住地
12.take measures/steps/action to do sth. 采取措施/行动做某事
13.It’s our duty to do sth. 做某事是我们的责任。
【注:以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型/结构】
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开头句
1.The earth is our home. However, it is facing a lot of serious
problems.
2.As we all know, air pollution has become a serious problem.
[仁爱九(上)U2 P38]
3.As is known to everyone, animals are our friends. However,
many kinds of animals are in danger now.
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中间句
环境问题
1.The river was dirty. Even the bottom of the river was full of
rubbish. [人教九(上)U13 P97]
2.★Making a loud noise in public is also a kind of pollution. It
not only disturbs others but also does great harm to people’s
hearing. [仁爱九(上)U2 P31]
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3.★The more cars there are in the street, the more serious the
air pollution is.
4.★Many people can’t deal with the waste well and always use
plastic bags, which are bad for the environment.
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动物问题
1.Some people kill animals for their meat or fur.
2.★People cut down so many trees that animals can’t find
enough food and lose their homes.
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保护环境的行为
1.We should stop factories from pouring waste water into rivers
directly.
2.We can use energy-saving electricity lights instead of the
traditional lights.
3.★I never take wooden chopsticks or plastic forks when I buy
takeaway food. I use the ones at home. [人教九(上)U13
P98]
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4.★We encourage students to collect waste paper and soft drink
cans. Then we sort them so that they can be recycled. [仁爱
九(上)U2 P43]
5.★We can save water by taking shorter showers and turning
off the taps when we brush our teeth.
6.★Last but not least, it’s of great importance to stop using
plastic bags and wooden chopsticks.
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保护动物的行为
1.We should call on everyone not to kill endangered animals.
2.If possible, we can take part in some clubs to learn more
about wild animals and try to protect them.
3.★What’s more, we should advise the government to make
laws so that animals can get enough protection.
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共建绿色校园
1.Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers every year.
2.Secondly, to avoid waste, we reuse textbooks.
3.★Thirdly, each of us students is a cleaner. If we see garbage,
we will actively pick it up and put it in the bin.
4.★When we leave the classroom, we will turn off the lights.
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结尾句
号召一起行动
1.So together, our actions can make a difference and lead to a
better future! [人教九(上)U13 P98]
2.★I think it’s necessary for everyone to protect the
environment. If we work together, we can make the world a
better place.
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强调环保的重要性
1.★We should do everything we can do to protect the earth,
because we only have one earth.
2.★Only when we form the good habit of protecting the
environment, can we make the earth more beautiful tomorrow.
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俗语谚语
1.Save water, shame of waste. 节约用水,浪费可耻。
2.Clear waters and green mountains are golden hills and silver
mountains. 绿水青山就是金山银山。
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3.Don’t let our tears become the last drop of water on the earth.
不要让我们的眼泪成为地球上的最后一滴水。
4.Sharing the same sky, a total of a soil retaining. 同顶一片蓝
天,共护一方水土。
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使用上面句子中的高级句型/结构扩写或升格下列句子
1.Cars on the road burn oil. The oil causes air pollution.
(用which引导的定语从句升格句子)
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Cars on the road burn oil which causes air pollution.
2.Firstly, I will take public transportation.(用as much as
possible与when引导的时间状语从句扩写句子)
________________________________________________________
________________
Firstly, I will take public transportation as much as possible when I go out.
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3.I save water by watering the flowers with used water.
(用It’s necessary for… to do…升格句子)
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_________________
It’s necessary for me to save water by watering the flowers with used water.
4.It is better to use china cups and cloth bags. They can be
used many times.(用because引导的原因状语从句升格句子)
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It is better to use china cups and cloth bags because they can be used many times.
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5.I recycle more things and the earth will become cleaner.(用
“the+比较级,the+比较级”升格句子)
________________________________________________________
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The more things I recycle, the cleaner the earth will become.
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二阶 典例探究
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假如你是李华,你校校报正在开展以“A Greener City, a
Better Life”为题的英语征文活动。请你根据以下思维导图的提示,
用英语写一篇征文投稿,80词左右。
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要求如下:1.包含思维导图中的所有信息;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数;
3.征文中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
A Greener City, a Better Life
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一、细审题
1.文体:________;
2.人称:以第____人称为主;
3.时态:介绍建设绿色城市的做法,以____________为主。
说明文
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一般现在时
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二、搭框架、写要点
A Greener City, a Better Life
开头:引出话题,强调作为学生要做的事情
作为贵州的一名中学生 as a middle school student in Guizhou
帮助创建更绿色的城市 help create a greener city
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A Greener City, a Better Life
中间:介绍现在存在的问题以及你的建议
①现在存在的问题:
到处扔垃圾 drop litter ____________
忘记关灯、关水龙头 __________________ the lights or taps
everywhere
forget to turn off
续表
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A Greener City, a Better Life
②建议:
不应该到处扔垃圾 __________ drop litter everywhere
垃圾分类 separate the __________________________
多种花种树使城市更有生机 plant more trees and flowers
____________________________
步行或骑车去学校以减少空气污染 go to school on foot or by
bike to reduce _____________
shouldn’t
litter into different groups
to make our city more lively
air pollution
续表
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A Greener City, a Better Life
结尾:发出号召、表达期望
希望住在更环保的城市,过更好的生活 live in a greener city
and _________________
现在就采取行动。 Let’s take action now!
live a better life
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
A Greener City, a Better Life
As a middle school student in Guizhou, we should help
create a greener city.
However, some students drop litter everywhere. Some
students forget to turn off the lights or taps. ①______________
________________________________________________________
We shouldn’t drop litter everywhere so that we can create a greener city.
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②__________________________________________________
____________________________________________ ③
________________________________________________________
____________ Besides, we should go to school on foot or by
bike to reduce air pollution.
All in all, I wish we could live in a greener city and live
a better life. Let’s take action now!
【解析】点评:①处用so that引导的目的状语从句升格句子;②
处用whether引导的宾语从句;③处用It’s good to句型升格句子。
We can separate the litter into different groups according to whether it can be recycled or not.
It’s good to plant more trees and flowers to make our city more lively.
三阶 写作实战
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假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Alan上周来你校参观。回去后,
他给你发来邮件想了解更多关于你们学校的一些信息。请根据以
下内容,给他回复一封邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
I had a good time in your school last week. It is so
beautiful and clean. I want to know as students,
1.how you make the school green;
2.how you keep the school clean;
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3.how you reuse waste;
4.how you save energy.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Alan
续表
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参考词汇:plant种植;植物;environment环境;throw扔;bin垃
圾桶;sort the rubbish 垃圾分类;turn off 关闭;tap 水龙头
要求如下:1.回答邮件中的所有问题;
2.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
3.邮件中不得出现考生真实的个人信息。
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Dear Alan,
I am pleased to hear from you. I’m also glad you like
our school. Firstly, our school plants many trees and flowers
every year. Secondly, each of us students is a cleaner. If we
see garbage, we will actively pick it up and put it in the
bin. Thirdly, to avoid waste, we reuse textbooks. At the
same time, we will also use old items to make some reusable
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________________________________________________________
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items, such as using cans as pen holders. Finally, to save
energy, we turn off the taps when brushing our teeth. When
we leave the classroom, we turn off the lights.
These are some of our ways. Do you usually do these
things? I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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