内容正文:
2025贵州
英 语
话题写作指导册
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第一部分 话题写作三阶指导
人与社会
话题七 志愿服务(贵阳2018)
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【话题分析】
1.贵州近7年中考:2018年贵阳卷要求写一封当志愿者的自荐信
以及志愿工作的意义。
2.近3年全国中考写作角度:①自己参加的志愿活动经历;②对
志愿活动的看法和建议。
【教材单元链接】
人教版
八下Unit 2 志愿服务与慈善 八下Unit 5 难忘的事情
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一阶 素材积累
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短语与搭配
1.care about 关心
2.care for/look after/take care of 照顾
3.volunteer to do sth. 自愿做某事
4.invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事
5.raise money 筹钱
6.help people in need 帮助处于困境中的人
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7.clean up the city parks 打扫城市公园
8.go to the old people’s home 去养老院
9.visit the sick kids 看望生病的孩子们
10.hand out/give out 分发
11.put up signs/notices 张贴标志/通知
12.communicate with sb. 和某人交流
13.a feeling of satisfaction 满足感
14.call up 打电话给(某人);征召
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15.food bank 食物救济处
16.give away 捐赠
17.express thanks to… 对……表达感谢
18.be thankful to sb. 感激某人
19.be kind to 对……友善
20.make a difference 有影响;起作用
【注:以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型/结构】
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开头句
1.The volunteers in our school went to the Old People’s Home
on March 5th.
2.Let me tell you something about the life as a volunteer during
these days.
3.★In modern society, it is increasingly popular that young
people volunteer on weekends to help the people in need.
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4.★I’m making some plans to work in an old people’s home
as a volunteer this summer. I am going to read the newspaper
to the old people, or just talk to them.[人教八(下)U2 P10
改编]
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中间句
志愿活动的内容
1.We brought some fruit to the old people.
2.We chatted with them and sang for them.
3.After that, we cleaned the windows and swept the floor for
them.
4.We can raise money for those in need. We can also help take
care of the elderly and children.
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5.We will go to the library every weekend. We can help readers
find books and we can also help the librarians to keep books in
order.
6.I joined a group to help neighbors throw out their rubbish.
Every morning, I needed to get up very early and collect
rubbish from door to door.
7.★I not only provided water for these athletes, but also
cheered for them.
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8.★It’s hard work, but I want to learn more about how to
care for animals. [人教八(下)U2 P11]
9.★I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the
animals get better and the look of joy on their owners’ faces.
[人教八(下)U2 P11]
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对志愿服务的看法和建议
1.Some students think they have too much schoolwork. As a
result, they can hardly have time for volunteer activities. Others
show no interest in it.
2.Doing volunteer activities is very meaningful. Through
volunteer activities, we can help more people in need.
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3.★Also, it’s good for us to learn to get along with others.
Moreover, we will become happier and more confident.
4.★I think helping others is always good. If more and more
people take part in volunteeringactivities, the society will be full
of love.
5.★For us teenagers, I think it’s a good idea to join some
charities. And we should keep a balance between schoolwork
and volunteer activities.
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结尾句
1.In a word, I hope everyone can take an active part in helping
others. Let’s take action now.
2.★Volunteering is hard work, but it also offers us chances to
experience the social life and develop our abilities and skills.
Let’s volunteer together!
使用上面句子中的高级句型/结构扩写或升格下列句子
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1.He took part in the volunteer activity last week. He learned a
lot from it.(用as a result升格句子)
________________________________________________________
__________________________
He took part in the volunteer activity last week. As a result, he learned a lot from it.
2.In my opinion, being volunteers is really meaningful.
(用because it… not only… but also… 扩写句子,说明成为志
愿者有意义的原因)
________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________
In my opinion, being volunteers is really meaningful because it can not only help others but also bring us happiness.
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3.The experience as a volunteer made me feel tired.(用but扩写
句子,说明志愿经历带给我的积极感受)
________________________________________________________
_________________________________
The experience as a volunteer made me feel tired, but it also made me be proud of myself.
4.Volunteering gives us a chance. Volunteering changes
someone’s life.(用to do不定式升格句子)
_____________________________________________________
Volunteering gives us a chance to change someone’s life.
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5.Donating clothes to charity is a good idea because it can help
people in need.(用It’s a good idea to…升格句子)
________________________________________________________
____________________
It’s a good idea to donate clothes to charity because it can help people in need.
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二阶 典例探究
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“青少年志愿者”意味着光荣的责任与使命。为发扬志愿者精
神,学校正在举行主题为“帮助别人,成长自己”的征文活动。请
以“Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me __________”为题,结合自
身经历,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文投稿至校刊专栏。
要求: 1.补全标题;
2.短文需包含思维导图中的所有信息;
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3.重点谈谈你参加志愿活动的经历和感受;
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me__________
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一、细审题
1.补全标题:用“Happy”“Confident”“Independent”等形容词体现志
愿活动带给自己的改变;
2.文体:讲述一次志愿活动的经历,是一篇________;
3.人称:主要使用第____人称;
4.时态:讲述发生过的事情应用____________。
记叙文
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一般过去时
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二、搭框架、写要点
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
开头:引出话题
毕业 graduate from 在过去的三年里 in the ________________
很多志愿活动 many volunteer activities
这是我最特别的志愿经历之一。Here is
_______________________ voluntary experiences.
past three years
one of my most special
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Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
中间:详细介绍志愿活动
①时间:in Grade 8
②人物:我和同学们一起参加了一个志愿活动。
I _____________ a voluntary project with my classmates.
took part in
续表
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Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
③志愿活动的内容以及你做了什么事情:
为贫困地区的儿童筹集一些必要的东西 raise
____________________ for children in poor areas
我分发了传单。I _________ leaflets.
呼吁更多的人关心贫穷的孩子 call on more people
______________ poor children
有一个更光明的未来 have a _______________
something necessary
gave out
to care about
brighter future
续表
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Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
结尾:本次活动的感受
我们很累但是很开心。We were tired ___________.
我们做了一些有意义的事情。We did _____________________.
特殊的经历 special experience
一种强烈的成就感 a strong ______________________
but happy
something meaningful
feeling of achievement
续表
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
Doing Volunteer Work Makes Me Happy
①________________ Soon I will graduate from this school.
In the past three years, we have had many voluntary activities
in school. Here is one of my most special voluntary experiences.
How time flies!
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I took part in a voluntary project with my classmates when
we were in Grade 8. The purpose of the project was to raise
something necessary for children in poor areas, such as warm
clothes and notebooks. ②__________________________________
________________________________________________________
_____________________________
On that day, I gave out leaflets to call on more people to care about poor children so that they could have a brighter future.
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We were tired but happy because we did something meanin
gful. ③_________________________________________________
______________________
It was the special experience that gave me a strong feeling of achievement.
【解析】点评:①处使用谚语,提醒我们平时应积累一些简短实
用的谚语给文章增彩;②处用so that引导的目的状语从句;③处
用强调句:It was+被强调部分+that从句。
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三阶写作实战
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某国际学校正在向学生征集暑期社会实践方案。假设你是该
学校的学生李明,请你从以下两个实践项目Visit Children’s
Home(探访儿童福利院)和Care for City Cleaners(关爱城市环
卫工人)之中选择一个,向负责人Mr. Miller介绍你的设计方案,
并说明理由。
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Project: Visit Children’s Home
◆Place: The Children’s Home
◆Things to prepare:
_________________________
◆Activities:
_________________________ Project: Care for City
Cleaners
◆Place: Central Park
◆Things to prepare:
_________________________
◆Activities:
_________________________
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要求:1.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
2.重点介绍方案中的活动事项以及做这些活动的理由;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
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Dear Mr. Miller,
I’m Li Ming. I’m happy to have the chance to
introduce my plan for the project: Visit Children’s Home.
In the Children’s Home, we’ll see many children who
lost their family. So I think it’s important to show our love
to those kids through this project. To get ready for this visit,
we can prepare some presents for them, such as toys, books
and clothes. I’m sure these presents will surprise them a lot.
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
As for what we can do during our visit, I’ve got a plan.
First, we’ll give some performances to the children. We can
sing songs and dance, which will make them happy. Then,
we can play games together. Through games, we’ll know
each other better and develop friendships with these children.
At last, we’ll enjoy delicious food, such as different kinds of
cakes and fruits.
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
I’m sure these children will feel the warmth through
this project.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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