内容正文:
2025贵州
英 语
话题写作指导册
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第一部分 话题写作三阶指导
人与自我
话题五 促进中学生“五育并举”(贵州2024, 贵阳2022)
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【话题分析】
1.贵州近7年真题:2024年贵州卷要求写自己的变化;2022年贵
阳卷要求学生分享参加劳动的收获。
2.近3年全国中考写作角度:①如何做一名新时代的好少年;②
倡导参加体育运动;③倡导参加劳动实践活动;④引导审美情趣。
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【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
七(下)Unit 1 加入俱乐部
八(上)Unit 8 烹饪
八(下)Unit 3 家务和许可
八(下)Unit 8 文学和音乐
九(全)Unit 9 音乐和电影 八(上)Unit 3
爱好与音乐
八(下)Unit 7
食品节
八(下)Unit 8
我们的衣服
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一阶 素材积累
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短语与搭配
1.clean up 打扫干净
2.sweep the floor 扫/拖地
3.take out the rubbish 倒垃圾
4.make the bed 铺床
5.do the dishes 清洗餐具
6.fold the clothes 叠衣服
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7.offer cooking courses 开设烹饪课程
8.clean the blackboard 擦黑板
9.water flowers 浇花
10.climb mountains 爬山
11.enjoy pop music 喜欢流行音乐
12.collect stamps 集邮
13.basic life skills 基本的生活技能
14.keep healthy/fit 保持健康
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15.develop an interest in 在……方面培养兴趣
16.be able to do sth. 能够做某事
17.make a big difference 有意义;起巨大的作用
18.develop one’s independence 培养某人的独立性
19.get a strong feeling of satisfaction 获得强烈的满足感
20.open up one’s eyes and mind 开阔某人的眼界和思维
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开头句
1.To be a better person, I think I should do the following
things.
2.Recently, labor education has caught much social attention and
it will become a necessary course.
【注:以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型/结构】
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3.There are all kinds of music in the world. Music makes
people happy. Good music brings people comfort and peace of
mind. Everyone loves music but different people have different
tastes.[仁爱八(上)U3 P69]
4.★Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more
healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life
skills.
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中间句
劳动实践
1.I think doing chores is not so difficult. I do not mind doing
them.[人教八(下)U3 P22]
2.★Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and
teaches them how to look after themselves.[人教八(下)U3
P22]
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3.★I think it is important for children to learn how to do
chores and help their parents with housework.[人教八(下)U3
P22]
4.★Some students are interested in taking part in social practice
activities while others plan to do housework.
5.★It’s important to learn some basic life skills, like cooking,
washing clothes and tidying up our rooms.
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体育活动
1.After school, I sometimes play basketball for half an hour.
[人教七(下)U2 P11]
2.I like ping-pong. It’s easy for me.[人教七(上)U5 P29]
3.Basketball can offer me enjoyment, friendship, knowledge and
relaxation.
4.★Exercising is a good way to make us confident and happy.
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美育知识
1.I enjoy reading stories and listening to music. It’s great fun.
[仁爱八(上)U3 P55]
2.★I like smooth music that can relax my mind after a long
week at work.[人教九(全)U9 P66]
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3.★What’s more, Beijing Opera is also an important part of
Chinese culture.
4.★The reason why we plan a visit to a tea house is that we
can learn a lot about tea culture there.
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结尾句
呼吁、感受或收获
1.By learning to cook, we can learn some cooking skills. At the
same time, we can share our parents’ housework and become
confident.
2.★Learning life skills is necessary for us, because what we
depend on is what we learn.
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3.★I’m sure the earlier we learn to be independent, the better
our future will be.
使用上面句子中的高级句型/结构扩写或升格下列句子
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1.It’s important to clean our rooms.(用like扩写打扫房间的具体
事例)
________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________
It’s important to clean our rooms, like cleaning up the floor, making our beds and putting away our clothes.
2.Exercising can rest our brains and eyes.(用that引导的定语从
句扩写句子)
_________________________________________________________
Exercising is a good way that can rest our brains and eyes.
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3.We hold the traditional Chinese opera activity to learn more
about traditional Chinese culture.(用the reason why… is that…
升格句子)
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
_________
The reason why we hold the traditional Chinese opera activity is that we can learn more about traditional Chinese culture.
4.Running can reduce our pressure.(用a good way to升格句子)
_____________________________________________
Running is a good way to reduce our pressure.
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5.We can make a cake for our parents by ourselves.(用动词不
定式扩写目的)
________________________________________________________
__________________
We can make a cake for our parents by ourselves to show our care to them.
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二阶 典例探究
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中学生“五项管理”之一的“体质管理”(Health Management)
和奥运会都倡导我们积极参与体育运动。体育运动不但可以帮助
学生增强自信,塑造更加健全的人格,而且有助于我们实现体育
强国之梦。《21世纪英文报》Teen Talk栏目现面向全国中学生发
起征文。请你以“Doing Sports Makes Me __________”为题,写
一篇不少于80词的短文参赛。
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要求:1.用适当的形容词补全标题;
2.征文须包含思维导图中的所有内容;
3.重点讲述自己的运动故事,并谈谈运动的重要性;
4.文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
Doing Sports Makes Me __________
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一、细审题
1.补全标题:标题体现运动带给自己的好处,可用形容词
“Strong”“Healthy”“Confident”等;
2.文体:介绍自己喜欢的运动、运动故事、运动的重要性以及做
运动的建议,文体为________;
3.人称:以第____人称为主;
4.时态:介绍自己的运动故事用____________,其他以
____________为主。
记叙文
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一般过去时
一般现在时
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二、搭框架、写要点
Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
开头:引入话题,用一句话直接点明运动对自己的好处
流行 be popular with 运动使我强壮 doing sports
_________________
增强我的体质和意志 _________ my body and mind
makes me strong
build up
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Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
中间:我最喜欢的运动、我的运动故事、运动的重要性
①我最喜欢的运动:我最喜欢跑步。I like running _____.
②我的运动故事:
以前我又矮又瘦。I used to be _______________.
我爸爸总是带我外出跑步。My father always took me out for
_________.
我觉得累想放弃。I felt tired and __________________.
best
short and thin
running
wanted to give up
续表
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Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
爸爸鼓励我坚持。My father _______________ to stick to it.
每天早上和爸爸跑步。I run _______________ every morning.
我喜欢在跑步时听音乐。I like __________________ while
running.
赢得1500米比赛第一 won ___________ in the 1,500-meter race
encouraged me
with my father
listening to music
first prize
续表
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Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
③运动的重要性:
我生活中重要的一部分 __________________ of my life
越来越强壮 _____________________ 不害怕任何困难 don’t
fear any difficulties
an important part
stronger and stronger
续表
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Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
结尾:总结,并谈谈运动的建议
①再次强调喜欢运动的原因:I like running ________ doing
sports makes me strong.
让我的大脑好好休息 _____________ have a good rest
帮我更好地学习 _________ study better
②提醒运动时要注意安全:Be careful. Don’t hurt yourself.
because
let my brain
help me
续表
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
Doing Sports Makes Me Strong
Recently, sports have been very popular with many people.
①______________________________________________________
_____________________________
Of all the sports, I like running best. I used to be short
and thin, so my father always took me out for running.
In my opinion, doing sports makes me strong because it builds up my body and mind.
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At first, I usually felt tired and wanted to give up. But my
father encouraged me to stick to it. Now I run with my father
every morning and I grow taller and stronger. Running has
become an important part of my life. ②_____________________
_______________________________________________
At the sports meeting this year, I even won first prize in
the 1,500-meter race. Since then, with a good habit of doing
I like listening to music while running, which makes me feel relaxed.
sports, I have been stronger and stronger and I don’t fear any
difficulties.
In a word, I like running because doing sports makes me
strong. It can also let my brain have a good rest and help me
study better. ③___________________________________________
_______ Don’t hurt yourself.
【解析】点评:①处用because引导的原因状语从句;②处用
which引导的定语从句;③处用when引导的时间状语从句。
But when you do exercise, you must be careful.
三阶 写作实战
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习主席曾说:“民之所忧,我必念之;民之所盼,我必行
之。”作为中学生的我们,在学校,在家里,在社会上应该如何
做呢?请以“How to Be a(n) ____ Student”为题写一篇短文。
How to Be a
(n) ____
Student In the school study hard;…
At home do some dishes;…
In public help the elderly cross the
road; …
Your hope …
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要求:1.补全标题;
2.必须包含表格中所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
3.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
4.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
How to Be a ____________ Student
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
Responsible
As teenagers, we are the future of our country and we
need to be responsible. What should we do?
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
I think as good students, we should study hard and
have good learning habits. In class, we are supposed to
listen to teachers carefully and be active in class. After
school, we should finish our homework on time and do some
reading. At home, it’s necessary for us to share the
housework. We can do the dishes after dinner. Respecting
parents is also important. In society, we can do some
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________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
volunteer work like helping the elderly cross the road.
Besides, we should be nice to others and follow the rules.
By doing these things, we can make our family and
society better. Let’s all be responsible and make a difference!
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