内容正文:
2025贵州
英 语
话题写作指导册
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第一部分 话题写作三阶指导
人与自我
话题四 读书学习(贵阳2019)
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【话题分析】
1.贵州近7年真题:2019年贵阳卷要求分享自己处理学习困难方
面的经历。
2.近3年全国中考写作角度:①阅读、学习的重要性及意义;②学
习方法与建议;③喜欢的科目;④如何面对学习中的困难或压力。
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【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
七(上)Unit 9 我最喜欢的科目
九(全)Unit 1 如何学习 九(上)Unit 3 世界
上的英语
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一阶 素材积累
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短语与搭配
1.learn… from… 向……学习……
2.look up 查找;查阅
3.look through 浏览
4.go over 仔细检查
5.take notes 记笔记
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6.write down 写下;记下
7.think about 思考;考虑
8.make good/full use of 充分利用
9.learn by oneself/teach oneself 自学
10.body language 肢体语言
11.over and over again 多次;反复地
12.develop/form a good learning habit 养成良好的学习习惯
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13.make progress 取得进步
14.achieve one’s goal 实现目标
15.balance your study and life 平衡你的学习和生活
16.have difficulty in doing sth. 做某事有困难
17.make preparations for… 为……做准备
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开头句
1.English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it
well? Here are my suggestions.
2.Different people have different opinions. For me, I think
reading is important.
【注:以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型/结构】
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3.With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more
and more popular. Many foreigners want to learn Chinese. I’m
happy to share some ways with you.
4.★Nowadays, many students can’t make good use of their time,
which has a bad influence on their study.
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中间句
阅读、学习的重要性及意义
1.Books are the food for the hunger of great mind.
2.Books are my best friends. Reading can bring me happiness
and make me grow in wisdom.
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3.★Reading makes a great difference to our life. It’s important
for us to keep good reading habits.
4.★I prefer to study in groups because it can help me think
independently.
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喜欢的科目
1.★History is so interesting that I am crazy about learning it.
2.★It can not only make me happier but also bring me a lot
of knowledge.
3.★The reason why I like English best is that my English
teacher is humorous in class and that he always makes us learn
something in a relaxing environment.
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学习中存在的问题
1.We’ll have a test tomorrow and I always get nervous before a
test.[仁爱八(下)U5 P17]
2.I dare not answer questions in class because I’m afraid of
making mistakes.[仁爱九(上)U3 P73]
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3.It’s too hard to understand spoken English.
4.★The teacher spoke so quickly that I did not understand her
most of the time.
5.★There is no doubt that playing video games is going to be
the biggest problem that affects students’ study.
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学习方法与建议
1.I can improve my listening skills by watching English movies.
2.★The more you practice, the fewer mistakes you will make.
3.★Listening to your favorite English songs is actually an
effective way.[仁爱九(上)U3 P77]
4.★Try to guess a word’s meaning by reading the sentences
before and after it.[人教九(全)U1 P2]
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5.★The best way to remember new words is to practice them
every day.
6.★Don’t be afraid of making mistakes when you practice
speaking English.
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结尾句
感受、呼吁与号召
1.★I believe if I put my heart into learning it, I will make
much progress.
2.★Everyone should believe in themselves because they have
the ability to do things better.
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3.★In a word, reading brings me not only much joy but also
great interest in English learning.
4.★Everyone can overcome the difficulties in their life as long
as they work hard.
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俗语谚语
1.Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。[人教九(全)U1 P6]
2.He who learns but does not think is lost; he who thinks but
does not learn is in danger. 学而不思则罔;思而不学则殆。
[仁爱九(下)U5 P9]
3.When I walk along with two others, I may be able to learn
from them. 三人行,必有我师焉。[仁爱九(下)U5 P10]
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4.Learn the new while reviewing the old. 温故而知新。[仁爱
九(下)U5 P10]
5.No pains, no gains. 没有付出,就没有收获。
6.Reading ten thousand books is like traveling ten thousand
miles. 读万卷书,行万里路。
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使用上面句子中的高级句型/结构扩写或升格下列句子
1.Reading plays an important role in our daily lives.(用there is
no doubt that…升格句子)
________________________________________________________
_______________
There is no doubt that reading plays an important role in our daily lives.
2.You should read more to improve your reading ability.
(用the best way to… is to…升格句子)
________________________________________________________
_______
The best way to improve your reading ability is to read more.
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3.Learning English is helpful. It can help me get a lot of
information from around the world.(用so… that 引导的结果状
语从句升格句子)
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______________________________________
Learning English is so helpful that it can help me get a lot of information from around the world.
4.You should remember to take notes of key points in class
carefully.(用祈使句升格句子)
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Remember to take notes of key points in class carefully.
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5.There are two great ways to learn English—watching English
films and listening to English songs.(用动名词作主语升格句子)
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Watching English films and listening to English songs are two great ways to learn English.
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二阶 典例探究
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(2024河北改编)假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展
同伴互评活动,下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录
(Class Record),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文,总结他五个
方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价,然后就他需要改进的两个方面
提出建议。
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Class Record Name: Zhang Jun
Questions Yes No
Did you listen to the teacher carefully? √
Did you answer questions actively? √
Did you ask any questions? √
Did you work well in your group? √
Did you take notes? √
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要求:1.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Well done, Zhang Jun! ______________________
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一、细审题
1.文体:短文要求总结张军的课堂表现并进行评价,并就他需要
改进的方面提出建议,是一篇评论性文章;
2.人称:评价张军的表现并给建议,主要使用第____人称;
3.时态:评价张军的表现使用____________;给出建议使用
____________。
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一般过去时
一般现在时
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二、搭框架、写要点
开头:简单评价张军的课堂表现
①表现好的方面:
课堂上认真听讲 ______________________________ in class
积极回答问题 answered questions actively
在你们的小组中表现好worked well in your group
②表现不好的方面:
没有问任何问题 didn’t ask any questions 忘了记笔记 forgot to
___________
listened to the teacher carefully
take notes
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中间:就张军需要改进的两个方面提出建议
问问题 should ask questions 及时解决问题 solve problems
________
记笔记take notes复习一下你所学过的东西 _______ what you
have learned
in time
review
续表
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结尾:总结并给出祝愿
保持好习惯keep the good habits 尽力改掉坏习惯try to give up
the bad habits
祝愿:I believe that you’ll do better in English class!
续表
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully
in class and answered questions actively. You also worked well
in your group. ①_________________________________________
_____________________________________________________
However, you didn’t ask any questions and you forgot to take
notes.
This shows that you were able to take an active part in the discussion and express your thoughts.
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②__________________________________________________
___________________________________③___________________
________________________________________________________
_______________________
All in all, you should keep the good habits and try to give
up the bad habits. I believe that you’ll do better in English
class!
In my opinion, you should ask questions because it allows you to solve problems in time.
What’s more, you are supposed to take notes so that you can review what you have learned after class.
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【解析】点评:①处用宾语从句补充说明了“小组学习表现好”体
现了人物的什么能力。从中可以学习到写作中需要适当补充一些
细节,使文章更好衔接,文章内容更充实;
②处用because引导的原因状语从句;③处用so that引导的目的
状语从句。
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三阶 写作实战
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语言是窗,让我们看见更广阔的世界;语言是桥,拉近了我
们与世界的距离。你在英语学习方面有哪些好的方法呢?请以
“The____ Ways to Learn English”为题并根据要点提示写一篇80
词左右的文章,分享你的学习经验。
写作要求:1.补全标题;
2.短文必须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;
3.内容积极向上;
4.文中不得出现任何真实的个人信息。
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__________ Ways to Learn English
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________
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The Best
As the world is developing, English has become an
important part of people’s life. How can we learn it well?
Here are some best ways.
Firstly, we should often listen to English songs, the tapes
and English programs. It’s also helpful for us to watch
English movies. Secondly, we should speak English with our
________________________________________________________
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friends as much as possible. Don’t be afraid of making
mistakes. The more we speak, the fewer mistakes we’ll make.
We’d better join the English club and practice with others.
Thirdly, we can read more English novels and newspapers.
It’s good for us. Finally, we should keep a diary every day
and read some good passages.
All in all, if we do more listening, speaking, reading
and writing, we will surely learn English well.
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