内容正文:
2025贵州
英 语
话题写作指导册
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第一部分 话题写作三阶指导
人与自我
话题三 身心健康、安全与救护(贵阳2020)
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【话题分析】
1.贵州近7年真题:2020年贵阳卷要求介绍良好的生活习惯。
2.近3年全国中考写作角度:①谈论健康的重要性以及如何保持
健康;②如何缓解压力;③如何保证自身安全。
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【教材单元链接】
人教版 仁爱版
七(上)Unit 6
食物(一)
七(下)Unit 10
食物(二)
八(下)Unit 1
健康与急救 七(上)Unit 3 Topic 3 饮食与点餐
八(上)Unit 1 体育与运动
八(上)Unit 2 健康的生活习惯
八(下)Unit 5 Topic 3 P23保持心理健康
八(下)Unit 7 Topic 3 P77健康的饮食习
惯
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一阶素材积累
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短语与搭配
1.look after/take care of 照顾
2.take a break 休息
3.keep sb. in good health 某人保持身体健康
4.be good for 对……有好处
5.keep a balanced diet 保持均衡饮食
6.do more exercise 多做锻炼
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7.physical and mental health 身心健康
8.in danger 处于危险中
9.save one’s life 挽救某人的生命
10.obey the traffic rules 遵守交规
11.stay away from 远离……
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12.keep calm 保持冷静
13.ask sb. for help 向某人求助
14.be careful of 小心……
【注:以下标注“★”的句子使用了高级句型/结构】
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开头句
1.Nowadays, people pay much more attention to health. It is
necessary for everyone to learn some ways to keep healthy.
2.Sports are of great importance for us. They can help us build
up our body and become healthy.
3.★In order to make us grow up safely, our school has made
many safety rules for us to follow.
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中间句
健康
1.You’d better eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk
food.
2.You need to brush your teeth after eating to have good teeth.
[人教七(下)U2 P12]
3.Finally, a wonderful football game often makes me feel
relaxed, especially when I feel stressed.
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4.★Junk foods are foods that are not good for health.[仁爱八
(下)U7 P64]
5.★We should not only eat enough good, healthy food but also
eat it regularly.[仁爱八(下)U7 P78]
6.★It’s good to relax by watching game shows or surfing the
Internet, but I think the best way is through exercise.
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安全
1.At home, we should be careful with fire and electricity.
2.★Don’t push each other, especially when we go upstairs or
downstairs.
3.★Besides, you’d better not ride side by side, or you may be
in danger.
4.★It’s necessary for you to learn about first aid.[仁爱八(上)
U2 P47]
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应对孤独、烦恼的建议
1.★I suggest that you should talk more about your problems
with your friends.
2.★I think you should join some clubs and make more friends.
3.★Finally, we must get on well with others. It can keep us in
a good mood.
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结尾句
呼吁、表达期望
1.I hope you will get well soon.[仁爱八(上)U2 P27]
2.Follow the doctor’s advice, and you’ll get well soon.[仁爱八
(上)U2 P33]
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3.★All in all, playing football is a good way to build up my
body and relax myself.
4.★These are some good ways to keep healthy. We should try
our best to care about personal health for a better life.
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俗语谚语
1.Early to bed, early to rise. 早睡早起。[仁爱八(上)U2 P50]
2.Health is the first wealth. 健康是第一财富。
3.He who has health has hope. 拥有健康就拥有希望。
4.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果,医生远
离我。
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使用上面句子中的高级句型/结构扩写或升格下列句子
1.We should protect ourselves and value our lives.(用try one’s
best to do sth.升格句子)
________________________________________________________
______
We should try our best to protect ourselves and value our lives.
2.Eating some fruit every day is necessary.(用It is +adj.+for sb.
to do sth.升格句子)
_______________________________________________
It’s necessary for us to eat some fruit every day.
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3.I think it is a good way to talk with our friends.(用and连接
的并列句扩写句子,补充说明和朋友聊天的好处)
________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________
I think it is a good way to talk with our friends and that we can share our happiness and sadness with them.
4.There are many ways to keep healthy.(用but I think扩写你认
为保持健康的最佳方式)
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____________________________________
There are many ways to keep healthy, but I think the best way is to develop good eating habits.
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5.We should make sure not to hurt ourselves.(用when引导的时
间状语从句扩写句子)
________________________________________________________
__________
When we do exercise, we should make sure not to hurt ourselves.
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二阶 典例探究
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每年3月最后一周的星期一,是全国中小学生“安全教育日”。
作为中学生的你平日里是怎样进行安全防护的?请根据以下思维
导图提示,以 “Keep Safety in Mind”为题写一篇英文短文,分
享你在这方面的认识和做法。
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要求如下:1.短文必须包含思维导图中的相关信息,并再补充两
个方面;
2.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
Keep Safety in Mind
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一、细审题
1.文体:介绍如何进行安全防护,是一篇________;
2.人称:表达自己的想法,应用第____人称;
3.时态:表达看法和建议,属于客观事实,应用____________。
说明文
一
一般现在时
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二、搭框架、写要点
Keep Safety in Mind
开头:引入话题
安全在我们的日常生活中是非常重要的。Safety
__________________ in our daily life.
多注意 pay _________________
这里有一些建议。__________ some suggestions.
is very important
more attention to
Here are
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Keep Safety in Mind
中间:具体介绍如何安全防护、从哪几方面注意、应该怎么做
以及这样做的原因
①食品安全:吃健康的食物 eat _____________ 拒绝吃垃圾食
品 say no to junk food
它对我们的健康有害。It is _________ our health.
②交通安全:遵守规则 ______ the rules
不要在路上踢足球。Don’t _________________________.
healthy food
bad for
obey
play football on the road
续表
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Keep Safety in Mind
③运动安全:
在做体育锻炼时不要弄伤自己。Don’t hurt ourselves ______
doing physical exercise.
不要在河里游泳。________________________
when
Don’t swim in the river.
续表
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Keep Safety in Mind
④交友安全:交朋友时要小心 be careful to make friends
与……相处融洽 ___________________ 不要伤害别人和自己
Don’t hurt others _____ ourselves.
知道如何寻求帮助 know how to _____________
get along well with
and
ask for help
续表
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Keep Safety in Mind
结尾:再次强调安全的重要性
简而言之,安全必须在第一位。In short, safety ______ come
first.
must
续表
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三、遣词造句,连句成文
Keep Safety in Mind
Safety is very important in our daily life. We must pay
more attention to it. But how can we keep safe? Here are some
suggestions.
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We should pay attention to the food safety. We should eat
healthy food.①___________________________________________
___________________ Traffic safety is everybody’s business. We
must obey the rules. Don’t play football on the road. Sports
safety is also important. Don’t hurt ourselves when doing
physical exercise. Don’t swim in the river. Besides, we should
be careful to make friends, especially net friends.
We should say no to junk food, which is bad for our health.
Learn to get along well with our classmates and don’t fight.
What’s more, don’t hurt others and don’t hurt ourselves. ②
______________________________________________________
In short, safety must come first.
【解析】点评:①处用which引导的定语从句;②处用It’s
+adj.+to do sth. 结构。
It’s very important to know how to ask for help.
三阶 写作实战
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美好生活,健康同行。如何丰富校园生活,促进同学们的身
心健康?目前,你校英语网站“VOICE OF TEENS”正在征集同
学们的建议。请你根据下图提示,以“How to Keep Healthy”为
题,用英语写一篇短文投稿,分享你的建议。
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要求如下:1.短文必须包含思维导图中的相关信息,并适当发挥;
2.内容积极向上,不少于80词;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
How to Keep Healthy
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Health is the base of everything. Then how can we keep
healthy? Here are some tips.
Firstly, it is necessary to have healthy eating habits. We
should keep away from junk food. We had better eat more
fruit and vegetables every day. Secondly, we should do
exercise for one hour a day in order to keep healthy.
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Thirdly, we should have a good living habit. We’d better go
to bed early and get up early every day. We should also
keep our mind healthy. We can relax ourselves when we are
under great pressure from study. Besides, we should think of
pleasant things and stay in a good mood.
Follow these tips, and we will surely be in good health.
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