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应用文写作万能模板建议信 1 命题立意 问题 应用文写作旨在考查考生应能清楚、连贯地传递信息,表达意思；有效运用所学语言知识。测试考生的交际能力和语言综合运用能力。 命题依据 题型分析 从《普通高中英语课程标准》（2017年版2020年修订）中看书面表达要求： 1.审题不清 2.时态混乱 5.结构失衡 6.语法错误 3.拼写错误 7.汉式思维 4.句型单一 8.书写不整洁 学情分析 高阶模板 Dear XXX, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on …. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. To begin with, it is a good idea to …. , through which not only can you ….but also you can…. . Next, I think it would be beneficial if you….This is because…. Last but not least, if possible, …. The reason why I recommed it is that …. I’ll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation into consideration. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me. Yours, Li Hua　 Dear Peter, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on which volunteer activity to participate in next Sunday. Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you. To begin with, it is a good idea to volunteer at the City Cultural Museum is the clear winner, through which not only can you have a deep insight into our city with a long history and brilliant culture but also you can broaden your horizons and allow you to feel the weight of its heritage. Next, I think it would be beneficial if you have a deep insight into our city with a long history and brilliant culture. This is because the museum welcomes visitors from a wide range of geographical locations and backgrounds every single day. Last but not least, if possible,engage in dialogues with visitors. The reason why I recommed it is that it will boost your communication proficiency and your ability to respond to changes. I’ll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation into consideration. If you need further information, don’t hesitate to contact me. Yours, Li Hua　 （Z20名校联盟2025届高三第二次联考） 假设你是李华，你校下周日有两个志愿者活动同时举行，一个在火车站，另一个在市文化博物馆。你的交换生朋友Peter不知道选择哪一个参加，写信向你寻求建议。请你写一封回信， 内容包括：1.给出建议； 2.说明理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 模板套用 通用模板 Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua Dear Sir or Madam, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to prepare for the upcoming drama workshop at our school to welcome the visiting teachers and students from our sister school in New Zealand. Here are a few suggestion. First , It is important to integrate Chinese and New Zealand drama culture into the event, creating an opportunity for the teachers and students from both countries to immerse themselves in the richness of both countries. Besides, it should be a good idea to let students from both sides could engage in an exchange of dramas with an emphasis on their unique cultural characteristics. As to students, I suggest they could present their grouped interpretations of classic dramatic scenes from both countries to further facilitate interaction and strengthen the bonds between them. I hope my advice will be of some help to the event. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua （浙江精诚联盟2024学年第一学期高三12月适应性联考） 假定你是李华，为迎接即将来访的新西兰姐妹学校的师生代表，学校将举办“戏剧工坊”(drama workshop)活动。现向全校学生征集活动的建议，请你给负责活动的老师写一封邮件。 内容包括：1.写信目的； 2.你的建议及具体安排。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 模板套用 第一部分：说明写信的目的 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因 (1) 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. (2) 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. (3) 下午，我们会一起……During the afternoon, we’ll...together. (4) 记得带上水和午餐。Remember to take water and lunch with you. (5) 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. (6) 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. (7) 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. (8) 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 第三部分：提出建议 我建议…… I’d like to suggest that… May I suggest that…? In my opinion… I would like to make a recommendation that… I am writing to advise… If I were you, I would… 第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! （给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 评价修改 Self-assessment Peer-assessment  self-correction 备考策略-学生篇 重视复盘 针对平时习作中的问题,及时总结经验,吸取教训 重视阅读 精读与泛读相结合 读书破万卷,下笔如有神 重视细节 规范拼写,坚持练字; 正确运用时态,标点等 重视运用 有意识地把积累的语料运用到写作中 重视积累 积累好词,好句,好段,好文章,好想法等 备考策略 1 2 3 4 5 6 重视评改 品鉴范文,拓展思路,修改原稿,提高写作水平 14 愉 Thank you for your listening ! 15 49318.605 $$