题型一 第二讲 四大技法成就满分作文-【优化探究】2025年高考英语二轮复习高考总复习配套课件

第二讲　四大技法成就满分作文 内容索引 NEIRONGSUOYIN 技法3　让细节丰满起来 技法4　让语篇靓丽起来 技法2　让句子新颖起来 技法1　让词汇高端起来 技法1　让词汇高端起来 根据高考应用文写作的评分标准，应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以，在词汇亮化上应遵循以下三个原则： 原则1　求新求变 同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是在小学或初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。 原则2　求准求精 写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。 原则3　短语优先 恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。 1．形容词变短语的方法：of＋同根名词 very important/useful/valuable/beneficial/helpful →of vital/great importance/use/value/benefit/help 2．动词变短语的方法：替换升级 动词 对应短语 know/realize be aware of/be familiar with understand figure out/make sense of should be supposed to use make use of/take advantage of consider take... into account/consideration come approach/be around the corner 动词 对应短语 master have a good command of thank express one's sincere gratitude to represent (be) on behalf of succeed make it/achieve one's goals help　 do sb.a favour value attach importance to visit pay a visit to like be fond of/be interested in/be crazy about/be addicted to 3.副词变短语的方法：同义短语替换 副词 对应短语 very more than properly in place quickly without delay actually as a matter of fact 用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分 1．With the development of technology，more and more people are fond of online payment. →With the development of technology，______________________ people are fond of online payment. an increasing number of 2．(2024·江西5市重点中学联考) Knowing that you like Chinese culture，I'm writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. →Knowing that you ______________________________________ Chinese culture，I'm writing to ask you to enjoy it with me. are keen on/are fond of/are interested in 3．(2024·陕西咸阳一模)In order to improve the students' awareness of body building，a hill－climbing competition，with the theme of “Health Is First”，was held last Sunday by our school. →______________________________________________ the students' awareness of body building，a hill－climbing competition，with the theme of “Health Is First”，was held last Sunday by our school. Aimed at enhancing/With the purpose of enhancing 4．It will be about the history of Chinese paper－cutting and teaching some basic paper－cutting techniques. →It will ___________ the history of Chinese paper－cutting and teaching some basic paper－cutting techniques. focus on 5．(2024·河南郑州质检)After all，the Spring Festival is very important because it's a new beginning which brings hope to us and it's also a time to say our thanks and take our responsibility. →After all，the Spring Festival is ____________________ because it's a new beginning which brings hope to us and it's also a time to ________________________________ and take our responsibility. of great importance convey/show/express our gratitude 6．(2024·甘肃兰州一诊)I think that what mothers really need is their children's understanding and trust. →I ________________ that what mothers really need is their children's understanding and trust. 7．(2024·安徽淮南一模)I am very happy to hear from you，and I want to recommend you to do voluntary work. →I am ________________ to hear from you，and I ________________ recommend you to do voluntary work. hold the view greatly delighted　 would like to 8．(2024·湖南张家界二模)Representing my class，I'm writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it. →________________ my class，I'm writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it. On behalf of 技法2　让句子新颖起来 高考时，一篇习作中的句子如果都采用简单句，肯定不能得高分，精彩句式的合理使用会使文章读起来抑扬顿挫。因此，应多使用一些高级句式和复合句，让句子胜人一筹，亮点纷呈，彰显考生的写作能力。换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不浮夸，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。 技巧1　巧用副词和形容词，生动形象 在写作中，考生可将副词置于句首来增强文章的连贯性或用以强调，彰显句子的感情色彩，也可以将形容词置于句首或句末，增强情绪感染力，使句子更生动形象。 例　①Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed the art class. I am attaching a photo of my artwork for you and hope you will like it.(2024·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷) ②Accordingly/Consequently, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that... ③Although hot and tired, seeing the neighbourhood neat and clean, we were more than delighted.(2024·东北三省四校联考) ④Exhausted as we were, we were more than pleased with this meaningful experience. 技巧2　巧用非谓语，精简表达 1．运用非谓语动词(短语)整合简单句，提升表达 考生可以利用非谓语动词(短语)对两个或两个以上的简单句进行整合，使句子更加简洁、凝练，表达更高级。 例　It's widely acknowledged that China boasts abundant and unique traditional cultures. They range from calligraphy to local operas. →It's widely acknowledged that China boasts abundant and unique traditional cultures, ranging from calligraphy to local operas. 2．运用非谓语动词(短语)简化复合句，精炼语言 在表达复杂含义的时候，常常用到复合句，句子有时较长，考生可以利用非谓语动词(短语)对复合句进行简化，使语言更精练。 例　In addition, take an active part in the voluntary activities which are launched by the ocean organizations.(2022·全国甲卷) →In addition，take an active part in the voluntary activities launched by the ocean organizations. 技巧3　活用三大从句，丰富结构 1．运用定语从句，让表述更丰满 例　I felt so proud that I shared housework with my parents, and that also showed that I had grown up.(2023·全国乙卷) →I felt so proud that I shared housework with my parents，which also showed that I had grown up. 2．运用名词性从句，让表述更具体 例　His famous philosophy of life“Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land，the last to enjoy universal happiness.” impresses me most.(2023·全国甲卷) →What impresses me most is his famous philosophy of life：“Be the first to worry about the troubles across the land，the last to enjoy universal happiness.” 3．运用状语从句，让逻辑更清晰 例　My mother is skilled at cooking, so I decided to learn from her.(2023·全国乙卷) →Since my mother is skilled at cooking, I decided to learn from her. 技巧4　套用提分句式，升级表达 1．运用强调句，突出重点 例　Youth extends my horizons and at the same time gives me joy and comfort.(2021·新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷) →It is Youth that extends my horizons and at the same time gives me joy and comfort. 2．运用倒装句，以示强调 例　①Students can be willing to communicate only by doing so.(2023·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷) →Only by doing so can students be willing to communicate. ②This experience not only gave me a sense of accomplishment, but also helped boost my confidence to do what I used to fear.(2023·全国乙卷) →Not only did this experience give me a sense of accomplishment, but also it helped boost my confidence to do what I used to fear. 3．运用虚拟语气，表达看法 例　Your selfless assistance made me achieve such great progress in English.(2024·湖北黄冈模拟) →Had it not been for your selfless assistance, I couldn't have made such great progress in English. 4．运用省略形式，避免累赘 例　①When you are surfing or boating, never drop litter into the sea.(2022·全国甲卷) →When surfing or boating, never drop litter into the sea. ②As it is scheduled, an art exhibition will be held next Sunday in the local museum.(2024·湖南株洲一模) →As scheduled，an art exhibition will be held next Sunday in the local museum. 5．运用感叹句，传递情感 例　We had a wonderful time. Not only did it give us relaxation, but it also got us closer to nature.(2020·全国Ⅱ卷) →What a wonderful time we had! Not only did it give us relaxation, but it also got us closer to nature. 用高级句式升级下列句子 1．(2024·浙江1月卷)Plus, jumping rope is a lot of fun, and it is a great way to relieve stress and improve your mood. →______________________________________________________________________________________________(非限制性定语从句) Plus, jumping rope is a lot of fun, which is a great way to relieve stress and improve your mood. 2．(2023·全国甲卷)Fan Zhongyan was known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, and was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. →________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(过去分词短语作状语) Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty, Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society. 3．(2022·新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)Without hesitation the whole class voted for David and said that no one had worked harder for that award than he. →_________________________________________________________________________________________________(现在分词短语作伴随状语) Without hesitation the whole class voted for David, saying that no one had worked harder for that award than he. 4．(2024·河北唐山、保定一模)I want to stress that each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes. →_________________________________________________________________________________________________(what引导主语从句) What I want to stress is that each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes. 5．(2024·江西上饶一模)Through the hands－on experience，I not only gain a sense of achievement，but also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth. →_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(倒装句) →_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(强调句型) Through the hands－on experience，not only do I gain a sense of achievement，but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth. It is through the hands－on experience that I not only gain a sense of achievement, but also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth. 6．(2024·河北邯郸一模)I am happy to be one of the members in your team and I am looking forward to contributing my skills and efforts to help achieve our goals together. →___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(感叹句) How happy I am to be one of the members in your team and I am looking forward to contributing my skills and efforts to help achieve our goals together! 7．(2024·安徽淮南质检) If I'm given the job, I'm sure to be a good guide and provide excellent assistance to ensure a smooth and enjoyable experience for everyone. →______________________________________________________________________________________________________________(省略句) If given the job, I'm sure to be a good guide and provide excellent assistance to ensure a smooth and enjoyable experience for everyone. 技法3　让细节丰满起来 在应用文写作中，适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。 妙招1　巧用并列 巧妙利用并列结构是扩充文章内容常用的方式，这种并列可以是词与词的并列，也可以是句与句的并列，如： ★Sports play a crucial role in maintaining a healthy lifestyle as they not only improve our physical fitness but also contribute to mental well－being. Engaging in sports strengthens our immune system, enhances concentration, and fosters social skills.(介绍运动的重要性) ★To participate in the fun run, all you need to do is download the tracking app, choose your preferred distance, and run or walk at your own pace. You can do it alone, with friends, or as part of a team, and you can complete the run at any time during the week.(介绍乐跑打卡活动) 妙招2　巧用修饰成分 恰当地使用定语、状语、插入语等修饰成分也可扩充文章内容，而且会使描写更加细腻、翔实，但注意不要连篇累牍，如： ★Time－honored palaces and modern skyscrapers coexist harmoniously in this city. Wandering in it , you can have first－hand experience of the perfect mix of traditional charm and modern fashion.(增加形容词、副词) ★Last weekend, I had a fantastic time participating in the “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” event organized by the Student Union. During the event, we were given an informative presentation about different types of plants and their unique characteristics.(增加前置定语、后置定语) 妙招3　巧用列举或举例 对于文章中的重点内容可以利用具体的例子进行阐释，这样能够增加文章的可信度，让叙述内容更加真实，如： ★There is a wide concern over the issue that human activities are posing a fatal threat to our ecosystem. The earth is in desperate need of help. →There is a wide concern over the issue that human activities are posing a fatal threat to our ecosystem.Species disappearing，temperature rising and water being polluted, the earth is in desperate need of help. ★Problems arise in almost every corner of our campus. →Problems ranging from huge amounts of food waste to excessive use of water arise in almost every corner of our campus. 妙招4　巧用背景信息 事件的原因、结果、条件、目的、时间、地点等有时是题目要求写的内容，如果题目没有相关要求，考生也可以增加相应内容来丰富文章内容，如： ★I wonder which traditional Chinese culture is the most attractive to foreign friends. →China has a good reputation for its abundant and unique traditional cultures, such as ancient costumes, tea culture, Beijing opera and Chinese painting. They are so fascinating that I wonder which is the most attractive to foreign friends.(增加原因) ★Our school arranged an extraordinary Chinese painting exhibition. →Aimed at displaying the artistic talent of our students and promoting Chinese culture, an extraordinary Chinese painting exhibition was arranged in our school.(增加目的) 妙招5　引用谚语、格言或名言 适当使用谚语、格言或名言是英语写作中非常重要的润色手段。一句画龙点睛的引用能提升作文的高度，增强文章的说服力和感染力，获得阅卷老师的青睐，如： ★Roses given, fragrance in hand. This Charity Sale gave us a golden chance to have a sweet taste of helping others in need and brightened up our day in the meanwhile.(参加慈善义卖的感悟) ★The door of opportunity won't open unless you give it a push. Chances always favor prepared minds.(准备的重要性) 妙招6　迁移课本话题素材 课本是老师和学生都最为熟悉的素材来源，其中有大量可开发利用的资源，内化课本的话题内容和写法，迁移其中的素材来充实自己的写作，会非常吸引阅卷老师的眼球。 ★The virtual choir is a wonderful way for people around the world to sing with one voice and thus make the world a better place.(人教版必修二·虚拟合唱团) ★I would be delighted to have the opportunity to discuss my application further with you. I'm contactable via email at this address or by phone on 6747－9818. Thank you for your time and consideration.(外研版选必四·申请信) 下面是一位考生的习作，请增加适当的细节，以充实文章并突出主题。 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请你写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括： 1．写信的目的； 2．个人优势； 3．能做的事情。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 [范文佳作] Dear Sir/Madam， I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China，1._______ ____________________________________．I'm writing to apply to be a volunteer of the exhibition of traditional Chinese paintings at the local art museum.2._____________________First of all, I am greatly interested in painting.3._____________________________________ ______________________________________________________ More importantly, I consider it a good chance to spread Chinese culture and develop my ability.So I think I am highly qualified for the job.4.____________________________________________________ who is studying in London in the summer holidays Here are my advantages. I have received some professional training in my spare time, hoping that I can work as a painter in the future. I would be very grateful if you could give me a chance. Looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua 技法4　让语篇靓丽起来   缺乏衔接过渡的文章，就好比一串断了线的珍珠，虽然每个词句都光彩夺目，但是整体拿出来却七零八落。要想成就美文，不仅需要高级词汇，还需穿珠之线，这个线就是衔接过渡。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以表示时间顺序的过渡表达 first(ly)、second(ly)、last、(soon) afterwards、meanwhile、finally、at first、in the beginning、subsequently、at last、in the end、eventually等 (2024·全国甲卷)Firstly, the emergence of shared bicycles has greatly transformed urban mobility, providing a green and efficient solution to the “last mile” problem. Secondly, high－speed trains, known for their speed and efficiency, have revolutionized long－distance travel, connecting cities and regions across the country like never before and thereby boosting regional economies through increased connectivity and trade. 首先，共享单车的出现极大地改变了城市出行方式，为“最后一公里”问题提供了一个绿色高效的解决方案。其次，以速度和效率著称的高速列车彻底改变了长途旅行的方式，以前所未有的方式连接了全国各城市和地区，从而通过加强连通性和贸易推动了地区经济的发展。 用法 过渡词 典例 用在段落结尾进行总结的过渡表达 to sum up、in conclusion、in a word、in summary、all in all等 (2023·全国甲卷)In conclusion, Confucius's teachings are a proof of the power of education and personal values. 总之，孔子的教导证明了教育的力量和个人价值观。 用法 过渡词 典例 用在段落起始的过渡表达 generally speaking、to begin/start with、first of all、in the first place、as we know、as is known to all、as is shown in...等 (2023·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)To begin with, students have different levels of English proficiency, which makes it difficult to practice together. 首先，学生们的英语水平不同，这使得他们很难一起练习。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以表示空间顺序的过渡表达   on one side...on the other side、on the opposite side、in front of、in the center of、in the distance、in the middle of、at the back of、on/to the left/right、close to、next to、nearby、beyond等 Down the middle of the valley runs a clear, fast stream in which one may fish. In the low land along the stream are the farmlands; beyond them is the grassland. Behind the tops of the first hills are the big mountains. 一条清澈湍急的溪流沿着山谷的中部流淌着，人们可以在溪中钓鱼。沿溪而下，低地处是农田；越过农田是草原。在第一批小山的山顶后面是一座座大山。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以解释说明的过渡表达 in fact、as a matter of fact、in other words、namely、to put it differently等 To put it differently，I will try my best to achieve my goals. 换言之，我会尽最大的努力实现我的目标。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以表示因果的过渡表达 considering that、owing to、due to、because、therefore、as a result、consequently、thereby、thus、so等 (2024·全国甲卷)These developments in transportation have raised our quality of life and showed the power of science. Therefore, we need to study hard and make a contribution to the further development of transportation. 交通领域的这些发展提高了我们的生活质量，并展示了科学的力量。因此，我们需要努力学习，为交通的进一步发展作出贡献。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以表示强调的过渡表达 certainly、indeed、above all、surely、to tell (you) the truth 等 I hope everyone finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship. 我希望大家都在这里过得愉快，并且你们的来访一定会增进我们的友谊。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以表示递进或补充的过渡表达 in addition、furthermore、also、moreover、what's more、besides、not only...but also...、to make matters worse、worse still、more/most importantly、last but not least、additionally等 (2024·全国甲卷)Shared bicycles provide a convenient and environmentally friendly means of transport for short trips. Besides, China's high－speed railway network has connected various cities effectively, greatly saving travel time and promoting economic development. 共享单车为短途出行提供了一种便捷且环保的交通方式。此外，中国的高速铁路网有效地连接了各个城市，大大节省了旅行时间，并促进了经济发展。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以举例或列举的过渡表达 for example、for instance、such as、...be as follows 等 Some musical instruments，such as violins and pianos, are very expensive. 有些乐器，例如小提琴和钢琴，非常昂贵。 用以表示让步或转折的过渡表达 but、however、although、though、yet等 (2023·新课标Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷)It's a good opportunity. However, from my perspective, it is a bit inappropriate. 这是一个很好的机会。然而，从我的角度来看，这有点不合适。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以表示比较或对比的过渡表达 like、unlike、in the same way、similarly、in contrast、whereas、instead、instead of、while等 Some of us wanted to go boating, and some advised going hiking，while others suggested visiting the amusement park. 我们中的有些人想去划船，有些人建议去远足，而另一些人建议去游乐园。 用法 过渡词 典例 用以表示观点的过渡表达 personally、from my perspective、in my opinion、I'm fully convinced that、as I see it、as far as I'm concerned等 Personally，it would be beneficial if you follow my advice and have faith in yourself. 我认为，如果你采纳我的建议并对自己有信心，这将是有益的。 用适当的衔接词填空 你校将以6月8日世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。 内容包括： 1．海洋的重要性； 2．保护海洋的倡议。 注意：写作词数应为80个左右。 [范文佳作] Our Oceans, Our Responsibility June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It was set up to raise people's awareness of ocean conservation. Oceans play a crucial role in the global ecosystem. 1.________ do they offer us abundant resources and food, but also they are crucial for maintaining the balance of nature. 2.________________， oceans are so important that we should protect them for our future generations. 3.__________， what we can do is place importance on our daily actions. 4.____________， garbage can't be thrown into oceans. 5.______________________________， we can also hand out leaflets to enhance people's awareness of protecting oceans. The more people are involved, the better the ocean environment will be. Not only Thus/Therefore First of all For example What's more/Besides/In addition 6．_______________________________________， it is high time that we devoted ourselves to protecting the oceans. Every little effort counts. All in all/In conclusion/In a word/To sum up $$