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对对碰(五) 演讲稿 倡议书
应用文
写作
目录
一、“演讲稿”写作增分指导
二、“倡议书”写作增分指导
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“演讲稿”写作增分指导
一、
[写作题目]
(2021·全国乙卷改编)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括:
1.分析优势与不足; 2.提出学习建议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone,
It's a great honour for me to stand here and address my speech titled “Be smart online learners”.
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[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]
Be smart online learners
Good morning, everyone,
It's a great honour for me to stand here and address my speech titled “Be smart online learners”(经典句式引出演讲主题).Online learning is increasingly important recently. However (转折副词引出个人看法), it has both advantages and disadvantages.
Obviously (引出有利方面), online learning allows us to learn at any time wherever we are. Besides (进一步介绍有利方面), we can absorb all kinds of resources to learn efficiently. But (转折连词引出不利方面)staring at the screen long is harmful to our eyes. Worse still (承接上文进一步介绍不利方面), we don't have many opportunities to
interact with our teachers and classmates. Then how to be smart online learners? First, take a short break wisely when necessary. Second, making a schedule is a must.(衔接词first, second引出建议)
In conclusion,only by being smart online learners can we (用部分倒装做出总结,让文章铿锵有力) truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology. Thanks for your listening!
[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]
Ⅰ.开头部分:明确演讲主题(开门见山,简洁明了)
1.Ladies and gentlemen, I am glad to have a chance to get together with ... The topic of my speech today is ...
2.Boys and girls, I feel greatly honoured to have a chance to be with ...Today, I'd like to share my ideas on ...
3.Ladies and gentlemen/Boys and girls, I'm ... I'm greatly honoured to speak here on behalf of .... I'm going to talk about ...
Ⅱ.主体部分:展开主题(分析问题,展开论述,提出解决方法)
1.Firstly, ... Secondly, ... In addition, ... Last but not least, ...
2.As is known to all, with the improvement of people's living standards ...
3.As far as I'm concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, ...For another, ...What's more ...
4.With the rapid growth of ..., ...have/has become increasingly important in our daily life.
5.What I want to stress/emphasize is .../Above all/Most important of all, /What really matters/counts is .../Chances are that ...
Ⅲ.结尾部分:总结演讲(简要总结,表达期望或感谢)
1.In conclusion, only by ... can we truly enjoy the benefits of modern technology.
2.To sum up ... have/has a profound influence on everyone.Therefore, we must ...
3.OK, thank you for listening./That's all. Thank you!
[建写作模型·展规范形体]
Good morning/afternoon, dear friends,
I feel very privileged to have an opportunity here to make a speech on (演讲主题).
First of all, (主题内容叙述一). Secondly, (主题内容叙述二). While we (提出相关现象、要求或条件等), we should (提出措施、计划等).
If everyone (条件), I am convinced that (结果).
Thank you!
“倡议书”写作增分指导
二、
[写作题目]
(2022·全国甲卷改编)你校将以六月八日世界海洋日为主题,举办英语征文比赛。请你写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.海洋的重要性; 2.保护海洋的倡议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. _______________________________________________________
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[悟满分作文·厚写作功底]
Our Oceans, Our Responsibility
June 8th was officially named by the UN in 2009 as World Oceans Day. It is a day to raise people's awareness of protecting the oceans which are vital to human beings (定语从句指明重要性).
Covering about 71% of the Earth's surface (分词作状语介绍具体情况), oceans can regulate the climate and make it livable for humans. In addition (衔接海洋重要性的两个方面), oceans produce over half of the world's oxygen and are home to a large variety of sea life.
Oceans are so important that we should protect them for our future generations (so ... that 强调保护海洋的必要性). As students, we can take part by doing small things, such as (引出具体措施)collecting garbage on the seashore or avoiding pouring waste water into oceans. Only by working together can we protect and restore our precious oceans (用部分倒装发出倡议,增强感染力).
[积写作素材·造吸睛亮点]
Ⅰ.开头部分:发出倡议的背景、原因和目的
1.Nowadays/Currently/In recent years, we have to face the problem ... (现象), which is becoming more and more serious.
2.In order to ..., I'd like to call your attention to the importance of .../To ..., I sincerely appeal to/call on sb. to do ...
3.Recently, there exists a problem/phenomenon that ..., which leads to many bad effects. So it's (high) time that we did/should do ...
Ⅱ.主体部分:倡议的具体内容和要求
1.As students, we can take part by doing small things, such as ...
2.Immediate measures should be taken to do .../It is urgent that some strong measures should be adopted to solve the problem.
3.Effective measures should be adopted before things get worse. Firstly, ... Secondly, ... Thirdly, ...
4.With the aim of ..., we are supposed to carry out a series of measures. For one thing, ... For another, ...
Ⅲ.结尾部分:倡议者的决心和希望
1.Let's join together to fight ...
2.Even a small action is meaningful to .../Let's take action now!
3.Only if we take effective steps to deal with this problem now can we ...
[建写作模型·展规范形体]
Dear ,
In recent years, we have to face the problem (社会现象).As we all know, (现象的危害性). In order to , it is high time that (倡议的目的).
Faced with the problem, we should take some effective measures. Firstly, (倡议措施一). What's more, we should (倡议措施二). Last but not least, it is a good idea (倡议措施三或补充说明其他内容).
Let's (倡议者的决心和希望).
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求“同”存“异”·写法一比清
把握通性 1.标题表明文章主旨。
2.都注重语言的感染力。
3.时态均以一般现在时为主。
注意个性 开头称呼:演讲稿有明确的发言对象,开头一般有称呼。倡议书的对象范围往往不确定,通常没有称呼。
主体内容:演讲稿正文部分一般都以议论为主,论证简洁而缜密,语言短促有力,情感热烈。倡议书正文部分通常情理交融,意在引起倡议对象的情感共鸣。
本课结束
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