内容正文:
UNIT 2 BRIDGING CULTURES
写作精讲
Express your opinions on studying abroad
1.文本类型:书信,陈述观点性议论文。
2.要点内容:作为一名曾经在海外留学的学生,给即将出国的朋友提
建议。
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1.书信正文要有常用的开头招呼语,注意语言的得体与礼貌。
2.以第二、第三人称和一般现在时为主。
3.题中所列的要点要写全。要注意使用一定的过渡词,适当增加细
节,力求内容连贯丰富。
4.在文章的结尾表达对对方的鼓励,并表明期待收到对方来信的愿望。
注意事项:
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本单元的两封书信运用了大量恰当的短语、关联词和高级句
式,使得整篇文章行文流畅,条理清晰。比如to beɡin with,to sum
up,all in all等短语的运用彰显了作者扎实的语言基本功。文中还
采用了大量的高级句式,使表达更有气势,比如:
①A final point to consider is that while studyinɡ abroad
does have potential benefits,younɡ people who study in China
also have a ɡreat future to look forward to!
学以致用:
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②As China has boomed,the educational environment has
improved siɡnificantly,with many ɡreat universities now
available.
③All in all,studyinɡ abroad helps to build character and
increase people’s understandinɡ of cultural diversity while
strenɡtheninɡ China and buildinɡ a shared future for all.
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课文原句:Cooperatinɡ with people from diverse cultural
backɡrounds helps us view the world from different anɡles
and thus ɡives us more insiɡht into our own culture.
句式升级:It is cooperatinɡ with people from diverse cultural
backɡrounds that helps us view the world from different
anɡles and thus ɡives us more insiɡht into our own culture.
句式升级:
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假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jackson最近在考虑是否要出国留学,
他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他回复一封电子邮件,
阐述你的观点,并给出理由(不少于三点)。
写作训练
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体裁:
篇章布局:
主体时态和人称:
How to write an arguementative letter?
书信体 (顶格写Dear ... ,)
三段式:
main point
reasons + evidences / examples
conclusion
present tense (一般现在时)
para. 1
para. 2
para. 3
三步走
注意:(connectors)衔接词的使用
Dear Jackson,
I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be helpful to you.
我很高兴分享我的观点。希望这些观点能对你有所帮助。
As far as I’m concerned, the advantages of studying online far outweigh its disadvantages.
1. 在我看来,出国留学的利远大于弊。
Personally speaking, the advantages of studying abroad far outweigh its disadvantages.
(仿)就我而言,网上学习的利远大于弊
Dear Jackson,
I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be helpful to you.
1. Personally speaking, the advantages of studying abroad far outweigh its disadvantages.
2. 出国留学往往被认为是会让我们身处一种外语环境并且使得学习过程有趣且有效的好机会。
3. 出国留学是加深对世界认知的最好方式。
4. 处在一个新环境下, 我们走出舒适区,变得更好。
5. 总的来说,我觉得你可以选择出国留学,开始新生活。
Studying abroad is often considered as an important opportunity which will lead to a bright future.
出国留学往往被认为是通向光明未来的重要机会。
There is no better way to improve a second language than studying abroad.
出国留学是提高第二语言的最好方式。
2. (仿)出国留学往往被认为是会让我们身处一种外语环境并且使得学习过程有趣且有效的好机会
2. Studying abroad is often considered as a significant opportunity which will put us in a foreign language setting and make learning process interesting and effective.
3.(仿)出国留学是加深对世界认知的最好方式。(deepen the understanding of...)
3. There is no better way to deepen our understanding of the world than studying abroad.
Dear Jackson,
I’m more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be helpful
to you.
1. Personally speaking, the advantages of studying abroad far outweigh its disadvantages.
2. Studying abroad is often considered as a significant opportunity which will put us in a foreign language setting and make learning process interesting and effective.
3. There is no better way to deepen our understanding of the world than studying abroad.
4. Surrounded by a new environment, we can walk out of our comfort zone, which will make us change for the better.
5. Generally speaking, I think you can choose to study abroad and start a new life.
现在加上你喜欢的(connectors)吧!
To begin with,
In addition,
What's more,
Sincerely
Li Hua
Checklist
①文章结构(7分)
②语言特点(3分)
③语言的规范性(3分)
④卷面书写(2分)
衡水体/印刷体;
整齐好看;
观点是否明确;
主题段落结构是否符合逻辑并具有说服力;
衔接词使用情况;
语法错误情况;
Homework:
把写作工整地抄在默写本上
Thank you
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