Unit 4 写作课件2024-2025学年人教版八年级英语下册

Unit 4 Why don’t you talk to your parents? Section B writing Learning Objectives 1. To learn to share your opinion about taking after-school activities. 2. To write a letter to express your opinion about after-school activities. 3. To do the exercises in Self Check and review the words and expressions in this unit. 课前抽背 你应该解释你不介意他一直看电视 或许你可以做更多事,这样他们才有更多的时间进行合适的交流。 当他们争吵的时候,就像有一朵大大的黑色的乌云笼罩在我们家上空。 然而,这样忙碌的生活会给学生们很多压力。 忙碌的孩子在7点前不会回家。 竞争在小时候就开始,一直持续到他们长大才结束。 与~做比较 所有这些活动都会给孩子们造成压力。 孩子们需要有时间休息和为自己思考。 尽管想要成功的孩子是正常的,但是拥有快乐的孩子甚至更为重要。 You should explain that you don't mind him watching TV all the time. Maybe you could do more jobs around the house so that they have more time for proper communication. When they argue, it's like a big, black cloud hanging over our home. However, such a busy life can place great pressure on students. However, the tired children don't get home until after 7:00 pm. Competition starts very young and continues until the kids get older. compare ~ with ~ All this activities can cause a lots of stress for children. Kids should have time to relax and think for themselves. Although it's normal to want successful children, it's even more important to have happy children. Writing Task 一个杂志社记者采访了一些家长关于孩子们的课后补习班问题,根据家长们的观点,请你给杂志写一封信。 要求:1.表达出你对家长观点的不赞同 2.说出自己的理由 Opinions on after-school classes for children 1.能帮助孩子进入一所好的大学 2.想让孩子成为一个成功的人 3.从小开始学对孩子们有好处 Step 1:审 一个杂志社记者采访了一些家长关于孩子们的课后补习班问题,根据家长们的观点,请你给杂志写一封信。 要求: 1.表达出你对家长观点的不赞同 2.说出自己的理由 Opinions on after-school classes for children 1.能帮助孩子进入一所好的大学 2.想让孩子成为一个成功的人 3.从小开始学对孩子们有好处 审人称: 审时态: 审要点: 审体裁: 第一/三人称 一般现在时 不赞同、理由、家长的观点 议论文 Step 2:List details 列结构和要点 1.帮助孩子进入一所好的大学 2.想让孩子成为一个成功的人 3.从小开始学对孩子们有好处 help kids get into a good university want their children to be successful Starting learning from a young age is good for children. beginning:facts+opinion body:parents opinion+reasons ending:conclusion-disagree 要点 好句 so ~that~ such as doing although not only~but also ~ in order to neither push~ place much pressure on 1.help kids get into a good university 一些家长认为课后补习班能帮助孩子们进入好大学。周末他们带他们的孩子去各种各样的课后补习班。 Some parents think after-school classes can help kids get into a good university. They take their children to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends. More details 表达家长的想法和做法 Step 3:Add more details 扩充要点 1.help kids get into a good university 我不这样认为。周末对孩子们来说放松自己是很重要的。在工作日,他们都忙于学习。 Step 3:Add more details 扩充要点 I don’t think so. It’s important for kids to relax themselves on weekends. They are busy studying on weekdays. 表达你的观点并说出理由 2.want their children to be successful 每位父母都想他们的孩子成功。一些认为取得好成绩是获得成功的唯一方法。 Step 3:Add more details 扩充要点 Every parent wants their children to be successful. Some of them think getting good grades is the only way to be successful. 3. Start learning from a young age is good for children. Step 3:Add more details 扩充要点 孩子们在周末需要好好休息。 If they do ,what will happen? 如果他们休息得好,他们将会在校期间学得更好。 If they have a good rest, they will study better on school days. Children need to have a good rest on weekends. 你的观点 好的影响或者结果 3. It’s good for children to start learning from a young age. 变句式 3.It’s good for children to start learning from a young age. Step 3:Add more details 扩充要点 孩子们在周末需要好好休息。 If they don’t ,what will happen? 如果他们休息得不好,他们将会感到累,成绩会下降。 If they don’t have a good rest, they will feel tired and grades will drop. Children need to have a good rest on weekends. 不好的影响或结果 How to make this one better? Some parents think after-school classes can help kids get into a good university. _ they take their children to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends. _ I don’t think so. _ _ _ ,it’s important for kids to relax themselves on weekends _ they are busy studying on weekdays. Step 4:Add linking words(连词、过渡句或改变句式) So Tips : 连接词和短语使文章更连贯。 But In my opinion because _ _ _ every parent wants their children to be successful. They think getting good grades is the only way to be successful. They _ think it’s good for children to start learning from a young age. Though grades are important, _ _ _ _ ,children need to have a good rest on weekends. If they do, they will study better on school days. It’s true that also At the same time The better they have a rest, the better they will study on school days. 改变句式 添开头: 表达自己的观点并说出理由(不同意) I don’t _ agree with some parents. really _ children should have more time to do what they like on weekends. They don’t have to study _ _ _. Because all the time 添结尾: 简短总结自己的想法和观点 _ _ _ ,I believe it’s better for their future _ they have more happiness. In a word Remember, happiness and health are more important than grades! if In short/All in all Beginning: Idon’t really agree with some parents. Because children should have more time to do what they like. They don’t have to study all the time. 分段落 Body: Some parents think after-school classes can help kids get into a good university. So they take their children to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends. But I don’t think so. In my opinion, it’s important for kids to relax themselves on weekends. On weekdays, they are busy studying all the time. It’s true that every parent wants their children to be successful. They think getting good grades is the only way to be successful. They also think it’s good for children to start learning from a young age. At the same time ,Children need to have a good rest on weekends. The better they have a rest, the better they will study on school days. 分段落 Ending: In a word ,I believe it’s better for their future if they have more happiness. Remember, happiness and healthy are more important than grades! 分段落 Step 5 beautify the passage(美化文章) I don’t really agree with some parents. Because children should have more time to do what they like. They don’t have to study all the time. Some parents think after-school classes can help kids get into a good university. So they take their children to all kinds of after-school classes on weekends. But I don’t think so. In my opinion, it’s important for kids to relax themselves on weekends. On weekdays, they are busy studying all the time. //It’s true that every parent wants their children to be successful. They think getting good grades is the only way to be successful. //They also think it’s good for children to start learning from a young age. At the same time, Children need to have a good rest on weekends. The better they have a rest, the better they will study on school days. In a word, I believe it’s better for their future if they have more happiness. Remember, happiness and healthy are more important than grades! who thinks that students need more after-school classes 少中心句 Parents have some improper ideas about after-school classes. neither ~ nor ~ Neither outstanding grades nor good universities can replace a happy life. Writing Task 一个杂志社记者采访了一些家长关于孩子们的课后补习班问题。根据家长们的观点,请你给杂志写一封信。 要求: 1.表达出你对家长观点的赞同 2.说出自己的理由 Opinions on after-school classes for children 1.能帮助孩子进入一所好的大学 2.想让孩子成为一个成功的人 3.从小开始学对孩子们有好处 Part1: Beginning Part2: Body Part3: Ending Write your own passage like this: Practice: Write your passage Show time Learn to share good passages with others. Fill in the blanks using until, so that or although. 1.You should eat more now _ you won’t be hungry later. 2. _ you may not like to do chores, you should help your parents around the house. so that Although Self Check 3. You could save more money _ you can buy a gift for your friend’s birthday. 4. Kids shouldn’t play computer games _ late at night. They should rest early. 5. _ many people like to eat junk food, they should really eat more fruit and vegetables _ they can be healthy. so that until Although so that 2 For each problem, choose the advice you agree with more. Then write your own advice. 1. My best friend and I had a fight, and now she won’t speak to me. A: You should keep trying to talk to her until she talks to you. B: Why don’t you wait a few more days before talking to her? My advice: _ _ You could write a letter to her so that you can say you’re sorry. 2. My friend wants me to go to a party on the weekend, but I want to study for my exams next week. A: Why don’t you just go to the party? It’ll help you to relax. B: You should study for the exams because they’re more important than a party. My advice: _ _ Why don’t you tell your friend that your parents don’t allow you to go there? 3. My brother watches television while I’m trying to study. A: Why don’t you tell him to do something quiet when you’re studying? B: You could tell him to turn down the TV. My advice:_ _ You should tell your brother to study with you. 重点短语: 1.学会放松 2.如此之多 3.考试技巧 4.删掉他们的几个活动 5.匆忙吃晚饭 6.一位三个孩子的母亲 7.这样的压力 8.各种各样的… learn to relax so many / much exam skills cut out a few of their activities have a quick dinner a mother of three such stress all kinds of … 9.把他们和其他孩子进行比较 10.造成许多压力 11.有时间放松 12.(他们)独立思考 13.甚至更重要 compare them with other children cause a lot of stress have time to relax think for themselves even more important 重点句子 1.Taylor一家是一个典型的美国家庭。 The Taylors are a typical American family. 2.我真的想他们成功。 I really want them to be successful. 3.然而,疲惫的孩子们直到晚上7点后才到家。 However, the tired children don’t get home until after 7:00 p.m. 4.该做作业了。/ 做作业的时间到了。 It’s time for homework. = It’s time to do homework. 5.人们不该把他们的孩子督促得那么紧。 People shouldn’t push their kids so hard. 6.太多压力不利于孩子的发展。 Too much pressure is not good for a child’s development. $$