Unit 2 Out of this world（读后续写）-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高二英语单元写作深度指导（译林版2020）

Unit 2 Out of this world单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） 三年考情（2022-2024） 命题趋势 2024 新高考I&II卷 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。 浙江1月卷 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 九省联考卷 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 2023 新高考I&II卷 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 浙江1月卷 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 2022 新高考I&II卷 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 浙江6月卷 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 浙江1月卷 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 2021 新高考I&II卷 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 浙江6月卷 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 浙江1月卷 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 2020 新高考I&II卷 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 浙江7月卷 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 浙江1月卷 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 常用的动词： 风的描述: blow 刮 howl 怒号 roar 呼啸 whip 鞭打 kiss 亲吻 雨的描述：beat against 拍打 pour down 倾盆 fall 落下 雪的描述：dance 跳舞 float/ fall 飘落 melt away 融化 blanket 裹住 be covered with被…覆盖 星星的描述：shine 发光 twinkle 闪耀 decorate 装饰 hide 躲藏 太阳的描述：come out 出来 rise 升起 set 落下 be bathed in 沐浴在 flood in 照射进来 常用的形容词: 风/雨的描述: gentle/soft 轻柔的 warm 温暖的 pleasant 令人愉悦的 icy/ freezing 冰冷的 strong/ violent 猛烈的 howling 呼啸的 bone-chilling 刺骨的 dreadful可怕的 雪的描述：feathery 鹅毛般的 tiny 极小的 pure 纯洁的 clean 干净的 星星的描述：lovely 可爱的 little 小的 shining/glowing 亮闪闪的  pale/faint 暗淡的 starless 没有星星的 太阳的描述：warm温暖的 burning 火辣辣的 其他的名词表达：the blue sky 蓝天the song of the birds 鸟鸣  the fragrant flowers/rose 芬香的花 / 玫瑰 the green grass 青草  the rising sun 冉冉升起的太阳 the setting sun 落日 积累表示天气的高级词汇 1. 多雨的季节：a rainy season 2. 暴风雨之夜：a stormy night 3. 四面受风：exposed to the four winds of heaven 4. 连绵不断的雨：continuous/constant rains 5. 在茫茫大雨中：in the blinding rain 6. 深埋在雪中：be buried in snow 7. 难以忍受的热：unbearably hot 8. 在春天温暖的阳光里：in the warm spring sunshine 9. 放晴了: clear up 10. 狂风暴雨：fierce/heavy/violent storms 11. 及时雨，好雨：a timely/seasonable rain 12. 沐日光浴：bathe/bask in (the) sunshine 13. 在盛夏灼热的阳光下：under the sunshine 积累表示地理位置高级词汇 1. 位置优越的城市：a favorably situated city 2. 水下面的暗礁：a hidden rock beneath the surface of 3. —个偏僻的小村子：a small village off the map 4. 离海滨仅直尺之遥：within a stone’s throw of the 5. 位于...最北端：be situated at the northern extreme 6. 在群山环抱的村庄里：in a village among the hills 7. 朝南的房间：room facing south 8. 人烟稀少的农村地区：the thinly populated rural area 日 1. In the early dawn, the guard towers were silhouetted against the sky. 黎明时，天空中映出了望踏的轮廓。 2. Dawn is beginning to show in the east. 东方露出曙光。 3. Dawn mantled in the sky. 满天曙光。 4. The sun rose bathed the earth in its glow. 太阳升起，灿烂的阳光沐浴着大地。 5. The sun peered through a vast cloud. 太阳从大块云朵中隐约出现。 6. The sunbeam struck full on his face. 阳光正好照在他脸上。 7. The descending sun was making brilliance upon the water. 落日将余辉洒在水面上。 8. The setting sun kindled the sky. 落日照红了天空。 9. The sunset dyed the sky red. 夕阳映红了天空。 10. Dewdrops sparkled in the morning sun. 露珠在早晨的阳光下闪闪发光。 11. The clouds rolled away and sun came out. 云散日出。 12. The fog lifted and the sun came out. 雾散日出。 13. Light streamed in through the window when I parted the curtains.当我拉开窗帘时，光线从窗口射了进来。 14. In the sunbeam passing through the window there are fine grains of dust shining like gold. 在射入窗内的阳光里，细微的灰尘像金子一般在闪闪发亮。 15. Sunrays filtered in wherever they could, driving out darkness and choking the shadows. 阳光射入了它所能透过的地方，赶走了黑暗，驱散了阴影。 16. The sun broke through the clouds. 阳光从云层中透了过来。 17. Daylight filtered through clouds. 日光透过云层。 18. The sun burst through the clouds and shone over the earth. 阳光穿破乌云，普照大地。 19. Yellow fog filled the streets and hid the daylight. 黄色的烟雾弥漫在街头巷尾，遮天蔽日。 20. A great cloud rose from the ground and followed the rail of the great sun. 一朵庞大的烟云随着一轮巨日从地面升起。 21. A red sun rose slowly from the calm sea.一轮红日从风平浪静的海面冉冉升起。 22. The rising sun flamed the eastern sky. 朝阳染红了东方的天空。 23. The sun, which had hidden all day, now came out in all its splendor. 天空布满了夕阳西斜时的种种色彩。 月 24. Into the dim clouds was swimming a crescent moon. The garden was bathed in moonlight. 一弯新月渐渐隐没在朦胧的云彩里去了。 25. The moon was slowly rising above the sea. 月亮慢慢从海上升起。 26. The moon is moving west against the background of the stars. 月亮在星星的衬托下正向西运行。 27. The moon was obscured by dark clouds. 月亮被乌云遮蔽了。 28. The moon went in and it grew rather dark. 月亮被云层遮蔽，天暗了下来。 29. The moon’s flame brightened the vast expanse of snow. 月亮照亮了一片雪原。 星 30. The meteor (shooting star) shot across the sky. 流星飞快地掠过天空。 31. Night lowered its curtain and mantled the land. 夜幕降临，笼罩了大地。 32. At night, millions of stars shine in the darkness. 入夜，繁星在夜空中闪烁。 33. As night fell, lights in the sky multiplied. 夜幕降临，满天繁星。 34. The night sky is spotted with stars. 夜晚的天空繁星点点。 35. Bright, very bright were the stars over the dark hills. 黑黝黝的群山上空，星星是多么明亮啊！ 36. The stars are not giving much light tonight. 今晚的星光不亮。 37. It was evening, the sun had set and the stillness of twilight was upon everything. 那是一个夜晚，太阳落山了，黄昏时刻的寂静笼罩啄一切。 38. The tower clock speaks night. 塔楼的钟声报告夜晚的来临。 39. The sun, which had hidden all day, now came out in all its splendor. 那个整天躲在云层里的太阳，现在又光芒四射地露面了。 40. The garden was bathed in moonlight. 那花园沐浴在月光里。 （2024·贵州黔南·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Someday I’m going to Ireland,” my 5-year-old daughter Carrie said. “Well, maybe you can!” I said, having faith in her ambitions. Already she was a hard-working, dependable child. Her chores were performed quickly and skillfully. I knew she had the potential to make her dreams come true. I realized, however, that she would need a good job to pay for the luxury of traveling. Five years later, when Carrie was ten, a tornado roared through the hills of Tennessee, destroying our dairy (奶牛场), our outbuildings and all our fencing. This disaster completely changed our lives. My husband, Charlie, was disabled by the tornado. He tried to rebuild the dairy but was physically and emotionally unable to resume the 24/7 workload. After trying and failing at several methods of earning income, he decided to become a baker. We purchased a small bakery, fully equipped, and removed it onto our farmland. Unfortunately, the business didn’t go well. While our family was going through difficult times — emotionally and financially — the dreams and spirit of our kid was not shattered. Carrie was doing well in school, and I smiled the day I read her essay entitled, “Things I would like to do”. Topping the list were these words: I want to go to Ireland someday. A few years later, Carrie entered high school and during her second year, she enrolled in a German language class. This class occasionally organized an optional trip abroad, usually to Germany. Given our situation, I did not think it was a possible option for Carrie, until she came home from school one day, hardly able to contain her excitement and said, “Mama, you’ll never guess where the class is going.” “Where?” I asked. “To Ireland,” she smiled broadly. “You’re kidding!” I said. “Ireland! Where you’ve always wanted to go!” “But it would probably cost a fortune to go!” she said. I thought she was probably right — it would seem a fortune to us. “Well,” I said hesitantly, “you never know. Ask the teacher what it will cost. It won’t hurt to ask.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Carrie came home the next day with mixed feelings. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Carrie began putting the idea into practice, making a variety of baked goods. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Carrie came home the next day with mixed feelings. She told us that the trip would cost $2,100, and she had two years to prepare for it. “But that’s too much.” She said with a hopeful yet doubting voice. “Well,” I said slowly, “you have two years to earn the money. Maybe you could pay it off in time by trying different ways like doing odd jobs or having yard sales. You could also use the bakery and sell baked goods. Don’t forget the bakery stays idle and you are an excellent cook.” Hearing the words, Carrie jumped with excitement. Carrie began putting the idea into practice, making a variety of baked goods. Soon, her fried pies became popular and her signature product. She sold them for one dollar each, which meant she would have to fry a lot of pies to pay for the trip. It is hard work but it could be done. Orders began rolling in, and the Ireland fund grew. A feature story by a local newspaper further spurred business, and she earned enough fund. I take pride in my daughter who realized a childhood dream by the delicately fried pies. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了嘉莉梦想着去爱尔兰旅行，但是一场龙卷风摧毁了她家的农场。她继续追求自己的梦想，在学校表现优异，并通过制作和销售油炸馅饼赚钱去国外旅行。凭借决心和努力，她实现了去爱尔兰旅游的梦想。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“第二天，嘉莉回到家，心里百感交集。”可知，第一段可描写嘉莉告诉父母这次旅行的花费以及决定通过自己的努力赚钱。 ②由第二段首句内容“嘉莉开始把这个想法付诸实践，做了各种各样的烘焙食品。”可知，第二段可描写嘉莉通过卖馅饼赚到了足够的资金，最终实现了自己的梦想。 2.续写线索：心里百感交集——告诉父母旅行的花费——决定通过自己的努力赚钱——把这个想法付诸实践——通过卖馅饼赚到了足够的资金——实现了自己的梦想 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①实现：realize/ make...come true ②促进，刺激：spur/ promote ③为……感到自豪：take pride in /be proud of 情绪类 ①兴奋：excitement /thrill ②怀疑的：doubting/ skeptical 【点睛】[高分句型1]She sold them for one dollar each, which meant she would have to fry a lot of pies to pay for the trip.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。） [高分句型2] Hearing the words, Carrie jumped with excitement.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。） 1.（2024·黑龙江·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Michael saw the trouble coming. There standing in the hallway was Frank, the boy who enjoyed making fun of anyone at any given moment. Frank was tall and strong, so few of his victims stood up to him. Michael hated the idea that Frank always got away with his wrongdoing. Yet like most kids who were picked on, he just took it quietly and waited for the unpleasant to pass. Frank walked up, his eyes locked on the books in Michael’s arms. When they met, Frank stopped unexpectedly, “Hey, let me see those books!” Some students watched as Michael held out the books he was carrying, trying not to give away his nervousness. Frank took a book, looked inside for a second, and then threw the book at Michael, who dropped all the other books. “Hey, those are school property,” Frank barked, “Be careful!” Then he walked away, laughing loudly. Michael, his cheeks turning red, half kicked the fallen books. Suddenly a hand picked up one book. “You look like you could use a p ally (盟友),” a friendly voice said. It was Ramon, the most athletic boy in the high school. Michael couldn’t believe Ramon was stopping to help him as they barely spoke. “Thanks,” Michael sighed with relief. “It’s confusing. I don’t know what his problems is.” “Well, as I see it,” Ramon said, “you need to find a way to end this.” Michael nodded, stuck for what to say. Ramon continued, “You know my grandmother used to tell me whenever I had a problem with someone. She’d say, ‘You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar (醋).’” Looking puzzled, Michael asked, “What does that mean?” “It means kindness may be more effective than anger,” Ramon explained. “Can you just tell Frank to stop picking on me?” Michael suggested. “That’s vinegar,” Ramon laughed as he walked away. “Try honey instead.” Ramon’s words left Michael thinking. The next school day brought Michael’s usual pain. There stood Frank, and Michael knew it would be just seconds before he had to face him in the middle of the hall. Frank came nearer. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then, suddenly, the unexpected happened. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank’s books on the floor. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      Then, suddenly, the unexpected happened. Just as Michael looked nervously, Frank somehow tripped over something. Down he fell onto the ground, sending all his books flying and spreading out on the floor. Although Michael was just as shocked, his mind was racing. Then Ramon's Grandma's words popped into his mind, “You can catch more flies with honey than vinegar.” He knew what to do. Barely had Frank gotten up with loads of embarrassment when Michael went up. Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank's books on the floor. Offering them to him, Michael said with a smile, “You look like you could use an ally.” Now, it was Frank's turn to be numbed there with burning cheeks. He quickly took his books, muttered in a low voice, “Uh, thanks” and fled the scene. Out of the corner of his eye, Michael caught Ramon approaching with a knowing smile and a thumbs-up. “My grandma would be proud of you,” Ramon remarked. “Well, I guess that's just honey,” Michael grinned. “And I hope it sticks.” 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Michael在学校总被Frank欺负。一天，Frank把书扔向Michael，导致其他的书都掉在了地上，然后大笑走开了。Michael非常生气，在捡书的时候，Ramon出现了，把她奶奶经常说的话告诉了他，意思是当别人找你麻烦的时候，善意比愤怒更有效，Ramon让他试试善意。第二天，Michae又看到Frank站在那里。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“然后，突然，意想不到的事情发生了。”可知，第一段可描写Frank摔倒了，书都飞了出去，这时候Michael想起Ramon奶奶的话的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“Michael弯下腰，迅速捡起地板上Frank的书。”可知，第二段可描写Michael帮Frank捡起书，让Frank很尴尬，说了谢谢后逃走的过程。 2.续写线索：Frank摔倒——书飞了出去——Michael震惊——想起Ramon奶奶的话——帮Frank捡起书——Frank尴尬说谢谢——Ramon夸奖Michael 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①.绊倒：trip over / trip up ②.想起：pop into one’s mind/call to mind ③.提供：offer/afford/provide 情绪类 ①.震惊的：shocked /stunned ②.紧张地：nervously / tensely 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Although Michael was just as shocked, his mind was racing.（由连接词although引导的让步状语从句） [高分句型2]. Barely had Frank gotten up with loads of embarrassment when Michael went up.（运用了倒装句和barely...when...固定句型） [高分句型3]. Offering them to him, Michael said with a smile, “You look like you could use an ally.”（ 运用了现在分词作状语） 2.（2024·河北石家庄·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Around 5:30 a.m., I met my running group — the Los Angeles Roadrunners training team. I had trained with them for ten long months. That ten months left me with blisters (水泡) and back aches. But my pace leaders reassured me that no matter what, I should keep going. I knew my very first marathon was coming. More importantly, my husband and my daughter promised to wait for me at the finishing line. At about 6:30 a.m., I went to the starting gates and my excitement grew as the gun shot for the start and I was on cloud nine. The first few miles were quite easy, but by mile 8 the pain was starting to spread all over my body, as if it were growing like a cancer. I had no choice but to slow down. Slowing down is much better than quitting, so I slowed down from my group and realized that the rest of this race was going to be just me and the road. Mile 12 brought about doubts whether I could even finish this race. By mile 15, my pace had slowed even further. I reminded myself, “Just get to that finish line. Keep running, head held high.” Mile 18 brought me into familiar territory — my neighborhood. I had slowed to a walk by this point because my body didn’t want to move an inch. I wanted to just walk home. But I couldn’t because I had to keep going. By mile 21, I had been told many times by spectators (观众), “You’re almost there. Keep it up!” The smile on their faces, and the determined look in their eyes made me realize how much they cared that I could finish. Left foot forward, now right foot forward. Every step I took, the intensity of the pain soaked (浸入) into every cell in my body. I’d been running for 4 hours with what seemed like no end in sight. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With just 4 miles left, I really wanted to quit. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the smiling faces of my family came into my sight. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 With just 4 miles left, I really wanted to quit. My legs felt like lead, and my breathing was labored. Doubts filled my mind. “How could I finish? Was it even possible?” But then I thought of my husband and daughter waiting for me at the finish line. Their encouragement and love gave me a new burst of energy. I gritted my teeth and forced myself to take one step after another, telling myself that giving up was not an option. Finally, the smiling faces of my family came into my sight. Tears welled up in my eyes and streamed down my cheeks. I summoned all my remaining strength and ran towards them. Crossing that finish line was the greatest moment of my life. The exhaustion vanished instantly as I was embraced by my loved ones. I had done it. I had completed my first marathon, proving to myself that with determination and love, anything was possible. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者参加并完成第一场马拉松比赛的亲身经历和心路历程，包括训练过程、比赛中的感受、遇到的困难、克服困难的过程以及完成比赛后的激动心情。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“只剩下4英里时，我真的很想放弃。”以及第二段首句内容“终于，我看到了家人的笑脸。”可知，第一段可描写作者觉得每一步都很痛苦，但是想到自己的家人，作者决定坚持到终点。 ②由第二段首句内容“终于，我看到了家人的笑脸。”可知，第二段可描写看到家人的笑脸后，作者仿佛又充满了力气，完成了自己人生的第一场马拉松。 2.续写线索：想放弃——每一步都痛苦——决定不放弃——再次充满力气——向终点冲去——为自己感到骄傲 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①放弃：give up/abandon ②拥抱：embrace/hug ③跑向：run towards/rush to 情绪类 ①疑惑：doubt/disbelief ②决心：determination/resolution 【点睛】【高分句型1】I gritted my teeth and forced myself to take one step after another, telling myself that giving up was not an option.（运用了现在分词作状语及that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】The exhaustion vanished instantly as I was embraced by my loved ones.（运用了as引导的状语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 2 Out of this world单元写作深度指导（译林版2020） （读后续写） 三年考情（2022-2024） 命题趋势 2024 新高考I&II卷 车站履行承诺还钱给出租车司机 新高考读后续写语篇类型以记叙文为主，叙议结合为辅。语篇材料通常具有正能量且通俗易懂，故事线索逻辑性较强。新高考主题均选自人与自我、人与社会、人与自然。内容包括个人成长类、逆境脱困类；善举助人类、社会亲情友爱类、人与动物类、趣事回忆类等等。 浙江1月卷 利用脑图来确定方位找到教学楼 九省联考卷 志愿者训练意外发现海豚的秘密 2023 新高考I&II卷 老师鼓励参加作文比赛终获大奖 浙江1月卷 作者两次与蜂鸟的神奇邂逅感悟 2022 新高考I&II卷 鼓励身残志坚男孩参加校越野赛 浙江6月卷 为社区无家可归的人们发放食物 浙江1月卷 与“最不合拍”搭档终成为好朋友 2021 新高考I&II卷 孩子母亲节给妈妈做早餐送惊喜 浙江6月卷 作者上学时一次打工挣钱的经历 浙江1月卷 少年头意外卡在南瓜中爆红网络 2020 新高考I&II卷 三个孩子帮助贫困家庭孩子挣钱 浙江7月卷 与北极熊面对面的一次脱险经历 浙江1月卷 帮助宠物狗重获快乐收获新伙伴 常用的动词： 风的描述: blow 刮 howl 怒号 roar 呼啸 whip 鞭打 kiss 亲吻 雨的描述：beat against 拍打 pour down 倾盆 fall 落下 雪的描述：dance 跳舞 float/ fall 飘落 melt away 融化 blanket 裹住 be covered with被…覆盖 星星的描述：shine 发光 twinkle 闪耀 decorate 装饰 hide 躲藏 太阳的描述：come out 出来 rise 升起 set 落下 be bathed in 沐浴在 flood in 照射进来 常用的形容词: 风/雨的描述: gentle/soft 轻柔的 warm 温暖的 pleasant 令人愉悦的 icy/ freezing 冰冷的 strong/ violent 猛烈的 howling 呼啸的 bone-chilling 刺骨的 dreadful可怕的 雪的描述：feathery 鹅毛般的 tiny 极小的 pure 纯洁的 clean 干净的 星星的描述：lovely 可爱的 little 小的 shining/glowing 亮闪闪的  pale/faint 暗淡的 starless 没有星星的 太阳的描述：warm温暖的 burning 火辣辣的 其他的名词表达：the blue sky 蓝天the song of the birds 鸟鸣  the fragrant flowers/rose 芬香的花 / 玫瑰 the green grass 青草  the rising sun 冉冉升起的太阳 the setting sun 落日 积累表示天气的高级词汇 1. 多雨的季节：a rainy season 2. 暴风雨之夜：a stormy night 3. 四面受风：exposed to the four winds of heaven 4. 连绵不断的雨：continuous/constant rains 5. 在茫茫大雨中：in the blinding rain 6. 深埋在雪中：be buried in snow 7. 难以忍受的热：unbearably hot 8. 在春天温暖的阳光里：in the warm spring sunshine 9. 放晴了: clear up 10. 狂风暴雨：fierce/heavy/violent storms 11. 及时雨，好雨：a timely/seasonable rain 12. 沐日光浴：bathe/bask in (the) sunshine 13. 在盛夏灼热的阳光下：under the sunshine 积累表示地理位置高级词汇 1. 位置优越的城市：a favorably situated city 2. 水下面的暗礁：a hidden rock beneath the surface of 3. —个偏僻的小村子：a small village off the map 4. 离海滨仅直尺之遥：within a stone’s throw of the 5. 位于...最北端：be situated at the northern extreme 6. 在群山环抱的村庄里：in a village among the hills 7. 朝南的房间：room facing south 8. 人烟稀少的农村地区：the thinly populated rural area 日 1. In the early dawn, the guard towers were silhouetted against the sky. 黎明时，天空中映出了望踏的轮廓。 2. Dawn is beginning to show in the east. 东方露出曙光。 3. Dawn mantled in the sky. 满天曙光。 4. The sun rose bathed the earth in its glow. 太阳升起，灿烂的阳光沐浴着大地。 5. The sun peered through a vast cloud. 太阳从大块云朵中隐约出现。 6. The sunbeam struck full on his face. 阳光正好照在他脸上。 7. The descending sun was making brilliance upon the water. 落日将余辉洒在水面上。 8. The setting sun kindled the sky. 落日照红了天空。 9. The sunset dyed the sky red. 夕阳映红了天空。 10. Dewdrops sparkled in the morning sun. 露珠在早晨的阳光下闪闪发光。 11. The clouds rolled away and sun came out. 云散日出。 12. The fog lifted and the sun came out. 雾散日出。 13. Light streamed in through the window when I parted the curtains.当我拉开窗帘时，光线从窗口射了进来。 14. In the sunbeam passing through the window there are fine grains of dust shining like gold. 在射入窗内的阳光里，细微的灰尘像金子一般在闪闪发亮。 15. Sunrays filtered in wherever they could, driving out darkness and choking the shadows. 阳光射入了它所能透过的地方，赶走了黑暗，驱散了阴影。 16. The sun broke through the clouds. 阳光从云层中透了过来。 17. Daylight filtered through clouds. 日光透过云层。 18. The sun burst through the clouds and shone over the earth. 阳光穿破乌云，普照大地。 19. Yellow fog filled the streets and hid the daylight. 黄色的烟雾弥漫在街头巷尾，遮天蔽日。 20. A great cloud rose from the ground and followed the rail of the great sun. 一朵庞大的烟云随着一轮巨日从地面升起。 21. A red sun rose slowly from the calm sea.一轮红日从风平浪静的海面冉冉升起。 22. The rising sun flamed the eastern sky. 朝阳染红了东方的天空。 23. The sun, which had hidden all day, now came out in all its splendor. 天空布满了夕阳西斜时的种种色彩。 月 24. Into the dim clouds was swimming a crescent moon. The garden was bathed in moonlight. 一弯新月渐渐隐没在朦胧的云彩里去了。 25. The moon was slowly rising above the sea. 月亮慢慢从海上升起。 26. The moon is moving west against the background of the stars. 月亮在星星的衬托下正向西运行。 27. The moon was obscured by dark clouds. 月亮被乌云遮蔽了。 28. The moon went in and it grew rather dark. 月亮被云层遮蔽，天暗了下来。 29. The moon’s flame brightened the vast expanse of snow. 月亮照亮了一片雪原。 星 30. The meteor (shooting star) shot across the sky. 流星飞快地掠过天空。 31. Night lowered its curtain and mantled the land. 夜幕降临，笼罩了大地。 32. At night, millions of stars shine in the darkness. 入夜，繁星在夜空中闪烁。 33. As night fell, lights in the sky multiplied. 夜幕降临，满天繁星。 34. The night sky is spotted with stars. 夜晚的天空繁星点点。 35. Bright, very bright were the stars over the dark hills. 黑黝黝的群山上空，星星是多么明亮啊！ 36. The stars are not giving much light tonight. 今晚的星光不亮。 37. It was evening, the sun had set and the stillness of twilight was upon everything. 那是一个夜晚，太阳落山了，黄昏时刻的寂静笼罩啄一切。 38. The tower clock speaks night. 塔楼的钟声报告夜晚的来临。 39. The sun, which had hidden all day, now came out in all its splendor. 那个整天躲在云层里的太阳，现在又光芒四射地露面了。 40. The garden was bathed in moonlight. 那花园沐浴在月光里。 （2024·贵州黔南·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Someday I’m going to Ireland,” my 5-year-old daughter Carrie said. “Well, maybe you can!” I said, having faith in her ambitions. Already she was a hard-working, dependable child. Her chores were performed quickly and skillfully. I knew she had the potential to make her dreams come true. I realized, however, that she would need a good job to pay for the luxury of traveling. Five years later, when Carrie was ten, a tornado roared through the hills of Tennessee, destroying our dairy (奶牛场), our outbuildings and all our fencing. This disaster completely changed our lives. My husband, Charlie, was disabled by the tornado. He tried to rebuild the dairy but was physically and emotionally unable to resume the 24/7 workload. After trying and failing at several methods of earning income, he decided to become a baker. We purchased a small bakery, fully equipped, and removed it onto our farmland. Unfortunately, the business didn’t go well. While our family was going through difficult times — emotionally and financially — the dreams and spirit of our kid was not shattered. Carrie was doing well in school, and I smiled the day I read her essay entitled, “Things I would like to do”. Topping the list were these words: I want to go to Ireland someday. A few years later, Carrie entered high school and during her second year, she enrolled in a German language class. This class occasionally organized an optional trip abroad, usually to Germany. Given our situation, I did not think it was a possible option for Carrie, until she came home from school one day, hardly able to contain her excitement and said, “Mama, you’ll never guess where the class is going.” “Where?” I asked. “To Ireland,” she smiled broadly. “You’re kidding!” I said. “Ireland! Where you’ve always wanted to go!” “But it would probably cost a fortune to go!” she said. I thought she was probably right — it would seem a fortune to us. “Well,” I said hesitantly, “you never know. Ask the teacher what it will cost. It won’t hurt to ask.” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 Carrie came home the next day with mixed feelings. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Carrie began putting the idea into practice, making a variety of baked goods. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Carrie came home the next day with mixed feelings. She told us that the trip would cost $2,100, and she had two years to prepare for it. “But that’s too much.” She said with a hopeful yet doubting voice. “Well,” I said slowly, “you have two years to earn the money. Maybe you could pay it off in time by trying different ways like doing odd jobs or having yard sales. You could also use the bakery and sell baked goods. Don’t forget the bakery stays idle and you are an excellent cook.” Hearing the words, Carrie jumped with excitement. Carrie began putting the idea into practice, making a variety of baked goods. Soon, her fried pies became popular and her signature product. She sold them for one dollar each, which meant she would have to fry a lot of pies to pay for the trip. It is hard work but it could be done. Orders began rolling in, and the Ireland fund grew. A feature story by a local newspaper further spurred business, and she earned enough fund. I take pride in my daughter who realized a childhood dream by the delicately fried pies. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了嘉莉梦想着去爱尔兰旅行，但是一场龙卷风摧毁了她家的农场。她继续追求自己的梦想，在学校表现优异，并通过制作和销售油炸馅饼赚钱去国外旅行。凭借决心和努力，她实现了去爱尔兰旅游的梦想。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“第二天，嘉莉回到家，心里百感交集。”可知，第一段可描写嘉莉告诉父母这次旅行的花费以及决定通过自己的努力赚钱。 ②由第二段首句内容“嘉莉开始把这个想法付诸实践，做了各种各样的烘焙食品。”可知，第二段可描写嘉莉通过卖馅饼赚到了足够的资金，最终实现了自己的梦想。 2.续写线索：心里百感交集——告诉父母旅行的花费——决定通过自己的努力赚钱——把这个想法付诸实践——通过卖馅饼赚到了足够的资金——实现了自己的梦想 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①实现：realize/ make...come true ②促进，刺激：spur/ promote ③为……感到自豪：take pride in /be proud of 情绪类 ①兴奋：excitement /thrill ②怀疑的：doubting/ skeptical 【点睛】[高分句型1]She sold them for one dollar each, which meant she would have to fry a lot of pies to pay for the trip.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。） [高分句型2] Hearing the words, Carrie jumped with excitement.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。） 1.（2024·黑龙江·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Michael saw the trouble coming. There standing in the hallway was Frank, the boy who enjoyed making fun of anyone at any given moment. Frank was tall and strong, so few of his victims stood up to him. Michael hated the idea that Frank always got away with his wrongdoing. Yet like most kids who were picked on, he just took it quietly and waited for the unpleasant to pass. Frank walked up, his eyes locked on the books in Michael’s arms. When they met, Frank stopped unexpectedly, “Hey, let me see those books!” Some students watched as Michael held out the books he was carrying, trying not to give away his nervousness. Frank took a book, looked inside for a second, and then threw the book at Michael, who dropped all the other books. “Hey, those are school property,” Frank barked, “Be careful!” Then he walked away, laughing loudly. Michael, his cheeks turning red, half kicked the fallen books. Suddenly a hand picked up one book. “You look like you could use a p ally (盟友),” a friendly voice said. It was Ramon, the most athletic boy in the high school. Michael couldn’t believe Ramon was stopping to help him as they barely spoke. “Thanks,” Michael sighed with relief. “It’s confusing. I don’t know what his problems is.” “Well, as I see it,” Ramon said, “you need to find a way to end this.” Michael nodded, stuck for what to say. Ramon continued, “You know my grandmother used to tell me whenever I had a problem with someone. She’d say, ‘You can catch more flies with honey than with vinegar (醋).’” Looking puzzled, Michael asked, “What does that mean?” “It means kindness may be more effective than anger,” Ramon explained. “Can you just tell Frank to stop picking on me?” Michael suggested. “That’s vinegar,” Ramon laughed as he walked away. “Try honey instead.” Ramon’s words left Michael thinking. The next school day brought Michael’s usual pain. There stood Frank, and Michael knew it would be just seconds before he had to face him in the middle of the hall. Frank came nearer. 注意： （1）续写词数应为150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Then, suddenly, the unexpected happened. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank’s books on the floor. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】      Then, suddenly, the unexpected happened. Just as Michael looked nervously, Frank somehow tripped over something. Down he fell onto the ground, sending all his books flying and spreading out on the floor. Although Michael was just as shocked, his mind was racing. Then Ramon's Grandma's words popped into his mind, “You can catch more flies with honey than vinegar.” He knew what to do. Barely had Frank gotten up with loads of embarrassment when Michael went up. Michael bent down and quickly picked up Frank's books on the floor. Offering them to him, Michael said with a smile, “You look like you could use an ally.” Now, it was Frank's turn to be numbed there with burning cheeks. He quickly took his books, muttered in a low voice, “Uh, thanks” and fled the scene. Out of the corner of his eye, Michael caught Ramon approaching with a knowing smile and a thumbs-up. “My grandma would be proud of you,” Ramon remarked. “Well, I guess that's just honey,” Michael grinned. “And I hope it sticks.” 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Michael在学校总被Frank欺负。一天，Frank把书扔向Michael，导致其他的书都掉在了地上，然后大笑走开了。Michael非常生气，在捡书的时候，Ramon出现了，把她奶奶经常说的话告诉了他，意思是当别人找你麻烦的时候，善意比愤怒更有效，Ramon让他试试善意。第二天，Michae又看到Frank站在那里。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“然后，突然，意想不到的事情发生了。”可知，第一段可描写Frank摔倒了，书都飞了出去，这时候Michael想起Ramon奶奶的话的过程。 ②由第二段首句内容“Michael弯下腰，迅速捡起地板上Frank的书。”可知，第二段可描写Michael帮Frank捡起书，让Frank很尴尬，说了谢谢后逃走的过程。 2.续写线索：Frank摔倒——书飞了出去——Michael震惊——想起Ramon奶奶的话——帮Frank捡起书——Frank尴尬说谢谢——Ramon夸奖Michael 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①.绊倒：trip over / trip up ②.想起：pop into one’s mind/call to mind ③.提供：offer/afford/provide 情绪类 ①.震惊的：shocked /stunned ②.紧张地：nervously / tensely 【点睛】[高分句型1]. Although Michael was just as shocked, his mind was racing.（由连接词although引导的让步状语从句） [高分句型2]. Barely had Frank gotten up with loads of embarrassment when Michael went up.（运用了倒装句和barely...when...固定句型） [高分句型3]. Offering them to him, Michael said with a smile, “You look like you could use an ally.”（ 运用了现在分词作状语） 2.（2024·河北石家庄·一模） 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Around 5:30 a.m., I met my running group — the Los Angeles Roadrunners training team. I had trained with them for ten long months. That ten months left me with blisters (水泡) and back aches. But my pace leaders reassured me that no matter what, I should keep going. I knew my very first marathon was coming. More importantly, my husband and my daughter promised to wait for me at the finishing line. At about 6:30 a.m., I went to the starting gates and my excitement grew as the gun shot for the start and I was on cloud nine. The first few miles were quite easy, but by mile 8 the pain was starting to spread all over my body, as if it were growing like a cancer. I had no choice but to slow down. Slowing down is much better than quitting, so I slowed down from my group and realized that the rest of this race was going to be just me and the road. Mile 12 brought about doubts whether I could even finish this race. By mile 15, my pace had slowed even further. I reminded myself, “Just get to that finish line. Keep running, head held high.” Mile 18 brought me into familiar territory — my neighborhood. I had slowed to a walk by this point because my body didn’t want to move an inch. I wanted to just walk home. But I couldn’t because I had to keep going. By mile 21, I had been told many times by spectators (观众), “You’re almost there. Keep it up!” The smile on their faces, and the determined look in their eyes made me realize how much they cared that I could finish. Left foot forward, now right foot forward. Every step I took, the intensity of the pain soaked (浸入) into every cell in my body. I’d been running for 4 hours with what seemed like no end in sight. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 With just 4 miles left, I really wanted to quit. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Finally, the smiling faces of my family came into my sight. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 With just 4 miles left, I really wanted to quit. My legs felt like lead, and my breathing was labored. Doubts filled my mind. “How could I finish? Was it even possible?” But then I thought of my husband and daughter waiting for me at the finish line. Their encouragement and love gave me a new burst of energy. I gritted my teeth and forced myself to take one step after another, telling myself that giving up was not an option. Finally, the smiling faces of my family came into my sight. Tears welled up in my eyes and streamed down my cheeks. I summoned all my remaining strength and ran towards them. Crossing that finish line was the greatest moment of my life. The exhaustion vanished instantly as I was embraced by my loved ones. I had done it. I had completed my first marathon, proving to myself that with determination and love, anything was possible. 【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者参加并完成第一场马拉松比赛的亲身经历和心路历程，包括训练过程、比赛中的感受、遇到的困难、克服困难的过程以及完成比赛后的激动心情。 【详解】1.段落续写： ①由第一段首句内容“只剩下4英里时，我真的很想放弃。”以及第二段首句内容“终于，我看到了家人的笑脸。”可知，第一段可描写作者觉得每一步都很痛苦，但是想到自己的家人，作者决定坚持到终点。 ②由第二段首句内容“终于，我看到了家人的笑脸。”可知，第二段可描写看到家人的笑脸后，作者仿佛又充满了力气，完成了自己人生的第一场马拉松。 2.续写线索：想放弃——每一步都痛苦——决定不放弃——再次充满力气——向终点冲去——为自己感到骄傲 3.词汇激活 行为类 ①放弃：give up/abandon ②拥抱：embrace/hug ③跑向：run towards/rush to 情绪类 ①疑惑：doubt/disbelief ②决心：determination/resolution 【点睛】【高分句型1】I gritted my teeth and forced myself to take one step after another, telling myself that giving up was not an option.（运用了现在分词作状语及that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】The exhaustion vanished instantly as I was embraced by my loved ones.（运用了as引导的状语从句） 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$