Unit 5 写作 2024-2025学年人教版九年级英语全册

Unit 5 What are the shirts made of ? 【写作目标】 能用本单元所学的语言知识，简要介绍家乡的特色产品(食物、艺术品…)。 【基础写作】 假如某英文网站正在举办“我为家乡代言”的主题征文活动，请你写一段话介绍家乡的特色产品。 Step 1审题列提纲 文体：说明文 人称：第三人称为主 时态：一般现在时为主 Step 2 有用表达 1. silk quilts Suzhou, pure silk, skillful workers, keep people warm and comfortable, light and soft to touch; are decorated with beautiful patterns 2. oil-paper umbrella Luzhou, Sichuan Province, cotton paper with tung oil, bamboo, by hand, protect people from the sun and the rain 3. Chinese clay art a special kind of clay, shaped by hand, cute children or lively characters, show people's love for life and beauty Step 3 连词成句 1 My town/city,Suzhou,is famous for its silk quilts.They aremade of pure silk. They are made by skillful workers.The silk quilts are used for keeping people warm and comfortable in bed.They are known to be very comfortablebecause they are light and softto touch.Besides, they look beautiful becausethey are decorated with beautiful patterns。 2 Luzhou oil-paper umbrellas are made by hand in Sichuan. They are made of bamboo frames and cotton paper with tung oil. These beautiful umbrellas protect people from both sun and rain, reflecting China's rich cultural heritage and craftsmanship. 3 Chinese clay art is made of a special kind of clay and it is shaped entirely by hand. Artists create cute children and lively characters that bring joy and warmth. These lively sculptures not only show amazing skills but also reflect people's deep love for life and beauty, making Chinese clay art a treasure to admire. 范文分析 第一篇范文 用词分析：“famous for” 用来描述苏州的特色，用词准确且常见。“pure silk” 强调了丝绸被子的材质。“skillful workers” 突出了制作者的技艺。“light and soft to touch” 描述了丝绸被子的触感，用词生动。“decorated with beautiful patterns” 描述了丝绸被子的外观，用词具体。 逻辑分析：开篇直接点明主题，苏州以丝绸被子闻名。接着描述丝绸被子的材质和制作者。然后介绍丝绸被子的功能和触感。最后描述丝绸被子的外观。逻辑清晰，信息全面。 第二篇范文 用词分析：“oil-paper umbrellas” 准确描述了泸州油纸伞。“bamboo frames and cotton paper with tung oil” 清晰地描述了油纸伞的材质。“protect people from both sun and rain” 突出了油纸伞的功能。“reflecting China's rich cultural heritage and craftsmanship” 升华了油纸伞的文化价值。 逻辑分析：开篇点明泸州油纸伞是手工制作的。接着描述油纸伞的材质。然后介绍油纸伞的功能。最后升华主题，指出油纸伞反映了中国的文化遗产和工艺。逻辑紧凑，主题明确。 第三篇范文 用词分析：“special kind of clay” 强调了中国泥塑的特殊材质。“shaped entirely by hand” 突出了泥塑的手工制作特点。“cute children and lively characters” 描述了泥塑的题材。“show amazing skills but also reflect people's deep love for life and beauty” 同时赞美了技艺和人们的情感。 逻辑分析：开篇点明中国泥塑的材质和手工制作特点。接着描述泥塑的题材。然后指出泥塑不仅展示了技艺，还反映了人们的情感。最后总结，中国泥塑是值得欣赏的宝藏。逻辑流畅，情感丰富。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$