Unit 2 写作 2024-2025学年人教版九年级英语全册

【写作目标】 能够运用单元所学，根据内容要点拓展并构建连贯语篇，介绍某个中国节日。 请匹配下列节日的名称、日期以及活动内容，为写作搜集所需的语言素材。 Names Dates(of lunar calendar) (d / ④)1.the Dragon Boat Festival (c / ①) 2.the Lantern Festival (a / ③) 3.the Spring Festival (b/ ②）4. the Mid-Autumn Festival a.on January 1st b.on August 15th C.on January 15th d.on May 5th Activities ① eat dumplings, admire lanterns, guess lantern riddles(谜) ② admire the moon,enjoy mooncakes,celebrate the harvest(丰收) ③ eat dumplings,fish,niangao….,clean the house,cook traditional food,make couplets (春联),set off fire crackers(鞭炮),have a family dinner,visit friends and relatives,give "lucky"money to kids/receive "lucky"money ④ eat zongzi,watch dragon boat races,honor Qu Yuan 【写作任务】 你校将举办以“讲好中国故事，弘扬中国文化”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以春节作为你的演讲内容进行介绍。 Step 1 列提纲 Step 2 连词成句 Dear teachers and students, It's a great honor for me to speak here. I'd like to introduce my favorite Chinese festival—the Spring Festival to you. It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar. Before the festival, we make good preparations, like preparing food, cleaning the house etc. On the eve, all my family get together for a big dinner. Then on the first day of the festival, people wear new clothes and visit their relatives and friends. Kids will receive“lucky”money from the elders It's my favorite festival not only because of the colorful activities but also the meaning behind it. It means ending the old year and beginning a new year. It also means family reunion and peace to Chinese people. How wonderful the festival is! That's all.Thank you. 范文分析 用词方面： 1.准确用词：“It's a great honor for me to speak here.” 这句话用词准确，表达了作者在此发言的荣幸感。 “I'd like to introduce my favorite Chinese festival—the Spring Festival to you.” 这句话用词简洁明了，直接点明了主题。 “It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar.” 这句话准确描述了春节的日期。 2.细节描述： “Before the festival, we make good preparations, like preparing food, cleaning the house etc.” 这句话通过列举具体的准备工作，让读者对春节前的准备有了更具体的了解。 “On the eve, all my family get together for a big dinner.” 这句话描述了除夕夜家人团聚的情景，用词温馨。 “Then on the first day of the festival, people wear new clothes and visit their relatives and friends.” 这句话描述了春节期间人们的习俗，用词恰当。 3.情感表达： “Kids will receive ‘lucky’ money from the elders.” 这句话通过“lucky”一词，表达了孩子们收到红包时的喜悦和幸运感。 “It's my favorite festival not only because of the colorful activities but also the meaning behind it.” 这句话通过“not only...but also...”结构，强调了作者对春节的喜爱不仅因为其丰富多彩的活动，更因为其背后的意义。 逻辑方面： 1.结构清晰： 作文开头直接点明主题，介绍了自己要介绍的节日——春节。 接着描述了春节的日期、春节前的准备、春节期间的习俗等具体内容。 最后总结了作者对春节的喜爱及其原因。 2.层次分明： 作文通过时间顺序（春节前、春节当天、春节的意义）来组织内容，使得内容条理清晰，层次分明。 在描述每个部分时，都通过具体的例子或细节来展开，使得内容更加丰富和具体。 3.逻辑连贯： 各个部分之间过渡自然，没有突兀之感。 结尾部分总结了全文，与开头相呼应，使得整篇作文逻辑连贯。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$