必修第三册Unit 1 Nature in the balance(写倡议书)-【同步写作课】2024-2025学年高一英语单元写作深度指导(译林版2020)

Unit 1 Nature in the balance 单元写作深度指导 写一封倡议书(Write a letter of proposal) 教材句式背记 1.Its total land area is 16,808 square kilometers,among which the mountain areas account for 52%. 2.The West Lake,with hills on three sides and many beautiful parks around,attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad. 3.Many trees are being cut down and more and more forests are lost,making animals lose their homes to live in. 4.We should protect wild animals and realize harmonious coexistence between man and nature! 5.It’s our duty to save water.As we know,water is very important to man.We can’t live without water. 1.主题解读 (1)题型特点 倡议书是由个人或组织发出倡导做某事的应用文,常涉及公益方面的主题。格式大致与书信相同,也有称呼和落款。 (2)写作要求 倡议书分为三段: 第一段:说明倡议的背景和原因,提出写作的目的,特别提到保护动物的重要性。 第二段:列举倡议的内容和用处,介绍保护动物的方法。 第三段:发出倡议,号召人们行动起来保护动物。 2.重点事项 (1)倡议书要写清楚目标人。 (2)阐述清楚存在的问题,以得到人们的共鸣和支持。 倡议书时态分析:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 II.词汇句式 1.教材词汇 (1)various 　adj.各种不同的,各种各样的 (2)harm n.& vt. 伤害,损害 (3)variety n.不同种类;变化,多样性;变种,变体 (4)in turn 相应地,转而 (5)due to 由于,因为 (6)impact n.影响,作用;撞击,冲撞；vi.& vt.有影响;冲击 (7)build up 逐渐增加,扩大 (8)come up with 想出,想到 (9)organization n. 组织,团体; 组织工作;安排;条理 (10)absolutely adv.绝对地,完全地;极其 (11)get rid of 摆脱,丢弃,扔掉 (12)protest vi.反对,抗议；vt.反对;坚持声称,申辩 2.常用表达 (1)描述现状 ①变得越来越严重　　 get more and more serious ②处于濒临灭绝的危险 be in danger of extinction ③被残忍杀害 be killed without mercy (2)阐述原因 ④对……造成损害 do/cause damage to ⑤把……兑换成…… exchange...for... ⑥获利 make profits (3)提供建议 ⑦提高……的意识 raise the awareness of ⑧意识到 be/become aware of ⑨呼吁某人做某事 call on/call for/appeal to sb.to do sth. ⑩采取行动/措施 take action/measures 3.常用句式 (1)开篇句型 ①It’s a fact that many rare animals are facing the danger of extinction. 许多稀有动物正面临灭绝的危险,这是个事实。 ②Many wild animals are becoming fewer and fewer due to humans’ killing. 由于人类的捕杀,许多野生动物正变得越来越少。 ③As is shown in the chart, we can see the number of animal species decreases faster and faster and this trend will continue. 如图表所示,我们可以看到动物物种的数量下降得越来越快,而且这一趋势将继续下去。 (2)主体段落 ①The reason why the number of animal species is decreasing is that animals have become victims of fashion industry. 动物物种数量减少的原因是动物已经成为时尚产业的受害者。 ②It is because of human activities that animals are in danger of dying out. 正是由于人类的活动,动物才处于灭绝的危险之中。 (3)结尾句型 ①Only if we take some drastic measures can wild animals be protected. 我们只有采取一些严厉措施,才能保护野生动物。 ②Everybody should raise the awareness that it’s our duty to protect wild animals. 每个人都应该树立保护野生动物是我们的责任的意识。 　6月8日为联合国指定的世界海洋日,由于海洋污染越来越严重,假定你是校学生会主席李华,请你用英语为校英文报写一篇关于“保护海洋”的倡议。内容包括: 1.目前的海洋污染情况; 2.保护海洋的重要性及具体措施; 3.发出倡议。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmates,  I am Li Hua, chairman of the students’ union. Let’s make joint efforts to help clean up the oceans.  The Students’ Union  【写作示例】 [审题布局] [衔接成篇] Dear schoolmates,  I am Li Hua, chairman of the students’ union.The UN officially named June 8th as World Oceans Day, aiming to arouse public awareness of protecting oceans, as the sea pollution is becoming more and more serious.  I advocate we contribute our bit to the ocean preservation.There is no denying that ocean preservation is of great significance.For one thing, the oceans provide us with abundant resources.For another, they are crucial to the global climate.Thus, we cannot shrink from our responsibility.First, do what we can to make a difference.Furthermore, appeal to people around us to take action as well. Let’s make joint efforts to help clean up the oceans.  The Students’ Union  [范文分析] 1.‌文本类型‌：倡议书 2.‌文本目的‌：倡导同学们关注并参与到世界海洋日的活动中，共同为海洋保护贡献力量。 3‌语言特点‌ (1)‌称呼与自我介绍‌ “Dear schoolmates”作为称呼，直接而亲切，符合校园内部倡议书的语境。 “I am Li Hua, chairman of the students’ union.”通过自我介绍，明确发言人的身份，增强倡议的权威性。 (2)‌背景介绍‌ “The UN officially named June 8th as World Oceans Day...”通过介绍世界海洋日的设立背景，引出倡议的主题，使同学们对倡议的重要性有初步认识。 “aiming to arouse public awareness of protecting oceans, as the sea pollution is becoming more and more serious.”进一步阐述设立世界海洋日的目的，即提高公众对海洋保护的意识，并指出海洋污染日益严重的现状，为倡议提供紧迫性。 (3)‌倡议内容‌ “I advocate we contribute our bit to the ocean preservation.”明确提出倡议，鼓励同学们为海洋保护贡献自己的力量，语言简洁而有力。 “There is no denying that ocean preservation is of great significance.”通过双重否定句强调海洋保护的重要性，增强倡议的说服力。 “For one thing, the oceans provide us with abundant resources. For another, they are crucial to the global climate.”通过列举海洋的两大重要性（提供资源和影响全球气候），进一步阐述保护海洋的必要性。 (4)‌具体行动建议‌ “First, do what we can to make a difference.”提出第一个具体行动建议，鼓励同学们从自身做起，为海洋保护做出实际贡献。 “Furthermore, appeal to people around us to take action as well.”提出第二个具体行动建议，即呼吁周围的人也参与到海洋保护中来，扩大倡议的影响力。 (5)‌结尾呼吁‌ “Let’s make joint efforts to help clean up the oceans.”以呼吁同学们共同努力结束倡议书，语言鼓舞人心，激发同学们的参与热情。 “The Students’ Union”作为落款，再次强调倡议的发出者，增强倡议的正式性。 4.分析‌总结‌ 这篇倡议书语言简洁明了，逻辑清晰，通过背景介绍、倡议内容、具体行动建议和结尾呼吁四个部分，有效地传达了倡导同学们关注并参与到世界海洋日活动中的信息。同时，通过运用亲切的称呼、权威的自我介绍、双重否定句等语言技巧，增强了倡议的说服力和感染力。 1．假如你是李华，你校本月开展“保护野生动物宣传月”活动。请你为校报的英语栏目写一篇倡议书，倡导大家保护野生动物。内容包括： 1. 野生动物数量减少的原因； 2. 保护野生动物的措施； 3. 发出倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为100个左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The decline in wildlife populations is a deeply concerning issue. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是学生会主席李华，环境保护与我们息息相关，请你代表学校学生会以“爱护环境”为主题，向全校同学写一封倡议书。要点如下： 1) 环境现状； 2) 保护环境的具体措施（志愿者活动：植树，捡垃圾；低碳生活：关灯关水龙头，垃圾分类……）； 3) 呼吁投入环境保护； Dear students, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 3．最近校园资源浪费的现象随处可见，假设你是学生会主席李华，请以“节约资源，建绿色校园”为主题，为学校英语报写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1.节约资源的意义; 2.发出倡议并提出建议。注意： 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 4．假定你是校学生会主席李华，最近，你注意到校园中存在乱扔垃圾、浪费资源等现象。请你给校报英语专栏写一封倡议信，呼吁大家共建一个环保型校园，内容包括： 1. 倡议的目的； 2. 采取的措施(至少3条)； 3. 你的希望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear students, I’ve recently noticed some issues on campus such as... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．近年来，一些青少年因缺乏和大自然的接触出现了所谓的“自然缺失症”。请你写一封倡议信，倡导大家亲近自然。内容包括： 1.亲近自然的重要性； 2.倡导大家亲近自然。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 自然缺失症 nature-deficit disorder Embrace the magic of Nature ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部正在举行“保护北极熊，保护地球”为主题的宣传活动。请你代表英语俱乐部给全校师生用英语写一份倡议书，内容如下： 1.北极熊的现状；2.发出倡议。 注意： 1）写作词数应为80左右； 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．在过去的几年中，我们已经目睹了人类活动引起的各种灾害。作为一名中学生，请你写一封倡议书，呼吁大家关注这些自然灾害并保护环境，内容包括： 1. 举出人类活动引发的灾害的实例； 2. 提出一些必要的防范措施； 3. 发出倡议，号召大家行动起来拯救地球。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为提升你市的文化品位，你市正在开展“黄河文化带”的建设。请你代表学生会写一份倡议书，向全校学生发出倡议，为打造“黄河文化带”助力。内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 倡议内容：清理活动，保护环境； 3. 活动意义。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Call for Assistance in Building “the Yellow River Cultural Belt” Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, The Student Union 9．假定你是李华，是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，你校发起了“消除不良行为习惯”的活动。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书。内容包括： 1. 列举学生的不良行为习惯（迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等）；2. 好习惯的重要性；3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 10．假定你是李华，校英语口语社正在组织“节约电力资源”主题演讲活动，请你以Be Energy Smart为题，写一篇倡议书参赛，谈一谈日常生活如何节电的做法(至少两点)。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Be Energy Smart ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 Nature in the balance 单元写作深度指导 写一封倡议书(Write a letter of proposal) 教材句式背记 1.Its total land area is 16,808 square kilometers,among which the mountain areas account for 52%. 2.The West Lake,with hills on three sides and many beautiful parks around,attracts a large number of visitors at home and abroad. 3.Many trees are being cut down and more and more forests are lost,making animals lose their homes to live in. 4.We should protect wild animals and realize harmonious coexistence between man and nature! 5.It’s our duty to save water.As we know,water is very important to man.We can’t live without water. 1.主题解读 (1)题型特点 倡议书是由个人或组织发出倡导做某事的应用文,常涉及公益方面的主题。格式大致与书信相同,也有称呼和落款。 (2)写作要求 倡议书分为三段: 第一段:说明倡议的背景和原因,提出写作的目的,特别提到保护动物的重要性。 第二段:列举倡议的内容和用处,介绍保护动物的方法。 第三段:发出倡议,号召人们行动起来保护动物。 2.重点事项 (1)倡议书要写清楚目标人。 (2)阐述清楚存在的问题,以得到人们的共鸣和支持。 倡议书时态分析:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 II.词汇句式 1.教材词汇 (1)various 　adj.各种不同的,各种各样的 (2)harm n.& vt. 伤害,损害 (3)variety n.不同种类;变化,多样性;变种,变体 (4)in turn 相应地,转而 (5)due to 由于,因为 (6)impact n.影响,作用;撞击,冲撞；vi.& vt.有影响;冲击 (7)build up 逐渐增加,扩大 (8)come up with 想出,想到 (9)organization n. 组织,团体; 组织工作;安排;条理 (10)absolutely adv.绝对地,完全地;极其 (11)get rid of 摆脱,丢弃,扔掉 (12)protest vi.反对,抗议；vt.反对;坚持声称,申辩 2.常用表达 (1)描述现状 ①变得越来越严重　　 get more and more serious ②处于濒临灭绝的危险 be in danger of extinction ③被残忍杀害 be killed without mercy (2)阐述原因 ④对……造成损害 do/cause damage to ⑤把……兑换成…… exchange...for... ⑥获利 make profits (3)提供建议 ⑦提高……的意识 raise the awareness of ⑧意识到 be/become aware of ⑨呼吁某人做某事 call on/call for/appeal to sb.to do sth. ⑩采取行动/措施 take action/measures 3.常用句式 (1)开篇句型 ①It’s a fact that many rare animals are facing the danger of extinction. 许多稀有动物正面临灭绝的危险,这是个事实。 ②Many wild animals are becoming fewer and fewer due to humans’ killing. 由于人类的捕杀,许多野生动物正变得越来越少。 ③As is shown in the chart, we can see the number of animal species decreases faster and faster and this trend will continue. 如图表所示,我们可以看到动物物种的数量下降得越来越快,而且这一趋势将继续下去。 (2)主体段落 ①The reason why the number of animal species is decreasing is that animals have become victims of fashion industry. 动物物种数量减少的原因是动物已经成为时尚产业的受害者。 ②It is because of human activities that animals are in danger of dying out. 正是由于人类的活动,动物才处于灭绝的危险之中。 (3)结尾句型 ①Only if we take some drastic measures can wild animals be protected. 我们只有采取一些严厉措施,才能保护野生动物。 ②Everybody should raise the awareness that it’s our duty to protect wild animals. 每个人都应该树立保护野生动物是我们的责任的意识。 　6月8日为联合国指定的世界海洋日,由于海洋污染越来越严重,假定你是校学生会主席李华,请你用英语为校英文报写一篇关于“保护海洋”的倡议。内容包括: 1.目前的海洋污染情况; 2.保护海洋的重要性及具体措施; 3.发出倡议。 注意:写作词数应为80个左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmates,  I am Li Hua, chairman of the students’ union. Let’s make joint efforts to help clean up the oceans.  The Students’ Union  【写作示例】 [审题布局] [衔接成篇] Dear schoolmates,  I am Li Hua, chairman of the students’ union.The UN officially named June 8th as World Oceans Day, aiming to arouse public awareness of protecting oceans, as the sea pollution is becoming more and more serious.  I advocate we contribute our bit to the ocean preservation.There is no denying that ocean preservation is of great significance.For one thing, the oceans provide us with abundant resources.For another, they are crucial to the global climate.Thus, we cannot shrink from our responsibility.First, do what we can to make a difference.Furthermore, appeal to people around us to take action as well. Let’s make joint efforts to help clean up the oceans.  The Students’ Union  [范文分析] 1.‌文本类型‌：倡议书 2.‌文本目的‌：倡导同学们关注并参与到世界海洋日的活动中，共同为海洋保护贡献力量。 3‌语言特点‌ (1)‌称呼与自我介绍‌ “Dear schoolmates”作为称呼，直接而亲切，符合校园内部倡议书的语境。 “I am Li Hua, chairman of the students’ union.”通过自我介绍，明确发言人的身份，增强倡议的权威性。 (2)‌背景介绍‌ “The UN officially named June 8th as World Oceans Day...”通过介绍世界海洋日的设立背景，引出倡议的主题，使同学们对倡议的重要性有初步认识。 “aiming to arouse public awareness of protecting oceans, as the sea pollution is becoming more and more serious.”进一步阐述设立世界海洋日的目的，即提高公众对海洋保护的意识，并指出海洋污染日益严重的现状，为倡议提供紧迫性。 (3)‌倡议内容‌ “I advocate we contribute our bit to the ocean preservation.”明确提出倡议，鼓励同学们为海洋保护贡献自己的力量，语言简洁而有力。 “There is no denying that ocean preservation is of great significance.”通过双重否定句强调海洋保护的重要性，增强倡议的说服力。 “For one thing, the oceans provide us with abundant resources. For another, they are crucial to the global climate.”通过列举海洋的两大重要性（提供资源和影响全球气候），进一步阐述保护海洋的必要性。 (4)‌具体行动建议‌ “First, do what we can to make a difference.”提出第一个具体行动建议，鼓励同学们从自身做起，为海洋保护做出实际贡献。 “Furthermore, appeal to people around us to take action as well.”提出第二个具体行动建议，即呼吁周围的人也参与到海洋保护中来，扩大倡议的影响力。 (5)‌结尾呼吁‌ “Let’s make joint efforts to help clean up the oceans.”以呼吁同学们共同努力结束倡议书，语言鼓舞人心，激发同学们的参与热情。 “The Students’ Union”作为落款，再次强调倡议的发出者，增强倡议的正式性。 4.分析‌总结‌ 这篇倡议书语言简洁明了，逻辑清晰，通过背景介绍、倡议内容、具体行动建议和结尾呼吁四个部分，有效地传达了倡导同学们关注并参与到世界海洋日活动中的信息。同时，通过运用亲切的称呼、权威的自我介绍、双重否定句等语言技巧，增强了倡议的说服力和感染力。 1．假如你是李华，你校本月开展“保护野生动物宣传月”活动。请你为校报的英语栏目写一篇倡议书，倡导大家保护野生动物。内容包括： 1. 野生动物数量减少的原因； 2. 保护野生动物的措施； 3. 发出倡议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为100个左右； 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 The decline in wildlife populations is a deeply concerning issue. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是学生会主席李华，环境保护与我们息息相关，请你代表学校学生会以“爱护环境”为主题，向全校同学写一封倡议书。要点如下： 1) 环境现状； 2) 保护环境的具体措施（志愿者活动：植树，捡垃圾；低碳生活：关灯关水龙头，垃圾分类……）； 3) 呼吁投入环境保护； Dear students, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 3．最近校园资源浪费的现象随处可见，假设你是学生会主席李华，请以“节约资源，建绿色校园”为主题，为学校英语报写一封倡议书，内容包括： 1.节约资源的意义; 2.发出倡议并提出建议。注意： 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可适当增加细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 Dear fellow students, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 4．假定你是校学生会主席李华，最近，你注意到校园中存在乱扔垃圾、浪费资源等现象。请你给校报英语专栏写一封倡议信，呼吁大家共建一个环保型校园，内容包括： 1. 倡议的目的； 2. 采取的措施(至少3条)； 3. 你的希望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Dear students, I’ve recently noticed some issues on campus such as... ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 5．近年来，一些青少年因缺乏和大自然的接触出现了所谓的“自然缺失症”。请你写一封倡议信，倡导大家亲近自然。内容包括： 1.亲近自然的重要性； 2.倡导大家亲近自然。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇: 自然缺失症 nature-deficit disorder Embrace the magic of Nature ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部正在举行“保护北极熊，保护地球”为主题的宣传活动。请你代表英语俱乐部给全校师生用英语写一份倡议书，内容如下： 1.北极熊的现状；2.发出倡议。 注意： 1）写作词数应为80左右； 2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．在过去的几年中，我们已经目睹了人类活动引起的各种灾害。作为一名中学生，请你写一封倡议书，呼吁大家关注这些自然灾害并保护环境，内容包括： 1. 举出人类活动引发的灾害的实例； 2. 提出一些必要的防范措施； 3. 发出倡议，号召大家行动起来拯救地球。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．假定你是某国际学校的学生会主席李华。为提升你市的文化品位，你市正在开展“黄河文化带”的建设。请你代表学生会写一份倡议书，向全校学生发出倡议，为打造“黄河文化带”助力。内容包括： 1. 活动目的； 2. 倡议内容：清理活动，保护环境； 3. 活动意义。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Call for Assistance in Building “the Yellow River Cultural Belt” Dear fellow students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours faithfully, The Student Union 9．假定你是李华，是某外国语学校的学生会主席。最近，你校发起了“消除不良行为习惯”的活动。请你代表学生会写一封倡议书。内容包括： 1. 列举学生的不良行为习惯（迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等）；2. 好习惯的重要性；3. 发出倡议。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear students, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The Students’ Union 10．假定你是李华，校英语口语社正在组织“节约电力资源”主题演讲活动，请你以Be Energy Smart为题，写一篇倡议书参赛，谈一谈日常生活如何节电的做法(至少两点)。 注意：1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Be Energy Smart ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1． The decline in wildlife populations is a deeply concerning issue. As is known to all, human activities are mainly to blame. Habitat loss caused by deforestation and urban expansion, along with overhunting and pollution, has pushed numerous species to the edge of extinction, which is really heart-breaking. Immediate actions must be taken. First of all, we should respect their habitats to provide a better living environment for them. Secondly, strict laws against illegal hunting need to be enforced. What’s more, we can launch educational campaigns to raise people’s awareness. Let’s join hands without delay. Every small effort counts. Only by protecting wildlife can we maintain the balance of nature and secure a sustainable future for ourselves. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李华的身份，为校报的英语栏目写一篇倡议书，倡导大家保护野生动物，应首先说明野生动物数量减少的原因，再分享保护野生动物的措施，最后发出保护的倡议。 【策略详解】1. 词汇积累 随……一起：along with→together with, as well as 边缘：edge→verge, brink 意识：awareness→consciousness 立即：without delay→right away, promptly 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：First of all, we should respect their habitats to provide a better living environment for them. 拓展句：First of all, we should respect their habitats so that we can provide a better living environment for them. [高分句型1] As is known to all, human activities are mainly to blame. (运用了as引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] Habitat loss caused by deforestation and urban expansion, along with overhunting and pollution, has pushed numerous species to the edge of extinction, which is really heart-breaking. (运用了过去分词作后置定语、which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型3] Only by protecting wildlife can we maintain the balance of nature and secure a sustainable future for ourselves. (运用了“only+介词短语”置于句首引起的部分倒装) 2．      I’m Li Hua, Chairman of the Students’ Union. I represent the Students’ Union to make a proposal “care for the environment”. Nowadays, the environmental pollution is becoming increasingly serious and global warming causes frequent extreme weather, which warns us that protecting the environment is becoming urgent. As students, we should do our parts. Firstly, participate in voluntary work such as planting trees and picking up rubbish. Additionally, it is strongly suggested that we live a low-carbon life. Furthermore, we should attach great importance to garbage sorting and recycling in our daily life, through which we can reduce pollution and conserve natural resources. All in all, let’s take action and make joint efforts to make our planet a greener one. 【写作分析】本文是一封倡议书，要求考生就“爱护环境”为主题，向全体同学发出倡议。考生应该囊括题目要求的三个要点，还应该补充合理细节使得文章真实自然。 【策略详解】1. 词汇积累： 保护：protect → preserve 参与：participate → take part 建议：suggest → recommend, 重要性：importance → significance 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换 原句：Nowadays, the environmental pollution is becoming increasingly serious and global warming causes frequent extreme weather, which warns us that protecting the environment is becoming urgent. 拓展句：Nowadays, the environmental pollution is becoming increasingly serious and global warming causes frequent extreme weather, warning us that protecting the environment is becoming urgent. 【高级句型1】Additionally, it is strongly suggested that we live a low-carbon life. (运用that引导的主语从句) 【高级句型2】Furthermore, we should attach great importance to garbage sorting and recycling in our daily life, through which we can reduce pollution and conserve natural resources. (运用介词+which引导的定语从句) 3．Dear fellow students, Nowadays, actions of wasting resources becomes increasingly common in our campus. However, it is universally acknowledged that our natural resources are precious and limited. To save resources is to save our future. Therefore, as chairman of the Students Union, I am here to call on all of you to take actions and participate in our activity named Save Resources and Build a Greener Campus. Everyone of us can contribute our own strength by promoting awareness of saving resources and making small changes in daily life. For example, remember to turn off the lights and air conditioners when you leave the classroom. What’s more, save every drop of water and make full use of every piece of paper. Besides, there is a lot more that we can do and every small effort counts. So, let’s join hands and build a greener campus together! Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“节约资源，建绿色校园”为主题为学校英语报写一封倡议书。 【策略详解】1.词汇积累 宝贵的：precious→valuable 例如：for example→for instance 呼吁：call on→appeal to 参加：participate in→take part in 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：To save resources is to save our future. Therefore, as chairman of the Students Union, I am here to call on all of you to take actions and participate in our activity named Save Resources and Build a Greener Campus. 拓展句：As chairman of the Students Union, I am here to call on all of you to take actions and participate in our activity named Save Resources and Build a Greener Campus because saving resources is to save our future. 【高分句型1】For example, remember to turn off the lights and air conditioners when you leave the classroom. (运用了when引导时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】However, it is universally acknowledged that our natural resources are precious and limited. (运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句) 4．Dear students, I’ve recently noticed some issues on campus such as littering and wasting resources. I’d like to call on everyone to contribute to an eco-friendly campus. Firstly, we should make recycling as easy as possible. A simple way to do this is to throw the waste into dustbins on campus. Secondly, conserve electricity and water. For example, turn off the tap when brushing your teeth. Thirdly, cut down on your use of paper by using two-sided printing. You’ll indirectly reduce deforestation. Finally, try not to buy bottled water so as to reduce plastic waste that enters the oceans. Let’s make the campus a greener place! Only through joint efforts can we achieve this goal. Yours, Li Hua 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校报英语专栏写一封倡议信，呼吁大家共建一个环保型校园。 【策略详解】1.词汇积累 呼吁：call on→appeal to 简单的：simple→easy 例如：for example→for instance 关闭：turn off→switch off 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Finally, try not to buy bottled water so as to reduce plastic waste that enters the oceans. 拓展句：Finally, try not to buy bottled water so that we can reduce plastic waste that enters the oceans. [高分句型1] A simple way to do this is to throw the waste into dustbins on campus. (运用了不定式作后置定语和不定式作表语) [高分句型2] Only through joint efforts can we achieve this goal. (运用了部分倒装) 5．参考范文： In recent years, we have observed an alarming trend among our youth: the emergence of “nature-deficit disorder” due to a lack of exposure to nature. This condition has raised concerns about the mental and physical health of our future generations. Nature is a profound source of inspiration. It offers us a chance to refresh ourselves, breathe fresh air, and appreciate the beauty of our surroundings. Moreover, spending time outdoors enhances our cognitive abilities, creativity, and sense of well-being. I strongly recommend everyone to embrace nature and make it a part of our daily lives. Whether it’s a walk in the park, a hike in the mountains, or simply sitting under a tree, every little bit counts. Let's take this opportunity to reconnect with nature and foster a deeper appreciation for our environment. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一份倡议信，倡导青少年亲近自然。 【策略详解】1.词汇积累 由于：due to→because of 机会：chance→opportunity 而且：moreover→besides 提高：enhance→promote 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Nature is a profound source of inspiration. 拓展句：Nature, which serves as a profound and endless source of inspiration, continues to captivate and inspire human beings in countless ways. 【高分句型1】Moreover, spending time outdoors enhances our cognitive abilities, creativity, and sense of well-being.（运用了动名词作主语） 【高分句型2】Whether it’s a walk in the park, a hike in the mountains, or simply sitting under a tree, every little bit counts.（运用了whether…or…引导的让步状语从句） 6． Protecting polar bears, protecting the earth Polar bears are currently facing unprecedented threats. Due to the rapid melting of Arctic sea ice as a result of global warming, their population is decreasing. In light of this reality, we earnestly appeal to each and every one of you to take immediate action. We encourage everyone to participate in activities aimed at reducing carbon emissions. Reduce, reuse, and recycle to minimize waste that could indirectly contribute to the deterioration of the polar bear’s habitat. Let’s unite in our efforts to safeguard the future of these magnificent creatures and, ultimately, our own. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校英语俱乐部正在举行“保护北极熊，保护地球”为主题的宣传活动，要求考生按照要求代表英语俱乐部给全校师生用英语写一份倡议书。 【策略详解】1.词汇积累 目前：currently→ presently 面对：face→ be faced with 由于：due to→ because of 迅速的：rapid→ fast 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Polar bears are currently facing unprecedented threats 拓展句：It is unprecedented threats that polar bears are currently facing. 【高分句型1】We encourage everyone to participate in activities aimed at reducing carbon emissions.（运用了不定式短语to participate in作宾补、动名词reducing作宾语） 【高分句型2】Reduce, reuse, and recycle to minimize waste that could indirectly contribute to the deterioration of the polar bear’s habitat.（运用了that引导的限制性定语从句） 7． Dear friends, As we all know, over the past years, floors, droughts and sandstorms have happened frequently. Not long ago, a heavy sandstorm swept Beijing, which caused enormous damage. So it is high time that we made every effort to save our planet.   Above all, plant trees as many as possible, especially in the arid areas. At the same time, we should stop destroying forests in large amounts. And we can save our planet through many other ways, such as saving water and using recycled paper.   So don’t hesitate to act out these measures. Even a small action is meaningful to our planet. If you are willing to do something to save our planet, please start from the little thing right around you. Thank you! 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封倡议书，呼吁大家关注这些自然灾害并保护环境，举出人类活动引发的灾害的实例、 提出一些必要的防范措施、并发出倡议，号召大家行动起来拯救地球。 【策略详解】1. 词汇积累 频繁地：frequently→continually 拯救：save→rescue 有意义的：meaningful→significative 同时：at the same time→in the meantime 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：And we can save our planet through many other ways, such as saving water and using recycled paper. 拓展句：And we can save our planet through many other ways, which include saving water and using recycled paper. 【高分句型1】As we all know, over the past years, floors, droughts and sandstorms have happened frequently. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】 Not long ago, a heavy sandstorm swept Beijing, which caused enormous damage. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 8．A Call for Assistance in Building “the Yellow River Cultural Belt” Dear fellow students, I’m delighted to announce that our city is embarking on a project called “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”, with the aim of enhancing the cultural taste of our city. Today, I’d like to call upon all of you to lend your support and participate in this significant endeavor. As responsible students, we can play a role in promoting environmental protection along the Yellow River. Let’s organize clean-up campaigns and raise awareness among our peers about the importance of maintaining a clean and healthy environment. Together, we can make the river a picturesque and inviting place for locals and tourists alike. Thank you for your attention and support. Yours faithfully, The Student Union 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为提升你市的文化品位，你市正在开展“黄河文化带”的建设。要求考生代表学生会写一份倡议书，向全校学生发出倡议，为打造“黄河文化带”助力。 【策略详解】1.词汇积累 目的：aim→purpose 想要做某事：would like to do sth.→feel like doing sth. 参加：participate in→take part in 重要性：importance→significance 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Let’s organize clean-up campaigns and raise awareness among our peers about the importance of maintaining a clean and healthy environment.   拓展句：Let’s organize clean-up campaigns and raise awareness among our peers about the importance that we should maintain a clean and healthy environment. 【高分句型1】I’m delighted to announce that our city is embarking on a project called “the Yellow River Cultural Belt”, with the aim of enhancing the cultural taste of our city. (运用了that引导的宾语从句以及过去分词作后置定语) 【高分句型2】Together, we can make the river a picturesque and inviting place for locals and tourists alike. (运用了“make+宾语+宾补结构”) 9．Dear students, As everybody can see in our school, many students don’t have good behavior. They don’t get up early and are often late for school. They throw rubbish and park their bicycles anywhere as they like. What’s worse, they don’t behave according to the etiquette rules. I think it’s high time that we should develop good behavior habits when we’re studying at school. For one thing, good habits have a key effect on our characters, which will determine our fortune. For another thing, good habits are symbols of Chinese traditional virtues, which were responsible to spread to the world. Dear friends, if we take action to change our behavior right away, we can make a big difference in the future. The Student Union 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据校发起的“消除不良行为习惯”的活动，写一封倡议书。内容包括：列举学生的不良行为习惯（迟到、乱扔垃圾、缺失礼仪等）；好习惯的重要性；发出倡议。 【策略详解】1.词汇积累 对……产生……的影响：have a/an...effect on→have a/an...impact on 决定：determine→decide 形成：develop→form 采取措施：take action→take measures 2.句式拓展 改为倒装句 简单句：They throw rubbish and park their bicycles anywhere as they like. 拓展句：Not only do they throw rubbish but also they park their bicycles anywhere as they like. 【高分句型1】I think it’s high time that we should develop good behavior habits when we’re studying at school. (运用了虚拟语气和when引导的时间状语从句) 【高分句型2】For one thing, good habits have a key effect on our characters, which will determine our fortune. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 10． Be Energy Smart As we know, we are currently experiencing an energy crisis and saving electricity should become a way of life. Being energy smart means doing the same with less-using electricity more efficiently or in reduced amounts. First of all, consider installing energy-efficient equipment and appliances. More importantly, develop smart energy habits. Tum down the air-conditioner to a reasonable temperature, which can reduce your electricity bill by 5%. Also, tum off the lights in empty rooms and hang clothes out to dry etc. All of these can matter a lot. Let’s take action right now. Thank you. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“节约能源”为题写一篇倡议书参加主题为“节约电力资源”主题的演讲活动，谈一谈日常生活如何节电的做法。 【策略详解】1.词汇积累 目前：currently→ presently 经历：experience→ undergo 考虑：consider→ contemplate 合理的：reasonable→ rational 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：As we know, we are currently experiencing an energy crisis and saving electricity should become a way of life. 拓展句：It is known that we are currently experiencing an energy crisis and saving electricity should become a way of life. 【高分句型1】As we know, we are currently experiencing an energy crisis and saving electricity should become a way of life.（运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Tum down the air-conditioner to a reasonable temperature, which can reduce your electricity bill by 5%. （运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） ( 1 )原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$