读后续写--从怯场到起跳:跳水台上的自我突破 讲义-河南省三门峡市2024-2025学年高一上学期1月期末英语试题

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The frightening day of our diving test was here. Our parents thought we were lucky to have an Olympic-size swimming pool at the school. My mom stressed that the swimming pool was one of the best in our city. But I didn’t feel happy about it at all. Instead, I felt afraid of the swimming pool. It was mainly because I was terribly shy.

I was so shy that I always sat at the back of the room in class so I’d not be called upon to read. As for the present physical education class each Monday morning, I would work my way to the back of the line forming at the diving board so I would not have to practice the dives.

Now, it was another Monday morning - the morning of our diving test. My blood ran cold when the teacher Ms. Robbins announced that we would be graded for our final on the most difficult dive- the jackknife. And she added, “This diving test is important. The one who fails has to spare time in the following Monday mornings to practice diving in this swimming pool and attend this test again.”

My body kept shaking with fear as the line to the scary diving board shortened. As I watched, each student seemed to perform the challenging dive effortlessly. And shortly I would have to attempt something that I had never even practiced before.

Then I remembered someone telling me that when you picture yourself doing a skill over and over, it’s just as effective as physically practicing that skill. So I watched carefully as each classmate jumped at the end of the board once, added a jump for height, folded their body in half to reach for their toes, and finally straightened out like an arrow for going into the water. After carefully watching for a while, I was actually in a state of surprise, because all of a sudden I realized that it was possible for me to perform these four steps of diving.

Eventually all classmates except me finished jumping. The teacher announced that it was my turn.

注意:1. 续与词数应为150左右;

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

With my heart knocking wildly, I walked down the diving board towards its end.page number 0

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Knowing I failed, I climbed out of the pool, embarrassed.

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文章大意

 

作者非常害羞,对学校的奥林匹克标准游泳池心存恐惧,每次上体育课都尽量躲在队伍后面避免跳水练习。在跳水测试这天,老师宣布要考最难的屈体跳水,且不及格的人后续每个周一早上都要练习并重新考试。作者看着同学们轻松完成,回忆起有人说反复想象练习技能和实际练习一样有效,便仔细观察同学们的动作,觉得自己似乎也能完成这四个跳水步骤。最终,所有同学都跳完了,轮到作者。

故事山分析

 

  • 开端:作者因害羞害怕学校的游泳池,在体育课跳水练习时总是躲在后面。
  • 发展:跳水测试来临,老师宣布考最难的屈体跳水及不及格的后果,作者看着同学们轻松完成,回忆起想象练习的方法并仔细观察。
  • 高潮:轮到作者跳水,这是故事的关键转折点,决定了作者能否克服恐惧完成跳水。
  • 结局(待续写):根据第一段续写中作者跳水的结果,第二段续写将围绕作者对结果的反应、后续的行动以及内心的成长等展开,体现克服困难、战胜自我的主题。page number 1

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